广州市中考英语作文专题复习五计划与愿望 6页

‎2018年广州市中考英语作文专题复习（五）计划与愿望 一、 与话题相关的单元：‎ ‎1. 相关单元：初一上 Unit 5 Visiting the Moon,  Unit6 Travel around Asia.‎ ‎             初一下Unit 1 Traveling around the world，Unit 8 From hobby to career ‎             初二下 Unit 8 Life in the future.‎ ‎2. 词语相关：‎ 高频词：modern, Asia ,beauty, outside, building, across, guide ,centre, sightseeing, traditional return, diary, if, leave, nervous, camera, without, able, work, breathe, speech, text, chance, whole, rich, poor, hide, shy, choose, notice, treasure, topic, several, winner, advise, attack, else.‎ 高频短语：be able to , plan to, try one’s best, try to do, for this reason, should do,  as…as, ought(not ) to do, should (shouldn’t ) do sth, be going to do,‎ take photos, in the future, grow up, used to, places of interests, would love to 拓展词及词语：desire, determination, will, expect, express, desire to do…, experience,‎ ‎3. 经典句型：‎ a. I would rather that…..‎ b. How I wish…….‎ c. I wish/hope/want to/ believe/ think/ am sure of …..‎ d. I want to make my new ideas and wishes come true.‎ e. I’m going to do…..‎ f. He decides to ….during the vacation.‎ g. You ought to…‎ h. I/ we should …‎ 二、经典例题：（2012年 初中毕业生学业考试指导书）‎ 假设今年暑假一批英国中学生要来你校访问，你准备参与接待工作。为了提前做好各项准备，学校要求参与接待的学生用英语拟定一个接待计划。请根据下面的构思图来拟定你的计划，内容包括：‎ ‎1. 你计划要做的事情（图中1-3项的内容）及其原因或目的 6‎ ‎2. 你准备为来宾安排的1-2 项活动。‎ ‎ ‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数80左右（计划的开头已给出，不计入词数）；‎ ‎2. 不能透露个人的任何信息（例如：具体的学校和姓名等），否则不予评分。‎ Some UK high school students will come to our school during this summer holidays. To help them, I ...‎ ‎ ‎ 解题思路：‎ ‎1. 审题：‎ a. 本文共有  4  个要点 b. 时态主要采用 一般将来时 c. 人称是_________‎ ‎2. 可能用到的短语和句型 a. 你计划要做的事情（图中1-3项的内容）及其原因或目的 1).主要连接词 so, also, when b. 你准备为来宾安排的1-2 项活动。 2). 主要句型I am going to … I will … I can…   I think …‎ ‎ ‎ 6‎ ‎3. 成文：‎ ‎      Some UK high school students will come to our school during this summer holidays. To help them, I will do some practice about speaking English, it can improve me communication for the UK students. And then, I should know the UK students who like something best and are good at something. In my opinion, if they are interested in playing baskeball, the baskeball compete will be held by them and our students. But the most important thing is to tell them about Guangzhou culture, history and famous places. Of course, I will visit the famous places with them. What’s more, we can play the game about Guangzhou culture and UK culture together.‎ ‎     I’m sure that it can make our relationship better and better, and we all learn the culture from each country.‎ 点评：‎ ‎   整篇文章对要点的把握基本到位，但是拼写和简单的语法错误较多。部分句子的表达过于中式 ‎4. 检查思路：完成作文自查表：‎ ‎1. 如果没有问题的，请在项目后打√。‎ ‎2. 如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改。‎ 项目 ‎ 第一次自查 第二次自查 布局与内容要点 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 人称 时态、主谓一致 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 动词搭配、介词搭配 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 拼写错误 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 好词好句 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 6‎ 分项分档评分表 项目 要素 给分表 内容 ‎6分 切合题意，体现要点 ‎6-5．5‎ ‎5—4.5‎ ‎ ‎ ‎4.5‎ ‎4-3.5‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎3-2.5‎ ‎2‎ ‎1.5‎ ‎1‎ ‎0‎ 有所发挥 准确性 ‎6分 语  法 ‎6-5.5‎ ‎5—4.5‎ ‎4-3.5‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎   4‎ ‎3-2.5‎ ‎2‎ ‎1.5‎ ‎1‎ ‎0‎ 词  汇 机械性：大小写，拼写和格式等错误 流畅性 ‎3分 结构 ‎3-2.5‎ ‎2-1.5‎ ‎  2‎ ‎1‎ ‎0.5‎ ‎0‎ ‎0‎ ‎0‎ ‎0‎ 自评总分： 10.5‎ ‎ ‎ ‎5. 参考例文：‎ ‎     Some UK high school students will come to our school during the summer holidays. To help them, I think I need to practice my English more so I can successfully pass on my meaning to our foreign friends. In order to understand the UK students better, I will try to learn about their interests and hobbies. Also, I should learn more about the history, culture and places of interest of Guangzhou so that I can show them around the city. As Guangzhou is famous for its food, I will take them to taste the delicious local foods when they come and I will also take them shopping.‎ 四、  练习：‎ ‎  紧张的初中学习生活就要结束了，你即将迎来一个轻松的暑假。请根据下面方框内的提示写一篇短文，谈谈你的暑假计划。‎ 暑假计划 ‎1. 好好休息，学会放松  短语___________________________________________‎ ‎2. 读书，因为读书既有趣又能学到很多知识 ‎   短语___________________________________________‎ ‎3. 陪父母聊天，帮他们做家务 6‎ ‎  短语___________________________________________‎ ‎4. 参加社会活动，了解社会 ‎  短语___________________________________________‎ ‎5. 。。。。。。‎ 注意：1. 词数80-100个 ‎      2. 文中不得出现真实的地址和姓名 ‎      3. 可适当发挥。‎ 解题思路：‎ ‎1. 审题：‎ a. 本文共有    个要点 b. 时态主要采用            ‎ c. 人称是_________‎ ‎2. 可能用到的词语（写在要点旁边）‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎3. 可能用到的句型 ‎    ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ ‎ ‎4. 成文：‎ ‎  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ ‎ 检查思路：‎ 完成作文自查表：‎ ‎1. 如果没有问题的，请在项目后打√。‎ ‎2. 如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改。‎ 6‎ 项目 ‎ 第一次自查 第二次自查 布局与内容要点 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 人称 时态、主谓一致 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 动词搭配、介词搭配 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 拼写错误 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 好词好句 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 参考例文：‎ ‎  The summer holiday is coming. I’m going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself. I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge. I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework. I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society. If possible, I’d like to go to Shanghai for a visit of the World Expo. I’m sure I’ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.‎ 6‎