中考英语作文辅导资料 13页

‎ 中考英语作文辅导资料 一 写作技巧辅导 ‎1. 十句作文法：‎ 所谓十句作文并非一定是10句，很多考生的高分作文（80字以下）的句子数量都在8至10句之间（以句子长短和结构不同而变化）。作文结构基本模式为：‎ 第一段（开头）：一句主题句， 一句扩展句（也可以没有）‎ 第二段 （正文）：一句主题句， 若干个扩展句（5-6个，要视内容而决定扩展句 的多少）‎ 第三段（结尾）：—— 结尾句 ‎2. 范文讲评：‎ 根据下面表格所提供的信息，写一则通知，告诉你的同学关于你们郊游的计划。‎ 时间 星期日（７月１０日）‎ 地点 人民公园 交通工具 坐公共汽车前往 出发时间 早上７：００‎ 到达公园时间 早上８：３０‎ 活动安排 上午：划船；游泳；在饭馆吃午餐 下午：英语角活动（English corner activities）；照相 返回时间 下午４：３０‎ 要求：１、词数：８０个词左右；题目及文章的 ‎ ‎ 开头已给出，但不算在词数内。‎ ‎　　　２、表格中所列内容必须都用上，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。‎ ‎　　　 ３、不要使用真实姓名及所在学校名称， ‎ ‎ 否则答案作废。‎ Notice ‎ Good morning, everyone! I’ll tell you a piece of good news. ‎ ‎ We are planning an outing. __________ ‎ 范文：‎ Good morning, everyone! Now I’ll tell you a piece of good news.(主题句) ‎ ‎ We are planning an outing. (主题句) We are going to the People’s Park by bus on July 10th, Sunday. (扩展句) We’ll leave at 7:00 a.m. at the school gate and arrive ‎ there at 8:30 a.m. in the morning. (扩展句) Then you can go boating and swimming. (扩展句) Let’s have lunch in a restaurant and join the English corner in the afternoon. (扩展句) If you would like to take photos, you’d better take a camera. (扩展句) The time to return is 4:30 p.m.. (扩展句) Please get ready for the outing. (扩展句) ‎ ‎ Wish all of us have a good time. (结尾句) ‎ 点评：本文是仿照十句作文法而写的一篇优秀考场作文。文章围绕“Notice”这一主题展开，把表格所提供的信息陈述清楚，要点齐全。文章中语句简练，语句变化多样，有简单句、并列句和复合句，也用上了祈使句，过渡自然，结尾表明作者自己对这次郊游活动的祝愿，增强了感染力。‎ ‎3. 课堂操练：‎ 你叫林海（英文名叫Joe），你的朋友John发给你的电子邮件中提到了关于学校准备开办英语学习班的消息，你对此事很感兴趣，请给John回一封邮件，询问有关英语学习班的详情。邮件的要点如下：‎ ‎1．对英语学习班很感兴趣。‎ ‎2．希望可以练习英语，结识朋友。‎ ‎3．问英语学习班的上课时间、地点、内容以及费用。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．邮件要通顺、连贯。‎ ‎2．词数80左右，邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计人总词数。‎ ‎3．不能在答卷上透露个人的任何信息（例如具体的学校和姓名等），否则答案作废。 ‎ Dear John,‎ Thanks very much for the information about the English evening class.(主题句)‎ I’m looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. (结尾句) ‎ ‎ ‎ 范文 Dear John,‎ ‎ Thanks very much for the information about the English evening class.(主题句) It sounds very interesting to me. (扩展句) You know I want to practise my English and make some new friends. (扩展句) I think this English evening class will be helpful to me. (扩展句) Could you please tell me a little more about the class? (扩展句) When does it begin and how much does it cost? (扩展句) Where will the class be held? (扩展句) Also, do you have any more information about what we will do in class? (扩展句) ‎ ‎ I’m looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. (结尾句) ‎ ‎ Yours ‎ Joe 二 写作词汇辅导 连接词：‎ ‎1. 总体介绍：‎ n Firstly,… Secondly,…Thirdly,…Finally/At last/In the end,… ‎ n To begin with,…（首先，…….）；Subsequently, …（后来，…）‎ n Day after day（日渐一日）/ year after year（年复一年）‎ n At the meanwhile（与此同时）；To conclude……（总之，…….）‎ ‎2. 补充说明：‎ Besides, …/Also, …/ Moreover,…/Furthermore,…/ In addition,…/ What’s more,…‎ ‎3. 举例 That is to say…；For example/ instance ‎4. 对比：‎ n On one hand, … On the other hand,… On contrary,…（相反，…）‎ n While ‎5.因果 n because…/Because …,… ； …, so …/…,； therefore,…‎ n Thus,…/ Therefore, … In short,…/however…‎ n As a result, …/ As a consequence, ….‎ ‎6. 转折 Though/Although …, …./ …though； …, but …/ …, however…；In spite of ….‎ 换词—拒绝滥词---赶快升级 good/fine “好的”‎ terrific 极好的， fabulous 极为美好的， amazing 奇妙的，perfect 完美的 excellent 优秀的， marvelous 非凡的， glorious 非常愉快的 ‎ fine/nice “天气好”‎ pleasant 令人愉快的 ，cheerful 令人快乐的，enjoyable 令人愉快的 glorious 令人快乐的， pleasing 令人满意的， ‎ big “大的”‎ huge 巨大的， large 大的， enormous 庞大的 giant 巨大的， gigantic 大得惊人的， immense 广大的 三 复合句训练： 避免总使用简单句 高级句型 It is adj.(for/of sb.) to do sth.‎ so adj. that…太…的，以致…,…/ too adj. to do sth.太…以致不能做某事 spend some time /some money(in) doing sth. 化一些时间/一些金钱做某事 ‎ It takes sb. Some time to do sth.花某人一些时间去做某事。‎ in order to …,为了…‎ ‎ so that…以便…‎ 中考英语作文满分必备的10个“万能”句型 ‎1. 不用说……   It goes without saying that … 　　= （It is） needless to say （that） … 　　= It is obvious that … 　　例：不用说早睡早起是值得的。 　　It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours. 　　2. 在各种……之中，……    Among various kinds of …， … /= Of all the …， … 　　例︰在各种运动中我尤其喜欢慢跑。 　　Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular. 　　3. 就我的看法……；我认为…… 　　In my opinion, … 　　= To my mind, … 　　= As far as I am concerned, … 　　= I am of the opinion that … 　　例：In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health. 　　就我的看法打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。 　　4. 随着人口的增加……    With the increase/growth of the population, … 　　随着科技的进步……    With the advance of science and technology, … 　　例：With the rapid development of Taiwan's economy, a lot of social problems have come to ‎ pass. 　　随着台湾经济的快速发展许多社会问题产生了。 　　5. ……是必要的 It is necessary （for sb.） to do / that … 　　…… 是重要的 It is important/essential （for sb.） to do / that … 　　…… 是适当的 It is proper （for sb.） to do / that … 　　……是紧急的 It is urgent （for sb.） to do / that … 　　例：It is proper for us to keep the public places clean. 　　It is proper that we （should） keep the public places clean. 　　我们应当保持公共场所清洁。 　　6. 花费  spend … on sth. / doing sth. … 　　例：我们不应该在我们不感兴趣的事情上花太多的时间。 　　We shouldn't spend too much time on something we aren't interested in. 　　7. how 引导的感叹句 　　例：那至少可以证明你很诚实。 　　At least it will prove how honest you are. 　　8. 状语从句 　　A）如果你不……，你就会……    If you don't …， you'll … 　　例︰If you don't keep working hard, you'll lose the chance. 　　如果你不坚持努力工作，你就会失去这次机会。 　　B） 如此 ……，以至于……     so … that … 　　例：At that moment, I was so upset that I wanted to give up. 　　当时，我非常伤心，最后都想放弃了。 　　C） 每当我听到……我就忍不住感到兴奋。Whenever I hear …， I cannot but feel excited. 　　每当我做……我就忍不住感到悲伤。 Whenever I do …， I cannot but feel sad. 　　每当我想到……我就忍不住感到紧张。Whenever I think of …， I cannot but feel nervous. 　　每当我遭遇……我就忍不住感到害怕。Whenever I meet with …， I cannot but feel frightened. 　　每当我看到……我就忍不住感到惊讶。Whenever I see …， I cannot but feel surprised. 　　例：Whenever I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot but feel sad. 　　= Every time I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot help feeling sad. 　　每当我想到我家附近那一条清澈的小溪我就忍不住感到悲伤。 　　9. 宾语从句 　　我认为，……  / 我认为……不   I think / I don't think that … 　　我想知道是否……            I wonder whether … 　　例：He doesn't think I should stop him joining the club. 　　他认为我不应该阻止他参加这个俱乐部。 　　10. Since + S + 过去式， S + 现在完成式。 　　例：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard. 　　自从他上高中，他就一直很用功。‎ ‎ ‎ 四：平常多背诵积累经典美句，运用到作文中为作文添加亮点 要引用谚语时，先来这样一句引出谚语：As a saying goes,“……….”‎ How time flies! 时光飞逝。‎ Every dog has his day. 谁都会有走运的时候。‎ A fool may give a wise man counsel. 愚者千虑，必有一得。‎ Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。‎ Ale will make a cat speak. 酒后吐真言。 ‎ There is no smoke without fire. 无风不起浪 1. A year's plan starts with spring. 中文：__一年之际在于春 2. Every minute counts. 中文：_分秒必争 3. A bad thing never dies. 中文：__坏事遗臭万年 4. Friends must part. 中文：__天下无不散之筵席 5. Every coin has its two sides ‎ 6. ‎.有志者,事竟成Where there is a will there is a way.‎ 7. ‎ 9.欲速则不达.More haste, less speed.. 11.好的开端是成功的一半.Well begun is half done.. 33.良药苦口.A good medicine tastes bitter. 34.知识就是力量.Knowledge is power. 35.金钱不是万能的.Money is not everything. 36.时不我待.Time and tide wait no man. 37.少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲.A young idler, an old beggar. 38.趁热打铁.Strike while the iron is hot. 39.天生我才必有用.Every man has his price. 40.看破生死的人能成大事.He who sees through life and death will meet with most success. 41.世上无难事,只要肯登攀.Nothing is impossible to a willing heart. 42不入虎穴,焉得虎子.Noting venture, noting gain. 45.谋事在人,成事在天.Man proposes, God deposes. 46.众人拾柴火焰高.Many hands make light work. 47.不经风雨,怎能见彩虹. No cross, no crown. 48.没有付出,就没有收获.No pain, no gain. 55.眼见为实.Seeing is believing. 80.He laughs best who laughs last.谁笑到最后,谁笑得最美. 81.Follow your own course, and let people talk.走自己的路,让别人说去吧.. 99.Actions speak louder that words.事实胜于雄辩. ‎ 五 多读范文,所谓"熟读唐诗三百首,不会吟诗也会吟"‎ 中考英语作文 题目预测及范文 ‎1、饮食与健康 ‎　　Today， I received the reader‘s letter. I was shocked at it. Personally speaking， I think we should pay more attention to the food safety. The government must make some necessary laws. What’s more， some businessmen shouldn‘t be only interested in making money. They must care about people’s health. We‘d better not eat anything in dirty places though some food is delicious， because eating unhealthy food does harm to our health.‎ ‎　　Finally， I hope the family in the accident will get better soon.‎ ‎2、低碳生活 Low-carbon life is good for everyone. To help with the environment, I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. I think it’s my duty to live a low-carbon life. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And we’d better not spend much money on expensive clothes. If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place.‎ ‎3、平安校园，‎ School is our home，we all live and study here.  In order to make ourselves safe，as a student，we should obey the school rules . We must obey the traffic rulers on the way. We shouldn’t’ t run after each other in school；We should get on well with others and we should not fight with others；we should not eat the junk or bad food；We mustn’t be allowed to smoke ,drink or take drugs; When you meet someone asks for money，you needn‘t be afraid .You should report to the teacher or call the police. We must keep away from those bad habits and be polite to others. I hope we have a good time every day.‎ ‎4、梦想和未来 ‎（1）我的未来(My future)     What do I want to do when I’m older. Someone wants to be a doctor. Someone wants to be a basketball player because they are good at sport. Someone wants to be a writer and to make the writing.‎ Someone wants to be a teacher because they like teaching children.      I like playing the piano and I good at it. So I want to become a piano player. Playing the piano is very interesting. And you can learn something of music. A piano can make you like music. A lot of musicians and singers are love playing piano.      I can become a grand pianist when I grow up. To become a pianist is a hard job. So I’ll be harder and harder to practice from now on .    But I believe I can do it.‎ ‎（2）、I want to be an inventor TVs, telephone, fridges, cars, planes, computers and many other things are important inventions. They have greatly changed our life. Many people have their ideas and wishes. They want to invent some new things for the world. I am one of them. I want to be an inventor in the future, Inventions can bring fun and happiness to our life and make our daily life more convenient. Our life will become better and better. Now I am a high school student. I will try my best to work hard at my lessons to make my dream come true.‎ ‎（3）想象中的高中生活 输入内容已经达到长度限制 还能输入 9999 字 Hi, everybody. How’s it going? I’ll become a senior high school student this September. I’m very happy, but I’m worried that I may meet with some difficulties in the new school. Perhaps I can’t keep up with my classmates, especially in math. And I’m not sure if I can make friends with others because I’m not good at communicating. On the other hand, I don’t know how to take good ‎ care of myself. I’ afraid the food in the new school won’t agree with me. What can I do with these problems? Could you give me some advice? I really need your help. ‎ ‎5、环境污染 ‎（1）Recently, Droughts and floods often happen in some places. Why ? ‎ ‎ Some results are caused by humans. They cut too many trees .A lot of good farmland has turned into deserts. People waste a lot of water in their daily life. Even worse, they pour dirty water into rivers. They throw rubbish into rivers, too. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. ‎ ‎ Something must be done to stop the pollution. I think what we can do is that we have to save every drop of water as possible as we can. For example, we must turn off the tap at once after we use it. We can use a basin to wash our hands and faces. It’s also a good idea to encourage my friends and family members to join me! Only in this way can we live happily. If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us. I believe if everyone makes a little thing , we can make a big difference.‎ ‎6、放松 The Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming. In order to make a success in the exam I think it’s high time for us to relax a little. Or we’ll be too nervous to work well in the exam. ‎ In order to relax ourselves, we can turn to some of our hobbies, different students have different ways --- Some watch TV, some listen to music… But for me I enjoy taking exercise most. Whenever I feel tired, I always spend an hour (in) walking or jogging in the park. Besides, I also play table tennis with my friends after class. In my opinion, taking exercise can not only rest our brains and eyes but also help build our bodies. I think it’s really helpful to both my health and my study. I hope all of my classmates can join me in getting relaxed. I wish you all every success in the coming examination！‎ ‎7、中学生该不该（1）上网 ‎（1）    In my opinion，the Internet is helpful rather than harmful as someone else thinks. As is known to all，the Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life. On the Internet，we can read news at home and from abroad and get as much information as we can. We can send e - mails or make phone calls to our family as well as to our friends. We can also attend the net school，read many books and even teach ourselves English. We can also enjoy music，watch matches and play computer games on the Internet. We can even do shopping online. Besides，we can improve our ability to operate the computer.       But we should not be given to the Internet，or we’ll get our life and study destroyed. Besides，we should keep off the harmful websites. Anyhow，this doesn’t prevent the Internet from becoming our friend. ‎ ‎（2）带手机Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. Some think it is good for students to bring a mobile phone. But some people do not think so. They think it is bad for students to bring a mobile phone. Because the students will use mobile phones to play games, sent text messages, watch movies, etc which will do harm to their study. And if a mobile phone ring in the class, the teacher and students would be disturbed. ‎ In my opinion, we can bring mobile phones to school. As we know, the 21st century is a modern age and full of information. A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information. We can also relax ourselves by playing them when we’re tired of our studies. The most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way and do not disturb others.‎ ‎3）、　网络购物在中国也变得越来越普遍了，谈谈网上购物的好处与坏处。‎ ‎　　　We talked about the advantages and disadvantages of internet shopping these days. Some students think it's very convenient for us to go shopping on the internet. The shops on Internet ，for example taobao.com, 360buy.com are open for almost 24 hours a day, so we can buy something we want at any time if we like. What's more, we needn't to wait in a queue。‎ ‎　　However, some students disagreed with them. We can't see the things while we are shopping. So we are not sure whether they are good or not.. Besides, we can't enjoy the happiness of shopping with our friends。‎ ‎8、多彩校园（我为学校骄傲）‎ Proud of my school My school is very big with several tall buildings. We have a beautiful playground with lots of trees around it. There are many flowers everywhere.‎ My busy school life always makes me happy. I have lots of fun at school. I not only have all kinds of classes, but also take part in colorful activities after classes. I play games and do lots of sports, like playing basketball, football and table tennis.‎ I love my school because it’s like a big family. The students are friendly and the teachers in my school are as kind to us as our parents. I feel proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart. I'm leaving my school. I'll never forget the days I've spent here. ‎ ‎9、禁烟A survey about smokers in a middle school tells that although 90% of all students never smoke, 3% of them often smoke and 7% sometimes do. In other words, 10% of the students smoke. That’s terrible.‎ As we know, smoking is harmful to our health. Every year, thousands of people lose their lives because of it. Smoking not only does harm to your health, Smoking may cause many diseases. While smoking can also do harm to those who don't smoke。 And also wastes money. ，because, a fire may be caused by cigarette ends. In all, smoking is so dangerous that we should keep away from it. If all smokers give up smoking, we can enjoy clearer air.‎ ‎10、家乡变化The Changes in My Hometown ‎ I come from SuiHua in Heilongjiang province In the past, my hometown was not very big, people lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. the traffic was not very convenient that so few people came here.‎ Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has become more beautiful. The mountains are all green, the river clearer and the sky bluer. Many people all have their own cars and have a happy life everyday. And now, every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our hometown. My hometown becomes more and more famous.‎ I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.‎ ‎11、怎样学好英语How to learn English well As we know , English has become an international language. It is more popular than any other language in China . English is widely spoken in the world and it is the most useful language around the world . But how to learn it well ? ‎ The best way is to use it all the time . If we can talk in English , think in English we can learn it well . At school , we should learn to hear , speak, read and write carefully . We should spend enough time in practicing English . If we keep on working hard at English , we will be able to be good at it one day .‎ ‎12、目前，学生考试作弊现象严重 ‎　 At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit - cheating in examinations.‎ There are three main reasons. First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult. Second, some students are not hard-working and they don't work hard at their lessons. Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet. So they haven't enough time to prepare for the exams. Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.‎ ‎　 In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study. We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress. Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves. ‎ ‎13、光盘行动 目前非常流行。号召人人节约用餐。‎ ‎“Guang pan xing dong”means clear your plate after eating and not to waste . At present , many people have joined the activity against wasting food . Some restaurants have a rule .If you don’t finish eating the food in your plate , you will have ‎ to pay extra money or take the food away with you . ‎ ‎ I think it is necessary though we no longer worry about food because our life has changed a lot in the past 30 years. As we know, the grains are not easy from farming . we should respect the working people . ‎ ‎ First of all , as a student , we shouldn’t waste the food anywhere and anytime . We should develop a good eating habit . Next , we should cook and eat at home as many as possible. It’s both cheap and safe. ‎ ‎ Last but not least , there are lots of people hungry in many parts of the world . If we save a little food every day ,we will help more people keep away from hunger . Let’s act together at once. ‎ ‎14、演讲稿 请你以学生李林的身份写一篇英文讲稿。内容包括：1、自我介绍；2、你参加的目的；3、你能胜任工作的优势(至少两点)；‎ Good afternoon, everybody. My name is LiLin, from Class 1, Grade 4. I’m very pleased to make a speech here. As a Junior 4 student, I’d like to be a volunteer and do something for the American student visitors.‎ I have learnt English for more than five years. I’m good at speaking English and always ready to help others. I often take part in different social work. I’ve learnt to how to communicate with foreigners.‎ So, I hope you can give me a chance and I’ll try my best to work well. Thank you!‎ ‎15 最美的女教师张丽莉 This is Love When I heard the story about Ms. Zhang Lili from the city of Jiamusi saved two children on the way under the wheels of a bus ,while she hurt herself badly .What does it mean ? It means selfless love from a teacher – mother’s love . When the danger came ,she thought of her students more , not herself . She has chosen to face it. She is common but she is great. I’m deeply moved by her .‎ ‎ Someone says that nowadays nobody can think of others more . the fact today tells us that they are wrong . As a student , I should learn from her . I’ll try to help others like her as much as possible . I’ll tell the story to my friends ,too. Let’s do more helpful things together . It can make the world full of love.‎ ‎16、感恩父亲 Dear father,‎ Father’s Day is coming. I’d like to say something to you.‎ You always work hard so that I can receive a better education and live a better life. You are strict with me in my study and help me with my homework. When I failed an exam, you encouraged me to be confident and keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you always told me to be brave and smile at life.‎ You have given me so much, not only in my study but also in my life. Thank you for your deep love. Thank you for all that you have done for me. I love you! I hope you will be healthy and happy forever!‎ Happy Fathers Day!‎ Yours, Li Hua ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎17、‎4月20日，四川省雅安地区发生了7.0级大地震，作为一名中学生，请你谈谈你的做法和感受。‎ ‎　　要求： 80—100字左右;词汇参考：地震 earthquake  悲痛 sorrow  受到感动 be deeply moved  安慰 comfort  重建 rebuild  自愿做某事 volunteer to do sth.‎ ‎　　　On April 20th, a big earthquake happened in Ya’an, Sichuan. Many people lost their relatives and their homes. All the Chinese people feel quite sorrow. A lot of people volunteer to help them. Some people raise money for them, some people buy something for them, some people go there to comfort the sad children. Thousands of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes Even foreign friends also give them a hand.‎ ‎　　I’m deeply moved by these people. So I’ll use my pocket money to buy some food and school things for the children there. I think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together.‎ ‎18. What should We Do to Love Our Country ?（钓鱼岛是中国领土）‎ Recently , the Japanese government calls Diaoyudao‎ ‎Island is its land .As we know ,it’s really wrong . We Chinese are all angry with it . All the people of China have taken measures to be against Japanese strongly. As middle school students , What should we do for it ? ‎ ‎ First of all, We should support our government has done everything against Japan. We are always together with our government. Second ,only our country ‎ becomes very strong , we can stop others putting us down . ‎ As a real Chinese , it’s our duty to make our country stronger and richer . we should protect our motherland to avoid hurting . We Chinese are brave and hardworking . We love peace . At present , we must work hard to get ready to do for our future country.‎ ‎19、毕业感言 初中生活马上就要结束了，四年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。提示词供参考。Four years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry How time flies! I have studied in my school for four years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in four years’ life. On of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.‎ ‎20.神州十号　　‎ I'm very happy when I heard the news that China's first manned spacecraft, Shenzhou 10,was launched on June 11,2013. I would never forget the day when all the Chinese people were proud of the successful launch. 　　Shenzhou 10" spacecraft, showed China's space science and technology has reached a very high level again. The launch of the "Shenzhou 10" is a great feat. The dreams of thousands of astronauts have come true. 　　　 　　I'm a middle school student now. Our Chinese astronauts have set good examples for us all. I want to study hard and lay solid foundations for my future. When I grow up, I want to become an astronaut like Yang Liwei.‎ ‎21.Driving safety 酒驾危险 ‎ More traffic accidents happened . We can see many people get hurt in traffic accidents . Some people were sent to hospital , and some even lost their lives . It’s important to drive carefully. What should we a drive do ? First , he must pass a driving test., so he can get a license . Second， a drive can’t be allowed to drink much before he drives. If he drinks much, he can’t see anything clearly . Third , a big truck can’t be overloaded. It’s too dangerous . Fourth, don’t drive too fast . If we pay attention to these problems, fewer accidents will happen.‎ ‎2014年长沙市初中毕业学业考试作文 ‎76. 随着年龄的增长，不少青少年发现越来越难与父母沟通和交流，各方面的分歧使两代人之间的关系日益紧张。请围绕该话题用英语谈谈你的看法。‎ 1. 要求：（1）内容包括 ①分析这种现象产生的主要原因；‎ ‎ ②提出解决该问题的具体建议。‎ ‎ （2）字数：60-80字 ‎ （3）短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Dear Wang Ming,‎ ‎　　I’m writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules. As we live in the same room, we are like families thus we should love each other and respect each other. What’s more, we should make our room clean and tidy. Therefore, I hope you can read the following rules and obey them. Rule No.1 When you get up in the morning, remember to make the bed. Rule No.2 Don’t make phone calls when we are sleeping. Rule No.3 Don’t use others’ things without permission. Rule No.4 Turn off the lights before you leave the room. I hope all of us can obey these rules and make our room more and more comfortable.‎ ‎　　Best wishes,‎ ‎　　LiHua ‎2015年长沙市初中毕业学业考试作文 ‎76. 假设你是李华，现就读于某寄宿制中学。你的室友王明经常违反寝室（dormitory）规定，如不整理床铺，休息时间大声拨打电话，未经许可（permission）动用他人物品，离开寝室不关灯等。为了提醒他改正不良习惯，做个文明室友，你决定写一封电子邮件给他。‎ 要求：（1）包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；‎ ‎（2）字数：60-80词（信得开头和结尾已给出，不介入总词数）；‎ ‎         （3）信中不得出现你的真实姓名，学校名和地名。‎ From：lihua2758@sina.com To: wangming63@sohu.com Subject: To be a great roommate Dear Wang Ming,‎ I’m writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules.‎ Best wishes,‎ LiHua ‎ ‎ ‎【解析】此次考查的是“应用文---书信体裁”，难度为★★。根据要求，需要告知室友必须遵守寝室规矩，而题目中恰好给出了足够的提示，并不需要学生再花时间去思考，例如：1.不整理床铺2.休息时间大声拨打电话3.未经许可（permission）动用他人物品4.离开寝室不关灯等。基本只要能够把这四个点用正确的句型翻译出来并稍加修饰，加上连接词，整篇文章就成形了。‎ ‎【参考词组】‎ ‎1.       respect each other 互相尊重 ‎2.       therefore 因此 ‎3.       obey the rules 遵守规定 ‎4.       without permission 未经允许 ‎【范文】‎ Dear Wang Ming,‎ I’m writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules. As we live in the same room, we are like families thus we should love each other and respect each other. What’s more, we should make our room clean and tidy. Therefore, I hope you can read the following rules and obey them. Rule No.1 When you get up in the morning, remember to make the bed. Rule No.2 Don’t make phone calls when we are sleeping. Rule No.3 Don’t use others’ things without permission. Rule No.4 Turn off the lights before you leave the room. I hope all of us can obey these rules and make our room more and more comfortable.‎ Best wishes,‎ LiHua ‎ ‎