2014高考英语真题短文改错2015带解析 18页

短文改错 ‎1.【2015·陕西】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）‎ My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.‎ At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”‎ My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎76.去掉in ‎77.anything 改为something ‎78.better改成best ‎79.decide改成decided ‎80.step 改为steps ‎81.well改成good ‎82.after改成when/while ‎83.a改为the ‎84.just后加to ‎85.enjoy改为enjoying ‎ - 18 -‎ ‎【考点定位】考查短文改错 ‎【名师点睛】这篇短文改错是记叙文，短文的内容和学生的日常生活有关。错误之处的设置都是平常学生容易错的地方。考查点比较全面，各种词性都考查到了，也涉及到一些语法知识的考查，如：非谓语动词，时态等。‎ ‎2.【2015·四川】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，共15分）‎ Hi, Janice,‎ It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.‎ As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time—wasting activity! In fact ,I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me ,would you talk to him?‎ - 18 -‎ Please help with me and give me some advice.‎ Grace ‎【答案】‎ ‎61.加上to ‎62. tell--told ‎63. friend--friends ‎64.sing--singing ‎65. many--much ‎66.so--but ‎67. How--What ‎68. are--were ‎69. him--them ‎70. 去掉with ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：文章主要通过一封求助信，写出了写信人的困扰。作者交了三个新朋友，经常一起去卡拉OK唱歌，但其实作者并不喜欢这样，他想知道自己该怎么做才不会失去这段友谊。‎ ‎61.加上to 考查动词want的用法，want用不定式担当状语，故加上to。句意为：我真地很想和你分享一下我经历的问题。‎ ‎62. tell—told 考查时态。根据时间状语last time可知，此句需要用一般过去时，故把tell改成told。句意为正如我上次告诉你的那样。‎ ‎63. friend—friends 考查名词的复数。名词friend为可数名词，其前有three修饰，需要用复数形式，故把friend改成friends。句意为：我在这儿交了三个新朋友。‎ ‎64.sing—singing 考查动名词担当宾语。本句考查句型spend…（in）doing sth结构，故把sing改成singing。‎ ‎65. many—much 考查代词。根据句意，指的是花费很多钱，故用much而非many。句意为：那真的花费很多。‎ ‎66.so--but考查连词。上一分句意为：我不想再去；下一分句意为：我怕失去他们的友谊，两个分句之间有转折关系，故把so改成but。‎ ‎67. How—What 考查疑问词的选择。本句中do之后缺少宾语，表示事情，故用what而非how。注意首字母要大写。‎ - 18 -‎ ‎68. are—were 考查虚拟语气。根据句子可知，此处为虚拟语气，与现在事实不相符，故把are改成were。句意为：如果你是我,…。‎ ‎69. him—them 考查代词。根据上文可知，作者交了三个朋友，故用them而非him。句意为：你会和他们说吗？‎ ‎70. 去掉with 考查动词。动词help为及物动词，其后接宾语时无需加介词，故去掉with。句意为：请帮帮我，给我一些建议。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查短文纠错 ‎【名师点睛】本篇文章考查学生的短文纠错能力。短文纠错能力考查的范围较广，如各类词类用法和各种语法知识。本篇文章中既考查了词类用法如：61、63、65、66、69、70题，也考查了学生的语法知识如：62、64、67、68，涉及多种语法知识。要求考生要通读全文，把握大意，还要逐读各句才能找出错误所在。‎ ‎3.【2015·浙江】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）‎ 例如：‎ It was very nice to get your invitation to spent∧weekend with you. Luckily ‎ the I was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8:00 p.m. ‎ am in Friday evening.‎ On My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side - 18 -‎ ‎ of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎ side-sides ‎ from-to ‎ sit-sitting ‎ easy-easily ‎ is-was ‎ them-it ‎ not 删除 ‎ in hurry- in a hurry ‎ felt-feel ‎ If-Although/Though ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：这是一篇介绍教室的文章。‎ ‎ side-sides 考查名词的单复数。根据前面的three，此处应该使用复数形式 ‎ from-to考查介词搭配 make of与make from两者都常用在被动语态中,表示“某物由.构成的”. make of 的原材料是看的到的,即平常我们说的物理现象,比如The chair is made of wood.椅子是有木头做成的。而make from的原材料是看不到的,比如Paper is made from the trees. 纸张是由木材做成的.是一种化学变化,从纸上是看不出一棵树滴.‎ ‎ sit-sitting考查动名词 动词enjoy后接 ing形式。 ‎ ‎ easy-easily考查副词 此处的副词修饰动词see ‎ is-was考查动词的谓语时态 根据前后句的谓语时态都是使用过去的，所以这里面也需要用过去时态。‎ ‎ them-it考查代词 此处的it指代的是学校。‎ ‎ 删除not 考查意思是否表否定 该句的意思应该是表达肯定而不是否定所以要删除not ‎ in hurry- in a hurry考查冠词 in a hurry 意为“立刻”，也是一个固定搭配 ‎ felt-feel 考查使役动词的法。 Make sb do sth,是使役动词的用法。‎ - 18 -‎ ‎ If-Although/Though考查连词的用法 ，根据句意“尽管在我读书的时候我是一个小孩，但我不会忘记它”表达让步，而不是条件。而且翻译为如果意思上也不通。‎ ‎【考点定位】短文改错 ‎【名师点睛】这种题目对语法的要求很高，要求注意上下文的，以及单词的用法，以及特殊用法、固定搭配等。其实这一些错误很有可能是在写作中会出现，所以，加强写作的练习对于这一种题目，也是有帮助的。另外，这种题目也可以改编一下，成为语法填空的题目。‎ ‎4.【2015·新课标全国II】‎ ‎              2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎71. parent改为parents ‎72. on改为in ‎73. very去掉 ‎74. looks改为looking ‎75. where改为that 或者去掉 where ‎76. begun改为began ‎77. telling改为told ‎78. a改为the ‎79. saw后加his ‎80. terrible改为terribly - 18 -‎ ‎【考点定位】语法填空。‎ ‎【名师点睛】通过短短的100多个词，使考生能正确运用各类词和固定搭配，如动词、名词、副词、代词和连词，辨别并改正错误。总的说来，本题都是学生平时书面表达中常见的错误。多读多练习就能找出问题所在，也能对写作有帮助。‎ ‎5.【2015·新课标全国I】‎ When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,we’ll live to regret it .‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎76. think –thought ‎ ‎77. countryside前加the ‎78. or—and - 18 -‎ ‎79. on—with ‎ ‎80. been去掉 ‎81. seriously—serious ‎82. airs—air ‎ ‎83. much—many ‎ ‎84. found—find ‎85. your—our ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：作者是孩子的时候，梦想生活在城市。二作者现在生活在城市，却向往着家乡，因为那里更少的污染。‎ ‎76. think –thought句意：我认为生活在那儿很快乐。时态用法错误。这里用一般过去时，表示“过去认为”‎ ‎77. countryside前加the 句意：但是我想念农村的家乡。这里countryside是特指，故用定冠词the。‎ ‎78. or—and句意：那里山绿并且空气新鲜。连词用法错误。前后句为并列关系，故用连词and。‎ ‎79. on—with句意：随着工业化的发展。短语搭配错误。短语with the development of随着……的发展。‎ ‎80. been去掉句意：许多研究表明。语态用法错误。主语与动词为主动关系，这里不需要用被动语态。‎ ‎81. seriously—serious句意：全球变暖已经成为严重的问题。词性用法错误。修饰名词，前面用形容词修饰。‎ ‎82. airs—air 句意：我们呼吸的空气变得越来越脏。名词用法错误。名词air为不可数名词。‎ ‎83. much—many句意：许多罕见的动物已经消失。名词animal为可数名词，故用many修饰。‎ ‎84. found—find句意：我们必须找到方法来保护我们的地球。动词用法错误。情态动词must后接动词原形。‎ ‎85. your—our句意：我们必须找到方法来保护我们的地球。代词用法错误。这里应当是保护我们的环境。‎ ‎【考点定位】短文改错。‎ ‎(2014届黑龙江省哈三中高三上学期第三次验收)‎ - 18 -‎ ‎ As is known, that it is interesting to teach children to swim while they are still babies. Most large town in Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for babies. The idea has quickly spread to Europe which, in several countries, special courses were now offered to children who are from 7 to 24 months old. The first step is to have child get rid of the fear with water. Next, he is teaching to float in water. Once he can do that naturally and can swim with fear, the child can master the technique and push him forward through water. ‎ ‎【答案】xkb1.com ‎1.去掉that ‎ ‎2. town改成 towns ‎ ‎3. particularly 改成particular ‎4. which改成where ‎ ‎5. were改成are ‎ ‎6. have与child之间加a ‎ ‎7. with water 改成 of water ‎8. teaching改成taught ‎ ‎9. with改成without ‎ ‎10. him改成himself ‎ ‎2‎ ‎（2014届浙江省温州中学高三上学期期中）‎ Dear Mr. Black,‎ I’m very thank to you for inviting me to stay with you in the come summer vacation. I have been dreamed of seeing you again so that I can get help from you in my English learning. And I’m afraid I cannot go to your place in this summer. I’ve promised my grandmother, she lives in the country, to spend this summer with her. She misses me too much that I find difficult to refuse her request. I’m busy preparing for my examinations in present. I planned to visit you in winter if it’s convenient to you.‎ Best wishes.‎ Yours truly,‎ Li Ying ‎【答案】‎ - 18 -‎ ‎1. thank改为thankful ‎2. come改为coming ‎3. dreamed改为dreaming ‎4. And改为Butxkb1.com ‎5. 去掉in ‎6. she改为who ‎7. too改为so ‎8. find后面加it ‎9. in改为at ‎10. planned改为plan ‎3‎ ‎(2014届浙江省浙北名校联盟高三上学期期中联考)‎ ‎ One year ago, I was in great trouble. I worked hard at English and devote all my spare time to practise it. But I failed to pass the mid-term examination, which made me great disappointed. So I asked my grandpa for advice when I got to home. Hearing that I told him, he said, “To some extent, examination results are sometime unexpected by your study level. You can’t judge your progress by one examination.” He encouraged myself to work hard for long time to check my results. I took my grandpa’s advice. Now I realize that the process of learning is much more important and my English is more better than before. From my experience, I feel that we should listen to opinion from old people.‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎1. devote → devoted ‎2. practise → practicing ‎3. great → greatly ‎4. 去掉to。 ‎ ‎5. that → what ‎ ‎6. sometime →sometimes ‎ ‎7. myself → me ‎8. for和long 之间加a。 ‎ ‎9. more → much - 18 -‎ ‎10. opinion → opinions ‎ ‎4‎ ‎（2013-2014学年内蒙古包头市一中高三入学考试）‎ A man was driving on the road. Suddenly his cars stopped. He got out of the car tried to find out the trouble. “It’s the motor.” Said the voice behind him. He was surprising and turned around. But he saw only an old horse. “Did you say something?” he asked. “I said you should check yours motor.” The horse replied. The man rushed to the nearest house. With a very excited voice, he told the farmer had happened. The farmer, therefore, showed no sign of excitement. He explained, “He didn’t know anything about cars. He can only repeat what I often say.‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎1. cars改成car ‎2. tried→trying ‎3. the→a ‎4. surprising→surprised ‎5. something→anything ‎6. yours→ your ‎7. With →Inw w w .x k b 1.c o m ‎8. the farmer∧had →what ‎9. therefore→however ‎10. didn’t→doesn’t ‎5‎ ‎（2014届浙江省江山实验中学高三上学期第一次阶段性测试）‎ It is real a good chance to have met all of you here. We have spent several precious weekend in learning in the English Club. Although we have been members for a short period of times, we have made a great progress. That is because we are all very much active and the activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful. Besides, the foreign teachers here work hard and try his best to make the activities lively and interested. I am very pleased to say that all of us greatly improved our spoken English so far. I am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future!‎ - 18 -‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎1. real--really ‎2. weekend--weekends ‎3. times--time ‎4. 去掉a ‎5. 去掉much ‎6. and--but ‎7. his--their ‎8. interested--interesting ‎9. us∧have ‎10. see--seeing ‎6‎ ‎（2014届浙江省湖州市八校高三上学期第二次联考） ‎ I can’t swim so I have a strong fear of water. Look back at my childhood, I think that three reasons might explain fear. Firstly, I am not allowed to go near the water when I was a child, as my mother had an unreasonable fear of it. Therefore, I was taught to see to the water as something danger. Secondly, my eyes became bad when I was five. If I took off my glass in the water, I couldn’t see something, and this increased my fear. What’s worse, for a child I once saw a neighbor drowned. Since then I have been more frightening.‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎1. so—because ‎2. look—looking ‎ ‎3. 加the ‎4. am—was ‎5. 去掉to ‎ ‎6. danger--dangerous ‎7. glass--glasses ‎8. something---anything ‎9. for--as ‎10. frightening—frightened ‎ - 18 -‎ ‎7新*课*标*第*一*网 ‎（2014届云南省部分名校高三第一次联考（11月）‎ People often have troubles getting used to a new culture. They are usually curious when they first arrive a foreign country. Therefore, if they stay for a long time, they may start to feel different stages of culture shock. They can feel alone or sad because he can’t deal with the local people. How quick people get used to culture differences may be depend on the way they learn. That’s a problem if they can’t speak the language. On other hand, some can study the situation and make good guesses about the culture. When they finally began to understand some of the language and make some new friends, they will gradually enjoy themselves and feel satisfying. ‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎1. troubles改为trouble。 ‎ ‎2. arrive后加in。‎ ‎3. Therefore改为However。‎ ‎4. alone改为lonely。‎ ‎5. he改为they。‎ ‎6. quick改为quickly。‎ ‎7. may be depend on中删去be。‎ ‎8. other前加the。X K B 1.C O M ‎9. began改为begin。‎ ‎10. satisfying改为satisfied。‎ ‎8‎ ‎（2014届黑龙江哈师大附中高三上学期期中）‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎1. shall---should - 18 -‎ ‎2. specially---special ‎3. responding to ‎4. the best ‎ ‎5. appreciation ‎ ‎6. will prefer ---prefer ‎ ‎7. which---what ‎8. bringing ‎9. means ‎10. ourselves ‎9‎ ‎（2014届河北省衡水中学高三上学期四调考试）‎ Thanks for you mail. I’m glad to know you are interested in the 2014 Florida Winter Camp. It will be held from January 27 to February 13, during that time you will get wonderful experience. You will have chances to improve your speaking English in the courses providing. Also, activities arranged for you to spend weekends together with your host family, so you can learn American English in authentic situations. However, a trip to the local Disneyland will certainly add up the fun of the camp. w w w .x k b 1.c o m Join in the camp and you will have the better knowledge of American culture and life. You are sure to benefit from it.‎ ‎ Yours truly ‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】w w w .x k b 1.c o m ‎1. you→your ‎2. that→which ‎3. 在“get”后面加a或experienc→experiences ‎4. speaking→spoken ‎5. providing→provided ‎6. 在“arranged”前面加are ‎7. However→Besides/Also/Morever ‎8. up→ to - 18 -‎ ‎9. 去掉in ‎10. the→a ‎10‎ ‎（2014届河南省南阳市高三五校联谊期中考试）‎ My neighbor Jackie is always consideration to others. One day , I was going to deliver a speech at an institute while I found my car wouldn’t get started. I rushed to the street to hire a taxi. Just at that time I come across Jackie. He was hurried going to attend his sick mother in hospital.‎ Furthermore, when he learned about my problems, he didn’t hesitate to give me a lift. I arrived at the lecture hall in time, when the audience had been present . I owe my great thanks to my neighbour Jackie , he is a person ready to help the others at any time.‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎1. consideration改成considerate ‎2. While改成when ‎3. come改成came ‎4. hurried改成hurriedly ‎5. attend后面加to ‎6. Furthermore改成however ‎7. problems改成problem新 课 标 第 一 8. when改成where 9. he改成who 10. 去掉the ‎（2014届黑龙江省齐齐哈尔实验中学高三上学期期中考试）‎ I went hiking to a mountain with my friend last summer. It was a good trip in the beginning and something unexpected happened halfway. One of my friends suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and he couldn’t move any far. Nobody knew how to deal it. One girl tried to call her mum over her mobile phone, but there is no signal in the mountain area. Lucky we had brought a tent with us. We put it up and let him to rest in it. After taken some pills, he drank some water and ate some food. After a while, I felt much better and we walked on. We all enjoyed us on the top of the mountain.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【答案】‎ - 18 -‎ ‎1. 第一句：friend改成friends;‎ ‎2. 第二句：and改成but ‎3. 第三句：far改成farther ‎4. 第四句：deal 后加with ‎5. 第五句：is改成was ‎6. 第六句：Lucky改成Luckily ‎ ‎7. 第七句：去掉rest前面的to ‎8. 第八句：taken改成taking ‎9. 第九句：I改成he ‎10. 第十句：us改成ourselves ‎12‎ ‎（2014届浙江省衢州一中高三上学期期中考试）‎ Nowadays, some students would not like to live in a dormitory. Instead, they rented houses outside the school. There are advantages for them all. Living in a dormitory can increase friendship and cooperation among classmates, but of course it is safer．Besides, a dormitory is more like a society, where enables students to learn to get along with the each other，thus preparing the social life later. As for renting houses to live lonely, it’s better for your study as you can feel freely in your own room without being interrupted by others. As a result，you can have a plenty of time to devote yourself to review your lessons wholeheartedly. But there may appear a few safety problem as you live outside the school. Anyhow as a student, I prefer living in a dormitory.‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎1. rented改为rent ‎2. all改为both ‎3. but改为and ‎4. where改为which ‎5. repairing后面加for ‎6. lonely改为alone ‎7. freely改为free 8. 去掉a 9. review改为reviewing 10. problem改为problems ‎（2014届浙江省湖州中学高三上学期期中考试）‎ - 18 -‎ Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both sad and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎1. 加上for ‎2. past → passed ‎3. feet → foot ‎4. when → than ‎5. a → the ‎6. other → another ‎7. do → did ‎8. possible → possibly ‎9. 去掉it ‎10. lose → losing ‎14‎ ‎（2014届辽宁省抚顺市六校联合体高三上学期期中考试）‎ As students, all of us will be faced a problem after passed the college entrance examination. Should we choose a good major and a good university first? Here are some different ideas. Some more prefer to choose a major first so they can learn that they are interested in. In this way they can put their hearts into study and got their favorite jobs in the future. Other believe that the environment is important to one’s develop and that graduates from key universities are more likely to find good jobs. As long as I’m concerned, the best choice is a good university if we can’t obtain all.‎ ‎【答案】‎ - 18 -‎ ‎1. faced后面加上with ‎2. passed改成passing ‎3. and改成or ‎4. Some后面的more 去掉 ‎5. learn后面的that改成what ‎6. got改成get ‎7. Other改成Others ‎8. develop改成development ‎9. long改成far ‎10. all改成both ‎15‎ ‎（2014届吉林省长春外国语学校高三上学期期中考试）‎ Dear Editor, ‎ I’m the only daughter of my parents. So they worried about everything I do. For example, ‎ when I ride my bike, my parents won’t let me to ride by myself. They are afraid I might ‎ fall off my bike and hurt myself. They are taking great trouble to support a bike, with my mother even carried a first-aid box. I’m not free to ride and I often say angry, “Why not ‎ let me ride alone?” Now, most family have one child. Parents want to do everything ‎ for his children. This does no good on them. Too many love from parents may prevent ‎ children from independent. In my opinion, parents should let their children do that they ‎ should do alone. ‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎1. worried—worry/加are ‎2. 去掉to ‎ ‎3. the--a ‎4. carried—carrying ‎ ‎5. angry—angrily 6. his--their 7. family--familie 8. many--much 9. on--to 10. that--what - 18 -‎