高考满分英语作文 15页

全国卷I：满分范文一 ‎    满分文（一）‎ ‎    Dear Peter，‎ ‎    I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.‎ ‎    Since Im quite interested in English， I would like to make an English pen friend to improve my writing. Can you introduce one to me？ My ideal pen friend should be of my age， and a boy will be better. A boy who likes traveling and football will be a good candidate.‎ ‎    In my opinion， the guy of my age will share almost the same experiences as me and it is easier to talk to each other. We can share our feelings of traveling and football. If possible， I hope that he likes pets. Hope you can find me an ideal pen friend.Thank you.‎ ‎    Best regards，‎ ‎    Li Hua ‎    名师点评：‎ ‎    本文属于比较“平”的文章，即稳中求胜。文章没有华丽的词语，但是使用了一些短语和结构，能够获得老师的欣赏。首句是个原因状语从句。文章也运用了定语从句来修饰boy，比较好。If possible这个省略句则表明作者对这类状语从句的熟悉。‎ ‎    积累卡片 ‎    好词：‎ ‎    1. candidate n.候选人 ‎    2.share with 与…分享 ‎    好句：In my opinion， the guy of my age will share almost the same experiences as me and it is easier to talk to each other.在我看来，像我这样年龄的男生和我会有更多的共同语言。‎ ‎    好处：复杂句的组合很好。 ‎ 满分文（二）‎ ‎    Dear Peter，‎ ‎    I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.‎ ‎    I have been learning English for two years and I hope to find an English pen friend so that I can get more improvement. Can you help me to find one？‎ ‎    Id like to have a boy， who is of my age and is fond of traveling and sports， to be my pen friend. In my opinion， people of the same age often have something to exchange. Thats why I want him to be of my age. If he likes doggy， that would be better because I can tell him ‎ something about my little doggy.Id be very thankful if you can help me. Hope to hear from you！‎ ‎    Best regards，‎ ‎    Li Hua ‎    名师点评：‎ ‎    从整体上来说，本文写得还是符合要求的，内容完整，要点和结构也很齐全。语言的使用不在于华丽的辞藻而在于其一些复杂句子的组织。最值得我们学习的就是像好词和好句中列举的表达法。全文流畅而连贯，适合于模仿。‎ ‎    积累卡片 ‎    好词 ‎    1.improvement n 改进 ‎    2.do sb. a favor 帮助某人 ‎    3. doggy n.小狗 ‎    好句 ‎    1. I’d like to have a boy， who is of my age and is fond of traveling and sports， to be my pen friend.我想寻找一个和我年纪相仿，喜欢旅游、体育的男孩来做我的笔友。‎ ‎    好处：of my age 年纪相仿；be fond of 喜欢。‎ ‎    2.That’s why I want him to be of my age，这就是为什么我希望笔友跟我年纪相仿的原因。‎ ‎    好处：用why引导的从句做表语从句。‎ Should tourists take photos with animals？‎ ‎ Koalas in wildlife parks can‘t fall asleep because tourists keep disturbing them. The movement is thinking to make the tourists’ behaviour illegal to protect the animals.‎ ‎ When people are visiting wildlife parks， they like to take photographs with animals. Reasons for this are varied. Some people may think taking photos with animals are funny in contrast with taking photos with other persons. Others may think that it will be an interesting experience to take photos with animals during their visit.‎ ‎ If I were an animal in the wildlife park， I would feel annoyed when people keep photographing with me. My life would be greatly influenced and I wouldn‘t feel happy at all！ I think I should have some private space and time to relax myself.‎ ‎ However， I don‘t agree if it is announced illegal to take photos with animals. Tourists pay for tickets to visit the wildlife park and it will be a pity for them if they can’t have a photo with an animal. Perhaps wildlife parks can set some special time， during which tourists can take photos with animals. It can both satisfy tourists and protect the animals. ‎ ‎2009年的年广东高考英语满分作文 ‎ ‎ 游客应该给动物拍照吗？ ‎ ‎ 考拉在野生动物公园不能入睡，因为他们令人不安的游客不断。不结盟运动思想，使游客的非法行为，以保护动物。 ‎ ‎ 当人们正在访问的野生动物公园，他们喜欢与动物拍照留念。原因是多种多样的。一些人可能认为拍照与动物的有趣的对比拍照与其他人。其他人可能认为，这将是一个有趣的经验，与动物拍照访问期间。 ‎ ‎ 如果我是一种动物的野生动物园，我会感到恼火的人不断拍照时，与我。我的生活将得到极大的影响，我不会感到高兴了！我想我应该有一些私人的空间和时间来放松消遣。 ‎ ‎ 但是，我不同意，如果它是非法宣布采取与动物的照片。游客支付门票参观野生动物园，将是很可惜的，如果他们不能的照片，一种动物。也许野生动物公园可以设置一些特殊的时间，在此期间，游客可以与动物的照片。它既能满足游客和保护动物。‎ 考英语满分作文第一篇 最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。 ‎ ‎ 60％的同学认为 40％的同学认为 ‎ ‎1．不应该收门票 ‎ ‎2公园是公众休闲的地方 ‎ ‎3l如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象 1．应收门票，但票价不要太高 ‎ ‎2．支付园林工人工资 ‎ ‎3．购新花木 ‎ ‎ 注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。 ‎ ‎ 2．词数：100左右。 ‎ ‎ 3．参考词汇：门票---entrance fee ‎ Dear Editor． ‎ ‎ I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we havehad about whether an entrance ‎ fee should be charged for parks．‎ 高考满分作文1(1号题) ‎ Dear editor, ‎ ‎ I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees. ‎ ‎ With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor? ‎ ‎ Yours truly, ‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎ 高考英语满分作文第二篇 ‎ Dear editor, ‎ ‎ I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Sixty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should not be bought before one enters a park, for it ‎ is a place for the public to go to when they are free. If a ticket must be bought, a gate and walls have to be built for a park, which will make a city look ugly. Forty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should be bought before one enters a park, but that the price of the ticket should be reasonable. Money that is got from ticket selling can be used to pay the gardening workers and buy different kinds of flowers and trees. As for myself, I really think parks are good places to go to at weekends and on holidays. At the same time, we, as visitors, should pay the entrance fee when we enter a park. After all, it takes a lot of money to maintain a park in good working order. Do you agree with me, dear editor? ‎ ‎ Yours truly, ‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎ 高考英语满分作文第三篇 Dear editor, ‎ ‎ I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Sixty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee should not be forced on the public. They believe parks are the place where the public enjoy themselves at their leisure. They think that a gate and wails are to be built if an entrance fee is to be charged. The city will not look so beautiful as it should have. Forty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee is OK, but it shouldn’t be out of control. Entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new types of flowers and trees. For myself, I’d like to say that if we all work hard to build our city into a flower garden, who cares about the entrance fee for parks? ‎ ‎ Yours truly, ‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎ 高考英语满分作文第四篇 Dear editor, ‎ ‎ I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Those against charging entrance fee for parks take up 60%. They are of one mind that parks are a place for the public’s enjoyment. If tickets are demanded on the visitors of a park, a gate has to be set up and so have the walls on the four sides. If so, city will not look as beautiful as it would. Otherwise, those in favour of charging entrance fee for parks take up 40%. They all think that ticket price should be controlled properly, and that entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new sorts of flowers and trees. The truth lies in the hands of the majority. Does my argument stand to reason, dear editor? Yours truly, Li Hua ‎ 高考英语满分作文第五篇 Dear editor, ‎ ‎ I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Of all us who have joined in the discussion, 60% share the point of view that an entrance fee should not be charged while 40% share the opposite view. Those who don’t agree with the idea think that a park is a place where the public can spend their spare time for pleasure. Those in support of the idea think that entrance fee for parks can’t be beyond control. Those against the idea think that a city’s appearance will be damaged because a gate and wails will be built if an entrance fee is to be collected. Those who agree with the idea think entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new kinds of flowers and trees. I think it does more good than harm to charge an entrance fee for parks. Am I right, editor? ‎ ‎ Yours truly, ‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎2010高考英语作文范文：国庆60周年 新中国成立60周年来，我国发生了翻天覆地的变化，请你据此写一篇120字的英语作文，谈谈自己的感想。‎ ‎ 要求:‎ ‎ 1. 列出生活中反映一两件家乡变化的事, 如购新车、住新房等。‎ ‎ 2. 列出最近发生的一两件国家大事，如成功举办奥运、“神舟七号” 顺利升空等。‎ ‎ 3. 要表达出你的喜悦和自豪之情，并谈谈你的感想。‎ ‎ Great changes have taken place since our country was founded 60 years ago. In the past we lived in the small and old houses and now we move into new broad ones which are more than one hundred square meters. At the same time, many families have own their new cars.‎ ‎ Besides, our country hosted the 29th Olympic Games successfully in 2008 and we took the first place in winning gold medals. Another inspiring event was that the Shenzhou Ⅶ was sent into space smoothly, which shows our scientific research get great achievements.‎ ‎ We are very happy and proud of all these achievements. I am sure our country will become even stronger and richer. I love our motherland very much. Let’s work hard to make contribution to our country in the future.‎ Dear Mrs. Smith,‎ I’m Li Hua, Chair of the Student Union of YuCai Middle School, which is close to your university. I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15. ‎ It will start at 2；00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Man and Nature”. We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.‎ I am looking forward to your reply.‎ With best wishes Li Hua ‎ Jiangsu‎:‎ Dear teachers and schoolmates, it’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you. I’m interested in English, and hope to be an interpreter in the future. Naturally it’s very important for me to learn English well. As everyone knows, vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building. I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible. After class, I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio. Besides, I’ve learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.‎ Now, I’d like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school. Firstly, we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned in order to have a better grasp of it. Secondly, I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them. Finally, I suggest we have more English activities, such as English contests and festivals.‎ Thank you for you listening.‎ 一 假设你叫王明，昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。 ‎ 英语作文网 ‎ Dear David, ‎ I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well. ‎ Hope to see you soon in Beijing. ‎ Yours, ‎ Wang Ming ‎ 二 请你根据下面的提纲，以“我的家乡”为题，写一篇100—120字的短文。 ‎ 提纲： ‎ ‎(1) 家乡的地理位置； ‎ ‎(2) 解放前的情况； ‎ ‎(3) 解放后的变化； ‎ ‎(4) 对家乡的感情。 ‎ My Home‎ ‎Town ‎ My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. ‎ But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life. ‎ In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved. ‎ I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful. ‎ ‎ ‎ 三 健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题，你很为他们担忧。请你以此为话题，并结合提示给他们写一封信。 ‎ 提示：1.要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车； ‎ ‎2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次，或打球、或游泳； ‎ ‎3.饮食要健康； ‎ ‎4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。 ‎ 要求：1.短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑； ‎ ‎2.80—100词左右； ‎ ‎3.开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。 ‎ Dear Dad(Mum), ‎ You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health. I’m worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn’t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What’s more, it’s necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better. ‎ Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you healthy! ‎ Your loving son (daughter) ‎ Tom (Mary) ‎ ‎ ‎ 四 Dear Dad(Mum), ‎ You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health.I am worried about you. I hope you can keep healthy. You often drive to your office. It is not far.What about walking there because it can make you much stronger?I’d like you to play basketball or go swimming in the gym at least ‎ once a week. It is important to eat healthy food such as vegetables, meat, eggs and fruits. Though your work is hard, I still hope that you can go to bed early so that you can get enough sleep. ‎ I’m looking forward to receiving your letter. ‎ Your loving son (daughter) ‎ Tom (Mary)‎ 五 ‎ 随着阳光体育运动在全国开展，政府对中学生身体素质有所下降这个问题给予了高度重视，提出了这样的标语：“EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY”。同学们参加了各种体育锻炼之后，校园里出现了可喜的变化，强身健体，增强了学习效果，校园生活丰富了。请你报道一下学校开展这一活动的情况。‎ ‎ 注意：1. 词数80—100左右。‎ ‎ 2. 要求文章结构合理、内容通顺、句子连贯。‎ ‎ 参考词汇：build up one’s body strength 强健身体 ‎ reduce diseases 减少疾病 ‎ As the Sunny Sports is developing in our country, the government has paid attention to the health of the students and raised, "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY". So far our school life has changed a lot. Now we have more time to do sport in the morning or after school. We play football, basketball, badminton and swim. They let our brains relax and make our school life more colorful. We have become more energetic. Above all our study has all been improved.‎ ‎ Let’s take exercise every day. It can build up our body strength and reduce diseases.‎ Doing sport builds up our body strength and reduces diseases.‎ 六 ‎ Though we lead a better life, our health is becoming worse now. So "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY，KEEP ILLNESS AWAY" has been raised by the government.‎ ‎ At noon or after school we play ball games, swimming and running. Look!The playground seems smaller because lots of students are playing on it.The school life has become colorful and we are energetic.As a result we study harder and better.‎ ‎ The Sunny Sports has brought an exciting change to us. Let’s keep on doing it. ‎ 七 Career or Family: which is more important?‎ ‎ When asked about their opinion of career and family, people always respond differently. Some people deem it more important to pursue their career, while there are always other people who argue that family should be the number one in one’s life.‎ ‎ It goes without any question that career plays a key role in our life. In the very first place, career can give us an aim to live on. Without career, much of our living time will be certainly wasted. What’s more, career can provide us with a means to live on. Most of the people earn their income from a job. On the other hand, family is also an indispensable part of life, as many people will admit. Family is always regarded as a place where we can escape from troubles in life. In addition, we can obtain a sense of belonging to from family. Without it, anyone will feel lonely and desperate. ‎ ‎ In my opinion, career and family are not in opposition to each other. Rather, they can enhance each other so that one’s life can become better and better. Therefore, it’s not a choice between right and wrong, but one between ideal and practical.中国公务网 2006-5-28 11:34:59‎ 八 ‎ Olympics and I Dear friend, ‎ ‎ I have a great news to inform here. Through long efforts, Beijing has been granted the right to host 2008 Olympic games. As a resident in Beijing, I feel quite excited and like to share with you my happiness. ‎ ‎ This success means a lot more than a game to me. In the first place, this Games will definitely promote the development of our economy. According to a recent survey by some experts, this games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. What’s more, our culture will be widely recognized and accepted all over the world through the Games. People will come over from every corner of the world, and experience Chinese culture in every aspect. Besides, through the games, our living environment will be greatly improved. For example, the public transportation system will be up-dated. Moreover, it’s known that more trees will be planted, and grassland will be considerably expanded.‎ ‎ My friend, I really look forward to the coming of this great Games. As an individual, I’m all ready to offer my help in any way I can. I also hope to invite you all to come here, and watch the games in 2008. ‎ ‎ Sincerely yours,‎ 九 ‎ Tourism in ‎China ‎ Recent years have seen a tendency in China that tourism is growing faster. According to a recent survey made by some experts, about 47% urban residents travel regularly, and 28% rural residents also make their tour across the country. The survey also shows that more people are interested in tourism, and will join the army in the future.‎ ‎ Facing this tendency, we can’t help exploring some underlying factors that are responsible. In the very first place, with the policy of reform and opening up, Chinese people’s living standard has been greatly improved, and therefore, most of them can afford to travel around. What’s more, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude to tourism, and regard it as a life style. In addition, tourism facilities are becoming better and better. For example, transportation develops fast, and many scenic spots are available now. ‎ 十 What a disaster(灾难)!So far,it's reported that more than 60,000 people died in the SiChuan earthquake.What's more, millions of people there have become homeless.And they are still in the danger of illness and other difficulties.‎ ‎ Anyway, thanks to all the kind people, in and abroad,the situation has been changing well.But we still work hard at it,especially to build houses for those homeless people and cure the injured people.‎ What can we do now? Besides doing our own job well,we can donate money to them.We firmly believe that with the party and the government's strong leadership, and with the people of all nationalities throughout the country to aid,this earthquake relief will be a victory!‎ Should tourists take photos with animals？‎ ‎ Koalas in wildlife parks can‘t fall asleep because tourists keep disturbing them. The movement is thinking to make the tourists’ behaviour illegal to protect the animals.‎ ‎ When people are visiting wildlife parks， they like to take photographs with animals. Reasons for this are varied. Some people may think taking photos with animals are funny in contrast with taking photos with other persons. Others may think that it will be an interesting experience to take photos with animals during their visit.‎ ‎ If I were an animal in the wildlife park， I would feel annoyed when people keep photographing with me. My life would be greatly influenced and I wouldn‘t feel happy at all！ I think I should have some private space and time to relax myself.‎ ‎ However， I don‘t agree if it is announced illegal to take photos with animals. Tourists pay for tickets to visit the wildlife park and it will be a pity for them if they can’t have a photo with an animal. Perhaps wildlife parks can set some special time， during which tourists can take photos with animals. It can both satisfy tourists and protect the animals. ‎ ‎2009年的年广东高考英语满分作文 ‎ ‎ 游客应该给动物拍照吗？ ‎ ‎ 考拉在野生动物公园不能入睡，因为他们令人不安的游客不断。不结盟运动思想，使游客的非法行为，以保护动物。 ‎ ‎ 当人们正在访问的野生动物公园，他们喜欢与动物拍照留念。原因是多种多样的。一些人可能认为拍照与动物的有趣的对比拍照与其他人。其他人可能认为，这将是一个有趣的经验，与动物拍照访问期间。 ‎ ‎ 如果我是一种动物的野生动物园，我会感到恼火的人不断拍照时，与我。我的生活将得到极大的影响，我不会感到高兴了！我想我应该有一些私人的空间和时间来放松消遣。 ‎ ‎ 但是，我不同意，如果它是非法宣布采取与动物的照片。游客支付门票参观野生动物园，将是很可惜的，如果他们不能的照片，一种动物。也许野生动物公园可以设置一些特殊的时间，在此期间，游客可以与动物的照片。它既能满足游客和保护动物。‎ ‎]‎