2020-2021年高考英语短文改错训练（一） 5页

‎2020-2021年高考英语短文改错训练（一）‎ 题组精炼一 Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove. I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together."Not that way," my mom tried to stop us but failed . She was right . It didn't turn out as I had wished .‎ ‎【答案】‎ Today I tried cooking a simply ①→ simple dish myself. I like eating frying ②→fried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to ③ be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing ④→prepare it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but ⑤→and put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick ⑥→chopsticks After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off ⑦→on the stove. I waited patiently unless ⑧→until /till the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into ⑨ the pan together."Not that way," my mom tried to stop us ⑩→me but failed . She was right . It didn't turn out as I had wished .‎ ‎1考查形容词。句意：今天我尝试亲自做一道简单的菜。形容词作定语修饰名词dish,simple简单的。2考查非谓语动词。此处修饰 tomatoes,并且tomatoes与fry为逻辑上的被动关系，故用过去分词形式。‎ ‎3考查情态动词。情态动词后接动词原形。‎ ‎4考查动词不定式。句意：我的母亲告诉我如何准备这道菜。“疑问词+不定式”结构作told的直接宾语。‎ ‎5考查连词。句意：首先我把西红柿切成块，然后把它们放在一边。前后内容为并列关系。‎ ‎6考查名词。此处表示用筷子快速搅拌。chopstick为可数名词，故此处需用复数形式。‎ ‎7考查动词短语。此处意为“打开炉子”。turn off关闭，turn on打开。‎ ‎8考查连词。句意：我耐心地等待直到油热。until/till直到……为止，unless除非。‎ ‎9考查冠词。本文前面已出现pan这个词，第二次出现用定冠词 the 表特指。‎ ‎10考查代词。本句是说母亲在“我”做错的时候纠正“我”，所以要将us改为me。‎ 题组精炼二 Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. I'm glad to know that you've come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I'm surely you'll have a good time.‎ Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.‎ ‎【答案】‎ Thank you for your letter, ① what →which really made me happy. I'm glad to know that you've come② ︿to China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I'm ③ surely →sure you'll have a good time. Actually, I ④start →started to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, ⑤ for→ but/ get I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer ⑥ vacations. → vacation Then I can spare some time to learn it again, ⑦ such → so that we can practice together ⑧ on every day. Best of luck with ⑨ yours →your/ you learning kung fu in China. See you ⑩ sooner.→ soon ‎1 考查非限制性定语从句。句意：感谢你的来信，这真的让我很开心。先行词是your letter,关系词在非限制性定语从句中作主语，故用关系代词which ‎2考查介词。句意：知道你来到中国在我家乡的一所学校学习功夫我很高兴。come为不及物动词，后面加宾语时，需加介词。此处表示“来到……”，故在come后加to。‎ ‎3考查形容词。句意：我确信你会玩得很开心。此处I'm sure(that)+从句是固定句式，sure是形容词，故将surely改为sure。‎ ‎4考查动词时态。此处表示“我七岁的时候就开始学功夫了”。句中when I was seven years old是表示过去的时间状语从句，故主句动词要用started。‎ ‎5考查连词。句意：事实上，我七岁时就开始学功夫了，可我好久不练了。这里前后是转折关系，而非因果关系，故将for改为but或yet。‎ ‎6考查名词单复数。句意：幸运的是，两周后我要回家过暑假。summer vacation暑假，故要把vacations改为vacation。‎ ‎7考查状语从句。句意：届时我就能抽些时间再次学习，以便我们可以每天一起练功。这里so that引导状语从句。故将such改为so。‎ ‎8考查名词短语。“every/each/last/next+名词”作时间状语时，every、each等词前，一般省略介词，故去掉on。9考查人称代词。句意：祝你在中国学习功夫好运。‎ 句中with是介词，后边your/you learning kung fu是v.‎ ing形式的复合结构。v.-ing形式的复合结构中要用形容词性物主代词或宾格代词。故将yours改为your或you。‎ ‎10考查副词。句意：希望很快见到你。soon是副词，意为“不久”。sooner意为“更早，更快”，此处没有比较之意。故将sooner改为soon。‎ 题组精炼三 My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad don't like the soup and I don't enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we're forced eat things, we may become ill. But he insists on us eating healthy food Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.‎ ‎【答案】‎ My mom is really ①concerning → concerned with the health of everyone in our ②families.→family In order to make ③surely →sure all of us are in good health,④ and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have ⑤the →a bowl of egg soup while I ⑥had → have to eat an apple. My dad don't like the soup and I ⑦don't →doesn’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we're forced ⑧︿to eat things, we may become ill. But ⑨he → she insists on us eating healthy food Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food ⑩what →that is provided by Mom with appreciation.‎ ‎1 考查固定短语。关心某事：be concerned with sth.故需将concerning改为concerned。‎ ‎2 考查名词的单复数。句意：我的妈妈十分关心我们家中每一个人的健康。根据句意可知，此处的family指“家庭”，需用单数，故将families改为family。‎ ‎3考查固定短语。make sure(确保）为固定短语。故需将surely改为sure。‎ ‎4考查句子结构。句意：为了确保我们都身体健康，她为我们制订了具体的计划。逗号前面为不定式短语作目的状语，后面是主句。此处使用and多余。‎ ‎5考查冠词。此处表示每天都喝一碗，表泛指，需将定冠词the改为不定冠词a ‎6考查动词时态。根据上下文皆是一般现在时可知，此处也需要用一般现在时。又因句子主语为I,故需将had改为have。‎ ‎7考查主谓一致。分析句子结构可知，主语My dad为第三人称单数，后面的动词也要用第三人称单数，故将don't改为doesn't。‎ ‎8考查固定搭配。根据force的用法可知，其后需跟不定式作补语。be forced to do sth.意为“被迫去做某事”。故要在forced后面加上不定式符号to。‎ ‎9 考查代词。句意：但是她坚持让我们吃健康的食物。根据语境可知，此处的“她”是指上文提到的作者的妈妈，需要使用代词she,故将he改为she。‎ ‎10 考查定语从句。句意：我感激地吃完了妈妈准备的所有食物。此处为定语从句，先行词为all the food,关系词在定语从句中作主语。而且先行词中含有不定代词all。故此处需要使用that引导定语从句，将what改为that。‎ 题组精炼四 Since I was a kid, I've considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.‎ ‎【答案】‎ Since I was a kid, I've considered different ① job→jobs I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so ②coolly.→cool Then, when I was in the ③five→fifth ‎ grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher ④too →very/ so much. When I studied chemistry ⑤︿in/ at high school, I reconsidered my goal ⑥or →and decided to be a doctor. ⑦They →there were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was ⑧amazing →amazed at the fact that a sick person could feel much ⑨more better after seeing a doctor. And the other ⑩ is →was that I wanted to help people in need.‎ ‎1 考查名词的数。句意：自从我小的时候起，我就考虑自己想做的不同的工作。根据本句中的形容词different可知后面的名词（job)需用复数形式，故将job改为jobs。‎ ‎2 考查形容词。句意：最初，我想成为一名消防员，因为他们的制服看上去很酷。本句中looked为系动词，后面需加形容词而非副词作表语，以说明uniform的特征，故将coolly改为cool。‎ ‎3考查数词。句意：后来，当我上五年级时，我想成为一名教师。因为我非常喜欢我的英文老师。错误处需用序数词而非基数词作名词grade的定语。此外，错误处前的定冠词也暗示应用序数词。‎ ‎4考查副词。副词too意为“太……，过于……”，所表达的意思和本句表达的意思不一致，故将too改为very或so ‎5 考查介词。句意：当我在中学学习化学时，我再次考虑我的目标并决定当一名医生。错误处需添加介词in或at与high school一起作地点状语。in/at high school在中学。‎ ‎6考查连词。本句中“reconsidered my goal”与"decided to be a doctor"为递进关系而非选择关系，故将or改为and。‎ ‎7 考查特殊句式。句意：(做出）这个决定的原因有两个。本句应使用there be句型，表示“有……”。‎ ‎8考查形容词。句意：一个原因是病人看过医生后感觉会更好，我对这个事实感到惊讶。amazing意为：令人吃惊的；amazed意为：惊讶的。根据句意可知需将amazing 改为 amazed。‎ ‎9考查形容词的比较级。“more+多音节形容词原级”为多音节形容词的比较级形式，而better已经是形容词的比较级形式，故副词more多余，故被删除。‎ ‎10考查时态。句意：另外一个原因是我想帮助有需要的人。根据上句中“One was”可知本句也需用一般过去时，故将is改为was。‎