【英语】2020届二轮复习书面表达分类写作指导学案之九：慰问信 9页

‎2020届二轮复习书面表达分类写作指导学案之九：慰问信 写作模板 Dear______, ‎ I am ______, I am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that you are so bitter after _________________. / I am shocked at the news about______________(引出具体实情，表示惋惜和同情) ‎ At present,_____________ decides that it will give you_______________ when you receive a letter. That will offer you so much courage. I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is. You are sure to make it.(进一步安慰并鼓励对方) ‎ I will try my best to___________, which may help you .It will give more courage to live on.(表示自己意愿提供帮助) ‎ ‎ May you recover soon./Good luck and best wishes to you!(表达愿望与祝福) ‎ Yours sincerely, ‎ ‎_________________‎ ‎ ‎ 题型特点 ‎ 慰问信是向失败者、生病者、不幸者、愁苦者或遇到天灾人祸的人表示安慰或同情的信件。此类信要写得及时、简明扼要，感情要真诚，措辞要贴切，尽量以乐观的口吻减轻亲友的烦恼和痛苦，并鼓励对方对日后烦人生活、学习、工作充满信心。 ‎ 写作思路 ‎ ‎ 第一步：引出事实，表达惋惜和同情；‎ ‎ 第二步：安慰对方或鼓励对方，预测未来；‎ ‎ 第三步：表达愿望和祝福。‎ 慰问信的基本结构包括标题、抬头、正文及落款四个部分。‎ ‎1.标题。可以只写“慰问信”三字，也可以同时写上慰问对象，有些还要写上发信单位名称。‎ ‎2.抬头。即致信对象，写清被慰问对象的单位名称或个人姓名，个人姓名后要加上称呼。‎ ‎3.正文。慰问信的正文一般包括以下几部份内容：慰问原由，因何写慰问信；表明态度、表示赞赏、钦佩、同情、关怀等；提出希望或鼓励；表示祝愿。慰问对象、目的和原由不同，正文的写法有所不同，要根据具体情况而定。 学科#网 ‎4.落款。写上发信机关单位名称及时间。‎ 慰问信要明确慰问对象和目的，从而确定慰问信的侧重点。慰问有功者，侧重赞扬、激励；慰问有难者，侧重同情、安慰；节日慰问，侧重肯定、鼓励。同时，感情要真挚、亲切，用语要朴实、简练。‎ ‎1. 表示“惊悉……”：‎ I’m very sorry to hear of…‎ I’m very sorry to hear that…‎ I regret to hear…‎ I’m much grieved to hear…‎ I’m deeply distressed to hear…‎ I’m shocked to hear…‎ It was a profound shock to hear the tragic news.‎ It is with great concern that I hear of…‎ It is with great anxiety that I hear of…‎ I cannot tell you how sad I felt when I was told…‎ ‎2. 表示“如果用我之处，请别犹豫”：‎ If you want me to do anything, do not hesitate to let me know.‎ If I can be of any assistance to you, I hope you will let me know at once.‎ I would be delighted to serve you to best of my ability.‎ I shall be delighted if I can do anything for you.‎ ‎3. 表示愿望 I hope that by the time this letter reaches you, you’ll be feeling much better.‎ Wish you speedy recovery.‎ We hope you will have a speedy quick recovery.‎ I know you will be strong and brave for the sake of the children May you rest in place, my old friend!‎ ‎ 经典试题训练 Writing1‎ 据报道，7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度的痛苦之中。美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定,每当Amy收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美分的治疗款。‎ 假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：‎ ‎1.自我简介 ‎2.得知的情况 ‎3.表示鼓励 ‎4.打算为她做什么 ‎5.祝她早日康复 注意:‎ ‎1.信的格式已为你写好 ‎2.信中不得出现你的真实情况 ‎3.词数100左右 Dear Amy,‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【范文】‎ Dear Amy,‎ I am a student from Xinhua Middle School. I am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that you are so bitter after having a lung cancer.‎ At present, ACS decides that it will give you three cents when you receive a letter. That will offer you so much courage. I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is. You are sure to make it.‎ I will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you, which may help you. Hope they will give you more courage to live on.‎ May you recover soon.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua 本文要求用英文给Amy写一封慰问信，鼓励Amy与病魔斗争。考生在写作时可遵循以下几点：(1)审题，信中不得出现考生的真实情况，词数100左右；(2)确定要点：自我介绍，得知她的情况，表示鼓励，打算为她做什么，最后祝她早日康复；(3)扩展要点，丰富要点，将句子补充完整；(4)连句成篇，将句子连成短文，打好草稿；(5)全面检查，检查草稿，修改拼写、标点符号错误，修改人称、时态、句子结构逻辑错误。另外应考虑语篇的结构、句式的变化和词汇的丰富。(6)书写要规范，字母贴近横线写。‎ Writing2‎ 假设你是张华，你的朋友李明在骑车上学的途中遇到车祸，腿受伤并在医院接受了手术。请你代表全班同学给他写一封慰问信，表达以下几点信息：‎ ‎1.听说他住院并接受了手术，表示慰问；‎ ‎2.你们将在周六上午去看望他；‎ ‎3.将会帮助他补习所缺的功课；‎ ‎4.愿意提供任何可能的帮助。‎ 文章必须包含以上要点，词数为100~120。‎ ‎【范文】‎ Dear Li Ming,‎ How are you now? All of us are worried about you. We were shocked when we heard that you were knocked down by a truck while cycling to school. We are sorry to have learned that you have had an operation on your injured leg and that you have to stay in hospital. Let us hope that it will be for only a very short time, and that you will soon be out of hospital. Everybody here sends his best wishes to you for a quick recovery.‎ We’ll come to see you on Saturday morning. We have decided to help you with your lessons that you have missed. So, don’t worry and be patient. If there is anything we can do for you, please let us know when we come. We are always ready to help you.‎ Hope you will recover soon.‎ Yours,‎ Zhang Hua ‎ ‎ Writing3‎ 假如你是李华，最近收到了你的美国朋友Jenny的来信。她在信中说，由于刚进入高中，还不能适应新的环境，不知道如何去结交新朋友，因而情绪低落。请根据以下内容给她回信。‎ ‎1. 向Jenny表示问候和慰问；‎ ‎2. 针对她的问题提出以下建议：‎ ‎① 放学后邀请同学一起参加活动；‎ ‎② 你的同学遇到麻烦时，你去帮助他们；‎ ‎③ 你遇到困难时向同学求助。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右。‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Jenny,‎ I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering the high school. ‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Best wishes!‎ Li Hua ‎【范文】‎ Dear Jenny,‎ I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering the high school. I’d like to talk about it with you.‎ In fact, in your senior high school, your classmates are also new and facing the same problem, so you don’t have to worry too much about it. There is also something that you can do to change this situation. First, try to invite some of your classmates to take part in some activities together after school. This will help you understand each other better than communicating with others. Then, help your classmates when they are in trouble and ask them to help you when you have difficulty.‎ I believe you will make many new friends and you will have a happy school life there.‎ Best wishes Li Hua ‎ ‎