专题5-3+提纲类-2019高考英语卓越专项训练精英版 7页

‎ ‎ ‎【命题规律】‎ ‎ 提纲作文是高考的传统题型，也是主流题型。 此类作文就是把文章的情景和内容以条目的形式列出，考生就此进行写作。因此，写作时提纲中所列举的要点要全部涉及。提纲作文有两大特点：‎ ‎1、要点简明固定 试题中有较多的文字说明，明确界定了要写作的内容和范围，在写作时，所列举的要点一个也不能漏掉，否则会因要点不全而被扣分。‎ ‎2、有发挥的空间 为了提升文章档次，考生在保证提纲要点完整的同时，很有必要进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥，从而体现考生的英语思维能力，获得高分。‎ ‎【备考策略】‎ 写好提纲类作文，应从以下几方面入手：‎ ‎1、认真审题，分析提纲，确定主题和层次 ‎（1）审主题 （2）审内容 （3）审格式 （4）审人称 ‎2、灵活运用语言知识，完整表述观点 提纲作文不是简单的直译，把汉语提示直接转换成英文，而是要求考生用自己最有把握的词汇、语法和句型，围绕主题，将意思完整清晰的表达出来。‎ ‎3、合理组织，层次分明，前后连贯 考生要按照作文字数要求确定写哪些句子，同时斟酌单词、短语和句型，注意句与句之间、段与段之间如何紧密衔接，做到层次分明，前后连贯。‎ ‎4、通读全文，查漏补缺，工整誊写 ‎（1）检查要点是否齐全。‎ ‎（2）检查内容表达是否清晰，用词是否恰当。‎ ‎（3）字迹清楚美观。‎ ‎【注意事项】‎ （1） 细致地研究提示 （2） 写好每段的主题句 （3） 注意段落间的连贯性 （1） 避免中式英语 ‎【常用句式】‎ 1． 开头用语 （1） We had a heated discussion on /about …‎ （2） With the development of …‎ （3） At present there is a wide spread concern that…‎ ‎2. 衔接过渡用语 ‎（1）One thing which is equally important to the above mentioned is…‎ ‎(2) This may be true ,but we still have a problem with regard to…‎ ‎(3) Another special consideration in this case is that…‎ ‎3.结尾用语 ‎（1）Taking all these into consideration ,we may safely reach the conclusion that …‎ ‎(2) As far as I’m concerned ,I’m in favor of the first /second view…‎ ‎【必备模板】‎ ‎1.问题解决型 ‎ In recent years, we are faced with a problem that社会问题或现象，which is becoming more and more serious.‎ ‎ People have figured out many ways to deal with this problem. In the first place,解决办法一_.In the second place , 解决办法二. Finally，解决办法三.‎ Personally,I believe that我的解决办法.On one hand, 理由一. On the other hand，理由二.‎ All in all, the solutions may not bring the perfect result, but as long as we do it with our brains and hands, we can cope with the problem one day.‎ ‎2.积极有利型 Nowadays，主题is playing a more and more significant role in our life.For example，举例说明主题的现状.Generally speaking，its advantages can be listed as follows.Firstly,好处一.Secondly，好处二.From what we have listed above,my attitude toward this matter is positive，and the reasons are simple.It not only brings us好处一，but also gives us好处二we have not expected.‎ Therefore,I can see its bright future.‎ ‎3.观点辩论型 Recently，we have had a heated discussion about whether we should 导入话题. Our opinions are divided on this topic .‎ ‎ Some people are strongly in favor of it. Their reasons are as follows:First,理由一. Second，理由二，Finally，理由三.(如果只有两条理由，推荐用on one hand,理由一......on the other hand,理由二). Other people, however, have quite different opinions. In their view, they think that 理由。 ‎ ‎ For my part, I prefer the former idea（latter idea). For one thing, 理由一. For another, 理由二. Therefore, I am favor of the former（latter）idea.‎ ‎ 【典型例题】‎ 假设你叫李华，是学校校报通讯员。上周你们班开了一次班会，讨论“老人摔倒要不要扶”这一话题，你们班的同学进行了激烈的辩论。请你结合辩论的情况，用英语为校报写一篇报道，并发表自己的看法。要点包括：‎ ‎1.讨论结果：‎ ‎①部分同学认为应该扶，因为助人为乐是中华民族的传统美德。②部分同学认为不应该扶，因为已经有不少人为此收到诬陷。‎ ‎2.你的观点。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；2.可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎【学生习作】：‎ Recently，we have had a discussion about“whether we should help the old people up when they fall over”.‎ Some of my classmates think we have responsibility to help them，because we Chinese have fine traditions to help people in trouble.Others have quite different opinion.They think we should keep ourselves at a distance and help to call 120，because in recent years many lawsuits have happened due to helping old people.The helpers had to pay the injurer a lot of money.‎ In my opinion，we should send the old people who have fallen down to the nearest hospital.‎ ‎【点评】‎ 本文基本完成了写作任务，分成三段：提出观点→正反论述→发表看法。并且使用了一些句间连接词，以及多样化的句式结构，如whether引导的宾语从句，when引导的时间状语从句，because引导的状语从句等。但是本人也存在一些不足之处，如：第一段引出话题后，缺少过渡性的成分，另外，观点阐述不够深刻，还可以再完善一些。‎ ‎【试题简析】这是典型的观点辩论型作文，可以结合题意，套用模版。‎ ‎【满分作文】‎ Recently，we have had a heated discussion about“whether we should help the old people up when they fall over”.Our opinions are divided on this topic.‎ Some of my classmates are strongly in favor of helping them. Their reasons are as follows:On one hand,we Chinese have fine traditions to help people in trouble.On the other hand,if every one of us is not willing to help them,they may in great danger and might be run over by cars. Others, however, have quite different opinions. In their view, we should keep ourselves at a distance and help to call 120，because in recent years many lawsuits have happened due to helping old people.The helpers had to pay the injurer a lot of money.‎ For my part, I prefer the former idea.However,when helping the old,we should take action accordingly.When an old people is in great danger and badly need help,we should give an immediate first aid and send him or her to the nearest hospital.If an old people is slightly injured,we’d better help to call the police.‎ 专项训练 假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下： ‎ ‎1.栏目介绍；2.稿件内容；3.稿件长度：4.约400词；5.交稿日期：‎6月28日前。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3.开头语已为你写好。‎ ‎【答案解析】‎ 有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确三个要点：首先，简单介绍校英文报栏目的情况。2、建议Peter介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活。3、稿件的要求及时间。写作时根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【考点定位】考查提纲作文。‎ ‎【名师点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。文中巧妙地使用了一些固定句式和过渡词语，不仅增强了表达效果，而且实现了形式与内容的统一。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Peter,‎ I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.‎ The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?‎ I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Zxx%k Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎ ‎ 假如你是高中生李华，最近你班组织了一次周末郊游，旅途中你发现很多同学举止不文明，比如随手乱扔垃圾，在建筑物上乱涂乱画，采摘花草，在公众场合大声喧哗等。请你就这一现象写一篇英语短文呼吁大家进行绿色、环保旅游。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； ‎ ‎3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear students，‎ Last weekend，our class went on an interesting camping trip.All the way we enjoyed the beautiful scenery and fresh air. ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Best wishes!‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎【答案解析】‎ 这是典型的考查提纲作文，分析要点，完整表述观点，使文章连贯。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ ‎ ‎ Only when we improve our awareness of eco－travel can our earth become more and more beautiful.After all，the earth is the only place for us to live on.‎ Best__wishes!‎ Yours，‎ Li__Hua ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎