2019年高考英语二轮复习精编课件：短文改错仿真模拟第三组：议论文 50页

第三组： 议 论 文 ( 一 ) Janice, It’s been a month since I came to this new school. I really want share with you some problems I’ve been experiencing. As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. told to friends We hang out together whenever they can. We’ve been spending much time sing in karaoke bars. It’s been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a wasting activity. much singing we In fact, I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to them? Please help with me and give me some advice. Grace were What but ( 一 ) 这是一封求助信，表达了作者的困扰。作者交了三位新朋友，经常一起闲逛和 K 歌，实际上作者并不想出去，但又担忧失去这份友谊，因此她想寻求一些建议。 1. 在 want 后加 to 因 want 后用不定式作宾语。 2. tell→ told 由后面的时间状语 last time 可知应用一般过去时。 3. friend→ friends 由前面的 three 可知要用复数。 4. they→we 前后都是第一人称复数，应将they改为we，前后人称才一致。 5. sing→ singing 由固定结构 spend…(in) doing sth 意为“花费 …… 做某事”可知。 6. many→ much 根据句意“它真的花费了我很多钱”，故用 much 指代钱 ( 不可数 ) 。 7. so→ but 此处显然存在转折关系，故用并列连词 but 。 8. How→ What 因作 do 的宾语，故要用 what 。 9. are→ were 此处是虚拟语气。虚拟条件句中的系动词是 be( 对现在事实的虚拟 ) 时，要用 were 。 10. 去掉 help 后的 with 因动词 help 是及物动词，可直接带宾语，不需加介词 with 。注意： help sb. with sth. 意为“帮助某人做某事”。 wasting adj. 浪费的 hang out 闲逛 karaoke bar 卡拉 OK 房 share with sb sth 与某人分享某事 / 物 see this as… 把这看作 …… ( 二 ) I have learned that you eager to learn more about Chinese culture. Here are some learning resources to share to you. Newspapers are suitable for them to study the language. They contain correct words and grammar, that is of great benefit to your are with you which reading and writing. In addition, reading magazines is also a greatly choice. Articles in magazines provides more information about Chinese culture, enabling you to understand this country farther. Besides, you can listen to Chinese songs as well as chat with native speakers. great provide further I hope my advices can help. It is out of the question that you’ll know Chinese culture better, for you are so smart or hardworking. advice and ( 二 ) 本文是对外国友人学习中国文化的途径给予一些建议。 1.eager前面加are 因eager是形容词，不能充当谓语，因此eager前加be。 2. share 后的to→ with 因share sth with sb为固定搭配，意为“与某人分享某事 / 物”。 3.them→ you 人称与上下文的you保持一致。 4. that → which 引导非限制性定语从句并在从句中作主语，先行词指物，用which。 5. greatly→great 在名词前作定语用形容词。 6. provides→ provide 因为主语articles是复数形式，一般现在时，谓语动词用原形。 7. farther→further 指具体的“更远”可用farther或者further；但此处指抽象的“更深入的，更进一步”，通常用further。 8. advices → advice 因 advice是不可数名词，没有复数形式。 9. 去掉question前的the 因out of question为固定搭配，意为“毫无疑问”。注意：out of the question意为“不可能的”。 10. or→ and 因smart和hardworking是并列关系，应用and，而or 表选择关系。 be eager to do sth 渴望做某事 be of great benefit to sb=be very beneficial to sb对某人很有益 in addition 此外 provide sth for sb =provide sb with sth 给某人提供某物 enable sb to do sth 使某人能够做某事 out of question 没问题，毫无疑问 out of the question 不可能的，不允许的 ( 三 ) Sea World is one of the most famous park in the world. Thousands of people visit each year. Most of them go to see the dolphins and whales to perform tricks, it is something they could never see in the wild. which it parks Sea World has been under a lot of pressure late. Thousands of people have been against the park. These people say that dolphins and whales should not be force to live in such small space. forced lately They should also never be forced to perform meaning tricks. Most people are starting to agreed with this. However, Sea World will hopefully start listening to the protesters and make the change soon. a Therefore agree meaningless ( 三 ) 本文介绍了海洋世界公园面临的困境，人们希望不要强迫海豚和鲸进行商业表演了。 1. park→ parks 在 one of 后的可数名词应当用复数形式。 2. visit 后面添加 it 因 visit 是及物动词，其后需增加替代 Sea World 的 it 作宾语。 3. 删除 perform 前的 to 由 see sb. do sth. 可知，用省略 to 的不定式作宾补。 4. it→ which 或 it 前添加 and 因两个单句之间需要连词，可以 it 前加 and 构成并列句，也可改 it 为 which ，引导非限制性定语从句，先行词为前句中的 the dophins and whale perorm tricks 。 5. late→ lately 句中表示“最近”，故将 late 改为 lately 。比较两个副词： late 迟，晚； lately 最近。 6. force→ forced 用过去分词构成被动语态。 7. meaning→ meaningless 由句意可知，是不应被迫表演“无意义的”把戏，故在 meaning 后加表示否定的后缀 less 。 8. agreed→ agree 由 start to do( 开始做某事 ) 可知， to 后跟动词原形。 9. However→ Therefore 前后两个句子之间是因果关系而不是转折关系。 10. change 前的 the→ a 短语 make a change 表示 “做出改变”。 trick n. 诡计；花招；把戏 pressure n. 压力；压迫 agree with 同意 protester n. 抗议者；提出异议者 ( 四 ) I’ve received your email and know you are to pay four - day visit to China. I’m glad to travel with you as your guide. We can stayed in Beijing for two days while in another destination for just one day. stay a On the first day, we will visit some places of interests in Beijing, explore the culture of this city. The next day, we were going to make a tour of the Great Wall. In the third day, we’ll take the high - speed rail to Shanghai. On are exploring interest Hainan is our last destination, which we can spend hours sunbathing on the beach. Final, we’ll get parted and return to home separately. Are you satisfying with these arrangements? satisfied Fianlly where ( 四 ) 这是给外国朋友的一封回信，作者在信中谈到将带对方游览中国的几个城市的安排。 1. 在 four-day 前加 a 由词组 pay a visit to 可知， four-day 只是 visit 的定语， a 不能少，故增加 a 。 2. stayed → stay 情态动词后用动词原形 , 所以将 stayed 改为 stay 。 3. interests → interest 因 place of interest( 名胜古迹 ) 是固定词组，其复数形式是 places of interest ，故把 interests 改成 interest 。 4. explore → exploring 因本句已有谓语动词 will visit ，所以 explore 应为非谓语动词；又因 we 与 explore 是主动关系，故用现在分词形式作伴随状语。 5. were → are 因这是计划将来的事情，应为 are going to do sth 。 6. In→ On “ 第三天”是具体的某一天 , 用介词 On 。 7. which → where 这是一个定语从句，该从句中不缺主语和宾语，因此不用关系代词，要用关系副词。又因先行词是表示地点的 destination ，故改用关系副词 where 。 9. Final → Finally 修饰整个句子要用副词形式。 9. 去掉 home 前的 to 因习惯上说 return home ，其中 home 作副词，故去掉 to 。 10. satisfying → satisfied 因 be satisfied with( 对 …… 满意 ) 是固定搭配。 destination n. 目的地 explore v. 探测；探险 rail n. 栏杆；扶手；铁轨 sunbath e v . 沐日光浴 arrangement n. 布置；安排；约定 ( 五 ) Dear Mary, I am sorry to hear that you are deeply depressed recently due to fail in the interview of the broadcast station in your school. I can understand that you are feeling now. It is rather disappointed to fail in an important failing how disappointing interview, which you devoted a long time to it. But one failure doesn ' t meant that you are not excellent. Actual, you are an intelligent girl. You are supposed to have a positive attitude at the failure, taking advantage of this chance to learn about some interview skill. mean Actually to/towards skills Besides, you ' d better reflect on your mistake after the interview so that you will be much experienced than before. I hope you will happy again. Yours, Li Hua more be ( 五 ) 为了参加学校广播站的面试，Mary做了长时间的准备，但面试失败，她现在心情沮丧。李华给Mary回复邮件安慰和鼓励她，并提出一些建议。 1. fail→failing 因due to中to为介词，后接动名词。 2. understand 后的that→ how 引导宾语从句，且在从句中作feel的表语，要用 how 。 3. disappointed→disappointing 表示“令人失望的”，故用-ing形式的形容词。 4.把to后的it去掉 因which引导非限制性定语从句，并在从句中作to的宾语，指代先行词an important interview，it是多余的，故应删除。 5. meant→mean 在助动词(doesn’t)后应接动词原形。 6. Actual→Actually 修饰整个句子，应用副词。 7. at→to/towards 因have a positive attitude to/towards(对……持积极态度)是固定搭配。 8. skill→skills 前有some修饰，故用复数形式。 9. much→more 由than before可知用比较级。 10. 在happy前加be 情态动词后要用动词原形，而happy是形容词，故加be。 intelligent adj.聪明的，有智慧的 be deeply depressed极度沮丧 due to因为；由于 fail in the interview面试失败 devote...to把……投入到；致力于…… be supposed to do应该；理应 have a positive attitude抱着积极的态度 take advantage of this chance利用这个机会 learn about interview skills了解面试技巧 reflect on your mistake反思你的错误 ( 六 ) Do you read reviews after you see a movie? I use to do that, but I usually regretted. I read such much about a movie in advance that I often ended up not go to see it at all. going so used The writers point out everything that’s wrong with the film, but seldom mentions anything good about it. They also tell many thing and even the ending of the movie. Lately I have changed way I choose movies to watch. the things mention I read reviews afterwards. What’s importance to me is that I don’t watch the talk shows in that people discuss movies. I don’t ask others how they like of it. Now, I enjoy yourself even more. which important myself ( 六 ) 本文作者就 “ 看电影评论的方式 ” 谈了自己的观点。 1. use→ used 由固定短语used to do意为“过去常常”可知。 2. such→so 表示 “ 如此多 / 少 ” 要用 so many/much/little/few ，根据后面的 much 可知要把 such 改为 so 。 3. go→ going 由固定短语end up doing意为“以……结束”可知。 4. mentions→ mention 主语是复数名词writers，故不用第三人称单数。 5. thing→ things 前有many修饰，故用名词的复数形式。 6. 在way前加the 此处表特指，故要用定冠词。 7. importance→ important 作表语要用形容词。 8. people前的that→ which 如果先行词指物，那么介词后面的关系代词只能用 which ，不能用 that 。 9. 去掉like后的of 因like是及物动词。 10. yourself→myself 由句子的主语I可知，是指我“享受自己”。 review n. 评论 regret vi. 后悔 afterwards adv. 事后 point out 指出 talk show 访谈节目 even more 更多地 ( 七 ) Last week, students in our class held debate on whether we should shop online. Most students are in favor for it, think that shopping online can help people save time. thinking of a Besides, shopping online not only allow people to browse many items without leaving their homes, but also lets us compare the prices of goods in a short time. them allows More important, the Internet is open all day long, so it is of great convenient for those who are busy in the daytime. However, special attention must be pay to the safety of online shopping. People need to make sure of that they get that they have ordered before paying for the bill. what paid convenience importantly ( 七 ) 本文论述了网络购物的优点和缺点。 1. 在 debate 前加 a 因 debate 是可数名词，故要加不定冠词。 2. for→ of 由固定短语 in favor of 意为“赞同”可知。 3. think→ thinking 分析句子成分可知此处 think 作非谓语，且与逻辑主语 students 存在主动关系，故用现在分词作伴随状语。 4. allow→ allows 本句主语是 shopping online ，谓语动词要用第三人称单数。 5. us→ them 由前面的 people 可知要用 them 。 6. important→ importantly 作状语要用副词形式。 7. convenient→ convenience 因 be of great+ 抽象名词 = be very+ 形容词。 8. pay→ paid 此处是被动，故要用过去分词。 9. 去掉 make sure 后的 of 因 make sure that+ 从句是固定句型，此处 of 显然是多余的。 10. get 后的 that→ what 引导宾语从句，同时在从句中作谓语动词 have ordered 的宾语，要用 what 。 debate n. 辩论 browse vt. 浏览 item n. 物品 compare vt. 对比 goods n. 商品 order vt. 订购；订 ( 货 ) save time 节省时间 in a short time 在很短时间内 in the daytime 在白天 p ay the bill 买单 ( 八 ) Compared with cars, bicycles have much advantages. Firstly, they are not as expensive as cars and almost every family can afford it. Secondly, ride bicycles is a healthy form of exercise. riding them many They do good for our health. Thirdly, bicycles can save energy or do not cause any pollution. Although cars can bring us a lot of conveniences, they also led to many problems. lead convenience to and As we all know that, China is a country with a large population. If each family had a car, a large amount of energy would be wasted and air pollution would become more and more seriously problem. I hope more and more people can ride bicycles. serious a ( 八 ) 本文主要论述关于自行车和汽车两种交通工具的对比情况。 1. much→ many much 修饰不可数名词， many 修饰可数名词复数。 2. it→ them 指代 bicycles ，故用 them 。 3. ride→ riding 动名词短语作主语。 4. for→ to 固定搭配“ do good to” 表示“有利于”。 5. or→ and 因“节约能源”与“不会造成污染”应为并列关系，在肯定句中，表示并列应用and。 6. convenieces→ convenience 表示“方便”的时候是不可数名词。 7. led→ lead 根据语境可知应该用一般现在时。 8. 删除 that as we all know 众所周知。 9. become 后加 a 因 problem 为可数名词，且此处表示“一个问题”，用不定冠词。 10. seriously→ serious 此处修饰名词 problem, 用形容词形式。 compare with 与 …… 比较 advantage n. 优点 a large amount of 大量 do good to health 对健康有好处 save energy 节省能源 cause pollution 造成污染 lead to 导致 THANK YOU!