【英语】2019届高考英语二轮复习增分技巧学案：专题六应用文写作常见8大文体（五） 4页

‎ 应用文写作常见8大文体(五)——申请信 一、 ‎ 写作架构要规范 申请信有很多种，比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请、报考申请、留学申请等。由于此类题目常有较多的文字提示，写作时除应注意格式上的要求外，也应注意审题全面，不能遗漏要点。具体写作结构为：‎ 二、 ‎ 靓点句式背一番 ‎(一)开头常用语 ‎1．I learned on your website that ...‎ 我从你们的网站上得知……‎ ‎2．I’m writing to apply for the job/post/position as ...‎ 我写信申请……的工作/职位。‎ ‎3．I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for ...‎ 我写信推荐自己为……的合格人选。‎ ‎(二)主体部分常用语 ‎1．As an outgoing ...I get along well with my classmates. ‎ 作为一名外向的……我和同学们相处得很好。‎ ‎2．For one thing, I can help ...For another, I can improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my life.‎ 一方面，我能帮助……另一方面，我能提高我的英语水平，结交更多的朋友，丰富我的生活。‎ ‎3．I am confident that I’m suitable for .../I’m qualified to do .../I’m equal to (doing) sth.‎ 我确信，我适合……/我有做……的资格/我能胜任(做)……‎ ‎(三)结尾常用语 ‎1．I would greatly appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.‎ 如果您能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。‎ ‎2．Should you offer me an interview, I would be most grateful. Look forward to your reply soon.‎ 如果您能给我提供面试机会，我将非常感激。期待您的早日答复。‎ 三、 ‎ 润色完善很关键 ‎(2018·银川一中二模) 假定你是新华中学的学生李华，学校将要选拔一些学生作为交换生到英国进行为期两个月的学习，你非常想得到这次交流学习的机会。请你根据以下提示给校长写一封申请信。要点如下：‎ ‎1．父母优势；‎ ‎2．个人优势；‎ ‎3．表达愿望。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Mr.President，‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Li Hua ‎(一)准审题、准表达保基本分 定体裁 申请信 定人称 第一人称为主 定时态 一般现在时为主 定要点 定结构 开头：自我介绍及写信目的(申请到英国学习) ‎ 主体：优势(父母支持、个人的英语水平等)‎ 结尾：表达期盼回复的心情 ‎[中档作文]‎ Dear Mr.President，‎ I’m Li Hua❶.I’m a high school student of Xinhua Middle School❷.I’m writing to apply to study in the UK as an exchange student for two months.Undoubtedly❸，I’m eager to apply for the chance to study abroad.‎ To begin with, my parents are in support of me.❹Studying abroad can broaden my view.Besides, they can afford all the expenses there.❺I learn English well❻ and it enables me to have no difficulty communicating with students from other countries❼.❽I am outgoing and able to get on well with others.‎ I would be grateful if you can consider❾ my application.Looking forward to your early ‎ reply.‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Li Hua ‎(二)巧润色、大升级创高分 ‎(请根据括号内要求升级上面的中档作文)‎ Dear Mr. President，‎ ‎(1)I’m Li Hua, a high school student of Xinhua Middle School (合并升级❶❷句为名词短语作同位语)．I’m writing to apply to study in the UK as an exchange student for two months.(2)There is no doubt that (升级词汇❸为同位语从句) I’m eager to apply for the chance to study abroad.‎ To begin with, my parents are in support of me.(3)As far as they are concerned (❹前加过渡词汇) studying abroad can broaden my view.Besides, they can afford all the expenses there.(4)For one thing (❺前加过渡词汇), I (5)have a good command of English (词汇升级❻), (6)enabling me to have no difficulty communicating with students from other countries (升级句❼为非谓语动词作状语)．(7)For another (❽前加过渡词汇), I am outgoing and able to get on well with others.‎ I would be grateful if you can (8)take my application into account/consideration (词汇升级❾)．Looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Li Hua 四、 ‎ ‎“一题两用”错不犯 下文是根据上面的题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中共有10处语言错误，请改正。‎ Dear Mr.President，‎ I’m more than delight to learn that some of us students will have an opportunity to study in the UK as exchange student for two months.I am desperate for it, but I’m writing to apply for the chance to study abroad.‎ In the first place, my parents strong support me for they hold the firm belief that studying abroad can broaden their horizons and they can afford all the expenses there.Secondly, have a good command of English enable me to communicate with others freely.I am outgoing and helpful，which makes easy for me to adjust for the new surroundings as well as fit in well with foreigners.‎ I’d appreciate it if you could give consideration to my application.Looking forward to you approval.‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Li Hua 答案：第一句：delight→delighted; student→students 第二句：but→so 第三句：strong→strongly; their→my 第四句：have→having; enable→enables 第五句：makes后加it; 第二个for→to 第七句：you→your