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命题规律
1. 书信和电子邮件是全国卷书面表达最热门的考查方式。
2. 常考类型:邀请信、道歉信、询问信、建议信、求助信、申请信等。从题材来讲,写作所涉及的内容非常贴近中学生的实际生活,比如交友、语言学习、生活压力、体育活动等等。
写作技巧
考生根据提纲的内容提示,将某事叙述清楚或对某种观点发表自己的看法和见解。要写好这类书面表达,应注意以下几个方面。
(一) 认真审题,确定体裁。
看到写作题目后,要仔细研读文字提示部分,确定写作体裁。
(二) 紧扣主题,挖掘要点
虽然这类书面表达的主题和内容要点往往已经提供,但是,还要认真审读题目要求和注意事项,发掘隐含的其他内容要点,因此,弄清题目要求后,最好把紧扣主题的内容要点一一列出来,以免遗漏或重复。
(三) 用不同的词义和句式,使表达丰富。
(四) 不拘于提示要点,适当增加细节和过渡语。
万能模板
1.邀请信
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信,包含三个方面:
①邀请对方参加活动的内容、时间和地点;
②与该活动有关的注意事项;
③期待对方接受邀请,并可表示感谢。
邀请信模板一
Dear ________,
①How is everything with you? ②I am writing to tell you that there will be a ________(内容) at/in ________(地点) on ________(时间).③We would be honored to have you there with us.
④The occasion will start at ____________(具体时间).⑤ This will be followed by
a _________(进一步的安排).⑥ At around _____(时间),________(另一个安排).
⑦Ring me up and tell me whether you will come or not, will you? ⑧I really hope you can make it.⑨My phone number is ________. ⑩ Looking forward to ________.
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
邀请信模板二
Dear________ ,
① I’m writing to invite you to _____________(开门见山提出事件/活动) to be held/hosted by _____________(举办机构) on _____________(活动时间)at/in ____________(活动地点). ②It would be pleasant/honored to have you here.
③During the party/conference, we will have lots of activities you will be interested in. ④First, ____________(要举行的活动内容一). ⑤Second, __________(要举行的活动内容二).
⑥I know/believe that you will be very interested in____________. ⑦ First/For one thing, _____________ (受邀请人参加的理由一). ⑧Second/For another, _____________(受邀请人参加的理由二).⑨The conference/party would not be complete without you!
⑩The party/conference will begin at ________(时间)and we do hope you can come.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
2.道歉信
①直接说明需要表达歉意的事情;
②解释清楚事情发生的原因;
③表明写信的目的,表示遗憾和内疚之意;
④有时需要表达补救的意思或提出补救方法;
⑤请求对方接受自己的道歉。
道歉信模板
Dear_____________ ,
①I am excessively sorry to say/tell you that _____________(直接说出道歉事由).② Now, I am writing you this letter of apology to show my deep regret. ③Please accept my sincere apology. ④ I hope you will understand me and excuse me for _____________(请求对方原谅的事由).
⑤The reason for my delay/absence was that _________________ (过失的原因).⑥I had no way out because_____________自己当时的处境和情况.⑦Therefore it's not in my power to_____________ (过失导致的结果).
⑧Naturally, I want to suggest _____________(建议下次再实现愿望).⑨I shall be obliged if you will kindly write and tell me when and where you_____________(约定下次见面的时间和地点).⑩We may meet again and I hope to see you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3.投诉信
①说明投诉的原因并表示遗憾;
②实事求是地阐述问题发生的经过,不要夸大其词;
③指出问题引起的后果;
④提出批评及处理的意见或敦促对方采取措施或者提出所希望的赔偿以及补救方式。
投诉信模板一
Dear _____________ ,
①I am _____________(写信人身份).②I venture to write you a letter about_____________(抱怨内容).
③The focus of the complaint is _____________(抱怨内容的核心).④For one thing, _____________(抱怨内容的一个方面).⑤For another, _____________(抱怨内容的另一方面).⑥Honestly speaking, ____________(客观的评论).⑦But _____________(抱怨产生的原因)。
⑧All in all, There is still much room for improvement.⑨Before I take any further action, I do hope _____________(表达本人的愿望).⑩Thank you for your time and kind consideration.
Yours
sincerely, Li Hua
投诉信模板二
Dear_______,
① I am_______ (自我介绍). ② I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about _____________(投诉内容).
③The reason for my dissatisfaction is ____________(总体介绍).④In the first place,_________________ (抱怨的第一个方面).⑤In addition, ______________________ (抱怨的第二个方面). ⑥ Under these circumstances, the devastating effect could be multiplied if this problem cannot be handled immediately. (如该问题不能立即解决,它将产生更坏影响).
⑦I would appreciate it very much if you could __________(提出建议和请求), ⑧ preferably __________(进一步的要求), ⑨ and I would like to have this matter settled by __________(设定解决事情最后期限).⑩Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely Li Hua
4.建议信
(1)吸引阅卷人开头句
I have learned that you have some trouble in......and I would like to give /offer you the following suggestions.
(2) 吸引阅卷人篇中句
In my opinion /As far as I’m concerned ,it would be wise to take the following actions.
(3)吸引阅卷人结尾句。
I will be glad if you will take my advice /suggestions into consideration.
建议信模板
Dear ___________,
①You have asked me for my advice with regard to _______ (问题), ② and I will try
to make some conductive suggestions here.
③In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions (建议的内容): ④First, ________. (As is known, ________.) ⑤ Second, (to make economic profits, ) ________. ⑥Third, ________. (As many of them ________.)
⑦I hope you will find these proposals useful,⑧and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. ⑨ (Or:Your kind consideration of my suggestions will be highly appreciated).
⑩Good Luck with your_______(祝愿). Yours sincerely, Li Hua
5.申请信
①应聘什么岗位;这一段要简短又能吸引收信人的注意力。
②个人情况(学历、经验);
③期望得到答复;
④表示感谢并期待对方优先考虑自己的申请,以求得到面试等机会。这段尤其注意语气应礼貌而又自信。
申请信模板一
Dear Sir or Madam,
①I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in ____________(报纸名称) of ______________(广告发布时间).
②I am ________ from ________.③Not only do I have the qualifications for this job, but I also have the right personality for a __________(工作名称).④As a/an ________,I have been ________.⑤Besides, I won ________ in ________.
⑥I would appreciate it very much if you could give me an early reply./ Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be most grateful. ⑦If you need to know more about me, please feel free to contact me at any time at _______________ (电话号码/邮件地址).
⑧Thank you for considering my application, and I’m looking forward to meeting you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
申请信模板二
Dear_____________ ,
①I am applying for the position of _____________(想申请的职务) advertised in ____________(刊登招聘广告的报纸名称).② I feel I am competent to meet all the requirements/ qualifications you have listed.③My complete resume is attached. / I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference.
④I will graduate on _____________(毕业时间) from _____________(毕业院校), majoring in _____________(专业). ⑤ In addition to the required courses of my major, I have_____________(除专业外,选修的课程). ⑥ I also have some experience in_______________(曾有过的社会工作经验). ⑦ You will find me to be the appropriate person for the position (请对方对自己有信心).
⑧I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview. / I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience.⑨I can be reached by telephone/e-mail at your convenience.
⑩Best regards for your health and success. Yours sincerely, Li Hua
6.感谢信
①表达感激之情,简单陈述写这封感谢信的原因;
②详细说明要感谢的事由,措词更加具体真诚。再次表示真诚的感谢;
③向对方表达自己真诚的祝福,再次道谢。有时可向对方发出邀请。
感谢信模板一
Dear ________,
① I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ________(感谢的原因).
②If it had not been for/Had it not been for/ Without your assistance in ________(对方给你的具体帮助),I would (not) have been ________(没有对方帮助的后果).
③ Everyone agrees that it was you who ________ (给出细节).④ Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! ⑤ Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
感谢信模板二
Dear _____________ ,
①I am now writing these few lines to express my sincere thanks for _____________(感谢事由).②I'd like you to know how much your meant to me. ③You have a positive genius for_____________(对收信人某一方面的赞美).④I not only enjoyed _____________, but also_____________. ⑤I shall ever remember ____________as one of the most ___________in my life.
⑥ I hope to have the opportunity of reciprocating(报答). ⑦I will feel very honored and pleased if you _____________ (表达自己回报的心愿).⑧ I am looking forward to seeing you next time!
⑨I repeat my thanks for your_____. ⑩Please give my kind regards to your________.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
7.请求信
请求信模板一
Dear___________,
①I am writing to formally request to___________ (请求的内容). ②The reason for ______________is that ____________ (给出原因). ③ I________, so I _____________ (给出细节)
④I would also like to request _________ (提出进一步的要求).⑤ I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.
⑥Thank you for your attention to these requests. ⑦If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at____________(电话号码). ⑧I am looking forward to a favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
请求信模板二
Dear_____________,
①I am_______(介绍自己的身份).②I will/am_____________(与请求有关的自身现状).③ I'd like to_____________(阐明自己的请求). ④I will appreciate your_____________(有关该请求的详细信息). ⑤ I'm going to ____________(对方如能帮助实现请求,自己将要做些什么)。
⑥Here are the reasons why_____________(承上启下,开始解释原因). ⑦ For one thing, __________(请求的原因一);For another, _____________(原因二). ⑧Therefore, _____________(总结写信的目的)。
⑨I shall be much obliged to you if you _____________(对收信人的期望).⑩Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
8.祝贺信
①说明所祝贺的事情;
②表达自己真诚、喜悦的心情,用词亲切、自然;
③说明对方获得成功等的原因;
④表达对未来的祝贺。
祝贺信模板
Dear_____________,
① I have learned with delight that you_____________ (祝贺事由). ②I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on_____________.③You must be ____________.④ And I feel very happy for you.
⑤_____________(所取得的成绩) is quite exciting news! ⑥ I know this is surely owing to _____________(被祝贺人过去的努力). ⑦ It is a reward you richly deserve for your _____________ (被祝贺人的优点).
⑧Kindly let me know when you_____________(咨询对方何时有空). ⑨ I hope _____________(表达自己的愿望). ⑩ My best wishes for your further success.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
专项训练
【2016年全国卷Ⅰ】
假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,已使行文连贯。
【答案解析】
【参考范文】
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.
In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign
Yours,
Li Hua