安徽省淮南市寿县第二中学2020届高三一模考试英语试卷 13页

英语试卷 第I卷 第二部分 阅读理解（共两节，满分40分）‎ 第一节（共15小题；每小题2分，满分30分）‎ 阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中，选出最佳选项。答案写在答题卡上。‎ A Fall into some good fiction With the vacation around the corner, it's almost time to drop your textbooks and enjoy some personal reading. Recently, the Young Adult Library Service Association in the US and the Guardian released their top 10 young adult novels of 2019. These stories feature characters your age. You're sure to find one you'll love.‎ The Poet X Unlike many who consider their lives dull, Xiomara Batista in Dominican-American writer Elizabeth Acevedo's The Poet X lives a life full of struggles. Every day, she struggles with her mother and her twin. What helps her to understand this life is poetry. Batista also takes her poems to the public. "Acevedo has amplified (放大) the voices of girls," US author Ibi Zoboi commented.‎ Deeplight Though having great adventures may be impossible in reality, it can be achieved through reading. In UK writer Frances Hardinge's book Deeplight, readers can follow two friends — Hark and Jelt - to explore the deep seas with many mysterious gods and monsters. In face of the dangerous enemies, the two boys never surrender. They bravely fight against villains (反派).‎ ‎“Deeplight is a non-stop ambitious and magical read about friendship set in a strange and ‎ fantastical world," a reader commented on the Reading Zone website.‎ Forest‎ of a Thousand Lanterns Vietnamese-American writer Julie C. Dao's Forest of a Thousand Lanterns combines Chinese history and the Snow White fairy tale.‎ It follows Xifeng as she goes from being a poor village girl to the Empress' lady in waiting (侍女) and has her sights set on being the next Empress. Similar to the Maleficent (《沉睡魔咒》) movies, Dao shows us the rise of a villain as Xifeng schemes her way into the palace ‎21. What can we learn about the book The Poet X?‎ A. In common with most teenagers, Xiomara Batista finds her life dull.‎ B. It describes how poetry influences the life of a young girl.‎ C. The author calls for people's attention to relationship between parents and kids.‎ D. It features the struggle of young people in their families and schools.‎ ‎22. Which statement is True according to the passage?‎ A. Julie C. Dao also has written another story called the Maleficnet.‎ B. The three novels are written by authors from the USA.‎ C. All the books mentioned are chosen as the top 10 adult novels of 2019.‎ D. In the story of Deeplight, two friends fought bravely against their enemies in their adventure in the sea.‎ ‎23. The passage is probably taken out of.‎ A. A research paper B. A text book C. A magazine D. An advertisement B Picture a young Chinese woman in a field, dressed in traditional clothing, as she picks flowers to create makeup for her cheeks. Imagine the same person making a bamboo sofa, cooking soy sauce from scratch and cooking up all sorts of delicious dishes.‎ It may sound hard to believe, but such a person exists in modern China, and her name is Li Ziqi. On Dec 14, 2019 she won Person of the Year in the category of cultural influence awarded by China Newsweek.‎ With a fan base of more than 21 million people on Sina Weibo and 7 million followers on video-sharing site YouTube, Li has made a name for herself in a series of videos that show a pre-industrial Chinese way of life in rural Sichuan province. "I want to do my part to let more people know about Chinese culture," the vlogger told China.org.cn. "Much of the popularity of my videos can be attributed to the attraction of Chinese culture.'‎ Li seems to be a master of all kinds of skills - cooking, paining, designing and farming. She raises silkworms to sew a quilt for her grandmother and grows plants. Many videos show her picking seasonal ingredients from her own garden and cooking them up with her wood-fired wok (锅). A ‎ warm bowl of soup for the winter, a lighter plate of noodles for the summer, Li follows the seasons in her cooking, as China's traditional 24 solar terms also do, and makes food suitable for the particular climate.‎ ‎“She told the stories of China's culture and that of China," the official Sina Weibo account of China Central Television noted. The success of Li Zigi also comes from her "passion for life, for her home and for her culture".‎ Indeed, Li's simple pleasures amaze people living in the hustle and bustle of big cities.‎ ‎"In today's society, many feel stressed," she told the South China Moming Post. "When they watch my videos at the end of a busy day, I want them to relax and experience something nice, to take away some of their anxiety and stress."‎ ‎24. What is the best title of the passage?‎ A. Handmade life of a girl B. Charm of rural life C. Success of a Vlogger D. Person of the Year ‎25. What can we know from the passage?‎ A. Li's success comes from her excellence in traditional Chinese cooking.‎ B. Li enjoys great popularity both at home and abroad.‎ C. Through Li's videos, viewers can know about how people live in rural Sichuan province.‎ D. Stressed by the fast pace of life in big cities, many Chinese long to return to the countryside ‎26. Which of following statements does Li ziqi probably agree?‎ A. Life in the countryside is more challenging than in big cities.‎ B. Traditional wisdom is by no means outdated.‎ C. Peace in mind makes life happier and easier.‎ D. Learning how to cook seasonally is essential for survival in the countryside.‎ ‎27. It can be inferred from the passage that Li Ziqi is .‎ A. passionate and sensitive B. gifted and aggressive C. talented and creative D. modest and conventional C Breakdancing is close to becoming an Olympic sport after the organizers of the 2024 Paris Olympics announced on Thursday that they will propose four additional sports, including newcomer breakdancing and the other three sports-surfing, skateboarding and sport climbing-to the Games in 2024.‎ ‎"Breakdancing is a fantastic opportunity to be really in line with the story that Paris 2024wants to tell. We want those Games in connection with creativity, connected with the youth, more urban, more out of the stadiums. We look forward to working with breakdancing to propose a new experience." Paris 2024 President Tony Estanguet told Xinhua.‎ Breakdancing is a sport which can be played anytime and anywhere in urban and other ‎ environments. It has no previous appearance at the Summer Olympic Games, but was included at the Summer Youth Olympic Games in Buenos Aires in 2018.‎ ‎"Right from the beginning, our aim was to offer Games that would have an impact and the element of surprise. This is why we have chosen to present the IOC (International Olympic Committee) with four sports that are as creative, appealing to the youth and in line with our vision.‎ We are certain that breakdancing, skateboarding, sport climbing and surfing will contribute to strengthen our project," Estanguet added.‎ The organizers seek to deliver three key principles in hosting the Games: sustainable and socially-responsible Games in accordance with the ‎10C's New Norm (规则), Games in keeping with the times and inspire new audiences and attract young people, and Games reflecting the identity of Paris 2024, which is spectacular, culturally relevant, engaging, accessible and inclusive.‎ Under the new IOC rules, Olympic host cities can select sports and propose them for inclusion in those Games if they are popular in that country and add to the Games appeal. The inclusion still needs to be pubberstamped by the IOC which is expected to make the final decision after the 2020Tokyo Olympics ‎28. What is mentioned about the 2024 Olympic Games in the first paragraph?‎ A. They will be much more organized under new IOC rules.‎ B New sports events will be included.‎ C. They will attract more younger audiences than ever.‎ D. They will spread the local culture worldwide.‎ ‎29. What can we learn about breakdancing?‎ A. It appeals to people of all ages.‎ B. It is the symbol of Paris.‎ C. It can be played either indoors or outdoors.‎ D. It is accepted as an Olympic sport at the 2024 Paris Olympics.‎ ‎30. Why do the Paris organizers propose inclusion of the four sports?‎ A. Because they well represent the youth of the country.‎ B. Because they will make Paris more artistic and urban C. Because they will tell the story of the city D. Because they will help attract young people.‎ ‎31. What is the closest in meaning to the underlined word in the last paragraph?‎ A. Approved. B. Canceled C. Submitted. D. Designed.‎ Few people can resist the lure (诱惑) of a delicious ice cream, especially on a hot day. The only thing that spoils the fun is that the treat is hard to enjoy slowly often ending up with a sticky, melted mess. Now, researchers from Colombia's Pontificia Bolivariana University may have found an unlikely partner to help solve this age-old problem- cellulose fiber (纤维素) extracted from banana ‎ plant waste.‎ Bananas, as you probably know, grow in bunches on a tree-like plant. Each bunch is attached to a central stalk, called a rahis (叶轴)，which is thrown once the fruit has been harvested. The team, led by Dr. Rotin Zuluaga Gallego, began by extracting cellulose nanofibrils (CNs) from powdered rachis. The tasteless, odorless macro fibers, thousands of times smaller than the width of a human hair, were then added in various concentrations to 100 grams of ice cream mix.‎ With the right amount of CNFs mixed in, the dessert lasted longer in its frozen state than conventional ice cream, extending both its shelf life and the amount of time the treat can be enjoyed. Even more exciting was that the fibers increased the stickiness of low-fat ice cream to levels higher than the full-fat one. Since this is what determines the frozen treat's creaminess and texture, CNFs could help create healthier ice cream without compromising on taste.‎ The researchers, who presented their findings at the American Chemical Society (ACS) meeting in New Orleans on March 21, 2018, next plan to investigate how different types of fat, such as coconut oil, affect the behavior of CNFs in other frozen treats.‎ The Colombian researchers are not the only one working on creating a slower-melting ice cream. In 2015, scientists at the University of Dundee in Scotland found that a naturally occurring protein called BSIA (Bacterial Surface Layer A) was remarkably effective in keeping the treat frozen for longer periods of time. With both teams competing to be the first to get to market, the future of everyone's favorite dessert certainly looks promising ‎32. What prevents people enjoying an ice cream slowly?‎ A. A kind of fiber from banana. B. The ice cream's stickiness.‎ C. The hot weather. D. The ice cream's quick melting.‎ ‎33. Why were CNFs added to ice cream mix?‎ A. To improve is flavor. B. To reduce its fat content.‎ C. To make it melt more slowly. D. To add to its nutrition.‎ ‎34. What can be inferred from the last paragraph?‎ A. Ice cream with BsIA has been on sale at the market.‎ B. Slowly enjoying an ice cream will soon become a reality.‎ C. CNFs are more useful and effective than BslA.‎ D. The Colombian research team has taken the lead in the competition with the Scottish team.‎ ‎35. What's the author's attitude towards the finding of CNFs?‎ A. Positive. B. Casual. C. Defensive D. Suspicious. ‎ 第二节（共5小题；每小题2分，满分10分）‎ 根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。答案写在答题卡上。‎ Every day, we have to deal with newer distractions like smartphones and advertisements as well as traditional ones, such as loud fellow coworkers and a disorganized home and workspace. 36 These are the top three that you should avoid.‎ ‎1. The Internet and media Although the Internet and social media have gifted us with instant access to information, they have become a big source of distraction. According to a research, the average person spends about three hours or more a day on their phones, which means a huge cost in productivity. To reduce the amount of time spent on the social media, you'd better limit the number of apps and social media platforms on your phone. 37 ‎ ‎2. People who are unsupportive and exhaust you There are people whose presence can be a major drain (榨干) on your time and energy. 38 We must be careful in dealing with these type of individuals. 39 You also have to learn how to say no and replace such people with those who support you and who you can ask for help.‎ ‎3. A disorganized environment and schedule ‎ 40 Along with an organized environment, we need to ensure that our activities are scheduled in a timely manner. A clear and well thought-out plan helps us avoid wasting time on unimportant tasks, and focus on those that count. You'll establish a low in your activities, while steadily making progress in your plans.‎ A. These measures ensures you don't go too far.‎ B. To avoid these, break the circle that affects your life.‎ C. Untidy places often affect your attention and increase tress levels.‎ D. The bottom line is that you should either build boundaries or cut them out.‎ E. To attain lasting success and fulfillment you should remove the time wasters in the life.‎ F. Set a timer while you're browsing the Internet for fun, and get off when the timer goes off.‎ G For example, a coworker or a friend talks nonstop and constantly asks for favors, who are unsupportive of you and your aspirations.‎ 第三部分:语言知识运用(共两节,满分45分)‎ 第一节(共20小题:每小题1.5分,满分30分)‎ 阅读下面短文,从短文后各题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中,选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。‎ It began one night in October. Asma, an immigrant (移民), had 41 with her family in a restaurant, speaking her own language. Another 42 nearby demanded she speak English. With the request 43 , she hit Asma's face with a bottle, leaving a deep gash (伤口) on her face, which affected Asma's life 44 . ‎ Blood is thicker than water. 45 , the attacker's sister, Dawn, who was against the attack, ‎ later 46 Asma who she didn't know, said publicly her sister's 47 behavior was 48 Besides, she met Asma to 49 for her sister's rudeness, wishing Asma could continue to speak her own language and 50 the attack eventually.‎ Dawn's appearance gave Asma a 51 light in the darkness. After the meeting. They became good friends. Dawn supported Asma in any way, which offered Asma great comfort and 52 . When Asma 53 to Dawn who was absent, people always asked why she smiled.‎ She even didn't know she was smiling in a 54 mood. It was just because, in the middle of the most 55 time of her life, Dawn taught he the power of support.‎ To Asma's 56 , her optimistic attitude also 57 Dawn unexpectedly. The first day, learning Asma was 58 Dawn decided to support her. Meanwhile, Asma gave her strength to 59 the ground she stood. Amazingly, it took Dawn three years to have her sister back and gain 60 from her family.‎ ‎41. A. breakfast B. brunch C. supper D. feast ‎42. A. waiter B. customer C. manager D. owner ‎ ‎43. A. refused B. considered C. obeyed D. received ‎44. A. slightly B. seriously C. partly D. hardly ‎45. A. However B. Therefore C. Additionally D. Besides ‎46. A. laughing at B. objecting to C. standing by D. looking down on ‎ ‎47. A. polite B. wonderful C. peaceful D. nude ‎48. A. wrong B. innocent C. brave D. reasonable ‎49. A. account В. apply C. care D. apologize ‎50. A. suffer from B. recover from C. escape from D. defend against ‎ ‎51. A. remote B. delicate C. passive D. positive ‎ ‎52. A. frustration B. burden C. strength D. privilege ‎53. A. referred B. talked C. appealed D. reacted ‎54. A. awkward B. thrilled C. complex D. relaxed ‎55. A. ridiculous В. pleasant C. painful D. significant ‎56. A. delight B. surprise C. regret D. sorrow ‎57. A. supported B. challenged C. attracted D. confused ‎58. A. sensitive B. tough C. enthusiastic D. flexible ‎59. A. dig B. move C. confirm D. lose ‎60. A. anger B. disappointment C. pressure D. respect ‎ ‎ 第二卷 第三部分 语言知识运用（共两节，满分55分）‎ 第二节（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）‎ 阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式，答案写在答题卡上。‎ The traditional Chinese lunar calendar 61 (divide) the year into altogether 24 solar terms. Start of Spring, the first solar term of the year, begins this year on Feb 3 and ends on Feb 17. 62 lifts the curtain of spring, after which everything turns green and becomes energetic.‎ Spring is the best season for kite-flying. With 63 history of more than 2,000 years, the 64 (tradition) folk activity can help build one's health and promoting blood circulation. It also has the effect of promoting breath of fresh air outside can discharge (驱散) the foul smell 65 (collect) in winter.‎ In China, it 66 (say) that the egg can be set upright 67 the first day of the Start of Spring, but according to astronomers and physicists 68 (set) the egg upright has nothing to do with time, but with mechanics (力学). The most important thing is to shift the egg's center of gravity to the 69 (low) part of the egg. In this way, the trick is holding the egg until the yolk sinks as much as possible. For this people should choose an egg about 4 or 5 days old. 70 yolk is inclined to sink down.‎ 第四部分 写作（共两节，满分35分）‎ 第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）‎ 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎ 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 ‎ I would have never imagined myself visit the Great wall, one of the greatest wonder in the world. But a day before yesterday, I got the chance. During the intense route, I felt I couldn't make for it. It was terrible hot and my legs were starting to lack physical strong. I had to take a 5-minute break between the "watch towers". Tired I was, I kept climbing and finally climbing to the peak. Touched by how well-preserved and amazing the walls are, l couldn't help and think about the brave ancient Chinese people who worked nonstop to protect his country's borders.‎ 第二节 书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假定你是班长李华，外教Peter发邮件向你询问今年新冠肺炎COVID-19疫情期间同学们学习英语的情况。你了解情况后，请给他回一封娜件，内容如下：‎ ‎1．感谢并表达对他的关心；‎ ‎2．介绍你们学习英语的情况和困难；‎ ‎3．请他提供建议。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 提示词 疫情epidemic Dear Peter,‎ How is everything going?‎ Yours Li Hua 答案与评分标准 阅读 21-40 BDC ABBC BCDA DCBA EFGDC 完型填空 41—45 CBABA；46—50 CDADB；51—55 DCADC；56—60 BABCD 语法填空 （按照高考评卷要求，单词拼写错误、大小写未区分不给分） ‎ 61. divides 62.It 63.a 64.traditional 65.collected 66. is said 67. on ‎ ‎ 68. setting 69. lowest 70. whose 说明:64题后面更正为：folk activity can help build one’s health and prevent disease. It also has the effect of promoting blood circulation . A breath of fresh air outside..‎ 短文改错：‎ ‎1. 书写不规范导致无法辨认的单词和符号按照错误来认定。‎ ‎2. 单词拼写错误和大小写不正确的不得分。‎ I would have never imagined myself visit the Great wall, one of the greatest wonder in the ‎ ‎ visiting wonders world. But a day before yesterday, I got the chance. During the intense route, I felt I couldn’t ‎ ‎ the make for it. It was terrible hot and my legs were starting to lack physical strong. I had to ‎ ‎ terribly ‎ ‎ strength take a 5-minute break between the "watch towers". Tired^I was, I kept climbing and ‎ ‎ as/though finally climbing to the peak. Touched by how well-preserved and amazing the walls are, I ‎ ‎ climbed ‎ couldn't help and think about the brave ancient Chinese people who worked nonstop to ‎ ‎ but protect his country's borders.‎ ‎ their 写作：‎ 书面表达评分标准 一 评分总则 ‎1. 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属的具体档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。‎ ‎2. 原则上词数过少于或过多的，从总分中减去2分。‎ ‎3. 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。‎ ‎4. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。‎ ‎5. 书写较差以至于影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次。‎ ‎（二）内容要点 ‎1.活动介绍；2.征询修改意见；3. 邀请观摩指导。‎ 第五档 （21~25分）‎ 完全完成了试题规定的任务 ‎--覆盖所有内容要点 ‎--应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 ‎--语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致 ‎--有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 ‎--完全达到了预期的写作目的 第四档 （16~20分）‎ 完成了试题规定的任务 ‎--虽漏掉一两个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容 ‎--应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求 ‎--语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因为尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致 ‎--应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 ‎--达到了预期的写作目的 第三档 基本完成了试题规定的任务 ‎ （11~15分）‎ ‎--虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容 ‎--应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求 ‎--有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解 ‎--应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯 ‎--整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的 第二档 （6~10分）‎ 未恰当完成试题规定的任务 ‎--漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容 ‎--语法结构单调，词汇知识有限 ‎--有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解 ‎--较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性 ‎--信息未能清楚地传达给读者 第一档 （1~5分）‎ 未完成试题规定的任务 ‎--明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求 ‎--语法结构单调，词汇知识有限 ‎--较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解 ‎--缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯 ‎--信息未能传达给读者 ‎0分 ‎--未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；所写内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清 Dear Peter,‎ How is everything going? On behalf of our classmates, I am writing to express our deepest gratitude and concern for you and also keep you informed of our English learning situation.‎ During the COVID-19 epidemic, not only do we watch online English classes to review and consolidate what we have learned, but we also spare some time to practise spoken English through online applications since the oral English test is drawing near. To our delight, we find that this kind of drilling does contribute to our language fluency. However, it seems that our pronunciation doesn’t get much improved because we could not tell whether we speak accurately and we are wondering how to solve this problem.‎ We would really appreciate it if you could give us your constructive suggestions. Please take care of yourself and we are all looking forward to meeting you soon.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours, Li Hua 二 评分细则 ‎（一）文章包括四个部分： ‎ ‎1. 写作背景：外教Peter发邮件向你询问今年新冠肺炎COVID-19疫情期间同学们学习英语的情况；你是班长,代表全班同学回信并告知相关情况；‎ 写作目的：回信，告知Peter相应的情况。‎ 2. 感谢并表达对他的关心； ‎ ‎3. 介绍你们学习英语的情况和困难； ‎ ‎4. 请他提供建议。‎ ‎（二）评分档次： ‎ ‎1. 学生能把以上要点基本清楚地表达出来，大体上就是第三档的分数（11-15分）。及格线（15分）标准：*要点完整，但可能个别细节表达不太充分贴切。*所用词汇句式基本能满足要点表达需要，但有些不够准确得体。*有一定数量的词句语法错误（如每两句就有一个或大或小的错误）。*能使用一些连接词语或句式连接行文，但相对比较单一。‎ 要点基本完整清楚，但以上各方面问题较大的就是11-14分； ‎ ‎2. 第四档（16-20分）：词汇句式较为丰富、表达比较准确得体连贯，但出现少量词句错误（如三四个），若是基本错误的，则16-18分，若这些错误是因为尝试使用复杂结构或词汇所致的，可评为19-20分； ‎ ‎3. 第五档（21-25分）：要点表达充分贴切，词汇句式丰富多彩、表达准确得体地道连贯、能灵活运用各种连接词语和句型，有两三个小错误的为21-22分，基本没有错误的为23-25分；评这一档要注意：一是不要给漂亮的书法或所谓的高级词句误导了，很多字漂亮，仔细一看里面问题很多。也有一些卖弄所谓的高级词句，为用而用，不得体且内容空洞。二是评满分卷要慎重，每份必抽查。‎ ‎4. 第二档（6-10分）：要点不全或要点表达较大影响理解、词汇有限，句式单一且错误相当多（如基本每句话都有错的），缺乏语篇连贯性。‎ ‎5. 第一档（1-5分）：未能写出要点相关的完整句子或有几个完整句子，但与主题要点关联度不大。但只要有写，就给分。‎ ‎6. 0分卷：空白卷或者抄写与写作内容完全无关的东西。  ‎ ‎（三）注意事项： ‎ 1. 合理给出写信目的，这是一封告知信；‎ 1. 不需要自我介绍，但必须表明是代表全班同学，如没有，可酌情扣2分；‎ 2. 本文的人称应是“我们”，应使用we，如使用I扣2分；‎ 3. 本文的主体时态应该是一般现在时，但如果使用一般过去时不扣分；‎ ‎5. 比较合理的文章结构：第一段：写信目的+表达感谢；‎ ‎ 第二段：介绍英语学习的情况和困难； ‎ ‎ 第三段： 请他提出建议+表祝愿。 ‎ 没有分段或者段落太多，以至于结构散乱的，可酌情扣2分；‎ ‎6.英语学习的情况和困难不一定按照范文内容，符合题目要求、合理的就可以；‎ ‎7.关注语言的得体性(写作对象是外教，礼貌意识), 如没有则不给高分；学生若盲目套用模板或所谓的高级句式，表达“假大空”的则不给高分；‎ ‎8.若卷面比较差，确实影响交际的，可降一个档次给分；但也不要以貌取人而埋没了一些写得好但书写不太出众的作文；‎ ‎9.字数太多, 如增加了与要点关联度不大的无效内容；或者词数太少，只是简单表达了要点，则酌情扣分。‎