专题10书面表达（测）-2017年高考英语二轮复习讲练测 8页

www.ks5u.com ‎2017届高三二轮复习英语精品资料【测案】‎ 专题10 书面表达 班级 姓名 学号 分数 ‎（测试时间：45分钟）‎ ‎1.【湖北省荆门市2017届高三元月调考】今年九月，北大考试研究院院长秦春华发文称，四大名著不适合孩子阅读。可能不少人不太认同他的观点，但只限于私下议论。郑州外国语学校高三学生高泽林却站出来公开叫板秦春华，他认为四大名著孩子可以读，相较于四大名著中的负面内容，现实中的低俗更甚。他的文章条理清晰，有理有据，引来不少网友点赞。‎ 高中生挑战北大教授，你真觉得好吗？请以李华的名义给高泽林同学写一封信表达自己的看法。（提示词：四大名著：four great classical novels）‎ 要点：1．写信目的； ‎ ‎ 2．与他交流你对四大名著的看法；‎ ‎ 3．希望收到回信。‎ 注意：1．词数100左右；‎ ‎ 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎ 3．开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。‎ Dear Zelin Gao,‎ I am a high school student of the same age with you. ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours truly,‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎【答案】‎ Dear Zelin Gao,‎ I am a high school student of the same age with you. Recently, your debate about four great classical novels with the professor of Peking University has become a ‎ hot topic on the Internet. I am writing to share some ideas with you.‎ In my opinion, four great classical novels are the precious culture treasure of our nation as well as the greatest and most influential works among the literary circle of China. As a result, we can learn the meaning of love, loyalty and wisdom. However, only when we establish the correct sense in these aspects can we resist the wrong social trend in the future. I have learnt a lot from your article and hope to have a further discussion with you about reading and other aspects. ‎ ‎ looking forward to hearing from you soon.‎ Yours truly,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。倒装句的使用非常漂亮：only when we establish the correct sense in these aspects can we resist the wrong social trend in the future.连接词的使用也是一大亮点：In my opinion，As a result, However。‎ ‎2.【湖南省株洲市2017届高三上学期教学质量检测（一）】假定你是李华，是学校的学生会主席，正在准备排练英语节目参加于 2017 年 1 月 10 日举行的株洲市“十分好英语”(Ten-minute Brilliant ‎ English)竞赛(参赛者表演英语节目，时间十分钟）。你给你校外籍教师 Sophie 写一封电子邮件，向她说明竞赛的基本情况、你对节目的设想和排练的时间；请她担任一个角色和对脚本（script）进行修改。‎ 注意：1. 词数 100 左右; ‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎【答案】‎ Dear Sophie，‎ The Ten-minute Brilliant English Competition will be held on January 10, 2017. The participants are required to perform English programmes in ten minutes.‎ As for our school, we will put on Romeo and Juliet on the stage. I’m hereby so privileged to invite you to act one of the roles, and I sincerely believe that your attendance will b e a great encouragement to all of us. So if it is convenient to you, please come to the dancing hall of the school at 5 pm every day of this week.‎ In addition, I’ve attached the script of our programme to this e-mail and we will appreciate it greatly if you can polish it for us. Many thanks!‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。宾语从句的使用：I sincerely believe that your attendance will b e a great encouragement to all of us.条件状语从句的使用：So if it is convenient to you, please come to the dancing hall of the school at 5 pm every day of this week.‎ 固定句型的使用we will appreciate it greatly if you can polish it for us.‎ ‎3.【辽宁省铁岭市协作体2017届高三上学期第二次联考】每年都有许多人外出旅游，一些人的不文明行为引起了社会的广泛关注。某英文报社正在举行以“文明旅游”为主题的讨论。假定你是李华，请你给报社写一封信，呼吁大家做文明游客。要点如下：‎ ‎1. 尊重习俗； 2. 不高声喧哗； 3. 其他 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎ 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎ 3. 开头和结尾语已为你写好，不计入词总数。‎ Dear Editor,‎ I’ve read your discussions on how to behave properly while traveling. ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours truly ‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎【答案】‎ Dear Editor,‎ ‎ I’ve read your discussion on how to behave properly while traveling. Every year, a great many holidaymakers go out for sightseeing and relaxation. While they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, which causes a big concern. How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic.‎ ‎ In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our manners. First, we must respect and follow local customs. Besides, we’d better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others. Also, be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many ‎ countries. More importantly, if we travel abroad, we should bear in mind that we are representing our country, so we need to be cautious about how we act. Only in this way can we enjoy our trips and have beautiful memories as well.‎ ‎ Yours truly ‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。状语从句和非限制性定语从句的混合使用:While they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, which causes a big concern.形式主语it的使用：it is necessary to watch our manners。倒装句的使用：Only in this way can we enjoy our trips and have beautiful memories as well.连接词的使用也是一大亮点：In my opinion, First, Besides, Also, More importantly。‎ ‎4. 【四川省成都市2017届高三第一次诊】假设你是学生李华，得知好朋友William在学习中感到压力很大，学习效果甚微，请你按照以下要点给他写一封电子邮件，帮助他放松身心，提高学习效率。‎ ‎1. 快乐学习，保持愉快的心情；‎ ‎2. 积极参加体育活动，听听歌曲音乐；‎ ‎3. 多与同学交流，互相鼓励。‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已经为你写好(不记入总词数)，但不得抄入答题卡内 。‎ ‎2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear William，‎ Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed about study. I have a good mind to offer you some advice on how to study effectively.‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear William，‎ Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed about study. I have a good kind to offer you some advice on how to study effectively.‎ First of all, learn in a relaxing way. This will remove our pressure, making study an easy job. One way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports. Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind. In this way we can memorize things faster and longer. Music, too, is another effective means of refreshing and helping us concentrate better.‎ Last but not least, we should exchange ideas with our classmates. Through the communication we can find support, which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study. Keep trying, and we will make it.‎ I hope all these can benefit you.‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。现在分词做结果状语：This will remove our pressure, making study an easy ‎ job；倒装句的使用：Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind.非限制性定语从句的使用：Through the communication we can find support, which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study.固定句型的使用：Keep trying, and we will make it.连接词的使用使得文章结构层次清楚明了：First of all, Last but not least。‎ ‎5.【湖北省华中师范大学第一附属中学2017届高三上学期期中考试】书面表达（满分25分）‎ ‎11.你们班计划在下周一下午4:00—5:00在本班教室举行一次题为“I Have a Dream”的英语演讲比赛（English speech contest），假定你是班长李华，请给你们外籍教师Lucy写封书面邀请函，请她担任评委，对演讲作简要点评，并对获奖者颁发证书（certificate）。‎ ‎ 注意：1，词数100左右；2，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。3，开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Lucy,‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Yours ‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear Lucy,‎ ‎ In order to promote students' interest inspeaking English, our class plans to hold an English Speech contest entitiled "I Have a Dream" in our classroom next Monday ‎ afternoon. As our foreign English teacher, we all agree you are the right person to be invited to be the judge. The contest is scheduled from 4:00 to 5:00pm, during which time six contestants will compete in turn. At the end of the contest, you will also be invited to make a brief comment on the contestants' performance as well as issue the certificates to the winners. Thank your very much for the favour you'll do to us.‎ ‎ Looking forward to your coming.‎ ‎ Yours ‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：你们班计划在下周一下午4:00—5:00在本班教室举行一次题为“I Have a Dream”的英语演讲比赛（English speech contest），假定你是班长李华，请给你们外籍教师Lucy写封书面邀请函，请她担任评委，对演讲作简要点评，并对获奖者颁发证书（certificate）。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1，词数100左右；2，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。3，开头结尾已经给出，不计入总数。‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文是一篇英语要邀请函。内容齐全，语句通顺，结构严谨，使用高级句子。In order to promote students' interest inspeaking English,动词不定式做目的状语；we all agree you are the right person to be invited to be the judge.省略that的宾语从句；The contest is scheduled from 4:00 to 5:00pm, during which time six contestants will compete in turn.被动语态和非限制性定语从句完美结合；另外，As our foreign English teacher, At the end of the contest,的运用为文章增色添彩。‎ 考点：考查话题作文 ‎