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绝密★启用前
四川省绵阳市2017-2018学年高二下学期期末考试英语试题
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“Anyone who offends(冒犯)China will be killed no matter how far the target is.” That is the tagline for Wolf Warriors 2, the Chinese box office hit. It sees a soldier entering into an African war-zone and saving hundreds of lives from Western bad guys. It’s basically the plot of your typical Hollywood action movie, but this time it’s a Chinese man upholding justice and keeping the world safe.
Following in the footsteps of Jackie Chan and Jet Li, martial arts expert Wu Jing is among a new generation of Chinese action stars turned directors. His first Wolf Warrior film came out in 2014, but it didn’t catch much attention. Mainstream movies, especially those promoting patriotism(爱国主义), usually don’t do very well in China. Wolf Warrior 2, however, has become a phenomenon. The massive response in China also made the film top the global box office worldwide last weekend, beating Hollywood blockbuster Dunkirk.
Many moviegoers said online that they were touched by the patriotic plot. “This movie is the best Chinese action movie,” one social media user wrote. “Shockingly good-hot blood and tough guys. I cried after watching it,” said another.
One reason for the enthusiastic response compared to the first Wolf Warrior film is its improved action scenes. Many in China have praised the film for its fighting scenes and special effects, saying they are of “Hollywood quality”. The movie, which is entirely privately funded, has also been lauded for its attention to detail and reportedly features close replicas(复制品)of many of the latest weapons used by the Chinese army. Timing has also contributed to its success, with the Chinese nation in the times of a new wave of patriotism.
The film first came out just ahead of the 90th anniversary of the founding of the Chinese amy, a hugely symbolic event for the country. Over the weekend, the People’s Liberation Army (PLA) held a grand military parade, which presented the latest weapons of China. In a serous speech, which in parts was not different to lines from the film. President Xi Jinping promised to fight anyone who tried to tear China apart.
1.The text is meant to ________.
A. introduce a recent action movie
B. explain why Wu Jing is a successful director
C. compare Wolf Warriors 2 with Hollywood movies
D. claim that China is a super power in terms of weapons production
2.President Xi Jinping’s speech suggests that ________.
A. no one dares to fight with China
B. the military parade is very successful
C. China will become a developed country soon
D. China will oppose any attempt at national separation
3.The reason why Wolf Warriors 2 becomes a box office hit is that ________.
A. it doesn’t promote patriotism
B. its combat scenes are of higher quality
C. the weapons in the movie are the most advanced
D. Wu Jing is becoming better at directing after failing his first movie
4.According to the passage, which of the following is true?
A. Jackie Chan, Jet Li and Wu Jing were actors at first.
B. Social media users think highly of Wu Jing’s acting skills.
C. In the past, movies about patriotism often appeal to the public.
D. Dunkirk has attracted more audiences compared to Wolf Warriors 2.
5.The word “lauded” in paragraph 4 means ________.
A. encouraged B. praised
C. criticized D. awarded
【答案】
1.A
2.D
3.B
4.A
5.B
【解析】这是一篇新闻报道。一名士兵进入非洲战区,从西方的坏蛋那里拯救了数百条生命。这基本上是典型的好莱坞动作片的情节,但这一次是中国男人维护正义,维护世界安全。这便是《战狼2》的主要故事情节,因为它的爱国情结和打斗特效,吸粉无数。
1.主旨大意题。本文以影片中著名的一句行动口号“Anyone who offends China will be
killed no matter how far the target is.”开始,介绍了电影的主题、情节、影迷的反响以及拍摄背景等等,故选答案A,这篇文章旨在介绍最近的动作电影《战狼2》。
2.细节理解题。根据最后一段最后一句In a serous speech,…President Xi Jinping promised to fight anyone who tried to tear China apart.可知,中国国家主席习近平承诺要与任何试图将中国分裂的人进行斗争。选D。
3.细节理解题。根据倒数第二段第一句One reason for the enthusiastic response compared to the first Wolf Warrior film is its improved action scenes.和下文人们对电影的称赞说它们是“好莱坞的品质”,可知,《战狼2》成为票房大热门的原因是它的高质量的战斗场景,选B。
4.细节理解题。根据第二段第一句Following in the footsteps of Jackie Chan and Jet Li, martial arts expert Wu Jing is among a new generation of Chinese action stars turned directors. 可知,成龙、李连杰和吴京最初都是动作明星。选A。
5.猜测词义题。本文倒数第二段旨在讲述《战狼2》得到了观众的热烈回应的原因,前两句提到了其中之一是它的打斗场面品质升级,下文接着说另一个受人称赞的原因是片中使用了中国军队使用的许多最新武器的复制品。The movie,… has also been lauded for …本句中also一词呼应了本段首句的“One reason for the enthusiastic response”. be lauded for…因…而受称赞,故选B。
First, I want to tell you how proud we are. Getting into Columbia shows what a great well-rounded student you are. Your academic, artistic, and social skills have truly blossomed(开花)in the last few years. You have become a talented and accomplished young woman. You should be as proud of yourself as we are.
College will be the most important years in your life. It is in college that you will truly discover what learning is about. I want to tell you: “education is what you have left after all that is taught is forgotten”. What I mean by that is the materials taught isn’t as important as you gaining the ability to learn a new subject, and the ability to analyze a new problem. That is really what learning in college is about—this will be the period where you go from teacher-taught to master-inspired, after which you must become self-learner.
Follow your passion in college. Take courses you think you will enjoy. Steve Jobs says when you are in college, your passion will create many dots, and later in your life you will connect them. In his great speech given at Stanford, he gave the great example where he took calligraphy(书法), and a decade later, it became the basis of the beautiful letters in Microsoft Word. So don’t worry too much about what job you will have, and don’t be too
utilitarian(功利的), and if you like Japanese or Korean, go for it! Enjoy picking your dots, and be assured one day you will find your calling, and connect a beautiful curve through the dots.
Most importantly, make friends and be happy. College friends are often the best in life, because during college you are closer to them physically than to your mom and I. Pick a few friends and become really close to them-pick the ones who are honest and sincere to you. Don’t worry about their hobbies, grades, looks, or even personalities. You have developed some real friendships in high school in your last two years, so trust your instinct, and make new friends.
College is the four years where you have the greatest amount of free time, the first chance to be independent, the most possibilities to change and the lowest risk for making mistakes. So please treasure your college years! May Columbia become the happiest four years in your life, and may you blossom into just what you dream to be.
6.What’s the purpose of this passage?
A. To explain why Columbia is a world famous university.
B. To tell “you” to be happy and enthusiastic in college.
C. To stress the importance of attending college.
D. To provide useful tips for college.
7.The writer believes that learning in college is about ________.
A. gaining the ability to become a self-learner
B. forgetting all that you have been taught
C. learning every new subject seriously
D. solving practical problems
8.What can you infer from the passage?
A. “You” have found out the truth of education.
B. “You” should be practical while choosing courses.
C. It is in college when “you” first become self-reliant.
D. “You” should try to make friends with as many students as possible.
9.The example of Steve Jobs was given to show that ________.
A. passion is the most important thing in college years
B. the more dots you create, the more successful you will become
C. Steve Jobs was quite good at creating dots and connecting them
D. have a strong interest in what you learn and someday it might be useful
10.This passage is probably written by ________.
A. a high school teacher
B. a parent of a freshman
C. the president of the University of Columbia
D. an upperclassman of the University of Columbia
【答案】
6.D
7.A
8.C
9.A
10.B
【解析】这篇文章是作者给即将进入大学的女儿的建议。告诉女儿他为她考上大学感到骄傲自豪,并且就学习生活和交友等方面给出建议,快乐地度过大学时光,实现自己的梦想。
6.主旨大意题。纵观全文,本文作者就即将开始的大学生活给女儿提出的建议,帮助她更好地适应、享受大学生活,故D正确。
7.细节理解题。根据第二段最后一句That is really what learning in college is about—this will be the period where you go from teacher-taught to master-inspired, after which you must become self-learner.可知,在大学里学习就是要获得自我学习的能力。选A。
8.推理判断题。根据第二段最后一句this will be the period where you go from teacher-taught to master-inspired, after which you must become self-leaner.可知,作者教导女儿,大学阶段将是从被动学习转向自主学习的阶段,之后你会变成一个很好的自学者。自立是从大学开始的,选C。
9.推理判断题。根据第四段Steve Jobs says when you are in college, your passion will create many dots, and later in your life you will connect them. Enjoy picking your dots, and be assured one day you will find your calling, and connect a beautiful curve through the dots.可知,文中作者提到史蒂夫•乔布斯的例子是为了告诉我们要在大学中追随自己的内心,学习自己感兴趣的东西,将来有可能会从中受益,也就是内心的激情在大学生活中是最重要的,乔布斯就是因为大学期间追随自己的内心兴趣学习书法,日后对他的成功起了很大的作用,故选A。
10.推理判断题。这篇文章是作者给即将进入大学的女儿的建议。第一段第一句I want
to tell you how proud we are.他们为她考上大学感到骄傲自豪,并且纵观下文,作者就学习生活和交友等方面给出建议,从内容和语气上看,是父母给孩子的人生启迪,因此,选B。
Want to see 16 sunrises in one day? Float in zero gravity? Be one of the few to have gazed upon our home planet from space? In just four years’ time, and for an astronomical $9.5 million dollars, it’s claimed you can.
What’s being billed as the world’s first luxury space hotel, Aurora Station, was announced Thursday at the Space 2.0 Summit in San Jose, California. Developed by US-based space technology start-up Orion Span, the fully modular space station will host six people at a time, including two crew members, for 12-day trips of space travel. It plans to welcome its first guests in 2022.
“Our goal is to make space accessible to all,” Frank Bunger, CEO and founder of Orion Span, said in a statement. “Upon launch, Aurora Station goes into service immediately, bringing travelers into space quickly and at a lower price point than ever seen before.” While a $10 million trip is outside the budget of most people’s two-week vacations, Orion Span claims to offer a real astronaut experience.
During their 12-day adventure, the super-rich travelers will fly at a height of 200 miles above the Earth’s surface in Low Earth Orbit, or LEP, where they will see incredible views of the blue planet. The hotel will orbit Earth every 90 minutes, which means guests will see around 16 sunrises and sunsets every 24 hours.
Activities on board include taking part in research experiments such as growing food while in orbit--which guests can take home for a super-smug souvenir—and soaring over their hometown. Guests can have live video chats with their less-fortunate loved ones back home via high-speed wireless Internet access and, upon return to Earth, will be greeted with a specially arranged hero’s welcome. While enjoying the thrills of zero gravity, the travelers will be able to float freely through the hotel, taking in views of the northern and southern Aurora from the station’s windows.
DepositsHYPERLINK “https://www.orionspan.com/aurora-station-reservations”(订金)are already being aHYPERLINK“http://www.orisonspan.com/aurora-station-reservations”cHYPERLINK“http://www.orionspan.com/aurora-station-reservations” cepted for future stays on the space hotel. The $80,000 is fully returnable, should applicants find themselves unable to rise to the full $9.5
million. Travelers will complete a three-month Orion Span Astronaut Certification (OSAC) program before takeoff. Orion Span has a team of space industry veterans who together have more than 140 years of human space experience.
11.What’s the purpose of questions in Paragraph 1?
A. To ask questions about space travel.
B. To describe what you can do in space.
C. To arouse interest and introduce the topic.
D. To tell us scientific facts about space and planet.
12.What does the word veterans (last Para.) mean?
A. old soldiers B. doctors specializing in treating animals
C. researchers D. experienced people
13.Which of the following is true according to the passage?
A. The luxury space hotel is designed specially for super-rich travelers.
B. A 3-month training program is unnecessary before space travel.
C. The space hotel will orbit the earth 16 times in total.
D. The space hotel can only host 4 guests at a time.
14.You can do many activities in space such as ________.
A. taking incredible photos of the earth
B. receiving warm greetings from people back on earth
C. buying a souvenir for loved ones from the space store
D. participating in research experiments and appreciating Aurora
15.Travelers can have their deposits back if ________.
A. they can not finish the Orion Span Astronaut Certification
B. they are physically unfit for space travel
C. they cannot hand in the full payment
D. the space hotel is not ready in 2022
【答案】
11.C
12.D
13.A
14.D
15.C
【解析】这是一篇说明文。四年之后,你就可以在太空酒店一次性住上12天了。每天你将看到16次日出日落,可以在空间站种植作物带回家,还可以在太空和家人视频聊天。是不是够刺激?而这一切“仅需”950万美元!虽然这个数字依然让人咋舌,但还是比之前公布的太空游便宜多啦。
11.推理判断题。第一段开头三个设问句Want to see 16 sunrises in one day? Float in zero gravity? Be one of the few to have gazed upon our home planet from space?是为了引起读者的兴趣,并且引出本文的话题-- In just four years' time, and for an astronomical $9.5 million, it's claimed you can.选C。
12.猜测词义题。根据上一句可知,在升空前,旅客将完成为期三个月的猎户座宇航员认证培训项目。根据本句划横线词后的定语从句who together have more than 140 years of human space experience.的意思可知,他们的航天工作经验累计超过140年,因此该公司的团队是一支资深的航天业工作人员团队。故选D。
13.细节理解题。根据第三、四段… a $10 million trip is outside the budget of most people's two-week vacations …和During their 12-day adventure, the super-rich travelers will fly at a height of 200 miles above the Earth's surface in Low Earth Orbit…描述,两周就要花费1000万美元的旅行让大多数人无法承受;在12天的太空探险中,富豪游客们将在距离地表200英里的近地轨道高空遨游…。由此可知,豪华空间酒店是专为超级富豪旅行者设计的。故选A。
14.细节理解题。根据第五段关于太空旅行者在空间站的活动的描述,他们可以参与研究实验、与亲友视频聊天、享受零重力刺激感受和欣赏极光等。选D。
15.细节理解题。由The $80,000 is fully refundable, should applicants find themselves unable to rise to the full $9.5 million. 可知,目前公司已开始接受前往太空酒店的定金。如果最后申请人无法交足全额,8万美元的定金可全部退还。选C。
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Parents and the Young
It is natural that young people are often uncomfortable being with their parents. They say that their parents don’t understand them. 16. And they tend to feel that their parents are too serious and too strict with their children, seldom giving their children a free hand.
Parents often find it difficult to win their children’s trust. And they always forget how they
themselves felt when young. 17. It is one of their ways to show that they have grown up. But older people worry more easily; most of them plan things ahead.
Young people often make their parents angry with their choice in clothes, in entertainment and in music. 18. It is just that they feel cut off from the older people’s world, into which they have not yet been accepted. That’s why young people want to make a new culture of their own, which makes their parents worried and upset.
Sometimes you are so proud of yourself that you do not want your parents say “yes” to what you do. 19. It is natural enough, after being a child for so many years, when you were completely under your parents’ control.
20. When your parents see that you have a high sense of responsibility, they will certainly give you the right to do what you want to do.
A. So how should you understand that?
B. But they do not mean to cause any trouble.
C. All you want is to be left alone and do what you like.
D. If you plan to handle your life, try to win your parents over.
E. They think that their parents don’t keep pace with modern ways.
F. You will have better success if you ask before you really start doing it.
G. For example, young people like to act on the spot without much thinking.
【答案】
16.E
17.G
18.B
19.C
20.D
【解析】文章讲述的是年轻人不喜欢和他们的父母在一起,认为父母们不理解他们,作者对此现象进行了分析,并对年轻人提出了一些中肯的建议。
16.该段列举了年轻人不喜欢和他们的父母在一起的原因和理由。根据空格前一句和后一句的人称代词they可知,本句跟前后句为并列关系,他们说父母不理解他们,跟不上现代的步伐,对待孩子太严肃太严苛,等等。选E。
17.空格后一句It is one of their ways to show that they have grown up.(这是他们来表明他们已经长大了的一种方式。),另外还有But older people worry more easily; most of
them plan things ahead.通过与父辈们的对比,年长者更易于担心,提前做计划,故选G(年轻人喜欢在没有太多想法的情况下行动。)符合语境。
18.根据空格前后两句话的逻辑关系,此处应表转折,与后一句中的It is just that …呼应,构成“不是…而只是…”的意思。年轻人经常让他们的父母对他们的选择感到愤怒,但他们并不是有意制造麻烦,只是他们觉得和老年人的世界格格不入。故选B。
19.根据前后语境,尤其是横线后一句It is natural enough,…可知,在经历过了完全受控于家长的童年之后,你想要的只是一个人呆着,做你喜欢做的事,这是再自然不过的事了。选C。
20.本段对年轻人提出了建议,如果你想为自己的生活做主,试着说服你的父母。并且,空格后一句做出解释——当你的父母看到你有很高的责任感时,他们肯定会给你做你想做的事的权利。因此,选D。
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A nurse took a tired and anxious soldier to the bedside of an old man, “Your ________ is here.” She had to repeat the words several times ________ the patient’s eyes opened.
Heavily drugged with sleep because of the ________ of his heart attack, the old man could ________ see the uniformed soldier. The soldier held the old man’s hand, expressing a(an) ________ of love and encouragement. All through the night the soldier sat there beside the bed, ________ him words of love and strength. Now and then the soldier said a few ________ words. Along towards dawn, the old man ________.
Finally, the nurse offered words of sympathy(同情), but the soldier ________ her.
“Who was that man?” he asked.
The nurse was ________. “He was your father,” she answered.
“No, he wasn’t,” the soldier replied. “I never saw him before.”
“Then ________ didn’t you say something as I took you to him?” asked the nurse.
“I knew ________ there had been a mistake, but I also knew he ________ his son for his last moment, and his son just wasn’t here. Knowing he was too ________ to tell whether or not I was his son, knowing how much he needed me, I ________.”he answered.
21.A. doctor B. brother C. lawyer D. son
22.A. before B. since C. in case D. so that
23.A. power B. mess C. pain D. stress
24.A. hardly B. clearly C. possibly D. certainly
25.A. effect B. message C. evidence D. thought
26.A. allowing B. finding C. reminding D. offering
27.A. dramatic B. strange C. gentle D. violent
28.A. fell asleep B. passed away C. dropped down D. woke up
29.A. interrupted B. suspected C. blamed D. forgave
30.A. annoyed B. ashamed C. surprised D. satisfied
31.A. how B. why C. when D. where
32.A. as usual B. by chance C. for ever D. right away
33.A. needed B. hated C. recognized D. forgot
34.A. afraid B. weak C. crazy D. shocked
35.A. doubted B. hesitated C. relaxed D. stayed
【答案】
21.D
22.A
23.C
24.A
25.B
26.D
27.C
28.B
29.A
30.C
31.B
32.D
33.A
34.B
35.D
【解析】这是一篇记叙文。这篇文章讲述的是护士和老人都把士兵当成老人的儿子,而士兵也没有揭穿,继续充当老人的儿子,陪老人走完最后一程的故事,展现了高尚的人性之美。
21.考查上下文语境。根据下文可知,这里是护士将一名士兵带到老人床前,对老人说的话,护士认为这是他的儿子。选D。
22.考查连词引导时间状语从句。根据上下文时间逻辑关系,护士不得不重复了好几次,病人才睁开眼睛,用before。
23.考查上下文和名词词义辨析。因为心脏病的疼痛(pain)深度麻醉而昏迷,老人几乎看不清(hardly)这个穿着军装的士兵。故选C。
24.考查副词词义辨析。解析见上一小题。A. hardly几乎不;B. clearly清晰地;C. possibly可能地;D. certainly当然地。选A。
25.考查名词词义辨析。由于老人深度昏迷,士兵用握手的动作,传达他的爱和鼓励的信息(message)。A. effect效果;B. message信息,消息;C. evidence证据;D. thought思想,想法。选B。
26.考查动词词义。整个晚上,士兵坐在床边,说着爱和鼓励的话。offer sb. sth. 为某人提供某物,这里指士兵通过不断说话为老人提供爱和鼓励。故选D。
27.考查形容词词义辨析。这里指老人处于弥留之际,士兵不是说几句温和(gentle)的话,表达关怀。故选C。
28.考查上下文语境和动词短语辨析。根据下文可知,接近黎明时分,老人去世(passed away)了。A. fell asleep睡着;B. passed away去世;C. dropped down掉下来;D. woke up醒来。故选B。
29.考查动词词义辨析。护士表达同情,但是士兵打断(interrupted)了她的话。A. interrupted打断;B. suspected怀疑;C. blamed责备;D. forgave原谅。故选A。
30.考查上下文语境和动词词义。护士对士兵的问话感到奇怪。A. annoyed恼怒的;B. ashamed惭愧的;C. surprised惊讶的;D. satisfied满意的。故选C。
31.考查上下文逻辑和特殊疑问词。士兵说那老人不是他的父亲,却依然无微不至地照顾,护士感到疑惑,问当时她带他去老人的身边的时候为什么不揭穿。故选B。
32.考查短语辨析。士兵解释说,当时他立刻(right away)察觉到了误解,但是他同时也知道在弥留之际老人需要(need)儿子的陪伴,而此时老人的儿子没有在身边。A. as usual像通常一样;B. by chance偶然地;C. for ever永远;D. right away立刻,立即。故选D。
33.考查动词词义。解析见上。
34.考查形容词词义辨析。临终前老人很虚弱,不能分辨他是不是自己的儿子。A. afraid害怕的;B. weak虚弱的;C. crazy疯狂的;D. shocked震惊的。故选B。
35.考查动词词义。士兵知道老人需要有人陪伴,因此决定留下来(stay)。故选D。
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阅读下面材料,在空白处填入适当的内容(仅限1词)或括号内单词的正确形式(不多于3个词)。
A young officer was at a railway station. On his way home, he wanted to telephone his mother to tell her the time of his train, so that she could meet him at the station in her car. 36.(look) in all his pockets, he found that he did not have the coins for the telephone call, so he 37.(go) outside in hope for someone to help.
At last an old soldier came by, and 38. young officer stopped him and said, “Have you got change for ten pence?”
“Wait a minute,” the old soldier answered, beginning to put his hand in his pocket. “I’ll see 39. I can help you.”
“Don’t you know how to speak to an officer?” the young man said 40.(angry). “Now let’s start again. Have you got change for ten pence?”
“No, sir,” the old soldier answered quickly.
【答案】
36.looking
37.went
38.the
39.if/whether
40.angrily
【解析】这是一篇故事。一位年轻的军官需要兑换零钱,他碰巧看见一位老兵,这位年轻人举止不够礼貌,老士兵拒绝给他帮助。
36.考查现在分词作状语。动作look的逻辑主语为句子的主语he,且为主动关系,因此用现在分词形式。
【点睛】巧辨现在分词和过去分词作状语的用法
不管是现在分词还是过去分词作状语,如果单独作状语,其逻辑主语必须和主句的主语一致。分词作状语通常可以转换成一个相应的状语从句,
如果状语从句中的谓语动词为被动结构,就用过去分词;如果状语从句中的谓语动词为主动结构,就用现在分词。有时为了强调,分词前可带连词when, while, if, though, as if, unless等一起作状语,以便使句子的意思更清楚、更连贯。例如:
Working hard (If you work hard), you will succeed. 如果你努力,你会成功的.
Defeated (= Though he was defeated), he remained a popular boxer. 虽然他被击败了,但他仍然是一个受人喜爱的拳击手。
37.考查谓语动词一般过去时态。本句用并列连词so引出,此空格缺少谓语动词,根据上下文,用一般过去时态,用went。
38.考查冠词用法。此处the表示特指,指代上文的那个年轻军官。
39.考查连词用法。句意:老兵边掏口袋,边说,“稍等,我看看是否能帮到您。”这里表示“是否”,故填if/whether。
40.考查副词用法。此处空格处单词作状语,修饰动词said,应用副词形式angrily。
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41.假定英语课上老师要求同来之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有5处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词;
删除:把多余的词用()划掉;
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改5处,多者(从第6处起)不计分。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to know you are crazy about traditional Chinese medical science but eager to study it following an expert. I’d like to recommend Mr. Zhang like your teacher. Mr. Zhang is professor in this field. He often gives medical care to people who have healthy problems. So you can turn to him and to learn medical knowledge from him.
Yours,
Lily
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【解析】本文是作者给Tom的回信,得知Tom热衷于中医药科学,向他推荐了一位老师Mr. Zhang。
第一处:but改为and。考查连词和上下文逻辑关系。根据上下文逻辑关系,此处改为and,表示两个动作be crazy about…和eager to study it并列和顺承关系,故把but改为and。
第二处:like改为as。考查介词。属词义混淆。like作介词用时,意为“像…一样,如同”;as是介词,意为“作为,当作”。
第三处:在professor前加a 。考查冠词用法。professor为可数名词单数,这里表泛指,须加不定冠词a。
第四处:healthy改为health。考查名词作定语。句意:他经常给有健康问题的人提供医疗服务。表示“健康问题”用health problems。故把healthy改为health。
【点睛】名词作定语和与之相应的同根形容词作定语经常被错用,这也是改错题常见的考点,它们之间是有区别的:
一般情况下,名词作定语侧重说明被修饰的名词的材料、用途、时间、地点、内容、类别等;同根形容词作定语则常常描写被修饰的名词的特征。例如:"gold watch"指手表含有金的性质;而"golden watch"则表示手表是金色的特征,不一定含有金。再举两例:stone house石头造的房子,stony heart铁石般的心肠;peace conference和平会议,peaceful construction和平建设。本句中,health作定语,表示problems的类别和内容,指健康(方面的)问题。
第五处:删掉learn前面的to。 考查“情态动词+动词原形”作谓语动词。此处learn和turn to him跟在情态动词can之后,做并列谓语,用动词原形,因此learn前的to多余,要删掉。
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42.假定你是李华,你校学生会将成立汉语诗歌俱乐部。请写封邮件邀请你的留学生朋友David加入。内容包括:
1. 目的;
2. 俱乐部活动;
3. 报名方式和截止日期。
注意:1. 词数100左右,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
I’m writing to invite you to join our reading club.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
I’m writing to invite you to join our reading club.
As we all know, reading books can increase our intellectual ability, broaden our minds and improve our taste. My friend and I have set up an English reading club recently to encourage us to read more.
Of course we’ll hold varieties of reading activities. We’ll provide chances for members of the club to exchange opinions on certain books so that they can learn from each other. Besides, we’ll recommend good books to members of the club.
You can visit our school website and sign up online. Meanwhile, you can turn to the students union for the same purpose. The deadline is June 10. So don’t miss it!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文是一篇提纲式作文。假定你是李华,你校学生会将成立汉语诗歌俱乐部。请写封邮件邀请你的留学生朋友David加入。内容包括:1. 目的;2. 俱乐部活动;3. 报名方式和截止日期。写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的要点写全,语句通顺,同时也要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。适当使用连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子,提高文章档次,为文章增色添彩。
【亮点说明】本文内容齐全,结构严谨,层次分明,布局合理,语言精练,同时运用高级词汇和句子。如As we all know,… Besides,… Meanwhile, …等词语的运用,使文章过渡自然紧凑;词语运用精当,如provide chance for sb. to do sth. ; recommend sth. to sb.等;另外,We’ll provide chances for members of the club to exchange opinions on certain books so that they can learn from each other.目的状语从句的使用增加了句子的高级感。