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2020-2021学年高中学业水平合格性考试英语模拟测试卷(三) Word版含解析

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高中学业水平合格性考试模拟测试卷(三) Ⅰ.情景交际(共 5 小题;每小题 3 分,满分 15 分) 阅读下列简短对话,从 A,B,C 和 D 中选出最佳答案,将对话补全。 1. —Have you been wasting time on computer games again? —_____. I’ve been studying a lot and I need a break. A. No way B. Not really C. I don’t agree D. I couldn’t agree more 【答案】B 【解析】 【详解】考查交际用语。句意:——你又浪费时间玩电脑游戏了吗?——不完全是。我一直 在学习,需要休息一下。A. No way 没门;B. Not really 不完全是;C. I don’t agree 我不同意; D. I couldn’t agree more 我完全同意。根据句意和空后的 I’ve been studying a lot and I need a break.可知,第二个人不是一直在玩游戏。故选 B。 2. —Are you all right? —_________. A. That’s OK B. I think so C. Take it easy D. It’s very kind of you 【答案】B 【解析】 【详解】考查交际用语。句意:——你好吗?——我想是这样(我想我的身体还不错)A. That’s OK 好吧;B. I think so 我想是这样;C. Take it easy 别着急;D. It’s very kind of you 你 真好。so 指代一个肯定的宾语从句的用法,在这里 so 指代 I’m all right。故选 B 项。 3. -----I have some big news for you. You’ve been accepted as a member of our club. -----_______ That’s great! A. Have I ? B. Pardon? C. Congratulations! D. Good idea! 【答案】A 【解析】 【详解】考查交际用语。句意:———有个好消息告诉你。———你被我们俱乐部接受为一 名会员。——真的吗?太好了!A.Have I?真的吗?B.Pardon? 对不起; C.Congratulations!祝 贺你;D.Good idea!好主意。根据句意。故选 A。 4. —Bob,can you spare me a few minutes right now? I have to ask you some questions. —________ . A. It's a pleasure B. Ask,please C. Help yourself D. Yes,go ahead 【答案】D 【解析】 【详解】考查情景交际。句意:——Bob,现在能腾出几分钟给我吗?我想问你些问题。 ——好的,问吧。A.It's a pleasure 不用谢;B. Ask, please 请吧,问(是汉语表达);C. Help yourself 自便;D. Yes,go ahead 好的,问吧。此处表示授意对方按照自己的想法去做,go ahead 符合语境。故选 D。 5. —Mike,would you mind not wearing those old jeans? They look terrible. —________. A. Ok,I'll put on another pair B. Sure,I will do it right away C. Sorry,I won't be alone D. Alright,I'll do them in a minute 【答案】A 【解析】 【详解】考查情景交际。句意:——迈克,你能别穿那条旧牛仔裤吗?他们看起来可怕。 ——好的,我将会穿另外一条。A. Ok,I'll put on another pair 好的,我将会穿另外一条;B. Sure, I will do it right away. 好的,我马上去做;C. Sorry,I won't be alone 抱歉,我不会独自 一人;D. Alright,I'll do them in a minute 好的,我立刻就做。根据上文的 those old jeans,可 知,应该是回答换一条牛仔裤。故选 A。 Ⅱ.阅读理解(共 15 小题;每小题 3 分,满分 45 分) 阅读下列短文,掌握其大意,然后从每题所给的 A,B,C 和 D 中选出最佳选项。 A I made an important decision when I was in Junior 3. Before I made that decision I was one of the boys who tried too hard to act as an adult.I didn't know that only kids want to show themselves as adults. I didn't listen to my parents and teachers,and my grades became poor.Then came the high school entrance exam. At the turning point of my life,my mom wanted to have a conversation with me.I wanted to turn it down but when I looked at her eyes,I felt I couldn't refuse.Instead of asking me to study hard,to my surprise,Mom just asked what I wanted to do in the future.Without thinking too much, I just said I would like to study hard. Mom smiled and asked again:“I asked:what do you WANT to do?” I never seriously thought about the question.So,I kept silent. “Whether you want to go on studying or enter the society,” she went on,“it is your own decision.Your life should be decided by you,not by anyone else,including me.” After saying that,she had tears in her eyes. For the first time in my life I was asked to make my own decision.I sat in my chair and thought about myself,my life and what kind of person I wanted to become. It took me what seemed to be ages to make the biggest decision so far in my life—I wanted to be a man who makes a difference in the world.To achieve that,I needed to study hard. The path to my future became clear to me.I didn't act rebelliously(叛逆地) any more.With passion in my heart,I studied hard.Now,I'm one of the best students in the class. Thanks to that decision,I have become what I am today. 6. When did the boy make an important decision? A. When he was in Junior 3. B. When he was in high school. C. A year ago. D. When he was 17. 7. What's the Chinese meaning of the underlined word “passion”? A. 乘客 B. 激情 C. 传递 D. 反对 8. What did the mother do at the turning point of the boy's life? A. She taught the boy the importance of study. B. She had a big fight with the boy. C. She had a conversation with the boy. D. She told the boy to study hard. 9. Which of the following is NOT right? A. The boy's grades were poor before he made the dicision. B. The boy's mother didn't force(强迫)him to study hard. C. He wanted to make a difference in the world. D. The boy's mother made a decision for the boy. 10. What's the passage mainly about? A. An important decision by myself. B. The changes of my grades. C. My mom helped me a lot in my life. D. The high school entrance exam. 【答案】6. A 7. D 8. C 9. B 10. A 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者在上初三时自己做出了一个重大决定,自那以后从一个 叛逆的成绩差的孩子转变为一个努力学习的优秀孩子。 【6 题详解】 细节理解题。根据文章第一段 I made an important decision when I was in Junior 3.可知,作者在 初中三年级时做出了一个重要决定。故选 A。 【7 题详解】 词句猜测题。结合下文 I studied hard 作者开始努力学习可知,此时作者的思想发生了转变, 心中有了“激情”。故选D。 【8 题详解】 细 节 理 解 题 。 根 据 文 章 第 四 段 第 一 句 At the turning point of my life, my mom had a conversation with me.可知,在人生的关键时刻,作者的妈妈与作者进行了一次谈话。故选 C。 【9 题详解】 细节理解题。根据文章倒数第三段第一句 It took me what seemed to be ages to make the biggest decision so far in my life—I wanted to be a man who makes a difference in the world.(我 花了好几个世纪才做出了人生中最大的一个决定——我想成为一个能改变世界的人。)可以 判断是作者自己做的决定,不是被迫的。故选 B。 【10 题详解】 主旨大意题。文章讲的是作者在做出一个决定后的变化,这个决定是在和妈妈谈话后自己做 出的,故选 A。 B We moved into a beautiful two­story old house.The house was built in 1956. It was repaired in 2003. At first, really small things began to happen. They didn’t make me believe that something was wrong, but as time went on, things started becoming stranger and stranger. Early something was missing, and later on it would be found somewhere else. I just thought I had forgotten where I put it, or perhaps my daughter was playing around with things. Then later on I would hear strange sounds when nobody was at home but me. Yet it was an old house, and sometimes old houses did make little noises, so again, I didn’t really mind. Then things that I couldn’t explain started happening. It was last November and I was at home alone cleaning the house. When I was sweeping the kitchen floor I felt a very cold wind blowing my hair. I thought the kitchen window must have been opened, but when I checked it, it was closed. The windows were new, and there was no way any cold air came in. We all felt very strange and moved away from there in October, 2014. I was never really frightened. It was just strange, like something or someone was trying to get my attention or something. 11. The house is ________years old. A. about 97 B. over 100 C. over 200 D. about 64 12. According to the passage, the things that were missing in the old house ________. A. would never be found B. can’t be explained by the writer C. would be seen in another place D. were put somewhere else by the writer 13. At first the writer didn’t mind the strange sounds happened because ________. , A. the house was very old B. someone made them C. her daughter made them D. the cold wind was blowing 14. When the writer was sweeping the kitchen floor last November,________. A. lights turned on suddenly B. a very cold wind blew in from the open window C. a very cold wind blew her hair D. the windows were opened 15. The writer’s attitude (态度) to the old house is ________. A. strange B. frightened C. surprised D. loving 【答案】11. D 12. C 13. A 14. C 15. A 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。本文讲的是作者搬到一所老房子后发生的奇怪事件。 【11 题详解】 细节理解题。根据文章第一段第二句 The house was built in 1956.( 这所房子建于 1956 年)可知, 这所房子大概有 64 年历史了。故选 D。 【12 题详解】 细节理解题。根据文章第二段第三句 Early something was missing, and later on it would be found somewhere else.(早些时候有些东西丢失了,后来又在别的地方找到了)可知,老房子里 丢失的东西可以在另一个地方看到。故选 C。 【13 题详解】 细节理解题。根据文章第二段最后一句 Yet it was an old house, and sometimes old houses did make little noises, so again, I didn’t really mind.(但这是一所老房子,老房子有时确实会发出一 点声音,所以,我并不真的介意)可知,起初,作者并不介意奇怪的声音发生,因为房子太 老了。故选 A。 【14 题详解】 细节理解题。根据文章第三段第三句 When I was sweeping the kitchen floor, I felt a very cold wind blowing my hair.(当我在厨房扫地的时候,我感到一阵冷风吹着我的头发)可知,去年 11 月,作家在厨房扫地时,一阵冷风吹散了她的头发。故选 C。 【15 题详解】 推理判断题。根据文章最后两句 I was never really frightened. It was just strange, like something or someone was trying to get my attention or something.(我从来没有真正害怕过。这太奇怪了, 好像有人或什么东西想要引起我的注意)可知,作者觉得这所老房子很奇怪。故选 A。 C Is there a strange something high up in the world’s tallest mountains? If so, is it a big bear? Is it a monkey? Or is it a kind of man? No one knows. This mystery has puzzled the world for years. In 1887, a mountain climber found large footsteps in the snow. They looked like the footsteps of a very large man. But men don’t walk without shoes in the snow! In 1906, another climber saw more footsteps. He saw a very large animal standing on two legs. As he watched, it ran away very quickly. Fifteen years later, a newspaper had new stories about the “something”. A mountain climber said he had seen the “snowman” walk slowly in the snow. He said it looked like a very large man. From then on, more and more people had stories to tell. But not until 1951 did a mountain climber bring back the pictures of large footsteps. The pictures showed clearly that the snowman walked on two legs. So it was not a bear or a monkey. Could it be an apeman (猿人)? And the mystery keeps growing. Some day, we may find out just what it is that makes the largest footsteps. 16. The passage is about ________. A. some mountain climbers B. some strange animals C. the snow D. the mystery of the large footsteps 17. Why were people interested in footsteps? A. Because they were the footsteps of a large bear. B. Because they looked like the footsteps of a large man. C. Because they were found in the snow. D. Because they were found in the mountains. 18. When were the pictures of large footsteps taken? A. In 1887. B. In 1906. C. In 1951. D. In 1921. 19. Why did the mystery grow when a mountain climber brought back pictures of large footsteps? A. They were the footsteps of an apeman. B. They were the footsteps of a snowman. C. The pictures showed clearly how the snowman walked. D. People still don’t know who made the footsteps. 20. Which is the best title? A. Snow B. The large footsteps C. A big bear D. Monkey 【答案】16. D 17. B 18. C 19. D 20. B 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。本文主要讲述了人们对世界上最高山上的大脚印的好奇和探索。 【16 题详解】 主 旨 大 意 题 。 根 据 文 章 第 一 段 Is there a strange something high up in the world’s tallest mountains? If so, is it a big bear? Is it a monkey? Or is it a kind of man? No one knows. This mystery has puzzled the world for years.(在世界上最高的山上有什么奇怪的东西吗?如果是的 话, 它是一只大熊吗?它是一只猴子吗?还是一种人?没有人知道。这个谜多年来一直困扰 着世界)和接下来每一段都提到了关键词 large footsteps 可知, 本文主要讲述了人们对世界上 最高山上的大脚印的好奇和探索。故选 D。 【17 题详解】 细节理解题。根据文章第二段第二句 They looked like the footsteps of a very large man.可知, 人 们对此很感兴趣的原因是:它好像是一个巨人的脚印。故选 B。 【18 题详解】 细节理解题。根据文章最后一段第二句 But not until 1951 did a mountain climber bring back the pictures of large footsteps.可知, 直到 1951 年, 一个登山者才把大脚印的照片带回来。故选 C 。 【19 题详解】 推理判断题。通读最后一段可知, 虽然人们通过照片知道了雪人是用两条腿走路的, 但是这 到底是谁的脚印, 人们仍然不知道, 因此对此事的热情更高。故选 D。 【20 题详解】 主旨大意题。短文主要讲述了人们对神秘大脚印的好奇与探索。The large footsteps 为每段都 出现的关键词,由此可知,The large footsteps 可以做本文最佳标题。故选 B。 Ⅲ.完形填空(共 15 小题;每小题 3 分,满分 45 分) 阅读下面短文,掌握其大意,然后从每题所给的 A,B,C 和 D 项中选出最佳选 项。 One of the most remarkable things about the human mind is our ability to imagine the future.In our ___21___we can see what has not yet happened.For example,while we are looking forward to ___22___ a new place or country,we imagine what it will be like.We predict the ___23___people will eat,dress and act.Of course,we do not always predict things ___24___.Things are often very different from the way we ___25___ them to be. One of the famous dreams in history is the dream of the German scientist,Kekule,who had been ___26___ to work out a very difficult problem in physics.He had ___27___and analyzed the problem from every angle for days,but there seemed to be no way of ___28___out the answer.Then one night he went to bed and dreamed.When he ___29___ up,he realized that he knew the answer.He had solved the problem in his ____30____. The hypnotist(催眠者)sat in the chair opposite him and spoke ____31____:I want you to concentrate on my voice.Think about ____32____.You know nothing but my voice.And as you pay attention to my voice,your ____33____will get heavier.Soon you'll be asleep. You will hear my voice and ____34____ my words,but your body will be asleep,your eyes are too heavy.You are almost asleep,and when you wake up you will ____35____ nothing. You will forget everything.Now I am going to count slowly from one to five.One,two, three,four,five. 21. A. brains B. senses C. minds D. sights 22. A. visiting B. seeking C. reaching D. discovering 23. A. custom B. habit C. style D. way 24. A. quickly B. simply C. correctly D. neatly 25. A. required B. wished C. left D. expected 26. A. managing B. trying C. thinking D. hoping 27. A. studied B. learned C. discussed D. researched 28. A. making B. finding C. turning D. letting 29. A. gave B. sat C. woke D. got 30. A. dream B. lesson C. research D. exercise 31. A. softly B. loudly C. slowly D. firmly 32. A. everything B. something C. nothing D. anything 33. A. eyes B. feet C. head D. body 34. A. believe B. repeat C. take D. understand 35. A. accept B. remember C. hear D. receive 【答案】21. C 22. A 23. D 24. C 25. D 26. B 27. A 28. B 29. C 30. A 31. A 32. C 33. A 34. D 35. B 【解析】 这是一篇说明文。本文介绍了人类的梦境具有预测性以及一些人在梦境中解决问题的例子。 【21 题详解】 考查名词辨析。句意:在我们的脑海里,我们可以看到还没有发生的事情。A. brains 大脑 (多指脑部);B. senses 感官;C. minds 思想、思维、思维;D. sights 视力,视觉。根据上文 about the human mind is our ability to imagine the future.可知,此处是信息词 mind 的原词复现, 说明在我们的脑海里,我们能够想象以后的事情。故选 C。 【22 题详解】 考查动词辨析。句意:例如,当我们期待参观一个新 地方或国家时,我们会想象它会是什 么样子。A. visiting 拜访,参观;B. seeking 寻找;C. reaching 到达;D. discovering 发现。根 据 a new place or country 可知,此处表示到一个新的国家或者地方参观。故选 A。 【23 题详解】 考查名词辨析。句意:我们预测人们的饮食、衣着和行为方式。A. custom 风俗;B. habit 习 惯;C. style 风格;D. way 方法、方式。根据 we imagine what it will be like 可知,此处表示预 测人们的生活和行为方式。下一句话中的 the way 也是提示,故选 D。 【24 题详解】 考查副词辨析。句意:当然,我们并不总是能准确预测事物。A. quickly 迅速地;B. simply 的 简单地,仅仅;C. correctly 正确地;D. neatly 整洁地。根据 Things are often very different from the way 可知,预测的内容不一定是正确的。故选 C。 【25 题详解】 考查动词辨析。句意:事情往往与我们所期望的很不一样。A. required 需要;B. wished 希望; C. left 离开;D. expected 期待。根据 We predict 可知,很多时候事情跟我们期待的不一样。 跟故选 D。 【26 题详解】 考查动词辨析。句意:历史上著名的梦之一是德国科学家凯库勒的梦,他一直试图解决一个 非常困难的物理问题。A. managing 管理、设法;B. trying 尝试;C. thinking 思考;D. hoping 希望。根据 to work out a very difficult problem in physics.可知,一直在试图解决问题。故选 B。 【27 题详解】 考查动词辨析。句意:几天来,他从各个角度研究和分析了这个问题,但似乎没有办法找到 答案。A. studied 学习,研究;B. learned 学习;C. discussed 讨论;D. researched 研究。“研 究”与“分析”是紧密相连的。study 此处意为“研究”,指学术或科学研究。research 作“研 究”讲时,侧重社会研究。故选 A。 28 题详解】 考查动词辨析。句意:几天来,他从各个角度研究和分析了这个问题,但似乎没有办法找到 答案。A. making 制作;B. finding 找到;C. turning 转向;D. letting 让。根据 but there seemed to be no way 可知,没有找到解决问题的方法,find out 为固定短语,意为“找到,发现”。 故选 B。 【29 题详解】 考查动词辨析。句意:当他醒来时,他意识到他知道答案。A. gave 给;B. sat 坐;C. woke 唤醒;D. got 得到。根据上文 Then one night he went to bed and dreamed.可知,他从睡 梦中醒来,wake up 为固定短语,意为“醒来”。故选C。 【30 题详解】 考查名词辨析。句意:他在梦中解决了这个问题。A. dream 梦想;B. lesson 课,教训;C. research 研究;D. exercise 锻炼。根据 Then one night he went to bed and dreamed 可知,他在梦中解决 了问题。故选 A。 【31 题详解】 【 考查副词辨析。句意:催眠师坐在他对面的椅子上,轻声说:“我想让你们注意我的声 音。”A. softly 温柔地;B. loudly 大声地;C. slowly 缓慢地;D. firmly 坚定地。根据下文 Now I am going to count slowly from one to five.可知,催眠师说话时是轻声地。故选 A。 【32 题详解】 考查代词辨析。句意:什么也没有想。A. everything 一切事情;B. something 一些事情;C. nothing 没什么;D. anything 任何事情。根据 You know nothing but my voice 可知,此处是信 息词 nothing 的原词复现。故选 C。 【33 题详解】 考查名词辨析。句意:当你注意到我的声音时,你的眼皮会变沉。A. eyes 眼睛;B. feet 脚; C. head 头;D. body 身体。根据 your eyes are too heavy.可知,眼皮变沉(指感到困意)。故选 A。 【34 题详解】 考查动词辨析。句意:你会听到我 声音,明白我的话语,但你的身体会睡着,你的眼睛太 沉了。A. believe 相信;B. repeat 重复;C. take 拿走;D. understand 理解。由文意可知在迷迷 糊糊的时候可以听见我的话并且理解我的意思,“听到继而理解”合乎逻辑。故选 D。 【35 题详解】 考查动词辨析。句意:你几乎睡着了,当你醒来的时候,你什么都不记得了。A. accept 接受; B. remember 记得;C. hear 听见;D. receive 接收。根据下文 You will forget everything.可知, 醒来时什么都不记得了。故选 B。 Ⅳ.语法填空(共 10 小题;每小题 2 分,满分 20 分) 阅读下面短文,按照句子结构的语法性和上下文连贯的要求,在空格处填入一个适当的词或 使用括号中词语的正确形式填空。 When I was young,our family lived in what is now a forest reserve.One day I saw a ____36____ (home) dog at the end of our long driveway.It drove my mother crazy.We weren't rich and we already had a dog. ____37____ (stare) out of the window,my mother complained about the ____38____ (responsible) and cruel person who left his dog with us.We children were told to stay away from ____39____ dog as we couldn't afford to keep it.I was very upset and couldn't believe that my mother was refusing to help it.She said,we were not alone here and let ___40___ people take care 的 of the creature. The poor dog ____41____ (lie) at the end of the driveway and hardly moved for two days.My heart was breaking, ___42___ I didn't dare to say anything to my mother. Later that day,I couldn't find my mother in the house.I ____43____ (check) every room but she was gone.Then I saw my mother coming back to our house ____44____ the dog.We ran outside to greet our new dog.My mother didn't say ____45____she had changed her mind.That doesn't matter.Sometimes it's not what you say but what you do that matters. 【答案】36. homeless 37. Staring 38. irresponsible 39. the 40. other 41. lay 42. but 43. checked 44. with 45. why 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者看到了一条无家可归的狗,可是妈妈不允许收留,就 在作者感到痛心的时候,发现妈妈已经把小狗带回家了,作者意识到有时候重要的不是你说 什么而是你做什么。 【36 题详解】 考查形容词。句意:一天,我看到一条无家可归的狗在我们长长的车道的尽头。分析句子结 构,设空处修饰名词 dog 作定语,结合语境可知,此处需填形容词“无家可归的”,homeless 意为“无家可归的”。故填homeless。 【37 题详解】 考查非谓语动词。句意:母亲盯着窗外,抱怨那个不负责任、残忍的人把他的狗留在我们身 边。分析句子结构,已有谓语动词 complained,设空处需填非谓语动词作状语,my mother 和 stare 是主谓关系,需填现在分词形式,位于句首,首字母需大写。故填 Staring。 【38 题详解】 考查形容词。句意:母亲盯着窗外,抱怨那个不负责任、残忍的人把他的狗留在我们身边。 分析句子结构,设空处和 cruel 并列,需填形容词作定语,此处意为“不负责任的”, irresponsible 意为“不负责任的”。故填irresponsible。 【39 题详解】 考查冠词。句意:我们孩子被告知不要靠近那条狗,因为我们养不起它。此处是第二次提到 小狗,设空处用 the 表示特指。故填 the。 【40 题详解】 考查代词。句意:她说,我们不是一个人在这里,让其他人照顾这个生物。结合语境可知, 此处需填“其他的”,修饰people,other 意为“其他的”。故填other。 【41 题详解】 考查动词时态。句意:那只可怜的狗躺在车道尽头,两天来几乎一动也不动。设空处和 moved 并列,需用一般过去时。lie(躺)的过去式是 lay。故填 lay。 【42 题详解】 考查连词。句意:我的心都碎了,但我不敢跟妈妈说什么。结合语境可知,上下文之间是转 折关系,需用连词 but 连接。故填 but。 【43 题详解】 考查动词时态。句意:我检查了每个房间,但她不见了。分析句子结构,设空处缺少谓语动 词。此处陈述过去发生的事情,需用一般过去时。故填 checked。 【44 题详解】 考查介词。句意:然后我看到我妈妈和小狗一起回到我们家。设空处需填介词“和……一 起”,with 意为“和……一起”。故填with。 【45 题详解】 考查宾语从句。句意:我母亲没有说她为什么改变了主意。分析句子结构,设空处引导宾语 从句,从句缺少原因状语,需用连接副词 why 引导。故填 why。 Ⅴ.书面表达(共 1 小题;满分 25 分) 46. 你们班本周班会课的主题是上网交友的利与弊,假如你叫李华,请你写一段发言稿,说 说一些学生认为网上交友的诸多好处,和你对此的不同看法。 注意:1.词数 90 左右; 2.发言稿的开头与结尾已为你写好,但不计入总词数。 My dear classmates, Good afternoon!Today's topic is making friends online.I'd like to say something about it.As you know,thanks to the development of the Internet,more and more students are addicted to making friends online _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ That's all.Thank you. Li Hua 【答案】My dear classmates, Good afternoon!Today's topic is making friends online.I'd like to say something about it.As you know, thanks to the development of the Internet, more and more students are addicted to making friends online. Many students think making friends online helps them a lot because it can help them have more friends.The more friends they have, the more information they can get.By chatting online, they can express their feelings and opinions more freely. However, in my opinion, though making friends online is helpful, there are also a lot of disadvantages.Making friends online may bring us danger and trouble, because it is not easy to know who he/she really is online.What's more, I think it wastes a lot of our precious time. So we must be more careful while making friends online. That's all.Thank you. Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】 这是一篇发言稿。文章主要就上网交友的利与弊发表自己的看法。 【详解】第一步:审题 体裁:应用文 时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。 结构:总分法 总分法是指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求: 1.说明一些学生认为网上交友 诸多好处 2.表明自己的不同看法 3.进行总结 第二步:列提纲(重点词组) 的 Make friends;the more…,the more…;express one’s feelings and opinions;in my opinion;bring sb. sth.;a lot of;waste precious time;be careful 第三步:连词成句 1.Many students think making friends online helps them a lot because it can help them have more friends. 2.The more friends they have, the more information they can get. 3.By chatting online, they can express their feelings and opinions more freely. 4.However, in my opinion, though making friends online is helpful, there are also a lot of disadvantages. 5. Making friends online may bring us danger and trouble, because it is not easy to know who he/she really is online 6. What's more, I think it wastes a lot of our precious time. 7. So we must be more careful while making friends online. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态的问题。 第四步:连句成篇(衔接词) 1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including, 3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰, 第五步:润色修改 【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符 合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句,如:Many students think making friends online helps them a lot because it can help them have more friends. 中 making friends online helps them a lot 为省略了 that 的宾语从句,because 引导原因状语从句。Making friends online may bring us danger and trouble, because it is not easy to know who he/she really is online 中 who 引导宾语 从句,making friends on line 是动名词短语作主语。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了 很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添 彩。

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