专题28 短文改错（Ⅲ）-2019年高考英语二轮复习提分秘籍（解析版） 4页

A ‎ Zhou Yan is the Senior Three student. Last week，he goes to see a doctor because of his arms and fingers hurt. The doctor told him the fact that had a “mobile phone disease”．Zhou sent messages for his friends with his mobile phone all the time，even in bed. Zhou started to do badly in all the exam because he spent so many time on his mobile phone. He didn't stop use the mobile phone until his arms hurt. Yang Ling，which is an expert from a health center，said students should try to use their mobile phones less，especial at school.‎ ‎【答案】　‎ Zhou Yan is Senior Three student. Last week，he to see a doctor because his arms and fingers hurt. The doctor told him the fact that had a “mobile phone disease”．Zhou sent messages his friends with his mobile phone all the time，even in bed.Zhou started to do badly in all the because he spent so time on his mobile phone. He didn't stop the mobile phone until his arms hurt. Yang Ling， is an expert from a health center，said students should try to use their mobile phones less， at school.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 第四处：had前加he。考查代词。that引导一个同位语从句，而非定语从句，在从句中不作句子成分，对fact的内容进行补充说明，由此可知，从句中缺少了主语，且由上文的him可知，应用人称代词的主格形式he。‎ 第五处：for→to。考查介词。固定搭配send sth.to sb.意为“给某人送某物”，符合语境，故用介词to。‎ 第六处：exam→exams。考查名词复数。exam是可数名词，且被all修饰，故用复数形式。‎ 第七处：many→much。time在此处用作不可数名词，故用much修饰。‎ 第八处：use→using。考查动名词。固定搭配stop doing sth.意为“停止做某事”，符合语境，故用动名词作宾语。‎ 第九处：which→who。考查定语从句。先行词Yang Ling，指人，故用who引导非限制性定语从句，在从句中作主语。‎ 第十处：especial→especially。考查副词。应用副词especially修饰介词短语at school。 ‎ B Living without an aim is like sailing without compass. If there is no aim in our lives，we will get lose. Last ‎ term，I couldn't accept the truth which I failed in my math examination. I decided to give it up，so I skipped from classes frequently. Considered my case，my teacher offered me several detailed approach and advised me to set a short term goal to improve my math. Finally，I work harder than ever and made great progress in her math. In my opinion，success lies in a series of goals. However，we should remember to make our targets clearly and spare no effort to realize our dreams.‎ ‎【答案】　‎ Living without an aim is like sailing without compass.If there is no aim in our lives，we will get . Last term，I couldn't accept the truth I failed in my math examination. I decided to give it up，so I skipped classes frequently. my case，my teacher offered me several detailed and advised me to set a shortterm goal to improve my math. Finally，I harder than ever and made great progress in math. In my opinion，success lies in a series of goals. ，we should remember to make our targets and spare no effort to realize our dreams.‎ ‎【解析】　‎ 第四处：删除from。考查介词。skip classes意为“逃课”，故from多余。‎ 第五处：Considered→Considering。考查介词。此处应用介词considering在句中作状语。‎ 第六处：approach→approaches。考查名词。approach作“方法”讲时，是可数名词；由前面的several可知，应用复数形式。‎ 第七处：work→worked。考查动词时态。根据语境可知，work的动作发生在过去，故应该使用一般过去时。‎ 第八处：her→my。考查代词。此处表示“我的数学有了很大进步”，故代词应用my。‎ 第九处：However→Therefore。考查副词。根据语境可知， 此处为因果关系；后面有逗号隔开，故应用Therefore。‎ 第十处：clearly→clear。考查形容词。此处应用形容词作make的宾语补足语，用于补充说明名词targets。‎ C This morning，I got an email from the library. It said the book I reserved was ready to be picking up. Because I had always been waiting to read it，so at that moment I was very exciting. Outside the library，I saw the man driving around the small parking lot，try to find a parking space. He head for the disabled parking space，the only one that was free. He got off his car with a pile of library book to return. Seeing that，I offered to return them to him. He thanked me and jumped quick in his car and drove off，keeping the disabled parking space free for someone ‎ needed it.‎ ‎【答案】　‎ This morning，I got an email from the library. It said the book I reserved was ready to be up. Because I had always been waiting to read it， at that moment I was very .Outside the library，I saw man driving around the small parking lot， to find a parking space. He for the disabled parking space，the only one that was free. He got off his car with a pile of library to return. Seeing that，I offered to return them him. He thanked me and jumped in his car and drove off，keeping the disabled parking space free for someone needed it.‎ ‎【解析】　‎ 第三处：exciting→excited。考查分词形容词。excited一般修饰人，而exciting一般修饰物。‎ 第四处：the→a。考查冠词。man第一次在语境中出现，故用不定冠词修饰。‎ 第五处：try→trying。考查非谓语动词。try和句子谓语saw之间没有连词，故用非谓语动词。此外，try和句子主语I构成主谓关系，故用现在分词作状语。‎ 第六处：head→headed。考查动词时态。由后面的“was free”可知，应用一般过去时。‎ 第七处：book→books。考查名词复数形式。根据a pile of可知，书不止一本，故用复数形式。‎ 第八处：to→for。考查介词。介词for表示“为了”，符合语境。‎ 第九处：quick→quickly。考查副词。此处应用副词修饰动词jumped，在句子中作状语。‎ 第十处：someone后加who。考查定语从句。who引导定语从句，在从句中作主语。‎ D It is known that some students cheat in exams. It has three reason. First of all，there are so many exams. Beside，the exams given are difficulty in some way. Secondly, some students have to cheat in exams because of they are too lazy. The last reason is to please our parents and teachers. For some students，low marks brought them great pressure and make them depressing.‎ In my opinion，cheating in exams are wrong. We should take active attitude to our studies，and try to get a mark what is true as well as good.‎ ‎【答案】　‎ It is known that some students cheat in exams.It has three .First of all，there are so many exams.，the exams given are in some way. Secondly, some students have to cheat in exams because they are too lazy. The last reason is to please parents and teachers. For some students，low marks them great pressure and make them .‎ In my opinion，cheating in exams wrong. We should take active attitude to our studies，and try to get a mark is true as well as good.‎ 第四处：删除of。考查连词。“they are too lazy”为一个完整的句子，其前应该是一个连词，故删除介词of。‎ 第五处：our→their。考查代词。根据上文中的“they are too lazy”可知，此处应该用their。‎ 第六处：brought→bring。考查动词时态。全文时态均为一般现在时，本句是对客观事实的陈述且根据and后的make可知，应用一般现在时。‎ 第七处：depressing→depressed。考查形容词。此处depressed是分词形容词，作宾语补足语，宾语them指人。‎ 第八处：are→is。考查主谓一致。动名词短语作主语，谓语动词应用单数，故用is。‎ 第九处：active前加an。考查冠词。attitude是可数名词，且第一次在语境中出现，故用不定冠词修饰，且在读音以元音音素开头的形容词active之前，故用an。‎ 第十处：what→that/which。考查定语从句。根据语境可知，此处应用that/which引导定语从句，在从句中作主语，修饰先行词a mark。‎