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第
1
讲
把握五档作文标准
典例
(2019
·
全国卷
Ⅰ)
假定你是李华
,
暑期在伦敦学习
,
得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者
,
内容包括
:
1.
写信目的
; 2.
个人优势
; 3.
能做的事情。
注意
: 1.
词数
100
个左右
;
2.
可以适当增加细节
,
以使行文连贯
;
3.
结束语已为你写好。
_______________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【学生习作
】
三档作文
(14
分
)
Dear
Sir
or
Madam
,
I’m
Li
Hua
.
I’m
an
exchange
student
from
China.
I
have
studied
in
London
for
half
a
year.
I’m
very
happy
to
know
that
a
Chinese
painting
exhibition
will
be
held
and
I
hope
I
can
do
something
for
this.
I
love
Chinese
painting
,
when
I
was
young
my
grandfather
taught
me
Chinese
calligraphy
and
traditional
Chinese
paintings
,
when
I
grow
up
I
become
more
and
more
interested
in
Chinese
paintings
,
whether
traditional
or
modern
ones.
So
I
could
be
a
good
commentator
for
visitors
in
the
gallery.
Of
course
,
I
can
speak
good
English
and
it’s
no
problem
to
serve
the
people.
I
hope
I
can
have
the
honor
to
be
a
volunteer
for
the
exhibition
,
please
reply
at
your
earliest
convenience.
Yours
,
Li
Hua
四档作文
(19
分
)
Dear
Sir
or
Madam
,
I’m
Li
Hua
,
a
Chinese
student
studying
in
London
University.
It’s
exciting
to
hear
that
a
Chinese
painting
exhibition
will
be
going
on
at
our
community
museum
next
month
and
I’m
writing
to
apply
for
an
opportunity
to
be
the
volunteer.
Because
I
love
Chinese
paintings
and
I’m
very
familiar
with
some
famous
Chinese
paintings
,
which
will
be
helpful
to
introduce
them
to
people
from
all
over
the
world.
What’s
more
,
I
have
been
studying
in
London
for
3
years
and
have
developed
good
ways
of
communicating
with
others.
I
do
hope
I
could
help
for
the
coming
exhibition
and
let
more
visitors
have
a
better
understanding
of
Chinese
paintings.
Looking
forward
to
your
early
reply.
Yours
,
Li
Hua
五档作文
(22
分
)
Dear
Sir
or
Madam
,
How
are
you
doing
?
I
am
Li
Hua
,
a
17-year-old
teenager
,
who
is
crazy
about
different
cultures
around
the
world.
Recently
,
I
learned
in
your
official
website
that
a
volunteer
is
needed
for
an
exhibition
of
Chinese
traditional
painting
in
London.
So
I
am
writing
to
apply
for
this
position.
Here
are
three
main
reasons
why
I
am
the
best
choice
for
you.
First
and
foremost
,
having
lived
in
London
for
half
a
year
before
as
an
exchange
student
,
I
am
undoubtedly
good
at
English
;
as
a
result
,
it
is
a
piece
of
cake
for
me
to
introduce
everything
to
international
friends.
Besides
,
I
learned
Chinese
painting
for
more
than
ten
years
in
my
childhood
;
therefore
,
I
do
know
a
lot
about
this
great
art
form.
Last
but
certainly
not
least
,
as
vice
monitor
of
our
class
,
I
am
kind
,
patient
and
always
ready
to
help
others.
Hopefully
,
this
wonderful
chance
would
be
offered
to
me.
I
have
the
confidence
that
I
will
have
a
great
time.
Looking
forward
to
your
reply.
Yours
,
Li
Hua
【技法点金
】
全国卷书面表达赋分标准