专题29 短文改错（Ⅳ）-2019年高考英语二轮复习提分秘籍（解析版） 5页

A Friendship is very important to everyone，especially to me. Now，I would like to describe one of my best friends whose name are Petou. The first reason why I consider him as my best friend is because he has a very warm personality.‎ He always smile politely at me, make me absolutely delighted when I meet him. What's more，honest is his good manner—he never lies me. In addition，he is the caring and compassionate friend. He's willing to help me whenever I have in trouble.‎ The second reason is that Petou is really excellently. He excels at every subject，which makes me admire him very much.‎ To summarize，Petou has a very good personality. Besides，he has a great ability to help other friends and him. I really like him.‎ ‎【答案】　‎ Friendship is very important to everyone，especially to me.Now，I would like to describe one of my best friends whose name Petou.The first reason why I consider him as my best friend is he has a very warm personality.‎ He always politely at me， me absolutely delighted when I meet him.What's more， is his good manner—he never lies me.In addition，he is caring and compassionate friend.He's willing to help me whenever I have trouble.‎ The second reason is that Petou is really .He excels at every subject，which makes me admire him very much.‎ To summarize，Petou has a very good personality.Besides，he has a great ability to help other friends and .I really like him.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 第四处：make→making。考查非谓语动词。make与前面的谓语动词之间无连词，‎ 故此处应用现在分词短语作结果状语。‎ 第五处：honest→honesty。考查名词。形容词不能作主语，应该用名词。‎ 第六处：lies后加to。考查固定用法。lie to sb.意为“对某人说谎”。‎ 第七处：the→a。考查冠词。此处表示他是一个热心并且有同情心的人，表示泛指，应该用不定冠词。‎ 第八处：删除in。考查介词。句意：无论何时我有困难，他都愿意帮助我。have trouble意为“有困难”，in多余。‎ 第九处：excellently→excellent。考查形容词。作is的表语应该用形容词。‎ 第十处：him→me。考查代词。Petou能帮助别人也能帮助我。‎ B I usually go to school by bike. And this morning I went on foot. On the way to school，I happen to witness an accident. A middle-aged woman was knocked down by a car while crosses the street. Seeing that was happening on the scene，I made rush for the woman to help. One passerby got out of his cellphone and called the police. I helped to carry the woman to safe and dress her wound. Around ten minutes late, an ambulance arrived and took him to hospital. I continued my way to school，feeling happily that I could offer some help in time.‎ ‎【答案】　‎ I usually go to school by bike. this morning I went on foot.On the way to school，I to witness an accident. A middle-aged woman was knocked down by a car while the street. Seeing was happening on the scene，I made rush for the woman to help. One passerby got out his cellphone and called the police. I helped to carry the woman to and dress her wound. Around ten minutes ， an ambulance arrived and took to hospital. I continued my way to school，feeling that I could offer some help in time.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 第三处：crosses→crossing。考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知， cross与A middleaged woman之间是逻辑上的主谓关系，故应用现在分词形式。‎ 第四处：that→what。考查名词性从句。这里指“看到现场发生的事情”。此处在句中引导宾语从句，且在从句中作主语，表示“……的事情”，故用what。‎ 第五处：rush前加a。考查冠词。此处指作者冲向那位女士以提供帮助。make a rush for“冲向，奔向”‎ 是固定搭配。‎ 第六处：删除out后的of。考查固定搭配。一位路人拿出他的手机并给警察打了电话。get“取来，拿来”，是及物动词，其后可直接接宾语；out在此为副词。而get out of sth.意为“离开 (某地)，摆脱，放弃”，显然不符合此处的语境。故of多余。‎ C The day before Mother's Day，everybody around me was talking about what was most suitable gift they would buy for their mothers. Buying flowers were what most students would do. However，I wanted to do something differently. As then I lived in school and couldn't go back home on Mother's Day，so I decided to call her and sent her my best wishes. I searched the Internet for suggestions，what were very useful，and I read it carefully. When I called my mother，however，I had the feel that someone else's words would have no meaning to her. So I gave in and just told my mother I loved her and thanked her to all she had done for me.‎ ‎【答案】　‎ The day before Mother's Day，everybody around me was talking about what was most suitable gift they would buy for their mothers. Buying flowers what most students would do.However，I wanted to do something .As then I lived in school and couldn't go back home on Mother's Day， I decided to call her and her my best wishes.I searched the Internet for suggestions， were very useful，and I read carefully.When I called my mother，however，I had the that someone else's words would have no meaning to her.So I gave and just told my mother I loved her and thanked her all she had done for me.‎ 第一处：most前加the。考查冠词。母亲节前一天，我周围的所有人都在谈论什么是他们将为母亲买的最合适的礼物。根据句意可知，此处为形容词的最高级，故在most前加the。‎ 第二处：were→was。考查主谓一致。动名词短语Buying flowers作主语时谓语动词需用单数形式，故将were改为was。‎ 第三处：differently→different。考查形容词。修饰不定代词something需用形容词。注意：different在此作后置定语。‎ 第四处：去掉so。考查连词。as“因为”，引导原因状语从句，故后面的so多余。‎ 第五处：sent→send。考查动词。and连接的不是并列的谓语动词，而是不定式，第二个不定式前的to承前省略了。‎ 第六处：what→which。考查定语从句。先行词为suggestions，非限制性定语从句缺主语，故用关系代词which引导。注意：what不可引导定语从句。‎ 第七处：it→them。考查代词。指代前面的suggestions，需用复数代词them。‎ D Mistakes are unavoidable in life. But attitudes towards it may make a difference.‎ I still remember how my spoken English was improved. In a beginning，I always kept silent in our oral class to avoid make mistakes. Before long my teacher got to know about my situation. He encouraged me to speak out that I thought. Whenever I made mistakes and felt discouraging，my teacher and my classmates would help me figure out how I must have avoided them. I also joined in an English club to get more chances to speak. Practice made perfect. Now I can talk fluent in English.‎ Just as the saying goes，“Every bean has its black.” Don't afraid of making mistakes. Learn from mistakes，and success is just waiting for us.‎ ‎【答案】　‎ Mistakes are unavoidable in life.But attitudes towards may make a difference.‎ I still remember how my spoken English was improved.In beginning，I always kept silent in our oral class to avoid mistakes. Before long my teacher got to know about my situation. He encouraged me to speak out I thought.Whenever I made mistakes and felt ，my teacher and my classmates would help me figure out how I have avoided them. I also joined an English club to get more chances to speak.Practice perfect.Now I can talk in English.‎ Just as the saying goes，“Every bean has its black.” Don't afraid of making mistakes.Learn from mistakes，and success is just waiting for us.‎ ‎【解析】　‎ 第一处：it→them。考查代词。根据语境可知，第二句中“towards”的宾语指代的是第一句的主语“Mistakes”，故用them。‎ 第四处：that→what。考查宾语从句。分析该句结构可知，该句为含有宾语从句的主从复合句，what既作宾语从句的引导词，也作从句中及物动词thought的宾语，而that在从句中不能作成分，故将that改为what。‎ 第五处：discouraging→discouraged。考查形容词。根据从句主语I可知，该处应用discouraged形容人，意为“沮丧的”；discouraging形容事物，意为“令人沮丧的”。 ‎ 第六处：must→could。考查情态动词。根据语境可知，该句使用了虚拟语气，表示“过去本能够做却没有做”，故用could have done。‎ 第七处：删除in。考查固定搭配。该处指“参加英语俱乐部”，参加某个组织用join，而join in为固定搭配，意为“参加活动”，故删除in。‎ 第八处：made→makes。考查主谓一致和时态。句意：熟能生巧。该句为一般真理，故用一般现在时；该句主语为Practice，为不可数名词，谓语动词应用单数形式，故用makes。‎ 第九处：fluent→fluently。考查副词。根据该句中的动词“talk”可知，此处修饰动词，故用副词形式。‎ 第十处：afraid前加be。考查祈使句。分析句子结构可知，该句为祈使句，afraid为形容词，故afraid前加动词原形be。‎