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写作素能培养
第三部分
第七讲 实现作文的完美衔接与过渡
衔接与过渡性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句与句之间,段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接
(
过渡
)
性词语是非常必要的。高中阶段应该掌握的连接
(
过渡
)
性词语归纳如下:
一、表示起始关系的过渡性词语
above all
,
to begin/start with
,
today
,
now
,
nowadays
,
at present
,
currently
,
recently
,
generally speaking
,
according to
,
with the development of...
等。
①Now I'll tell you the next learning programme. (2017
·
全国卷
Ⅰ
书面表达
)
现在我来告诉你下一个学习计划。
②
To start with, I have been learning and speaking Mandarin for about 17 years. (2015
·
四川高分满分作文
)
首先,我学说普通话已经
17
年了。
完成句子
1
.随着因特网的发展,计算机在人们的生活中起着重要作用。
___________________________the Internet, computers play an important role in people's life.
2
.总的来说,你练习越多,用英语写作就越熟练。
________________________the more you practise, the more skillfully you can write in English.
With the development of
Generally speaking
二、表示时间顺序的过渡性词语
①
In the meanwhile, the wolf might feel the people's threats around, so it began to step back slowly. (2017
·
浙江高考书面表达
)
同时,狼可能会感觉到周围的人对它的威胁,所以它开始慢慢后退。
②
Several days later
,
when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. (2017
·
北京高考书面表达
)
几天后,当录像带在毕业典礼上播放时,收到了好评。
firstly
,
first of all
,
to begin/start with
,
then
,
later
,
in the end
,
finally
,
at last
,
after that
,
afterwards
,
since then
,
immediately
,
suddenly
,
meanwhile
等。
翻译短文
上周我得了重感冒,首先是流鼻涕,但我并未当回事,然后开始咳嗽,后来感到发烧而且没力气,最后我被送进医院,不得不在床上躺了三天。
I had a bad cold last week.First
,
I had a running nose
,
but I did not take it seriously. Then I began to cough.After that
,
I had a fever and felt weak.Finally
,
I was sent to
hospital and had to lie in bed for three days.
三、表示并列关系的过渡性词语
①
As you know, playing ping
pong can not only build up your body but also shape your character. (2017
·
全国卷
Ⅲ
书面表达
)
正如你所知道的,打乒乓球不仅可以增强你的身体,还能塑造你的性格。
②
She finally earned respect of them, who eventually became confident as well as well
behaved. (2015
·
广东高考满分作文
)
她最后赢得了他们的尊重,他们最终变得自信,表现也不错。
and
,
or
,
also
,
as well as
,
neither...nor...
,
not only... but also...
,
either...or...
,
not... but...
等。
翻译句子
1
.努力学习,你就会考上重点大学。
Work hard
,
and you will be admitted to a key university.
2
.游泳不但对身体有好处,而且能培养我们的坚强意志。
Swimming not only benefits our health
,
but also helps us have a strong will.
四、表示转折关系的过渡性词语
but
,
yet
,
however
,
while
,
otherwise
,
on the contrary
,
though
,
although
,
even if/though
,
despite
,
in spite of
,
regardless of
等。
①
However, they still approached to the wolf bravely. (2017
·
浙江高考书面表达
)
然而,他们仍然勇敢地接近狼。
②
Otherwise we'll have to answer for our selfishness sooner or later.
否则的话,我们迟早会为我们的自私付出代价。
翻译句子
1
.然而在我们学校,情况却大不一样。
In our school
,
however
,
things are quite different.
2
.但遗憾的是我只考虑自己的事情,没有考虑父母的想法。
But unfortunately I mind my own business without considering my parents.
五、表示因果关系的过渡性词语
①
Therefore
,
before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems. (2017
·
全国卷
Ⅰ
书面表达
)
因此,上课前,你可以阅读一些与唐代历史有关的书籍,以更好地欣赏诗歌。
②
So I invite you to attend an exhibition of it. (2017
·
全国卷
Ⅱ
书面表达
)
所以我请你去参加一个展览。
because
,
as
,
since
,
for
,
thanks to
,
due to
,
as a result of
,
so
,
therefore
,
as a result/consequence
等。
翻译句子
1
.多亏医生的及时治疗,他获救了。
Thanks to the doctor's timely treatment
,
he was saved.
2
.因此,我建议应该给我们更多的时间用于体育运动和睡眠。
Therefore
,
I suggest we be given more time for sports and sleep.
六、表示递进关系的过渡性词语
①
Additionally, it can help you make more friends, which is essentially beneficial to you. (2017
·
全国卷
Ⅲ
书面表达
)
此外,它可以帮助你结交更多的朋友,这对你来说是有益的。
②
Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well
known sightseeing spots. (2017
·
北京高考书面表达
)
此外,沿江的风景是惊人的,有很多著名的观光景点。
what's more
,
furthermore
,
moreover
,
besides
,
additionally
,
what's worse
,
still less
,
to make matters worse
,
worse still
,
on the one hand...on the other hand ...
,
for one thing... for another
(
thing
)
...
等。
翻译句子
1
.我在森林里迷了路,更糟糕的是,天开始变黑了。
I lost my way in the forest and to make matters worse
,
it became dark.
2
.一方面,周末他们需要好好休息;另一方面,他们需要尽一切努力复习功课。
On (the) one hand
,
they should have a good rest on weekends.On the other (hand)
,
they should make every effort to review what they have learned.
七、表示列举事实的过渡性词语
such as
,
for example/instance
,
take...for example
,
that is to say
,
as follows
,
in other words
等。
①For example, once most of my classmates made a suggestion that we go outing at the weekend, but I thought helping the old at the nursing home would be more meaningful. (2015
·
浙江高考满分作文
)
例如,曾经有一次我的大部分同学都建议周末去郊游,但是我认为去敬老院帮助老年人会更有意义。
②In my free time, I'll continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games.
在我的业余时间,我将继续做常规训练,诸如游泳、跑步和各种各样的球类活动。
翻译句子
1
.就拿北京来说吧,它是世界上最古老的都市之一。
Take Beijing for example
,
it is one of the oldest cities in the world.
2
.也就是说,如果你想成功,必须相信自己。
That is to say
,
if you want to succeed
,
you have to believe in yourself.
八、表示观点的过渡性词语
in my opinion
,
in my view
,
from my point of view
,
as far as I am concerned
,
as for me
,
personally
等。
①Personally
,
I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. (2017
·
北京高考书面表达
)
就个人而言,我更喜欢沿着长江,最长的河流和中国文明的母亲河之一旅游。
②
In my opinion, on
line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed. (2016
·
江苏高考书面表达
)
在我看来,网上投票是现代生活中不可分割的一部分,应该受到欢迎。
翻译句子
1
.就我而言,我喜欢财富,但我更看重健康。
As far as I am concerned
,
I love wealth
,
but I value health more.
2
.按照我的观点,人们不应该在公共场所抽烟。
In my opinion
,
people shall not smoke in public places.
九、表示总结的过渡性词语
①
In short, internet voting, to some extent, is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot be trusted. (2016
·
江苏高考书面表达
)
总之,即使符合道德标准网上投票在一定程度上也是不公平的,不应该被相信。
②
In a word, if we had such a magic watch, our life would become more convenient.
总之,如果我们能有这么一块有魔力的手表,我们的生活将会更加方便。
in short
,
in brief
,
in conclusion
,
in a/one word
,
to sum up
,
all in all
,
on the whole
,
in general
等。
1
.总之,好公民应该遵守交通规则。
In conclusion
,
a good citizen should observe traffic regulations.
2
.总之,过去
30
年里我们生活的变化给我们带来了便利和舒适。
In a word
,
changes in our life in the past thirty years have brought us convenience
and comfort.
______________________
,
online shopping has many advantages.First
,
online shopping makes it easier for us to buy things.Instead of searching a crowded store
,
we just need to watch the computer screen and choose the things we like. __________
,
it is much faster for us to do shopping.We don't have to spend a lot of time going to shops.Third
,
we can see a lot of goods shown on the computer screen at the same time.
On (the) one hand
Second
_____________________
,
online shopping also has many disadvantages.The pictures of goods shown on the computer screen are not always what they are. _______________
,
we can be cheated easily. ________________we cannot see the things in detail.
_____________
,
___________the disadvantages of online shopping
,
I think it is an advanced way to do shopping.So we should develop it.
On the other hand
As a result
What's worse
In a word
despite