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Module 6 Films and TV Programmes
一、语基必备知识
(一)重点词汇——分类记忆
Ⅰ.阅读词汇——在不认识的词汇前划√
thriller n. sword n.
drama n. poster n.
comedy n. rooftop n.
occasionally adv. channel n.
drama n. plot n.
setting n. section n.
Ⅱ.核心词汇——写其形
1.character n. 角色;人物
2.masterpiece n. 杰作
3.leap vi. 跳跃;飞跃
4.graceful adj. 优美的;优雅的
Ⅲ.拓展词汇——通其变
1.actress n.女演员→actor n.男演员
2.female adj.女的;女性的→male adj.男的;男性的
3.interest vt.使感兴趣→interesting adj.令人感兴趣的→interested adj.感兴趣的
4.brave adj.勇敢的→bravery n.勇敢
5.move v.移动;感动→moving adj.感人的→moved adj.感动的
6.argue vi.争论→argument n.争论,争吵
7.entertain v.使欢乐,使娱乐→entertaining adj.有趣的;令人愉快的→entertainment n.娱乐,消遣
1.由comedy想到的
①comic adj. 喜剧的
②tragedy n. 悲剧
③tragic adj. 悲剧的
④drama n. 戏剧
⑤dramatic adj. 戏剧的
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2.“有时”词汇全接触
①occasionally adv. 有时;偶尔
②now and then 有时;偶尔
③at times 有时;偶尔
④from time to time 不时;有时
⑤once in a while 有时;间或
3.argue近义词一览
①discuss v. 讨论
②quarrel v. 争吵
③debate v. 辩论
④dispute v. 争论
⑤conflict v. 争论;抵触
(二)重点短语——记牢用活
1.come__out 出现;出版
2.fall__in__love__with 爱上;喜欢(表动作)
3.be__in__love__with 爱上;喜欢(表状态)
4.play__a__part 扮演角色
5.to__one’s__surprise 令某人吃惊的是
6.in__surprise 吃惊地
7.care__about 关心;顾虑;在乎
8.every__now__and__then 有时;偶尔
9.at__the__age__of 在……岁时
1.part短语多棱镜
①play a part 扮演角色
②play an important part in 在……中起重要作用
③take part in 参加
④take an active part in 积极参加
⑤for the most part 多半;在很大程度上
2.to one’s+抽象名词
①to one’s surprise 令某人吃惊的是
②to one’s happiness 令某人高兴的是
③to one’s sorrow 令某人悲伤的是
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④to one’s sadness 令某人难过的是
⑤to one’s excitement 令某人兴奋的是
(三)重点句式——背熟巧用
句型公式
教材原句
句型1:强调句型
Unusually, it__is__the__female__characters__that interest us most.
不同寻常的是,正是女性角色最吸引我们。
句型2:形容词(短语)作状语
Brave,__good__and__strong,__Xiulian is the character we care about most.
我们最关注秀莲这个角色,她勇敢、善良和坚强。
句型3:It is+过去分词+that...
But it__is__generally__agreed,__that he, more than anyone else in the history of films, understands the meaning of the word “entertainment”.
但是,人们普遍认为他比电影史上任何一个人更懂得“娱乐”一词的意义。
二、语境强化训练
Ⅰ.语境填词——根据提示写出该词的适当形式
A.根据汉语提示写出下列单词
1.My heart leaped/leapt(跳跃) with joy when I got your letter.
2.It was brave(勇敢的) of you to speak in front of all those people.
3.It doesn’t interest(使感兴趣) me to know where you live or how much money you have.
4.The actors played out the comedy(喜剧) and the audience applauded.
5.The police have put up posters(海报) around the city with photos of the man they are seeking.
B.根据所给单词写出适当形式
6.Although the main characters(character) in this movie are true to life, they are imaginary.
7.Beethoven composes many musical masterpieces(masterpiece) that give pleasure to a lot of people.
8.This newspaper has six sections(section). Which one do you like best?
9.The plots(plot) of the books written by that writer are always surprising.
10.It has been argued(argue) by some people that gifted children should be
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grouped in special classes.
Ⅱ.语境品词——写出加黑词汇在语境中的意义
1.(2019·天津卷)By opening a novel, I can leave behind my burdens and enter into a wonderful and mysterious world where I am now a new character.角色
2.a.(2019·江苏卷)Whatever your age or interests, Buxton has something to see or do to make your visit truly memorable.兴趣
b.(全国卷Ⅰ)Make decisions in the best interests of their own.利益
3.(2019·天津卷)Occasionally, I would read a novel that was assigned, but I didn’t enjoy this type of reading.偶尔
Ⅲ.选词成篇
come out; play a part of; to one’s surprise; care about; at the age of; every now and then; in surprise; fall in love with
Frances McDormand, who was awarded Academy Award for Best Actress in 2018, showed interest in acting when she was young. 1.To__our__surprise,__she 2.played__a__part__of many different characters and achieved success 3.at__the__age__of 16, thus becoming a famous actress. Her fans were moved by the part she played and 4.fell__in__love__with her. They 5.cared__about everything about her and waited to see her new films.
Ⅳ.完成句子
1.作为青少年,直到我们能够勇敢地面对困难,我们才算足够成熟。
As teenagers,it__is__not__until__we__are__able__to__face__difficulties__bravely__that we are mature enough.
2.又惊又喜,托尼站起来领了奖。
Surprised__and__happy,__Tony stood up and accepted the prize.
3.人们一致认为,交通事故绝大多数是由于驾驶员的疏忽造成的。
It__is__agreed__that traffic accidents are largely due to drivers’ carelessness.
interest vt.使感兴趣 n.兴趣;利益
[基础练习]——单句语法填空
①a.(2019·全国卷Ⅰ)I became interested(interest) in playing football thanks
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to a small accident.
b.(江西卷)—The film is, I have to say, not a bit interesting.
—Why? It’s far more interesting than the films I have ever seen.(interest)
②(广东卷)Interestingly(interesting), our selfimages are often quite different from the images others hold about us.
③(陕西卷)The purpose of this programme is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking.
[能力提升]——一句多译
使我最感兴趣的是文学书籍,尤其是名家的作品。
④What__interests__me__most is literary books, especially those written by famous writers. (interest v.)
⑤What__makes__me__most__interested/What__I__am__most__interested__in is literary books, especially those written by famous writers. (interested adj.)
(1)show/have/take an interest in...
对……有兴趣
develop an interest in... 对……产生兴趣
lose interest in... 失去对……的兴趣
with interest 有兴趣地;津津有
味地
(2)in the interest(s) of 为了……的利益
(3)interested adj. 感兴趣的
be/get interested in 对……感兴趣
(4)interesting adj. 令人感兴趣的;
有趣的
interestingly adv. 有趣的是
[佳句背诵] Choosing friends with common interests is important in building friendship.
选择志趣相投的朋友对建立友谊很重要。 (辽宁卷)
[词块助记]
a conflict of interest(s) 利益冲突
a place of interest 名胜
interest rates 利率
argue vi.争论,辩论,说服;主张;认为
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[基础练习]——单句语法填空
①It’s no use arguing(argue) with him about the question for he won’t change his mind.
②(福建卷)When this happens, the important thing is to try not to let a calm discussion turn into a heated argument(argue).
[能力提升]——完成句子
③我们尝试了很多办法劝说他接受我们的建议,但都是徒然。
We tried many ways to__argue__him__into__accepting__our__advice,__but in vain.
④最终我说服了他戒掉吸烟。
I argued__him__out__of__smoking eventually.
(1)argue with sb.about/over sth. 与某人争论某事
argue sb. into/out of doing sth.
说服某人做
某事/不做某事
argue that...(should) ... 主张/认为……
(2)argument n. 争论;辩论
beyond argument 毋庸置疑
[佳句背诵] I argue that everyone (should) make contributions to protecting the environment.
我认为每个人都应该为保护环境做贡献。
[名师点津] 表示“说服某人做某事”的其他表达形式:persuade sb.to do sth.;persuade/talk sb.into doing sth.;convince sb.to do sth.等。
come out 出版;出现;(消息)传出;结果是;显露,泄露
[一词多义]——写出下列句中come out的含义
①It was several weeks before the truth of the matter came out.显露;泄露
②The news came out that Bob came out first in the 2019 English Speech Contest.(消息)传出__结果是
③The sun came out from behind the clouds late in the afternoon.(太阳等)出来;出现
④(陕西卷)His first novel has received good reviews since it came out last month.出版
come about 发生;产生
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come across 偶遇;被理解
come to 共计,达到;苏醒过来,恢复
come up 走近;升起;长出;被提出
come up with 赶上;提出;想出
[名师点津] come out作“出版”讲时,为不及物动词短语,不能用于被动语态;而publish“出版”为及物动词,可用于被动语态。
(much) to one’s surprise=(much) to the surprise of sb. 令某人(非常)吃惊的是
[基础练习]——单句语法填空
①a.(四川卷)It’s surprising(surprise) that your brother picked up Russian so quickly—he hasn’t lived there very long.
b.I was surprised(surprise) by her words, which made me recognize what silly mistakes I had made.
c.(安徽卷)Surprisingly(surprise), Susan’s beautiful hair reached below her knees and made itself almost an overcoat for her.
②a.(2019·全国卷Ⅰ)To everyone’s surprise, the ball went into the net.
b.“How do you come to know the secret?” asked the man in surprise.
[能力提升]——句式升级
(普通表达)I was very surprised that Mr.Smith wasn’t present at his son’s birthday party.
③(高级表达)What____made__me____greatly__surprised__was__that Mr.Smith wasn’t present at his son’s birthday party.(名词性从句)
④(高级表达)To__my__great__surprise/Much__to__my__surprise,__Mr. Smith wasn’t present at his son’s birthday party.(surprise)
(1)surprise n. 惊讶,意外
v. 使吃惊
in surprise 吃惊地
take sb. by surprise 出乎某人意料
(2)surprising adj. 令人吃惊的
surprised adj. 吃惊的
surprisingly adv. 令人惊讶地
[佳句背诵] If what your friend comes up with surprises you, don’t reject it immediately. Rather, imagine that it is true.
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如果你朋友提出的想法让你吃惊,不要马上拒绝;相反,想象它是真的。(浙江卷)
[名师点津] “to one’s+n.”结构中的名词常常是表示喜、怒、哀、乐等的情感名词,常见的有joy, delight, anger, pleasure, regret, disappointment, sorrow, relief, horror等。
care about 关心;顾虑;在乎
[基础练习]——单句语法填空
①(山东卷)They have taught me to care about other people more than about myself.
②(天津卷)As the average age of the population increases, there are more and more old people to care for.
③(陕西卷)Back from his twoyear medical service in Africa, Dr. Lee was very happy to see his mother taken good care of at home.
④He handled the instrument with care for fear that it should be damaged.
(1)care for 喜欢;照料
(2)take care 当心
take care of 照顾
with care 小心地
[佳句背诵] What I care about is not what he can learn at school but whether he can build up his confidence in the new environment.
我所关心的不是他在学校能学到什么,而是在新的环境中他能否树立起自信心。
形容词(短语)作状语
(教材原句)Brave, good and strong, Xiulian is the character we care about most.
我们最关注秀莲这个角色,她勇敢、善良和坚强。
[基础练习]——单句语法填空
①(浙江卷)Tired(Tire) and short of breath, Andy and Ruby were the first to reach the top of Mount Tai.
②Excited(excite) and happy, we greeted the foreign guests at the entrance of the school.
③(全国卷Ⅰ)It was a real race against time to get the project done. Luckily(lucky), we made it.
[能力提升]——句式升级
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④(普通表达)I was too nervous, and I couldn’t think of anything at the beginning of the exam.
(高级表达)Too__nervous,__I couldn’t think of anything at the beginning of the exam. (形容词短语作状语)
(1)形容词(短语)作状语时,说明句子主语的特点或处于某种状态。形容词(短语)作状语可以表示方式、原因或伴随状况等。
(2)形容词(短语)作状语时,可位于句首、句末或句中,常用逗号与句子其他成分隔开。
[佳句背诵] To our relief, the missing child returned home ten days later, tired but healthy.
令我们欣慰的是,失踪的孩子十天后回到家里,疲惫却健康。
[名师点津] 如果用来修饰句子的谓语动词或整个句子,则应用副词作状语。
维度一 在空白处填入括号内单词的正确形式
1.The book written by Mark Twain is so entertaining(entertain) that he is crazy about it.
2.She always behaves gracefully(graceful) and catches the attention of everyone.
3.(北京卷)After the long journey, the three of them went back home, hungry and tired(tire).
4.Occasionally(occasional) I could see her running in the park but I didn’t say a word with her.
5.I am surprised to__know(know) that I can see such a good Englishspeaker in your small country.
维度二 在空白处填入1个适当的单词
1.—Why does Lily have few friends?
—Because she thinks only of herself and doesn’t care about other people.
2.It is generally agreed that cycling contributes greatly to people’s physical fitness.
3.They had been in love with each other for nearly five years and they got married last week.
4.It was not until Jake came to China as an exchange student this summer that he began to realize the importance of learning Chinese.
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5.The book which came out at the end of last year turned out to be a bestseller.
维度三 派生词练习
1.I’d be interested to hear more about your work and want to know why you have lost interest in it and what else has interested you when your colleagues still think it interesting.(interest)
2.It was brave of her to go into the burning building, so we all respect her for her bravery.(brave)
3.Hearing the moving story, we all felt greatly moved.I’m sure it’ll move more people in the future.(move)
4.At first they argued about how to spend the money, but later they got into a silly argument with each other.(argue)
维度四 完成句子/句型转换
1.他们第一次相见时就彼此相爱了,也就是说,他们相爱八年了。
They fell__in__love__with__each__other the first time they met. That is to say, they have__been__in__love for eight years.
2.是这种无私的爱令我们感动。
It__was__the__selfless__love__that made us moved.
3.People generally agree that the more exercise you do, the healthier lifestyle you will have.
→It__is__generally__agreed that the more exercise you do, the healthier lifestyle you will have.
提能一 语段填空(短文中黑体部分为本模块核心知识点,请补全短文,并背诵体会黑体部分用法)
A new novel 1.will__come(come)out next month, 2.which tells of a love story between Jackson and Sophia. Jackson, the male leading character, 3.fell(fall) in love with Sophia the moment he saw her at a ball. Kind and 4.charming(charm), Sophia could dance gracefully, which 5.interested(interest) him most. They cared about and helped each other. But 6.to our surprise, the novel is not a comedy but a tragedy. Jackson argued with Sophia about incidents 7.occasionally(occasion). At last Sophia was in deep sorrow and left for Rome without 8.saying(say) goodbye. The plot was very complex. There are many 9.entertaining(entertain) sections as well as sad ones. I think it is really 10.a masterpiece and well worth reading.
提能二 话题写作(用本模块词汇、句式和语法知识写满分作文)
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假设你是李华,惊闻武侠小说家金庸先生离世,因喜爱其作品,决定写一篇短文介绍金庸,写作要点如下:
①金庸先生作品的影响;
②金庸先生的小说被改编为电视剧;
③英文版《射雕英雄传》深受外国人喜爱。
1.补全要点句(黑体部分请用本模块所学词汇)
①令我们非常吃惊的是,最有影响力的武侠小说家之一金庸先生因病去世。
Much__to__our__surprise/To__our__great__surprise,__one of the most influential martial art novelists, Jin Yong, passed away because of illness.
②毋庸置疑他创造的武侠人物使无数读者感兴趣。
It__is__beyond__argument__that the martial art characters created by him have__interested__a__great__many__readers.
③一旦你读他的小说,你一定会爱上那个精彩的武侠世界。
Once you read his novels, you will surely fall__in__love__with the wonderful martial art world.
④他所有的武侠小说都改编成了电视剧,很多著名男演员和女演员在其中扮演角色。
All of his novels have been adapted into TV series, and many__famous__actors__and__actresses__play__parts__in__them.
⑤他的小说讲述的武侠故事,不仅令人愉快而且使我们感动。
His novels tell__of martial stories, which are not__only__entertaining__but__also__make__us__moved.
⑥自从他的小说《射雕英雄传》的英文版去年出版以来,很多外国人也爱上了功夫。
Since the English edition of his novel The Legend of the Condor Heroes came__out last year, many foreigners have__been__in__love__with Kung Fu.
2.升级平淡句
⑦用“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句升级句④
All__of__his__novels__have__been__adapted__into__TV__series,__in__which__many__famous__actors__and__actresses__play__parts.
3.衔接成美文
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
One possible version:
Much to our surprise/To our great surprise, one of the most influential martial
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art novelists, Jin Yong, passed away because of illness. It is beyond argument that the martial art characters created by him have interested a great many readers. Once you read his novels, you will surely fall in love with the wonderful martial art world. All of his novels have been adapted into TV series, in which many famous actors and actresses play parts. His novels tell of martial stories, which are not only entertaining but also make us moved.
Since the English edition of his novel The Legend of the Condor Heroes came out last year, many foreigners have been in love with Kung Fu.
(建议用时:40分钟)
Ⅰ.阅读理解
A
(2020·大连高三双基测试)
Lady Gaga’s latest film became an instant hit over the weekend, helping push theaters to an October ticketselling record.
A Star Is Born, actorturneddirector Bradley Cooper’s remake of a Hollywood classic in the late 1930s, went beyond the previous expectations of movie analysts by roughly 30 percent.
The original production is such a great Hollywood myth that it’s no wonder Hollywood keeps telling it. Whatever the era, the director or the headliners, it tells the story of two lovers on dramatically different paths: a famous man who’s racing to the bottom and a woman who’s soaring to the top.
Mr. Cooper does a lot right in this movie A Star Is Born, beginning with the casting of Lady Gaga, whose relaxing, naturalistic performance is the key to the movie’s force.
A postMadonna pop artist was known for her elaborate(精心制作的) make up and costumes, which she adopted no more here.
This unmasking of Lady Gaga makes her character seem genuine or say natural,
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a quality that the movie is in favor of and that serves as a kind of everlasting first principle.
【解题导语】 本文是一篇说明文,主要介绍了《A Star Is Born》这部电影的相关情况。
1.What does the author think of the new movie?
A.Boring. B.Recommendable.
C.Ridiculous. D.Amusing.
B 解析:观点态度题。根据第一段“Lady Gaga’s latest film became an instant hit over the weekend, helping push theaters to an October ticketselling record.”可推知,作者认为这部新电影是值得推荐的。
2.The underlined word “soaring” in the third paragraph probably means “________”.
A.rising B.singing
C.running D.shouting
A 解析:词义猜测题。根据第三段中的“different paths: a famous man who’s racing to the bottom and a woman who’s soaring to the top”可推知,画线词意为“上升”,故选A。
3.What can we learn about the movie?
A.The remakes of the movie adopt different plots.
B.The movie tells the story of two friends on different paths.
C.Natural performance is considered as the only principle in this movie.
D.The movie is more impressive than what movie analysts expected.
D 解析:细节理解题。根据第二段中的“went beyond the previous expectations of movie analysts by roughly 30 percent”可知,这部电影给人的印象比电影分析师预期的要好。
4.What is the best title for the passage?
A.A Hollywood Movie—A Star Is Born
B.Lady Gaga Is on the Edge of Potential Oscar Glory
C.A Latest Film of Lady Gaga Won the Oscar Award
D.The Box Office of Bradley Cooper’s New Movie
A 解析:标题归纳题。根据对全文的整体理解,尤其是第一段“Lady Gaga’s latest film became an instant hit over the weekend, helping push theaters to an October ticketselling record.”可知,这篇文章主要讲述了A Star Is Born这部影片的相关内容,故A项最适合作本文标题。
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B
(2020·成都摸底)Selfdriving cars have been backed by the hope that they will save lives by getting involved in fewer crashes with fewer injuries and deaths than humandriven cars. But so far, most comparisons between human drivers and automated vehicles have been unfair.
Crash statistics for humandriven cars are gathered from all sorts of driving situations, and on all types of roads. However, most of the data on selfdriving cars’ safety have been recorded often in good weather and on highways, where the most important tasks are staying in the car’s own lane and not getting too close to the vehicle ahead. Automated cars are good at those tasks, but so are humans.
It is true that selfdriving cars don’t get tired, angry, frustrated or drunk. But neither can they yet react to uncertain situations with the same skill or anticipation of an attentive human driver. Nor do they possess the foresight to avoid potential perils. They largely drive from moment to moment, rather than think ahead to possible events literally down the road.
To a selfdriving car, a bus full of people might appear quite similar to an uninhabited cornfield. Indeed, deciding what action to take in an emergency is difficult for humans, but drivers have sacrificed themselves for the greater good of others. An automated system’s limited understanding of the world means it will almost never evaluate(评估) a situation the same way a human would. And machines can’t be programmed in advance to handle every imaginable set of events.
Some people may argue that the promise of simply reducing the number of injuries and deaths is enough to support driverless cars. But experience from aviation(航空) shows that as new automated systems are introduced, there is often an increase in the rate of disasters.
Therefore comparisons between humans and automated vehicles have to be performed carefully. To fairly evaluate driverless cars on how well they fulfill their promise of improved safety, it’s important to ensure the data being presented actually provide a true comparison. After all, choosing to replace humans with automation has more effects than simply a oneforone exchange.
【解题导语】 自动驾驶汽车一直被推崇,人们希望这些汽车通过比人类驾驶汽车更少地带来伤亡和撞车来挽救生命,但是目前大多数人类司机和自动化汽车之间的比较是不公平的,我们应该综合考虑各种因素,确保收集的数据的可比较性,从而真实、客观地评价自动驾驶汽车。
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5.What makes the comparison between selfdriving cars and humandriven cars unfair?
A.Selfdriving cars never get tired.
B.Statistics are collected differently.
C.Machines can make decisions faster.
D.Selfdriving cars know the world better.
B 解析:细节理解题。根据第一段最后一句及第二段第一、二句的内容可知,人类驾驶汽车和自动驾驶汽车的碰撞事故的数据收集情况不同,不能公平比较,故选B项。
6.What does the underlined word “perils” in Paragraph 3 most probably mean?
A.Dangers. B.Selfdriving cars.
C.Pedestrians. D.Humandriven cars.
A 解析:词义猜测题。根据下文中的“rather than think ahead to possible events literally down the road”并结合画线词所在句可知,自动驾驶汽车没有预见能力来避免潜在的危险;由此可推知,画线词意为“危险”,故选A项。
7.In which aspect can selfdriving cars beat humandriven cars?
A.Driving steadily.
B.Climbing steep slopes.
C.Evaluating the cost of loss.
D.Making complex decisions.
A 解析:推理判断题。根据第三段第一句“It is true that selfdriving cars don’t get tired, angry, frustrated or drunk.”可推知,在驾驶的稳定性方面,自动驾驶汽车胜过人类驾驶汽车,故选A项。
8.Why does the author write this text?
A.To support humandriven cars.
B.To show his doubt about selfdriving cars.
C.To call for exact evaluation of selfdriving cars.
D.To stress the importance of reducing car accidents.
C 解析:写作意图题。根据最后一段中的“To fairly evaluate driverless cars...actually provide a true comparison.”并结合文章其他内容可知,作者写这篇文章的目的是呼吁人们对自动驾驶汽车做出准确的评价。故选C项。
Ⅱ.读后续写
(2020·山东栖霞二中期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
I was driving to a business appointment and, as usual, I was planning in my mind
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what I was going to say. I came to a very busy crossing where the traffic light had just turned red.“All right,”I thought to myself,“I can beat the next light if I race ahead when the light changed.”
My mind and car were ready to go when suddenly my thought was broken by an unforgettable sight. A young couple,both blind, were walking arminarm across this busy crossing with cars racing by in every direction. The man was holding the hand of a little boy, while the woman was carrying a baby on her chest. Each of them had a white cane(手杖) directing them across the crossing.
I was moved. They were overcoming one of the most terrible disabilities—blindness. Suddenly my thought was interrupted by horror when I saw that the couple was not walking in the crosswalk(斑马线), but was instead walking directly toward the middle of the crossing. Not realizing the danger they were in, they were walking right into the path(路线) of oncoming cars. I was deeply concerned for the family because I didn’t know if the other drivers understood what was happening.
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The couple realized what was happening.________________________________________________________________________
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One possible version:
Paragraph 1:
As I watched, something amazing happened before my eyes. Each car in every direction came to a stop. I hardly heard the noises of hard brakes or the horns. Nobody shouted “Get out of the way!” to them. Everything froze. In that moment, time seemed to stand still for this family. Amazed, I noticed that everyone’s attention was fixed on the couple. Suddenly the driver to my right reacted. Sticking his head out of his car, he shouted to the couple,“To your right. To your right!”Some other people joined him, shouting,“To your right!”
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The couple realized what was happening. So they adjusted their course as they followed the drivers’ instructions. Depending on their canes and the calls from some concerned people, they made it to the other side of the road. As they stepped onto the sidewalk, one thing struck me—they both turned around, gave a deep bow to all of us and then went on their way.
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