专题52提纲类书面表达（三）-2017年高考英语二轮核心考点总动员 7页

专题 52 提纲类书面表达（三）‎ 关键词：提纲类,汉语提示,书面表达 难度系数：✱✱✱✱ 推荐指数：✱✱✱✱✱‎ ‎【基础回顾】]‎ 考点归纳：‎ ‎ 提纲作文是高考英语书面表达的热点题型。命题者通常把提纲作文与其他常用文体形式(如书信、报道、通知、日记等)有机结合在一起进行考查，使该类书面表达试题综合性越来越强。‎ 基础必读：‎ ‎ 高分策略 高考范文中复杂结构的特点：]]‎ ‎1.独立主格结构]‎ With English words getting popular in both media and daily life, a Chinese dictionary has included 239 of them, leaving the public divided into two opposing groups: “For” and “Against.” 【2014·江苏卷】‎ 随着英语词汇在媒体和日常生活中变得越来越普遍，汉语字典收录了239个新英语词汇，致使公众对此产生了赞成和反对的两派。‎ ‎2.分词和从句并用]‎ Given the choice,I would make donations to those who still live under the bottom line of the modern living condition. 【2014·广东卷】‎ 如果有机会，我会捐助那些仍然生活在现代生活底层的人们。‎ I am really proud of this experience, because it helps me realise that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work, it also helps me better understand the proverb "Practice makes perfect".【2013•浙江卷】‎ 我真的以这次经历而感到自豪，因为它不仅帮助我认识到了我们都能通过我们的努力挖掘出我们的潜能并实现我们的目标，它还帮助我更好地理解了“熟能生巧”这个谚语。‎ In our life we may meet many failures, as long as we try our best, there’s no need feeling regret for these failures. 【2013·‎ 湖南卷】在我们的生活中，我们可能会遇到许多失败，只要我们努力了，我们没有必要为那些失败而后悔。]]‎ Generally speaking , we are busy reviewing and preparing for it the moment we enter senior three ,which is considered a vital period . 【2014·四川卷】‎ 一般地说，我们一进入高三就忙于复习和为高考做准备，这被认为是一个关键阶段。‎ ‎3.虚拟语气和从句并用 How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it.【2013·山东卷】‎ 我多么希望我一收到你的邮件就阅读并回复它啊。‎ ‎4.多层从句 ‎1.If we want to improve our study, we should repeat what the teachers taught us again and again, and then we can understand or remember the knowledge which the teachers demand us to master.【2013·四川卷】如果我们想提高我们的学习，我们应该一遍又一遍地重复老师给我们讲的内容，而后我们才能理解或记住老师要求我们掌握的知识。‎ ‎2.I must confess we young generation must realize that our parents care for us as well as hoping to share what we have been doing with them.（confess后整体是一个宾语从句，这个宾语从句中又包含一个that引导的宾语从句，在that引导的宾语从句中又包含what引导的宾语从句）【2013·重庆卷】‎ 我必须坦白地承认，我们年轻人必须意识到我们的父母不仅关心我们而且希望我们和他们分享我们在做的事。‎ ‎【技能方法】‎ 基本解题步骤：‎ ‎①审题：观察判断要写文章的类型和特点；‎ ‎②抓点：要点就是高考评分的给分点或者扣分点。要求能在提纲的提示下用简单词语写出所表达的内容。这样做可以防止要点遗漏或者过分发挥；‎ ‎③定调：即确定体裁与题材，确定格式、人称、时态语态、人称口吻、顺序段落、开头和结尾。然后将要点扩展成句；‎ ‎④成文：连句成文。正确使用过渡词，使行文流畅。并注意段与段的衔接；‎ ‎⑤修改：看看是否有要点遗漏，字数是否符合要求，人称、时态、主谓一致等方面的错误，以便及时修改；‎ ‎⑥誊写：修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在规定的地方。]‎ ‎【基础达标】‎ ‎ 假定你是李华，正在新西兰学习，你计划寒假期间在当地旅行，请写一封e-mail向旅行社询问相关的旅行信息。]‎ 内容应包括：‎ ‎1．旅行信息（如景点等）；]]‎ ‎2．当地特色（如食品等）；‎ ‎3．注意事项。‎ 注意：1．词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3．开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。]‎ Dear Sir or Madam,‎ I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student, studying in New Zealand. I’m writing to _______________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________]‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________]‎ Sincerely yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ One possible version:‎ ‎ Dear Sir or Madam,‎ ‎ I am Li Hua, a Chinese student, studying in New Zealand. I’m writing to ask for information about your agency’s New Zealand’s travel for the winter vacation. ‎ My friend and I plan to travel in the country. Could you tell me the departure time and ‎ traveling routes? As we know, New Zealand is famous for its beautiful scenery and places of interest and I want to know more details about these. Besides, I am also interested in the local food there. How much do I have to pay for the travel? At length, are there other things I should be aware of?]‎ I would be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience.‎ Sincerely Yours,]‎ Li Hua]‎ ‎【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子比如ask for information；As we know, New Zealand is famous for its beautiful scenery and places of interest；At length, are there other things I should be aware of?和 I would be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience. 为文章增色不少。‎ ‎【能力提升】‎ ‎ 【湖北省华中师范大学第一附属中学2017届高三上学期期中考试】书面表达（满分25分）‎ ‎ 你们班计划在下周一下午4:00—5:00在本班教室举行一次题为“I Have a Dream”的英语演讲比赛（English speech contest），假定你是班长李华，请给你们外籍教师Lucy写封书面邀请函，请她担任评委，对演讲作简要点评，并对获奖者颁发证书（certificate）。‎ ‎ 注意：1，词数100左右；2，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。3，开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Lucy,‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Yours ‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear Lucy,‎ ‎ In order to promote students' interest inspeaking English, our class plans to hold an English Speech contest entitiled "I Have a Dream" in our classroom next Monday afternoon. As our foreign English teacher, we all agree you are the right person to be invited to be the judge. The contest is scheduled from 4:00 to 5:00pm, during which time six contestants will compete in turn. At the end of the contest, you will also be invited to make a brief comment on the contestants' performance as well as issue the certificates to the winners. Thank your very much for the favour you'll do to us.‎ ‎ Looking forward to your coming.‎ ‎ Yours ‎ Li Hua ‎【亮点说明】本文是一篇英语要邀请函。内容齐全，语句通顺，结构严谨，使用高级句子。‎ In order to promote students' interest inspeaking English,动词不定式做目的状语；we all agree you are the right person to be invited to be the judge.省略that的宾语从句；The contest is scheduled from 4:00 to 5:00pm, during which time six contestants will compete in turn.被动语态和非限制性定语从句完美结合；另外，As our foreign English teacher, At the end of the contest,的运用为文章增色添彩。‎ 考点：考查话题作文 ‎【终极闯关】]‎ ‎ 假设你是高中生李华，你校校园网招收英文网络编辑（web editor）,请根据以下提示，用英语向外籍主编Chris 申请这一职位。要点包括：‎ 1. 关心时事，对新闻工作感兴趣；‎ 2. 有做校刊记者的工作经历；‎ 3. 擅长英语，曾获校英语写作大赛一等奖。xkb1.com 注意：]‎ 1. 词数不少于100；‎ 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ Dear Chris,‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours, ‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear Chris, I’m writing to apply to be a web editor, which I saw advertised on our school website. I would like to work for you because I care a lot about current affairs and take great interest in journalism. I think I can do the job well due to my language skills. I’m good at English. Once I got the first prize in the English Writing Competition in our school. In addition, I worked as a reporter for our school newspaper last year, which will surely help me do the job better. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hu ‎【亮点说明】 本文是一封求职信，要点齐全，结构合理，文中使用高级句子，which I saw advertised on our school website，这是非限制性的定语从句。运用了原因状语从句，because I care a lot about current affairs and take great interest in journalism。连接词的使用也非常合理，In addition]‎ ‎【名师点睛】‎ 书面表达写作步骤：‎ 书面表达一般分为三个过程：思维、组织、表达。先是思维，审题想清要用的人称、时态及文章结构，把要写的东西在脑中 思考，要对所给材料进行组织，把这些思维作出整理，使其条理、系统化，但这还是较粗糙的，可能还有一些用词不当或语言错误；最后才是表达，把组织过的材料仔细推敲，确定无问题了再落笔成文。在撰写时要注意主谓一 致，时态呼应，用词贴切等。上述三个过程，最难的是第三个过程，需 要我们有较好的语法知识，掌握一定数量的句型，习惯用语，熟练的写作技巧，这样才能写 出通顺生动的文章来。总之，要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧。平时要多分析范文，多读多背诵，学会恰当地引用和培养自己的语感。‎ 考点：应用文写作 ‎