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2019 届二轮复习记叙文写作指导 2 技 巧 点 拨 习 作 点 评 露 一 小 手 2 3 1 技 巧 点 拨 Ⅰ . 写作要点 发言稿一般要有问题的提出、分析、认识自己的设想与构思等。具体地说： 1 ．了解书写格式。 (1) 称呼　 (2) 问候　 (3) 介绍　 (4) 表达心情和谢意　 (5) 介绍演讲的标题　 (6) 演讲的内容　 (7) 再次表示感谢 2 ．注意发言稿的结构。发言稿第一段侧重介绍事情的发生、发展和结局。第二段应紧扣主题表示欢迎、欢送、号召、建议、个人看法等。 3 ．序号的巧妙运用。一些发言稿内容繁多，自己的感受和体会也比较多，我们直接写出问题或自己的想法时，可能会比较零乱，这时可用序号 1 、 2 、 3 等表示，问题讲完，即告结束。 4 ．语言直白简洁。发言稿是直接面向听众的，所以我们在语言的选择上要简短，尽可能多使用简单句，听众一听就能听懂，当然，一些经典的长句我们也可以用在文中。 5 ．观点鲜明，感情真挚。发言稿观点鲜明，显示着说话者对一种理性认识的肯定，也显示着说话者对客观事物见解的透彻程度，能给人以可信任和可靠感，感情真挚才能打动人，引起听众的共鸣。 Ⅱ . 常用句式 1 ． First of all, thank you for giving me this opportunity. 2 ． Many people believe /hold the view/ think that... 3 ． We can make it clear from the above discussion that... 4 ． If you choose me to be chairman of the Student Union, I will... 5 ． It is a great honour for me to stand here and give my speech. 6 ． The topic of my speech today is... 7 ． Thanks for your listening(to my speech) ． 8 ． As far as I'm concerned, it is a good idea to... 习 作 点 评 假设你是李华，福建省某中学高中学生，今年暑假将前往澳大利亚参加主题为 “ WATER FOR LIFE ” 的交流活动。请你以参访代表的身份，根据以下图片提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。 注意： 1. 根据图片的内容适当展开，以使行文连贯； 2 ．开头与结尾已写好，不计入总词数； 3 ．文中不能出现考生的具体信息； 4 ．词数： 120 ～ 150 。 参考词汇：短缺 shortage; 资源 resource Ladies and gentlemen ， Good morning, I'm Li Hua from Fujian, China.It's my great honor to be here to say something about the global water shortage and ways of dealing with it.________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ That's all. Thank you. Ladies and gentlemen ， Good morning, I'm Li Hua from Fujian, China.It's my great honor to be here to say something about the global water shortage and ways of dealing with it. Which we know, the global water shortage is becoming increasing severe mainly due to global warming, environmental pollution and the ever increasing population.【 非限制性定语从句，表示 “ 正如 ……” ，应该用 as ；修饰形容词 severe ，应该使用副词形式 increasingly 。 】Therefore, it's high time we do something about it. 【 在 It's high time 后的从句中动词用过去式 did 。 】 Firstly, an effective way, I think, is reser v e water in a scientific way for future use. 【 此处应该使用动词不定式 to reserve 作表语。 】Secondly, new methods need to _ de v elop to use the existing water resources, for example, turning sea water into fresh water. 【 此处应该使用动名词一般式 developing 或者动词不定式被动式 to be developed 。 】Thirdly, we must stop water pollution by law. Last but not least, it's everyone's responsible to make good use of water, such as recycling and saving water in our daily life. 【It's one's responsibility to do something 表示 “ 做 …… 是某人的职责 ” ，为固定搭配。 】 In conclusion, people around the world should _ a w are _ of the real situation of water shortage, protect the present water resources and explore potential ones scientifically. 【should be aware of 表示 “ 意识到 ” 。在助动词 should 后要加 be 。 】 That's all. Thank you.