2019届二轮复习书面表达慰问信写作指导课件（14张） 14页

2019 届二轮复习慰问信写作指导 文体概述 慰问信是指在同学、亲友考试失利、生病、受伤或遇到火灾、水灾、被盗等不幸事件时，对对方表示慰问的信件。慰问信要写得真诚并注意措辞；要围绕一个中心，鼓励对方并令其得到安慰和鼓舞。内容常包括：对不幸事件表示同情→进行安慰和帮助→鼓励其努力→再次表示同情并希望其早日复原。 常用语块 很抱歉 / 震惊得知 …… _______________________ 2. 听到 …… 我深感难过 _______________________ _______________________________________ 3. 请接受我最深切的慰问 _______________________ 4. 我想送你我最美好的祝愿 _______________________ 5. 我无法相信 …… _______________________ I couldn’t believe that… I was so sorry/shocked to learn of the news that… I am deeply sorry to hear that…/ I just can’t tell you how sorry I am to hear that… Please accept my deepest sympathy… I want to send you my best wishes for… 6. 对 …… 表示同情 _______________________ 7. 我们充满了 …… _______________________ 8. 请转达我对 …… 的同情 _______________________ 9. 我们都希望 …… ________________________ have/show sympathy for… We are filled with… Please convey my sympathy to… We are all hoping… 10. 我相信你会成功 …… ________________________ 11. 出院 ________________________ ________________________________________ 12. 渡过难关 ________________________ go through the difficulty I am sure you will succeed in… leave the hospital / be discharged from the hospital 套用句式 听说火灾毁了你漂亮的住宅，我难过极了。 2. 我们感到很悲痛。 1. I was so sorry to hear of the fire that destroyed your beautiful house. 2. We are filled with deep sorrow. 3. 请转达我向你家人的慰问。 4. 祝你很快康复。 5. 大家都希望你早日归来。 3. Please convey my sympathy to your family. 4. Best wishes for your speedy recovery. 5. We are all hoping you will be back soon. 习作修改 ( 做短文改错，背经典范文 ) Dear John, I am shocking to hear that you have severe flu and now are in hospital. I get this news from your mother and knew you must be absent for half a month at the classes. Do are careful while you are ill. Don’t worry about your lesson and I am willing to help you learn from them when you return. shocked ∧ a know from be lessons We are best friends so I will never allow you to fall behind. You can watch television or listen to radio programs to help pass the time but forget your pains while you recover. I did hope that I can see you soon and bring you any funny cartoons. Yours truly, Li Hua and some do 1. shocking →shocked 主语是人，要用 shocked 。 2. 在 severe flu 前加 a 因为 flu 是可数名词。 3. knew →know 要与并列谓语 get 时态保持一致。 4. at →from 固定搭配 be absent from 意为“缺席”。 5. are →be 祈使句，故要用 be 。 6. lesson →lessons 根据后面的 them 可知要用复数。 7. 去掉 them 前的 from 根据文意可知，此处是指“帮助你学习功课”，而不是“向功课学习”。 8. but →and 此处显然是“顺承”关系，而非“转折”关系。 9. did →do 全文主体时态是一般现在时。 10. any →some 肯定句要用 some 。 课堂练习 据报道， 7 岁的美国女孩 Amy Bruce 得知自己身患肺癌 (lung cancer) 后处于极度的痛苦之中。美国抗癌协会 (ACS) 决定 , 每当 Amy 收到一封慰问信，就给她增加 3 美分的治疗款。 假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给 Amy 写一封慰问信，主要内容包括： 1. 自我简介 2. 得知的情况 3. 表示鼓励并打算为她做什么 4. 祝她早日康复 Dear Amy, I am a student from Xinhua Middle School. I am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that you are so bitter after having a lung cancer. At present, ACS decides that it will give you three cents when you receive a letter. That will offer you so much courage. I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is. You are sure to make it. I will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you, which may help you. Hope they will give you more courage to live on. May you recover soon. Yours, Li Hua 课外作业 假如你是李华，最近收到了你的美国朋友 Jenny 的来信。她在信中说，由于刚进入高中，还不能适应新的环境，不知道如何去结交新朋友，因而情绪低落。请根据以下内容给她回信。 1. 向 Jenny 表示问候和慰问； 2. 针对她的问题提出以下建议： (1) 放学后邀请同学一起参加活动； (2) 你的同学遇到麻烦时，你去帮助他们； (3) 你遇到困难时向同学求助。 注意 ： 1. 词数 100 左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Jenny, I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering the high school. I’d like to talk about it with you. In fact, in your senior high school, your classmates are also new and facing the same problem, so you don’t have to worry too much about it. There is also something that you can do to change this situation. First, try to invite some of your classmates to take part in some activities together after school. This will help you understand each other better than communicating with others. Then, help your classmates when they are in trouble and ask them to help you when you have difficulty. I believe you will make many new friends and you will have a happy school life there. Best wishes LiHua.