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2020-2021学年高三英语书面表达模板《道歉信》

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2020-2021 学年高三英语书面表达模板《道歉信》 写作模板① Dear ________(对象), I am truly sorry that ___________________________________(道歉的原因). The reason is that ______________________________________(介绍原因). Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my appologies and understand my situation. Yours Sincerely, Li Ming 写作模板② Dear ________, I am excessively sorry to say/tell you that ①______________ (直接表达自己不能实现先前的愿望或约定). ②Now, I am writing you this letter of apology to show my deep regret__________ (表达歉意). ③Please accept my sincere apology__________(诚恳希望对方能接受道歉). ④I fear you are displeased at _________(表达出自 己的心情,并请求对方原谅).⑤I hope you will understand me and excuse me for__________(过渡句). ⑥Let me explain(开始介绍道歉的原因). ⑦The reason for my delay/absence was that _________(阐述自己当时的处境和 情况). ⑧I had no way out because ___________ (总结自己道歉的原因). ⑨Therefore it’s not in my power to ___________(希望下次再次实现愿望). ⑩Naturally, I want to suggest ____________. I shall be glad if you will kindly write and tell me when and where you____________(约定下次约会的时间和地点) We may meet again and I hope to see you soon. Sincerely Yours, Li Hua 写好道歉信的关键在于措辞要朴实、委婉,语气要诚恳、真挚,解释要详细明了。例如"I’m excessively sorry"、"sincere apology"、"deep regret"等都是致歉之词,这就恰如其分地表达了写信人的真诚歉意。 道歉信通常包括三部分内容: 1.表示歉意,道歉的原由; 2.出现差错的原因,提出弥补措施; 3.请求原谅。语言要诚挚,解释的理由要真实。 4.补充说明。客套话。 好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解,还会增进彼此的感情。 范例 Dear Mr. Brown, Much to my regret, I was unable to keep my engagement to meet you at the park gate. I fear you are displeased at my failing to keep my promise, but I trust you will forgive me. Let me explain. My mother suddenly fell sick early yesterday morning, and I had to send her to hospital. I shall be glad if you will kindly write and tell me when and where we may meet again. I hope to see you soon. Yours Sincerely, Li Ming 1. 道歉信中开头段常用句式和套话 I am writing this letter to express my regret… 我写这封信是想表达我的遗憾…… I am writing to apologize for… 我写信是为……道歉。 I would like to give you my apology for… 我想……向你道歉。 I am very sorry to say that… 我很抱歉…… I must apologize about (not) doing sth… 对于做了/没做……,我必须道歉。 Please accept my sincere apology for… 请接受我对于......的真诚道歉。 I am writing to say sorry for… 我写信是想对……说抱歉。 I am terribly sorry, but… 我很抱歉,但是…… 2.道歉信中结尾段常用句式和套话 Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. 我对于所造成的任何不便再次道歉。 Please allow me to say sorry again. 请允许我再一次说抱歉。 Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. 希望你们能够接受我的道歉,理解我的处境。 I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies. 我真诚的希望你能够站在我的位置想一想,并且接受我的道歉。 I want to let you know how regretful I am feeling now. 我想让你知道我现在感觉多么的遗憾。 I am sorry that I can’t… but trust that you will be able to understand. 很抱歉我不能……,但我相信,你会理解的。 (2016·新课标卷 III)假定你是李华,与留学生朋友 Bob 约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写 封邮件,内容包括: 1.表示歉意; 2.说明原因; 3.另约时间。 注意: 1.词数 100 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 【思路分析】 题目要求写一封道歉信,李华因不能和 Bob 一起去书店而向 Bob 道歉,文章应使用第一人称和一般现 在时进行写作。写作内容包括:表示歉意;说明原因;另约时间。注意使用连接词,使作文内容连贯。 【范文赏析】 Dear Bob, I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble. Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week. Yours, Li Hua 亮点说明:范文包括了所有要点内容,做到了语意连贯。范文使用了宾语从句 that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon 和 the change will not cause you too much trouble;目的状语从句 so that we’ll have more time to read and select books;条件句 If it’s convenient for you;省略句 If not 等,长短句结合,使内容显 得更加丰富。 【名师点睛】 此作文是常规的书信作文,要求写一封道歉信,是应用文的一种。写作的内容已经给出,表达歉意的 同时,还要与对方另约时间。因此,不仅仅是一封道歉信。写作时应注意涵盖所有要点,还要兼顾上下文 的连贯性。 (2014·北京卷)你给英国朋友 Chris 写一封信,内容包括: 1.你们原计划 7 月份一同去云南旅游; 2.由于脚部受伤,你无法按原计划前往; 3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到 8 月份。 注意: 1.词数不少于 50; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Chris, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Joe 【思路分析】 本题考查学生应用文写作,是一封书信,但开头和签名都已给出,学生只需写出要点即可。书信一般 开头应有寒暄的句子,然后过渡到想要表达的内容。最后要有结束语。本文的得分点分布在五个内容上: 寒暄、三件事和结束语。 【范文赏析】 Dear Chris, How is everything going? I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now because my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned. I’m sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early August? I wish you could understand. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Joe (2014·山东卷)假如你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友 Tom 一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你 暑假里的打算,但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据双下要点给他回封邮件: 1.未及时回信的原因; 2.你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等) 注意: 1. 词数:120-150; 2 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【思路分析】 本题要求写的书面表达为书信类型,而为了考查考生审题能力,命题人并没有把如"感谢"、"道 歉"、"建议"、"申请"等明显的字眼放在题中,而是通过考查学生对题干的审题能力暗示学生此书信 体作文应大体包含道歉和告知两个方面。因此文章的主干部分要先表示歉意、解释原因,后写假期的打算。 从写作要点和得分点来看,考生应在宏观上把握书信体写作的要求,如格式、文体等,写作段落以三 段式为宜,首段体现问候、写信背景等,尾段再次致歉、也可询问 Tom 暑假里的打算,体现书信体的交际 性;而中间段具体交待未及时回信的原因、假期的打算。考生在微观层面上应具体把握写作的内容和语言, 做到句子之间有效的连接,长短句结合,多用 doing 及物做主语,句子加半句原因、结果、目的等具体细节 的解释、利用简单而有效的中文思路扩展英文细节。考生若能在写作部分做到内容充实符合要求、语言精 彩与众不同、结构清晰一目了然,相信这样的文章能让考生获得一个相对满意的成绩。 【经典套路】 第一段:问候+写信背景+写信目的 第二段:"道歉"部分(相当于"写信背景") 第三段:"假期安排"部分 第四段:补充说明+客套话 【范文赏析】 Dear Tom, How is everything going? I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. You know, I’ve been preparing for the final exams these days, so I forgot to write back. In your letter, you asked me for my plans on summer vacation. Now, I am writing to tell you some specific details. Overall, three things will make my summer vacation meaningful. To start with, doing a part-time job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. In addition, it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation, in order to enjoy appealing scenery and make more friends. What is more, doing voluntary work, I think, will make a great contribution to the society, which is able to enrich my life. I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. By the way, what’s your plan to spend your summer vacation? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Writing 1 假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 Mark 希望向你了解国画的有关知识,原定见面时间,因故需要推迟,请给 Mark 写一封邮件,说明情况。要点包括: 1)表示歉意并说明原因; 2)重约见面讨论时间; 3)推荐先参观国画展览。 注意:1)词数 100 左右; 2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Mark, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【写作指导】 本题是一篇英文信件,要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友 Mark 写一封邮件,因故推迟原定见面时间,向其 道歉,写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1)表示歉意并说明原因 ;2)重约见面讨论时间; 3)推荐先参观国画展览。写作时要点要全面包括,不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序,运用合 适的连接词链接全文,同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采,审题时注意时态的选择,描述要 尽量选择简洁的语言,难点在于选择词汇和句型,可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。 【范文】 Dear Mark, I hate to say sorry, but there is a change in my school arrangements. So I am afraid I won’t be able to keep my appointment to discuss traditional Chinese paintings with you. I sincerely apologize to you for any inconvenience caused by the unexpected change. I suggest we put it off from 3 pm this weekend until the same time next Thursday. Will that be fine for you? Good news is that an exhibition of Chinese paintings is to be held this weekend. Works by some nationwide famous painters will be included in the exhibits. A visit there will definitely help better your understanding of the paintings. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【范文亮点】 本篇作文要点齐全,结构完整,条理清晰,应用了较多语法和词汇,熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分,使 得整个文章结构紧凑,很好的完成了写作任务。例如:I hate to say sorry, but there is a change in my school arrangements.运用了并列句;I suggest we put it off from 3 pm this weekend until the same time next Thursday. 运 用了宾语从句;Good news is that an exhibition of Chinese paintings is to be held this weekend.运用了表语从句。 Writing2 为假定你是李华,在你校就读的美国交换生 Jim 邀请你本周六下午参加他的生日聚会,但你因故不能 参加,请你给他写一封电子邮件。内容主要包括: 1)表示歉意; 2)说明原因; 3)表达祝愿。 注意:1)词数 100 左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数) 2)可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 【写作指导】 首先审题,这篇文章要求假设你是李华,在你校就读的美国交换生 Jim 邀请你本周六下午参加他的生日聚 会,但你因故不能参加,请你给他写一封电子邮件。内容主要包括:1)表示歉意;2)说明原因;3)表达 祝愿。其次选用正确的人称和时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用 自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使得文章显得更有档次。 【范文】 Dear Jim, I’m terribly sorry to tell you that I can’t go to your birthday party. My uncle will come to Beijing from America on Saturday afternoon. My parents want me to go to the airport with them to pick him up. So it’s a pity that I can’t have fun with you them. I wish you a happy birthday and hope everything goes well. By the way, I have bought a best-selling novel for you as a birthday gift and I will give it to you next Monday. I think it will be good for your Chinese learning. Best wishes, Li Hua 【范文亮点】 本文运用一定的短语 pick up, have fun with, By the way, be good for 使得文章紧凑,简洁明了;I’m terribly sorry to tell you that I can’t go to your birthday party. I wish you a happy birthday and hope everything goes well. I think it will be good for your Chinese learning.宾语从句;So it’s a pity that I can’t have fun with you them. 主语从句, 使得文章衔接自然,符合逻辑关系。 Writing3 假如你是李华。你的英国笔友 David 下周三将来你所在的城市旅游,但你有事无法去机场接他。请你 给他发一封电子邮件,要点如下: 1. 表示歉意并说明理由; 2. 安排他人接机。 注意:1.词数 100 左右。2. 可适当增加细节,以使得行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已经给出,但不计入 总词数。 Dear David, I’m very happy to know that you are coming to visit my city next Wednesday. ____________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【写作指导】 第 1 步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封信件;假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 David 下周三将来你所在的城市 旅游,但你有事无法去机场接他。请你给他发一封电子邮件,要点如下:1.表示歉意并说明理由;2. 安排 他人接机。人称使用第一、第二人称。时态应为一般现在时、一般将来时。 第 2 步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:can’t meet you at the airport(不能去机场接你),pick up sb. (接某人),recommend(推荐 )等。 第 3 步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第 4 步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过度,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美 观的卷面是非常重要的。 【范文】 Dear David, I am very happy to know that you are coming to visit my city next Wednesday. Having kept in touch with each other by writing for years, I can’t wait to see you. However, I am sorry to tell you that I can’t meet you at the airport that day. My sister fell ill and was taken to the hospital, so I have to take care of her there. But don’t worry. I’ve asked my best friend, Li Lei, to pick you to the booked hotel instead. What’s more I have recommended some places of interest in the attachment, which I think you may be interested in. Of course you can also visit other tourist attractions by yourself. Meanwhile, I call you the moment I am available. I’m expecting your arrival and hope you will enjoy your stay sincerely. Yours, Li Hua 【范文亮点】 范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多的表达方式,如宾语从句 However, I am sorry to tell you that I can’t meet you at the airport that day.;非谓语动词 Having kept in touch with each other by writing for years, I can’t wait to see you.;同位语 I’ve asked my best friend, Li Lei, to pick you to the booked hotel instead.;定语从句 What’s more I have recommended some places of interest in the attachment, which I think you may be interested in.;时间状语从句 Meanwhile, I call you the moment I am available.;全文没有中国式 英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力,另外,过度词及短语 however, so, but, What’s more, of course, meanwhile 的使用,使得文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增添色彩。 Writing4 假如你是红星中学高三学生李华,请你给英国朋友写一封电子邮件,内容包括: (1) 你们原相约 7 月份一同爬长城; (2) 由于你自身某种原因(请说明原因),你无法按照原计划前往; (3) 表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到 8 月份。 注意: 1. 词数不少于 50; 2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Chris, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【写作指导】 本篇书面表达属于应用文中的道歉信的书写,要求考生写一封电子邮件,表达对原计划的改变:和朋友爬 长城,因为个人原因不能去而表示歉意以及询问能否把计划推迟。 第一步:审题 体裁:应用文道歉信;时态:根据提示,时态以一般现在时为主;人称:第一人称;结构: 总分法;内容:1.阐述之前的计划,2. 表达个人无法实现原计划的原因,3.表达歉意及推迟计划。 第二步:列提纲(重点词组) plan to do, cause trouble, put off, hear from 第三步:连词成句 I remember we planned to visit the Great Wall together in July. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble. Can I suggest that we put it off until early August? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. 连词成篇常用的连接词: 1.表原因:because, the reason why… is that… 2.表并列补充关系:What’s more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only … but(also),including 3.表对比转折关系:However, On the contrary,but 4.表因果关系:So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 【范文】 Dear Chris, How is everything going? I remember we planned to visit the Great Wall together in July but now because my left leg was injured, I can not go with you as planned. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble. I’m sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put off until early August? I wish you could understand. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【范文亮点】 范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,结构紧凑,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。 全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中 I remember we planed to visit the Great Wall together in July. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.和 Can I suggest that we put off until early August?运用了宾语从句。另外,文章思路清晰,层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章添彩。 Writing5 假如你是李华,你的美国朋友 Tim 在你的生日晚会上送个你一件礼物,当时你只说了谢谢,但没打开。 现在你意识到自己的做法让美国人觉得不礼貌。请你用英语给他写一封道歉信,要点包括: 1. 表示歉意;2.做出解释;3.做出承诺(多学习等) 注意:1.词数 100 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使得行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____ 【写作指导】 根据提示可知,本篇书面 属于应用文,要求写一封道歉信,时态应为一般现在时态和一般过去时。 第一步:关键如下:1.生日晚会上送了一件礼物,当时只说了谢谢,但没有打开;2.表示歉意;3.做出解释; 4.做出承诺(多学习等)。 第二步:根据关键点确定关键词,如 apologize for my bad manners(为行文不好而道歉),receiving gifts(收获 礼物),thoughtlessness (考虑不周),educate myself(自我学习)等。 第三步:根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。 第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡,使之自然流畅,书写一定要规范清 晰,保持整洁美观的卷面。 本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封信。 第一步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封信件;假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 David 下周三来你所在的城市旅 游,但你有事无法去机场接他。请你给他发一封电子邮件,要点如下:1.表示歉意并说明理由;2.安排他人 接机。人称使用第一、二人称。时态应为一般现在时、一般将来时。 第二步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:can’t meet you at the airport (不能去机场接你),pick you up (接某人),recommend(推荐)等。 第三步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过度,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美 观的卷面是非常重要的。 【范文】 Dear Tim, I’m writing to apologize for my bad manners when receiving your gift at my birthday party. Though I never meant to hurt you, you might have felt uneasy. The fact is that I forgot the differences between Chinese and American cultures when giving and receiving gifts. A Chinese usually does not open a gift in the presence of the giver, while an American tends to open it immediately when he gets it. In fact, I like your gift very much. Please excuse my thoughtlessness. I will educate myself further about American culture and try to prevent something like that from happening again. Yours, Li Hua 【范文亮点】 本篇文章结构清晰,内容完整,过渡衔接严谨自然,符合书信的要求,其中不乏亮点句型。表语从句 的使用: The fact is that I forgot the differences between Chinese and American cultures when giving and receiving gifts. 状语从句的使用 A Chinese usually does not open a gift in the presence of the giver, while an American tends to open it immediately when he gets it. Writing6 假如你是张莹,上周在外教 Mr. John 的口语课上使用手机被老师意外发现,手机没收。请你给外教写 一封道歉信,内容包括以下要点:1.表示歉意;2.解释上课使用手机的原因 3. 提出自己的请求并适当表态。 注意:词数 100 左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】 第一步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封书信,假如你是张莹,上周在 Mr. John 的口语课上使用手机被老师发 现,手机没收。请给外教写一封道歉信。内容包括以下要点:1.表示歉意;2.解释上课使用手机的原因 3. 提 出自己的请求并适当表态。时态应为一般现在时态和一般过去时态。 第二步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:accept 接受,heart-felt 衷心的,apologize 道歉,for no reason 无缘无故,promise 承诺,get in touch with 与……取得联系。 第三步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美 观的卷面是非常重要的。 【范文】 Dear Mr. John, I’m really sorry about my using the mobile phone in your lecture last week. Please accept my heart-felt apology for being so rude. I know any word might sound a made-up excuse. But I didn’t use the mobile phone for no reason. I was trying to apply to some American universities last week and that day. I got an offer and they needed my further information immediately. Therefore, I had no other choice but to try sending them a text message in class and that was exactly what I was doing when you discovered. I promise it will never happen again. But I do need my phone back to get in touch with others. Will you be kind enough to give it back to me? I sincerely hope you can accept my apology and understand my situation. Yours, Zhang Ying 【范文亮点】 作者在范文中使用了较多的高级表达方式,如:I know any word might sound a made-up excuse.宾语从句的运 用;I sincerely hope you can accept my apology and understand my situation.宾语从句的运用。本文内容完整, 语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。此外, 文章思路清晰,层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增添色彩。 Writing7 假如你是学生李华,你从朋友 Mike 处借的一本书不慎遗失。现在,请用英文给他写道歉信, 请求原谅。 注意:1.词数:100 左右。2.信的开头和结束语已经写好,但不计入总词数。 3.提出自己的请求并适当表态。 Dear Mike, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours , Li Hua 【写作指导】 第一步:审题:审题是关键所在,在整个写作过程中起着决定性的作用。 (1)审题要求:弄清“情景”和“要求”两部分构成。“情景”中包括所写材料的目的、对象、时间、 地点、内容等,一般在书面表达题的前半部分。而“要求”一般在书面表达题的后半部分,以“注意”的 形式给出,实际上是对考生提出的要求。因而考生对于题目提供的说明应认真分析、反复推敲,搞清提出 的内容要求,抓住所要表达的信息点。 如本篇作文的情景就是:假设你是李华,你遗失了你英国朋友 Mike 借给你的一本书。要求是:请用英 文给他写道歉信,请求原谅。 (2) 审文体。一般有三大类:记叙文、说明文和应用文。文体不同,格式不同。 (3)审人称:即搞清楚此篇文章是“由谁写给谁的”。而读者对象有时没有明示,要考生自己判断。 比如“假设你是李华”,写作时候即用第一人称“我”,即李华。 (4)审时态:根据情景判断短文需要的主体时态,即搞清楚要写的是什么时候的事,过去就用过去时。 比如日记,是叙述过去发生的事,自然用过去时;通知用将来时。 第二步:抓中心,列要点,写提纲。作文一定要切题,抓衷心,紧扣要点。 第三步:选词组句,连句成篇。在这个环节尽量使用多种句型,选择恰当的连词。 【范文】Dear Mike, I’m sorry to tell you that I’ve lost your book that I borrow from you. Now I’m expressing my deepest apology for my carelessness. Actually, I put the book in my schoolbag after we met at school yesterday. But to my sorrow, it was stolen on my way home. I tried to get it back but failed. How angry and guilty I felt! This morning, I went to buy the same book in some bookstores but it was very expensive. However, I promise that I’ll tighten my belt these days to get you a completely new one by the end of this month. Please forgive me again and my sincere apology. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【范文亮点】本篇作文使用了定语从句:I’m sorry to tell you that I’ve lost your book that I borrow from you.时 间状语从句:I put the book in my schoolbag after we met at school yesterday.并列句:I went to buy the same book in some bookstores but it was very expensive.感叹句:How angry and guilty I felt!并运用了 to my sorrow, tighten my belt 等高级词汇。