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2018届二轮复习 短文改错模拟训练10篇之十六
【1】
Henry, an American, was rescued in the sea by accident. Losing in London and having no money, he was wandering in London streets, hunger. He was spotted by two rich brothers and invited step into a house. Henry was given the envelope with money in it and asked not to open it since two pm. As the envelope in his hand, Henry entered into a restaurant. He ordered some food. After eating , Henry opened the envelope and found it was a million pound bank note. The owner and the waiter were shocking. They couldn’t believe Henry who was in rag could be so rich. The owner thanked Henry for his coming to his little eating place and even asking Henry to forget the meal bill.
答案
Henry, an American, was rescued in the sea by accident. Losing in London and having no
Lost
money, he was wandering in London streets, hunger. He was spotted by two rich brothers
hungry
and invited step into a house. Henry was given the envelope with money in it and asked
加 to an
not to open it since two pm. As the envelope in his hand, Henry entered into a restaurant.
until with /
He ordered some food. After eating , Henry opened the envelope and found it was a
million pound bank note. The owner and the waiter were shocking. They couldn’t believe
shocked
Henry who was in rag could be so rich. The owner thanked Henry for his coming to his
rags
little eating place and even asking Henry to forget the meal bill.
asked
【2】
As is known to us, some students cheat in exams at school. As students, we often take exams at school, sometimes we have many exams that is too difficult for us. In addition, some of us are lazy and don’t work hard on our lessons. So when taken exams, we sometimes cheat in order to get good results to make our parents and teachers pleased.
In my opinion, it was wrong to cheat in exams because it breaks the rules of the schools. Our students should be honesty and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in exams. What’s more, we should improve our method of study and make well preparations for exams. With the saying goes, “Nothing is impossible for a willing heart.
答案
1 sometimes 前加and 2is----- are 3 on---at 4taken---- taking 5 was----- is 6 Our-----We
7 honesty ---- honest 8 method---- methods 9 well—good 10 With---As
【3】
Dear Sam,
It’s a couple of days since I last heard from you. How is everything with you now?
Recently I have been busy with the celebration of the sixteen anniversary of our school. In order to celebrate the specially day, we tried our best to make the whole school take on new look. The campus was decorated with fresh flower, looking really beautiful. Colorful flags and balloons were seen flying high against the blue sky and a red carpet is rolled out for the celebration. On that day, thousands of alumni returned back for the big occasion. We hold a big evening party on the school playground, where everyone had a wonderful time.
Getting preparations for the celebration as a volunteer student, I feel tired and excited. I real take pride in our school. Therefore, I should cherish the opportunity of being able to study here. I hope I can bring some glory to our school on the future.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
Dear Sam,
It’s a couple of days since I last heard from you. How is everything with you now?
Recently I have been busy with the celebration of the sixteen anniversary of our school. In order to celebrate
sixteenth
the specially day, we tried our best to make the whole school take on ∧ new look. The campus was decorated with
special a
fresh flower, looking really beautiful. Colorful flags and balloons were seen flying high against the blue sky and a
flowers
red carpet is rolled out for the celebration. On that day, thousands of alumni returned back for the big occasion. We
was 删除back
hold a big evening party on the school playground, where everyone had a wonderful time.
held
Getting preparations for the celebration as a volunteer student, I feel tired and excited. I real take pride in our
but really
school. Therefore, I should cherish the opportunity of being able to study here. I hope I can bring some glory to our school on the future.
in
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【4】
As teenagers, we should attach great important to reading. Reading can benefit from us teenagers a great deal. Firstly, reading improves our school grades. Secondly, reading helps us expanding our horizons. Thirdly, reading may contribute to finding solutions to their own problems. Finally, reading is a enjoyable experience.
It is strongly suggested that our spare time is made full use of read as
much as possible. We teenagers should stay devoted to read what we are interested in. Besides, we should active participate in some activities that are related to reading, what we can not only get our knowledge enriched but also gain a lot of pleasure.
答案
1. important→importance 2. 去掉from 3. expanding→expand
4. their→our 5. a→an 6. is→be 7. of与read之间加to
8. read→reading 9. active→actively 10. what→where
【5】
One of my friend wrote an article about Chinese children, said that China will become powerful not because of its weapons but because of its children. They received strict education when they are babies. He said he had seen a six-year-old young boy who could do calculations much quickly than himself who was university graduate. It is true what Chinese parents try our best to give the best education to their kids. We have to prepare our kids to it. Some education experts, however, are against raising up super children, arguing that parents should let their children grow free.
答案
One of my friend wrote an article about Chinese children, said that China will
friends saying
become powerful not because of its weapons but because of its children. They received
receive
strict education when they are babies. He said he had seen a six-year-old young boy who
could do calculations much quickly than himself who was ∧ university graduate. It is true
more或加more a
what Chinese parents try our best to give the best education to their kids. We have to prepare
that their
our kids to it. Some education experts, however, are against raising up super children, arguing
for
that parents should let their children grow free.
freely
【6】
Yesterday our club held an English speech contest, which theme is “ Challenge Myself ” . A large number of students attended to the contest and showed their wonderful performances. In the stage, though face great pressure, the speakers bravely overcame it and challenged them to achieve great success. What’s more, they impressed us deep with their unusual confidences and performances.
Through such activity, we know a lot more about our students. But we have gained much, such as self-confidence and honor. Besides,our club was growing stronger.
答案
Yesterday our club held an English speech contest, which theme is “ Challenge Myself ”. A large
whose
number of students attended to the contest and showed their wonderful performances . In the
On
stage, though face great pressure, the speakers bravely overcame it and challenged them to achieve
facing themselves
great success. What’s more, they impressed us deep with their unusual confidences and
deeply confidence
performances.
Through such∧ activity, we know a lot more about our students . But we have gained much,
an And
such as self-confidence and honor. Besides, our club was growing stronger.
is
【7】
It appear that people don't need phone boxes any longer. In a small British village, people decided to turning a red phone box into a library. Now, the phone box is one of the country smallest libraries. About 150 books sit on shelves in a phone box. Villagers there can take whatever they want and leave their own books for exchange. They can use the library around the clock when it's open 365 days a year and 24 hours a day. Since the library opened its bright door, people from all parts of the village paid it a visit. Among it there're senior citizens living in the neighborhood, children getting off school buses and university students are stopping by late at night. It is convenient for them to use such a wonderfully library.
答案
It ① appear/appears that people don't need phone boxes any longer. In a small British village, people decided to② turning/ turn a red phone box into a library. Now, the phone box is one of the③ country/country's smallest libraries. About 150 books sit on shelves in ④a/the phone box. Villagers there can take whatever they want and leave their own books ⑤for/in exchange. They can use the library around the clock⑥ when/because/since/as/for it's open 365 days a year and 24 hours a day. Since the library opened its bright door, people from all parts of the village⑦∧have paid it a visit. Among ⑧it/them/those there're senior
citizens living in the neighborhood, children getting off school buses and university students⑨ are\ stopping by late at night. It is convenient for them to use such a ⑩wonderfully/wonderful library.
【8】
Excuse me. May I have your attention, please? I have a urgent announcement to make.
I am Li Hua, student assistant to president of your school library. In order to provide better service, our library was scheduled to have its Internet system update from June 7 to June 9. For this period, the reading rooms, including the electronic reading ones, will be closed temporary. You will be able to borrow and return back book only on Tuesdays and Fridays. Please pass on the information to the students are not present. I’m terribly sorry for the inconvenience the upgrade will bring you. I would be greatly appreciative whether you could understand and cooperate.
答案
1.urgent 前用 an 72. your —our 73. was—is 74. update—updated
75. For—During/In 76. temporary—temporarily 7. 去掉back
8. informations—information 9. are前用 who/that 或者去掉are 10. whether—if
【9】
Dear Manager,
This is a letter of complaint concerned the actions of one of your online store. Last Sunday, October 29th, I buy a dress from a store on your website. But I was not satisfied with a dress when I received it, so I decided to return it. But the salesman refused my request in a rudely tone. I explained the reason that I wanted to return it, but he said he was busy and didn’t have time to deal it. Now he isn’t replying to us at all.
I feel that the salesman was impolite. I hope that you can look into for the matter. I have bought lots of things on your website and I look forward to a much pleasurable shopping experience next time.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
Dear Manager,
This is a letter of complaint concerned the actions of one of your
online store. Last Sunday, October 29th, I buy a dress from a store on your website. But I was not satisfied with a dress when I received it, so I decided to return it. But the salesman refused my request in a rudely tone. I explained the reason that I wanted to return it, but he said he was busy and didn’t have time to deal it. Now he isn’t replying to us at all.
I feel that the salesman was impolite. I hope that you can look into for the matter. I have bought lots of things on your website and I look forward to a much pleasurable shopping experience next time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【10】
Henry’s job was to examine the cars which crossed to the border. Every day, he would see a man coming toward him, pull a bicycle. When he arrived, Henry used to examine him careful. After that, he would look in each of the man’s pocket. Henry never found something. He was sure that the man was bringing something into the country, he couldn’t imagine how it could be. Then one day, after he examined a man as usual, he says to him, “Today is my last day on duty. Won’t you tell me what you’re bringing?” There had a brief silence. Then the man said quietly,
“Bicycles”.
答案
Henry’s job was to examine the cars which crossed to the border. Every day, he would see a
man coming toward him, pull a bicycle. When he arrived, Henry used to examine him careful.
pulling carefully
After that, he would look in each of the man’s pocket. Henry never found something. He was
pockets anything
sure that the man was bringing something into the country, ∧he couldn’t imagine how it could be.
but what
Then one day, after he examined a man as usual, he says to him, “Today is my last day on duty.
the said
Won’t you tell me what you’re bringing? ” There had a brief silence. Then the man said quietly,
was
“Bicycles”.