【英语】2018届二轮复习短文改错模拟训练10篇之八学案（14页word版） 16页

‎2018届二轮复习 短文改错模拟训练10篇之八 ‎【一】‎ When I was 12, I met Mary. She came to China with her parents, whom taught English in an university. We soon became good friends. She was fluently in Chinese while I had difficulty with my speaking English. In order to help me with my English, we spoke as much English as we can when we were together. Before long, I could speak English well but at the same time I also made great progresses in my written English. Luckily, a year later, she had to return back to her country with her parents. And we have out of touch with each other ever since. How I miss her!‎ 答案 When I was 12, I met Mary. She came to China with her parents, whom taught English in an university. We ‎ ‎ who a soon became good friends. She was fluently in Chinese while I had difficulty with my speaking English. In order to ‎ ‎ fluent spoken help me with my English, we spoke as much English as we can when we were together. Before long, I could speak ‎ ‎ could English well but at the same time I also made great progresses in my written English. Luckily, a year later, she had ‎ ‎ and progress Unluckily to return back to her country with her parents. And we have ∧ out of touch with each other ever since. How I miss ‎ ‎ go或删除back been her!‎ ‎【二】‎ My little cousin is greatly interested on science. And he does some dangerous experiments sometime. Although his parents want to encourage him to be great scientist, at times they ‎ worry about his safety. Last week, when my cousin was doing an experiment, he hurts his ‎ thumb. My aunt felt sadly and wanted him to stop from doing that experiment. However, my ‎ cousin didn’t want to give up. She said, “Many scientists got hurt when they were doing ‎ experiments, so they didn’t give up.” My aunt had to let him finish the experiments and he ‎ finally succeeded in finish it.‎ 答案 My little cousin is greatly interested on science. And he does some dangerous experiments ‎ in sometime. Although his parents want to encourage him to be ∧ great scientist, at times they ‎ sometimes a worry about his safety. Last week, when my cousin was doing an experiment, he hurts his ‎ ‎ hurt thumb. My aunt felt sadly and wanted him to stop from doing that experiment. However, my ‎ ‎ sad cousin didn’t want to give up. She said, “Many scientists got hurt when they were doing ‎ ‎ He experiments, so they didn’t give up.” My aunt had to let him finish the experiments and he ‎ ‎ but (and) experiment finally succeeded in finish it.‎ ‎ finishing ‎【三】‎ My parents were away for a whole week visit my grandparents in a city about 200 kilometres away.I was really exciting at the thought of being at home alone and doing everything by myself.I was watching TV ‎ one night that the screen suddenly went black.I check,finding that there was no electricity.It was too lately at night to do anything, so I went to bed earlier.The next morning,I rang mother and she told me to take the electricity card to the bank and bought some electricity.I did as she told me.When I got back home,I put a card into the meter and the electricity started working again.Although in the night I was a bit worried,especially because there was no electricity,but I was happy that I could solve the problem in the end.‎ 答案 My parents were away for a whole week visit my grandparents in a city about 200 ‎ ‎ visiting kilometres away. I was really exciting at the thought of being at home alone and doing everything ‎ ‎ excited by myself. I was watching TV one night that the screen suddenly went black. I check, finding ‎ when checked that there was no electricity. It was too lately at night to do anything, so I went to bed earlier. The ‎ ‎ late next morning, I rang ∧ mother and she told me to take the electricity card to the bank and ‎ ‎ my ‎ bought some electricity. I did as she told me. When I got back home, I put a card into the meter ‎ ‎ buy the and the electricity started working again. Although in the night I was a bit worried, especially ‎ ‎ during / through because there was no electricity, but I was happy that I could solve the problem in the end.‎ ‎（注：其他3题若这样修改，亦可接受。第71题，在visit前加to；第76题，把mother改为Mother；第80题，把but改为yet。）‎ ‎【四】‎ I am grateful to my English teacher Susan, at whose help I couldn’t have won the first prize in English Talent Competition for high school student last week.‎ I used to be poor in speaking English. I was too shy to speak in class. Since she teaches us last term, she has been encouraging him to overcome fear and speak out in class. Thanks to her, I have made great progresses. Besides, I practiced several times in the front of her. It was her advice which made me a better speaker and full of confidence; besides, I owe my success to her.‎ Susan has set me good example. I am determined to become an English teacher when I grow up.‎ 答案 at 改成without；student改成students；speaking改成spoken；teaches改成taught；him改成me； ‎ progresses改成progress；in the front of去掉the；which 改成that ；besides改成therefore；‎ good前加a.‎ ‎【五】‎ Tom, a famous writer, lives just next door to me. He is always ready to give helping hand to others, and he enjoys great popular in the neighborhood.‎ He often teaches me what to write stories and encourages me about his own experiences. He told to me he was born in a poor family. As a little boy, he has a dream to become a famous writer. He worked hardly and overcame thousands of difficulty. Finally, he entered a university in that he wrote many story books. Up till now, aging only forty, he has been very famous around the country.‎ ‎ ‎ 答案 ‎71. give 后加a 72. popular ------ popularity 73. what------how ‎ ‎74. about------with 75. to 去掉 76. has------had 77. hardly------hard ‎ ‎78. difficulty-------difficulties 79. that------which 80. aging------aged ‎【六】‎ I’d like to share with you my progresses on study in these three years. To be honest, I was not so good at my study when I came to high ‎ school, often feel tired out and at loss. Sometimes, I am even on the point of giving up. Therefore, my change happened when my teachers and my classmates as well as came to encourage me one day in Senior Two. It was their encouragement and my own thinking that resulted in my achievements in study final.‎ Still not a top student although I am now, I have found myself filled with greatly confidence to face any difficulty and challenge. There is no doubt that I am bound to fight with my dream to the end in the coming months！‎ 答案 was finally However a feeling progress I’d like to share with you my progresses on study in these three years. To be honest, I was not so good at my study when I came to high school, often feel tired out and at ∧ loss. Sometime, I am even on the point of giving up. Therefore, my change happened when my teachers and my classmates as well as came to encourage me one day in Senior Two. It was their encouragement and my own thinking that resulted in my achievements in study final.‎ as/though great for Still not a top student although I am now, I have found myself filled with greatly confidence to face any difficulty and challenge. There is no doubt that I am bound to fight with my dream to the end in the coming ‎ months！‎ ‎【七】‎ There is a widespread concern among us students about if an admission fee should be charged for local parks. 60% of us holds the opinion that it’s not proper to do so. A park is supposed to be a place where the public can relax them. Besides, working out in the open air is both physically or mentally beneficial. If an admission fee must be paid by the visitors, it is necessarily to build a gate and surrounding walls. In that case, the park doesn’t look on attractive any more. Therefore, 40% of my classmates do not share same opinion. They say the money from all the ticket can be used for paying the gardeners and make some repairs. ‎ 答案 There is a widespread concern among us students about if an admission fee should be charged ‎ whether for local parks. 60% of us holds the opinion that it’s not proper to do so. A park is supposed to be ‎ hold a place where the public can relax them. Besides, working out in the open air is both physically or ‎ ‎ themselves and mentally beneficial. If an admission fee must be paid by the visitors, it is necessarily to build a gate ‎ ‎ necessary and surrounding walls. In that case, the park doesn’t look on attractive any more. Therefore, 40% ‎ ‎ However of my classmates do not share ∧ same opinion. They say the money from all the ticket can be ‎ ‎ the tickets used for paying the gardeners and make some repairs. ‎ ‎ making ‎【八】‎ ‎ One day on my way to school, I went to buy the pancake in a food store, leave my bag on the table while waiting. With the pancake ready, and I paid for it, took “my bag” on the table, and hurriedly headed to school.‎ ‎ Seating in the classroom, I was about to take my books out while suddenly I became frozen. It was not my bag! I took the bag for mistake! What surprised me most was there was a large sum of money in it. Calming me down, I turned to the teacher for help.‎ ‎ At that time, I come to understand the true meaning of being honestly.‎ 答案 One day on my way to school, I went to buy the pancake in a food store, leave my bag on the table while ‎ ‎ a leaving waiting. With the pancake ready, and I paid for it, took “my bag” on the table, and hurriedly headed to school.‎ ‎ ﹨‎ Seating in the classroom, I was about to take my books out while suddenly I became frozen. It was not my bag! I ‎ ‎ Seated/Sitting when took the bag for mistake! What surprised me most was ∧there was a large sum of money in it. Calming me down, I ‎ ‎ by that myself或﹨‎ turned to the teacher for help.‎ ‎ ‎ At that time, I come to understand the true meaning of being honestly.‎ ‎ came honest ‎【九】‎ ‎ One afternoon, my father and I walk in the park near our home. We talked with some social problems. Sudden, my father saw a wallet on the ground. We picked it up and found there was much money in. My father told me that the one which lost the wallet must be worried. So we stood there or waited for the owner of the wallet to come back. About ten minute later, an old man walked by, he looked worrying and looked for things here and there.‎ My father asked if he had lost a wallet and at the last we made sure the wallet was his. All the old man and we were very happy that afternoon.‎ 答案 ‎【十】‎ One day, I got up late. While I was busy gather my books, Father came in with a ‎ glass of milk for me to drink . I was in such a hurry that I paid no attention to if the ‎ milk was hot or not. I drink mouthful of it. The milk was too hot that my tongues ‎ hurt. Father turned around but went back to the kitchen in a hurry without an apology.‎ I was very angry about Father. When I went to the kitchen to get my breakfast, ‎ I was astonished at which I saw. Father was cooling the milk by pouring it from one ‎ glass to the other again and again. With tears in my eyes, I very sorry.‎ 答案 One day, I got up late. While I was busy my books, Father came in with a ‎ glass of milk for me to drink . I was in such a hurry that I paid no attention to the ‎ milk was hot or not. I drank mouthful of it. The milk was hot that my ‎ hurt. Father turned around went back to the kitchen in a hurry ‎ without an apology.‎ I was very angry Father. When I went to the kitchen to get my breakfast, ‎ I was astonished at I saw. Father was cooling the milk by pouring it from one ‎ glass to the other again and again. With tears in my eyes, I was very sorry.‎