2018届二轮复习写作专题：慰问信课件（17张） 17页

2018届 二轮复习 写作专题：慰问信 文体概述 慰问信是指在同学、亲友考试失利、生病、受伤或遇到火灾、水灾、被盗等不幸事件时，对对方表示慰问的信件。慰问信要写得真诚并注意措辞；要围绕一个中心，鼓励对方并令其得到安慰和鼓舞。内容常包括：对不幸事件表示同情 → 进行安慰和帮助 → 鼓励其努力 → 再次表示同情并希望其早日复原。 常用语块 很抱歉 / 震惊得知 …… _______________________ 2. 听到 …… 我深感难过 _______________________ _______________________________________ 3. 请接受我最深切的慰问 _______________________ 4. 我想送你我最美好的祝愿 _______________________ 5. 我无法相信 …… _______________________ I couldn’t believe that… I was so sorry/shocked to learn of the news that… I am deeply sorry to hear that…/ I just can’t tell you how sorry I am to hear that… Please accept my deepest sympathy… I want to send you my best wishes for… 6. 对 …… 表示同情 _______________________ 7. 我们充满了 …… _______________________ 8. 请转达我对 …… 的同情 _______________________ 9. 最好的祝愿 …… _______________________ 10. 我们都希望 …… ________________________ have/show sympathy for… We are filled with… Please convey my sympathy to… Best wishes for… We are all hoping… 11. 我相信你会成功 …… ________________________ 12. 取得完全康复 ________________________ 13. 出院 ________________________ ________________________________________ 14. 我祝愿你快速康复 ________________________ 15. 渡过难关 ________________________ go through the difficulty I am sure you will succeed in… make a full recovery leave the hospital / be discharged from the hospital I wish you swift/quick/speedy recovery 套用句式 听说火灾毁了你漂亮的住宅，我难过极了。 2. 我们感到很悲痛。 1. I was so sorry to hear of the fire that destroyed your beautiful house. 2. We are filled with deep sorrow. 3. 请转达我向你家人的慰问。 4. 祝你很快康复。 5. 大家都希望你早日归来。 3. Please convey my sympathy to your family. 4. Best wishes for your speedy recovery. 5. We are all hoping you will be back soon. 习作修改 ( 做短文改错，背经典范文 ) Dear John, I am shocking to hear that you have severe flu and now are in hospital. I get this news from your mother and knew you must be absent for half a month at the classes. Do are careful while you are ill. Don’t worry about your lesson and I am willing to help you learn from them when you return. shocked ∧ a know from be lessons We are best friends so I will never allow you to fall behind. You can watch television or listen to radio programs to help pass the time but forget your pains while you recover. I did hope that I can see you soon and bring you any funny cartoons. Yours truly, Li Hua and some do 1. shocking →shocked 主语是人，要用 shocked 。 2. 在 severe flu 前加 a 因为 flu 是可数名词。 3. knew →know 要与并列谓语 get 时态保持一致。 4. at →from 固定搭配 be absent from 意为“缺席”。 5. are →be 祈使句，故要用 be 。 6. lesson →lessons 根据后面的 them 可知要用复数。 7. 去掉 them 前的 from 根据文意可知，此处是指“帮助你学习功课”，而不是“向功课学习”。 8. but →and 此处显然是“顺承”关系，而非“转折”关系。 9. did →do 全文主体时态是一般现在时。 10. any →some 肯定句要用 some 。 课堂练习 假定你是李华，你的同班同学王刚的家乡 10 月 4 日遭受台风“彩虹 (Typhoon Mujigae )” 袭击，洪水毁坏了家园，你作为班长给正在抗洪的他写一封慰问信，要点如下： 1. 对该同学表示关心。 2. 向其提供一些帮助，如捐助和补习。 3. 表达希望和对其重建家园的信心。 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Wang Gang, We’re so sorry to hear that a horrible and severe Typhoon Mujigae hit your hometown and your house is in ruins . We ’re filled with deep sorrow. Please convey my sympathy to your family. Thinking about your present situation, we cannot wait a minute to make every bit of our effort to help you. I, as a monitor, on behalf of our class, express our most sincere pity and care for you. Besides, we make a donation of some money, expecting that it can help you go through the difficulty . We believe that with the help of so many kind people, a better house can be rebuilt. Finally, we’re all hoping you’ll be back soon and we will make up the lessons for you. Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 课外作业 假定你是李华，你的好友李明参加了今年的中国好声音 (The Voice of China) 比赛，没有进入决赛，感到很伤心。请你给他写一封慰问信，要点如下： 1. 表示难过和理解。 2. 失败原因不在于他，而是另有别的缘故。 3. 勉励他不要灰心，来年再战必能成功。 注意 ： 1. 词数 100 左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Li Ming, I am deeply sad to hear that you could not enter the finals of The Voice of China of this year. I quite understand how you feel now. You have been doing well and your failure is not your own fault , I am sure. However, as we know, failure is the mother of success . I do hope you won’t lose heart and will get ready to try again. Still you have many more chances to try for you are so young. Fate( 命运 ) only can be changed by working hard, so if you go on practising singing , I am sure you will succeed next year. Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Li Hua