2020届英语二轮复习600分冲刺：第1部分专题5书面表达第2讲书信邮件最常考目的明确会套语课件 40页

题型突破 · 专项提升 第一部分 专题五　书面表达 第 2 讲　书信邮件最常考，目的明确会套语 1 悟真题、取其精华 2 随堂练、即时巩固 3 层级练、素能强化 悟真题、取其精华 (2019 · 全国卷 Ⅰ) 假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括： 1 ．写信目的； 2 ．个人优势； 3 ．能做的事情。 注意： 1 ．词数 100 左右； 2 ．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3 ．结束语已为你写好。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours ， Li Hua 满分作文第一步　认真审题　谋篇布局 体裁 话题 人称 时态 要点 申请信 申请去伦敦的中国画展做志愿者 第一人称、第二人称 一般现在时 ① 写信背景目的。 ② 陈述自己优势和自己能做的事情。 ③ 希望申请被批准。 满分作文第二步　斟酌词句　设计亮点 1 ． 知道下个月将在美术馆举办中国画展览，我写信申请充当志愿者。 高级句式 ( 非谓语动词作状语、被动语态 ) _________________________________________________________ at the gallery next month ， I'm writing to apply for the chance to be a volunteer. 2 ．我英语说得很流利，和游客交流毫无困难。 高级句式 ( 非限制性定语从句 ) I speak English very fluently ， ______________________________________ ____________________________. Knowing an exhibition of Chinese painting will be held which allows me to communicate with visitors without difficulty 3 ．如果被录取，我能介绍中国绘画技巧给游客，从而帮助他们更多地了解中国文化。 高级句式 ( 状语从句的省略，非限制性定语从句 ) ______________ ， I can introduce Chinese painting skills to visitors ， ______________________________________________________. 满分作文第三步　巧用过渡　美化成文 If accepted which can help them know more about Chinese culture 【 范文赏读 】 Dear Sir/Madam ， My name is Li Hua.I'm a Chinese student who is taking a summer course in London now.I'm glad to learn that your gallery will hold a Chinese painting exhibition.I would like to do some voluntary work for the exhibition.So I am writing this letter asking to be a volunteer. I am good at English and familiar with Chinese paintings.I would like to volunteer to help visitors ， introduce Chinese paintings ， spread Chinese culture ， and strengthen world cultural exchanges.My aim is to let China go to the world and let the world understand China.I would appreciate it if you could agree to my request. Yours ， Li Hua 9 组不可不记的书信类万用句式 1 ． 道歉信 (1) 吸引阅卷人开头句 ① I'm writing to apologize for.../I am writing to say sorry for... 我写这封信是因 …… 道歉。 ② I am writing to express/convey my heartfelt apology to you. 我写信向你表达真切的歉意。 名 师 点 津 (2) 吸引阅卷人篇中句 ③ I am sorry for my not being able to attend your party due to the fact that... 我非常抱歉不能参加晚会是因为 …… ④The reason why I fail to show up is that I have something urgent to attend to. 我未能出现的原因是我有急事要处理。 (2) 吸引阅卷人结尾句 ⑤ I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apologies. 我真心希望你能理解我的处境 / 设身处地地为我考虑，并接受我的道歉。 ⑥ Once again ， I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused. 对于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。 2 ．求助信 (1) 吸引阅卷人开头句 ① I'm writing to you to ask whether you could do me a favor. 我写信是想问您能否帮助我。 ② I'm sorry to bother you ， but I have some difficulties here and I need your help. 很抱歉打扰您，但我有些困难需要得到您的帮助。 ③ I have some difficulty in doing...which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help. 我在做 …… 方面有困难，这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向您求助。 (2) 吸引阅卷人篇中句 ④ I can't concentrate on my lessons these days ， and I failed in the last exam ， which worries me a lot. 这些日子我不能专心学习，上次考试我没有及格，这使我很着急。 ⑤ Facing/Faced with so many difficulties ， I have to turn to you for help. 面对如此多的问题，我不得不向您求助。 (3) 吸引阅卷人结尾句 ⑥ I will be very grateful if you could help me.../I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor and... 如果您能帮助我 …… 我会非常感激。 ⑦ I'd appreciate it if you could take my request into consideration/account. 如果您能考虑我的请求，我将不胜感激。 3 ．感谢信 (1) 吸引阅卷人开头句 ① I'm extremely grateful/thankful to you for your unselfish assistance during... 感谢你在 …… 期间给予我无私的帮助。 ② I'm writing to convey /express my gratitude for your kind/ generous help during... 我写信感谢您在 …… 期间对我友好 / 慷慨的帮助。 ③ I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance. 我想，借此机会特别感谢您给予我们及时的帮助和支持感谢。 (2) 吸引阅卷人篇中句 ④ Many thanks for all the things you have done in helping us to... 非常感谢您为帮助我们 …… 所做的一切。 ⑤ Thanks to your generous /selfless/ kind help ， without which I wouldn't have made such great progress. 多亏你慷慨的 / 无私的 / 友好的帮助，没有你的帮助，我就不会取得这么大的进步。 (3) 吸引阅卷人结尾句 ⑥ It was kind and generous of you to do this for me ， and I appreciate it more than I can say. 你对我如此慷慨，我真是感激不尽。 ⑦ I wish there were a better word than “ thanks ” to express my appreciation for your generous help. 任何语言都不能表达我的真挚谢意。 ⑧ I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by... 如果我有机会通过 …… 报答你的好意，我会非常高兴。 4 ．建议信 (1) 吸引阅卷人开头句 ① I have learned that you have some trouble in...and I would like to give/offer you the following suggestions. 我知道你在 …… 方面有困难，因此我想给你提如下一些建议。 ② You've asked me for advice with regard to /regarding...and I'll try to make some useful/ helpful/practical suggestions here. 关于 …… 你向我征求建议，在此，我尽量提出一些有用的 / 有帮助的 / 实用的建议。 ③When it comes to /As for... ， the following are my suggestions./ My suggestions are as follows. 当涉及 / 关于 …… ，我的建议如下。 ④ I'm writing to give you some suggestions/give you a hand. 我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议 / 帮助。 (2) 吸引阅卷人篇中句 ⑤ In my opinion /As far as I'm concerned/ Personally ， it would be wise to take the following action. 在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。 ⑥When it comes to /As for... ， I would like to suggest/ advise/recommend you should... 当涉及 / 关于 …… ，我建议你应该 …… ⑦I think it would be of great benefit/very beneficial if you... 我认为如果 …… ，将会受益。 ⑧ Doing...is a good /great/ better choice. 做 …… 是一个好的 / 棒的 / 更好的选择。 (3) 吸引阅卷人结尾句 ⑨ I will be glad if you will take my advice/suggestions into consideration. 如果你能考虑我的建议我将非常高兴。 ⑩ I hope you will find my suggestions /advice helpful/ useful /practical/ beneficial. 我希望你认为我的建议有帮助 / 有用 / 实用 / 有益。 5 ．邀请信 (1) 吸引阅卷人开头句 ① It's my pleasure/a great honour for me to invite you to join us. 非常荣幸地邀请你加入我们。 ② I wonder if I/we have the honor to invite you to the party. 我想知道我 / 我们是否能有幸邀请你参加派对。 ③ I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to ... 我想邀请您一起去参观 …… (2) 吸引阅卷人篇中句 ④ We are having/planning...On...(date)and we feel it would be a great idea if you can join us. 我们定于 …… ( 日期 ) …… ( 活动 ) ，如果你能来参加就太好了。 ⑤ The following are some details about... /Here are some details about.../ Some details about...are as follows. …… 的细节如下。 ⑥ To begin with ， we will...Besides ， there will be a number of/various activities such as...which will... 首先，我们将 …… ，此外，将会有许多活动，例如 …… 这将 …… (3) 吸引阅卷人结尾句 ⑦ I do hope you will accept our/my invitation if it is convenient to you. 我真心希望你方便的话能接受我们 / 我的邀请。 ⑧ We /I would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your early/ earliest convenience. 如果你能尽早在你方便时确认参加，我们 / 我将不胜感激。 6 ．咨询信 (1) 吸引阅卷人开头句 ① I have seen your advertisement and I'd like to know something more about your six － week English course. 我看了你们的广告，我想更多地了解 …… ②I ’ m writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding/concerning... 我写信想看看你是否能提供一些关于 …… 的具体信息。 ③ I am...I wonder if you could provide some specific information about... 我是 …… 我想知道你是否能提供一些关于 …… 的具体信息。 ④I wonder /am wondering if you could/ would let me know something about... 不知道你是否能够告知有关 …… 的情况。 (2) 吸引阅卷人篇中句 ⑤ I would like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. 我想知道需要为这门课程支付多少钱并且是否包含食宿的费用。是否 …… ⑥Another point I am not certain about is... 我还不确定的另外一点是 …… (3) 吸引阅卷人结尾句 ⑦ Could you be so kind as to send me some...on the above mentioned aspects? 能否针对上述问题寄些相关的 …… 给我？ ⑧ Thank you for your kindness ， and your timely attention to this letter will be highly appreciated. 谢谢你的善意，对于你对这封信的及时关注我将不胜感激。 7 ．活动介绍信 (1) 吸引阅卷人开头句 ① I feel delighted that you are so interested in...( 活动 ) ， so I'm writing to give you a brief introduction of it. 我很高兴你对 …… 很感兴趣，所以我写信向你简要介绍一下它的情况。 ② I feel greatly honored to be asked to contact you ， informing you of our arrangements. 我感到很荣幸受委托与您联系，告知您我们的安排。 ③ In reply to your letter about the activity ， I would like to inform you of some details about it. 你来信中提到了活动，我想告知你该活动的一些细节。 (2) 吸引阅卷人篇中句 ④ Aimed at promoting /improving/ providing... ， the activity is to be held/was held...( 时间 ) ． 致力于促进 / 改善 / 提供 …… ，活动将于 / 于 …… ( 时间 ) 举行。 ⑤ The...( 活动 )will be scheduled to start on...( 具体日期 ) ． 活动安排在 …… ( 具体日期 ) 开始。 (3) 吸引阅卷人结尾句 ⑥ Not only does the activity broaden my horizons but also inspires me to work harder. 活动不仅让我大开眼界而且激励我更加努力。 ⑦ Through the activity ， we've realized the importance of... 通过活动，我们意识到 …… 的重要性。 ⑧ The activity offered us a chance to...and helped us learn... 活动给我们提供了一个 …… 的机会，并帮助我们学会 …… 8 ．投诉信 (1) 吸引阅卷人开头句 ① I'm writing to make a complaint about your standard service. 我写信是为了投诉 …… 。 ② I'm...a customer who bought...from your website several days ago.I am writing to you to complain about... 我是 …… 你们的一位顾客，几天前我从你们的网站上购买了 …… 我写信向你投诉 …… ③I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with/at your unfriendly attitude to customers. 我写信表达我对你们对顾客不友好的态度的不满。 (2) 吸引阅卷人篇中句 ④ To improve the situation ， it is advisable for you to take the following measures. 为了改进这种情况，建议你采取以下措施。 ⑤ I do hope that someone will take effective measures to deal with this matter. 我真的希望有人能采取有效措施解决这个问题。 ⑥ I sincerely hope you can better your service and that mistake won't arise again in the future. 我真诚希望你能改进你们的服务并且此类错误将来不会再出现。 (3) 吸引阅卷人结尾句 ⑦ I would appreciate it if you could give due attention to this matter. 如果你能对此事给予足够的重视，我将非常感谢。 ⑧ I am really annoyed about it.I trust/have great faith that you will take my complaints seriously. 我对这件事真的很恼火。我相信你会认真对待我的投诉。 9 ．求职 / 申请信 (1) 吸引阅卷人开头句 ① Learning from...that you are looking for a(n)... ， I would like to apply for the position. 从 …… 那儿得知您需要一名 …… ，我想申请这个职位。 ② I saw your advertisement on the Internet/in the newspaper and I show great interest in... 我看见你们在网上 / 报纸上登的广告而且我对 …… 极感兴趣。 ③ I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be...The following are my advantages. 我写信申请 …… 的宝贵机会。以下是我的优势。 (2) 吸引阅卷人篇中句 ④ I have teamwork spirit and can get on well with other people. 我有团队精神，善于和别人相处。 ⑤ Not only am I good at...but also I am experienced in... 我不仅擅长 …… 而且在 …… 方面有经验。 ⑥ I have been working in...since... ， and have therefore gained rich knowledge and experience in this field. 自从 …… 后，我一直从事 …… ，因此获得了与这个领域相关的知识和经验。 (3) 吸引阅卷人结尾句 ⑦ I am sure I will do it well if you give me the chance to be a member of your company. 如果您给我一个机会成为公司的一员的话，我相信自己会做得很好。 ⑧ I would greatly appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. 如果你能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。 随堂练、即时巩固 层级练、素能强化