【英语】2018届二轮复习短文改错模拟训练10篇之四学案（8页word版） 11页

‎2018届二轮复习 短文改错模拟训练10篇之四 ‎【1】‎ Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in a ordinary school.Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorlyequipped classroom，I found the teachers patient.Besides，I enjoyed the friend atmosphere in class.I decided to make the best it.I worked hard and get along well with my teachers and classmate.Whenever I had difficulties，you were always available.Soon，I became one of the most best students in my class.‎ My experience tells me that it’s not what you are given and how you make use of it which determines who you are.‎ 答案　‎ Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in ordinary school. as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorlyequipped classroom，I found the teachers patient.Besides，I enjoyed the atmosphere in class.I decided to make the best it.I worked hard and along well with my teachers and .Whenever I had difficulties， were always available.Soon，I became one of the most best students in my class.‎ My experience tells me that it’s not what you are given how you make use of it determines who you are.‎ ‎28．答案　a→an 解析　ordinary是以元音音素开头的单词，要用不定冠词an修饰，故把a改为an。‎ ‎29．答案　Disappointing→Disappointed 解析　ed形容词修饰人，表示“人感到……的”，ing形容词修饰物，表示“令人……的”，此处修饰人，故把Disappointing改为Disappointed。‎ ‎30．答案　friend→friendly 解析　friend是名词，friendly是形容词，表示“友好的”‎ ‎，此处修饰名词应该用形容词，故把friend改为friendly。‎ ‎31．答案　it前加of 解析　make the best of是固定搭配，表示“充分利用”，故在it前面加of ‎32．答案　get→got 解析　由前面的worked可知，此处应该用一般过去时，故把get改为got。‎ ‎33．答案　classmate→classmates 解析　classmate是可数名词，此处泛指同学，应该用复数形式，故把classmate改为classmates。‎ ‎34．答案　you→they 解析　此处指代前面提到的老师和同学，在句中作主语，故把you改为they。‎ ‎35．答案　删除most 解析　good的最高级是best，故删除most。‎ ‎36．答案　and→but 解析　根据语意可知前后是转折关系，故把and改为but。‎ ‎37．答案　which→that 解析　此处为强调句型，其结构为：it is＋被强调部分＋that＋其余部分，故把which改为that。‎ ‎【2】‎ ‎  The first day I went to school, I climb nervously onto the school bus. It was full of noisy child shouting and laughing excited. Then I found out a place next to a quiet girl with long hair and big eyes. We were both very shy, but we didn't talk much on the way to school, although we smiled with each other. In the followed days, we got to know each other better, and became good friends. Now when either of them has ‎ a problem, the other is always ready to helping. We have so much in common that we spend most our free time together.‎ 参考答案 ‎71. ... I climb nervously ...           climb → climbed ‎72. ... noisy child ...                   child → children ‎73. ... laughing excited.              excited → excitedly ‎74. ... I found out ...                    去掉out ‎75. ... but we didn't ...                 but → so ‎76. ... with each other.                with → at ‎77. ... the followed days ...          followed → following ‎78. ... either of them ...                them → us ‎79. ... ready to helping.                helping → help ‎80. ... most our free ...                 most后加of ‎【3】‎ It's hard to make friends if you stayed at home alone all the time. Instead, you should get out of the house and does things that will put you touch with others. Joining a club or play a sport. Go to meetings of different group in the neighborhood. It's a lot easy to make friends when you have similarly interests. Plan things to talk about with others people. Find out that what's in the newspaper, listen to the top CDs, and get to know something interesting about my favorite TV or movie star.‎ 短文改错参考答案：‎ ‎71. ... stayed at home ...           stayed → stay ‎72. ... and does things ...           does → do ‎73. ... put you touch ...             touch前加in ‎74. Joining a club ...                  Joining → Join ‎75. ... of different group ...         group → groups ‎76. ... a lot easy ...                  easy → easier ‎77. ... similarly interests.           similarly → similar ‎78. ... with others people.          others → other或去掉people ‎79. Find out that ...                    去掉that ‎80. ... my favorite TV ...            my → your ‎【4】‎ Last week, I went out with my family for the meal in a restaurant. The food is not very good though. For my first course, I chose a dish calling “Cook's special”, turned out to be a kind of pizza. Generally, I enjoyed fast food, and this meal was quite disappointed because it wasn't very tasty. The rest of my families didn't enjoy their food very much either. Personal, I think we would have enjoyed us more if we'd cooked a meal at home. After all, we always have had plenty of food in the fridge.‎ 短文改错答案：‎ ‎71. ... for the meal ...                the → a ‎72. ... food is not ...                  is → was ‎73. ... a dish calling ...             calling → called ‎74. ... turned out to ...              turned前加which ‎75. ... and this meal ...             and → but ‎76. ... was quite disappointed ...           disappointed → disappointing ‎77. ... my families didn't ...                   families → family ‎78. Personal, I think ...                        Personal → Personally ‎79. ... enjoyed us more ...                   us → ourselves ‎80. ... have had plenty ...                     去掉had ‎【5】‎ The first time I went to the zoo was several years ago, with parents. Yesterday I went to the zoo with some classmates. Arriving here, we got a guidebook and started walking round a zoo. We all got pretty exciting about visiting the animals. But something in their eyes made me to think they might enjoy live in the wild rather than be kept in a cage. One classmate might have guessed what had come in my mind, as he tells me at least in this way we had a good chance to know more about the animals. I don't know. Maybe some days there will have a better way to see and study them.‎ 短文改错答案：‎ ‎71. ... with parents.                      parents前加my ‎72. Arriving here ...                     here → there ‎73. ... round a zoo.                      a → the ‎74. ... pretty exciting about ...      exciting → excited ‎75. ... made me to think ...          去掉to ‎76. ... enjoy live ...                       live → living ‎77. ... come in my mind ...           in → to / into ‎78. ... he tells me ...                    tells → told ‎79. Maybe some days ...            days → day ‎80. ... will have a ...                     have → be ‎【6】‎ ‎ When my grandfather left school, he got his first job as a office worker. In those days, he was extreme thin. He paid very little, so he could not afford to eating a lot. I have one or two photos of her from that time, and he looks just like me, but a lot thin! When he grew older, he worked at all sorts of thing, such as reporting for a local newspaper and worked as a part-time salesman. He worked hardly all his life, but he always found out time for the things he enjoyed, like going fishing on weekends or reading books at home.‎ 短文改错答案：‎ ‎71. ... a office worker.             a → an ‎72. ... extreme thin.                extreme → extremely ‎73. He paid ...                        paid前加was ‎74. ... eating a lot.                  eating → eat ‎75. ... photos of her ...            her → him ‎76. ... a lot thin!                      thin → thinner ‎77. ... sorts of thing ...            thing → things ‎78. ... worked as a ...             worked → working ‎79. He worked hardly ...          hardly → hard ‎80. ... found out time ...          去掉out ‎【7】‎ I love camping.It is my favoritest way to spend the summer vacation.Last year，my families and I went camping in the countryside.It was one of the excited experiences I had never had.We slept in a tent and took a long walk every day.We cooked over a fire and the food always tasted wonderfully.For a whole week，I saw lovely mountain views or breathed fresh air.At night，I heard the gentle wind blowing in the trees，and I feel so peaceful.It doesn’t cost many to camp.What I believe it’s the best way to get close nature and enjoy its beauty.‎ 答案　‎ I love camping.It is my way to spend the summer vacation.Last year，my and I went camping in the countryside.It was one of the experiences I had had.We slept in a tent and took a long walk every day.We cooked over a fire and the food always tasted .For a whole week，I saw lovely mountain views breathed fresh air.At night，I heard the gentle wind blowing in the trees，and I so peaceful.It doesn’t cost to camp.What I believe it’s the best way to get close nature and enjoy its beauty.‎ ‎【8】‎ During the summer of 2016，I started reading books in English，most stories.I would learn a lot of new words from these books，but I had terribly problems memorizing them.I had to look up to the same word many times，for which was quite troublesome.I realized I do need a way to remember all this vocabulary.It was a great achievement for myself.I started writing down words from books that I read.I would come back from school，and then sit for an hour and two.I wrote down new words and added it to my collection.By the end of last year，my collection has grown to 3,000 words.‎ 答案 During the summer of 2016，I started reading books in English， stories.I would learn a lot of new words from these books，but I had problems memorizing them.I had to look up to the same word many times，for which was quite troublesome.I realized I need a way to remember all this vocabulary.It was a great achievement for .I started writing down words ‎ from books that I read.I would come back from school，and then sit for an hour two.I wrote down new words and added to my collection.By the end of last year，my collection grown to 3,000 words.‎ ‎【9】‎ When I look at this picture of myself，I realize of how fast time flies.I had grown not only physically，and also mentally in the past few years.About one month after this photo was took，I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time：car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes，playing pop music，and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.‎ When I look at this picture of myself，I realize of how fast time flies.I grown not only physically， also mentally in the past few years.About one month after this photo was ，I entered my second year of high school and a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things were very important in my life at that time：car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying kinds of cars and planes，playing pop music，and collecting the music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of high school days.‎ ‎71.答案　删除of 解析　考查介词。realize认识到，意识到，是及物动词，后面直接跟宾语。‎ ‎72.答案　had→have 解析　考查时态。由in the past few years可知句子要用现在完成时。‎ ‎73.答案　and→but 解析　考查连词。not only...but also...不仅……而且……，连接并列成分。‎ ‎74.答案　took→taken 解析　考查语态。被动语态的结构为“be＋及物动词的过去分词”，take的过去分词是taken。‎ ‎75.答案　become→became 解析　考查动词时态。句子用了过去时，and连接并列谓语entered和became。‎ ‎76.答案　in后加this/the 解析　考查代词/冠词。picture在文中第一句已经出现过，故此处可以加the表示特指；也可加this，表示“在这张照片中”。‎ ‎77.答案　they→that/which 解析　考查关系代词。things是先行词，后面是定语从句，从句中缺少主语，故引导词用that或which。‎ ‎78.答案　difference→different 解析　考查形容词。形容词修饰名词kinds。‎ ‎79.答案　late→latest 解析　考查形近词辨析。the latest music albums最新的音乐专辑。latest adj.最近的，最新的。‎ ‎80.答案　your→my 解析　考查人称代词。句意为：这张照片常常让我想起我高中时的快乐时光。此处是以作者的口吻写的“我的高中时光”。‎ ‎【10】‎ When I was a kid，my father and mother were made me join a tennis club in the center of our city.Every day both my parent would take me to club after school.I played tennis，ate snacks and did my homework here.It was basically my second family.A woman whose name was Li Li，my first private coach，was as a mother to us.She not only taught me everything that I know about what to play tennis，but treats me well.She was kind or always trained me with great patient.In my heart， she was the best coach in our city.‎ 短文改错答案 ‎71.答案 删除 were 解析 考查动词的语态。句意为：我的父母让我加入了一个网球俱乐部。此处表示主动，故 删除 were。‎ ‎72.答案 parent→parents 解析 考查名词单复数。根据 both 可知此处指的是父母两人，故把 parent 改为 parents。‎ ‎73.答案 club 前加 the 解析 考查冠词。此处特指加入的网球俱乐部，故在 club 前加 the。‎ ‎74.答案 here→there 解析 考查副词。句意为：我在那儿打网球、吃零食和做作业。故把 here 改为 there。‎ ‎75.答案 as→like 解析 考查固定搭配。句意为：私人教练就像妈妈一样。be like 象...一样，固定用法。故 把 as 改为 like。‎ ‎76.答案 us→me 解析 考查代词。句意为：我的私人教练对待我就像妈妈一样。故把 us 改为 me。‎ ‎77.答案 what→how 解析 考查疑问词。句意为：她不仅教我如何打网球，而且对我很好。故把 what 改为 how。‎ ‎78.答案 treats→treated 解析 考查时态。全文用的是一般过去时，所以此处也应用一般过去时，故把 treats 改为 treated。‎ ‎79.答案 or→and 解析 考查连词。句意为：她很善良并且总是以极大的耐心训练我。故把 or 改为 and。‎ ‎80.答案 patient→patience 解析 考查名词。great 很大的，极大的，为形容词，在此处应修饰名词，故把 patient 改为 patience。‎