2020届二轮复习特训书面表达语言美（句式转换）课件 28页

书 面 表 达 之 语言美（转换句式 ) ★ 巧用多种结构增强句子的表现力 一 、非谓语动词的使用 二、倒装句的使用 四、从句的使用 五 、介词短语的使用 三、将简单句改为强调句 六 、主动句与被动句的互换。 感受语言的区别： ① I have been learning English for over 6 years. It is six years since I began to learn English. ② I have made some progress in my English. With the help of my teachers and classmates , I have made progress in my English. ③ But I always feel English is hard to learn, especially some English idioms are difficult . But I still find it hard to learn English, such as some difficult idioms . Ways of embellishing the sentences 1. 他昨天下午来的。 2. 令她吃惊的是，小女孩知道这么多事情。 ★ 巧用多种结构增强句子的表现力 1. He came here yesterday afternoon. 2. He didn’t come here until yesterday afternoon. 3. Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here. 4. It was yesterday afternoon that he came here. 1 . He is surprised that the little girl knows so many things. 2. To his surprise , the little girl knows so many things. 3. What astonished him is that the little girl knows so many things. 1. Susan was ill in hospital. She couldn’t go to the concert. 2. The professor entered the hall. His students followed him. 3. He wants to improve his spoken English. He often talks with the native speakers. ( 一 ) 、非谓语动词的使用 Being ill in hospital, Susan couldn’t go to the concert. The professor entered the hall,followed by his stduents. In order to improve his spoken English, he often talks with the native speakers. Aimed at improving…… 4. They haven’t completed the program. They have to stay there for another two weeks . 5. We are faced with so much trouble , so we failed to complete the task on time . Not having completed the program, they have to stay there for two weeks Faced with so much trouble, we failed to complete the task on time . ★ 巧用多种结构增强句子的表现力 He didn’t realize his danger until he was left alone. 2.We can save the animals by changing the plants we eat. 3.She is clever but she never works hard. 4. The clock tower stands on the other side of the street. Not until, he was left alone did he realize his danger. Only by changing the plants we eat can we save… Clever as she is, she never works hard. 二、倒装句的使用 — On the other side of the street stands the clock tower. 将陈述句改为倒装句。 5. I could hardly understand the importance of English at that time. Hardly could I understand the importance of English at that time. He didn’t realize his danger until he was left alone. The teacher’s words encouraged her greatly. 三、强调句的使用 It was not until he was left alone that he realised his danger . It was the teacher’s words that encouraged her greatly. It is the Super Girl Competition that makes girls gain confidence. 3 The Super Girl Competition makes girls gain confidence 三、将简单句改为强调句 Smoking did great harm to his health. It was smoking that did great harm to his health. 2. Our money is earned through hard work by our parents. It is through hard work that our money is earned by our parents. 3. He went there yesterday. He did go there yesterday. 1. To our surprise, he refused to take the position. 2.I won’t believe what he says. What surprised us was that he refused to take … No matter what he say, I won’t believe. 四、从句的使用 3.When he climbed up higher, he felt more breathless. The higher he climbed up , the more breathless he felt. 4. We all know that China will host the 2008 Olympic Games. As is known to all, China will host the 2008 Olympic Games. 1. The manager had many problems to solve. He looked worried. (with) 2. When he arrived home , he found his house freshly painted.(on) With many problems to solve, the manager looked worried. 五、介词短语的使用 On his arrival home , he found his house freshly painted. 1. People grow rice in the south of China. Rice is grown in the south of China. 2. They have printed one and a half million copies of the dictionary since 1986. One and a half million copies of the dictionary have been printed since 1986. 六 、主动句与被动句的互换。 → → practice Liu Xiang is an excellent athlete. He won the first prize in Men’s 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games. ________, __________________, won the first prize in Men’s 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games. 2) The word is true. The president will give our school a speech. ___ is true _____ the president will give our school a speech. Liu Xiang an excellent athlete It that 3) The 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing, and its slogan is One World, One Dream, The 2008 Olympic Games , ________________________ __________________________ 4) In my opinion, the Great Wall and the Summer Palace are well worth visiting. In my opinion, the Great Wall and the Summer Palace __________________________________________ 5) Yesterday, we went to the East Gate, and we bought a lot of clothes. Yesterday, we went to the East Gate, _______________ ____________ One Dream, will be held in Beijing . are the two places which are well worth visiting . where we bought a Whose slogan is One World, lot of clothes . 6) His wonderful performance on the stage impressed me. most was his wonderful performance on the stage. 7) It satisfied me. The dining hall provides us with a large variety of kinds of dishes. _________ the dining hall provides us with a large variety of kinds of dishes. 8) I learned from the story that as long as we have patience, confidence and perseverance, we can realize our dreams. _________________ as long as we have patience, confidence and perseverance, we can realize our dreams. What satisfied me is that What I have learnt from the story is that What impressed me 9. Recently many students spend their money on unnecessary things. Different people have different opinions about it. Recently many students spend their money on unnecessary things, about different people have different opinions. 10. Many boys learn to smoke. It does harm to their health. Many boys learn to smoke, ________________ _______________ which which does harm to their health. 11. You pretend to know what you don’t know. It’s no good. It’s no good pretending to know what you don’t know. 12. It is easy to get on with Pam. I find . I find it easy to get on with Pam. 13.If you work harder, you will do better in the exam next time. ______________, you will do better in the exam next time. 14. Because my friend was frightened of losing his job, he said nothing to the police. _______________________ , my friend said nothing to the police. Frightened of losing his job Working hard 15) 这个地区占地 2000 平方千米，人口 10 万。 This area covers an area of 2000 square kilometers, ________________________ 16) 我们学校周围种了很多花，吸引了大量的学生来参观。 _________________________________, it attracts a large number of people. 17) 我们学校是一所有 100 多年历史的名校。 Our school is a famous one __________ ______________________ with a population of 100,000. With many flowers surrounding our school with a history of over 100 years. 18 ）没有做完作业，这个小孩不敢去上学。 ___________________________, the boy dared not go to school. 19) 这两个男人早早就睡了，蜡烛烧了一晚上。 The two men went to bed early , _______ _____________________________. 20) 他睡觉的时候嘴巴张得大大的。 He sleep ______________________. with candles burning a night long With homework not finished with his mouth wide open 实战演练巩固 1 请根据以下的情景说明 , 使用 5 个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容。 标题为 “ My English Learning” 注：所给情景有时是中文要点，有时是表格。 我学英语已经六年了，在英语学习上有了 一定的进步，但总是觉得英语难学，尤其是 英语中的一些习惯用法。自己今后一定要努 力学习这门有用的外语， 争取早日掌握这门 语言。 ① 我学英语已经六年了 I have been learning English for over 6 years. ② 在英语学习上有了一定的进步 I have made some progress in my English . ③ 但总是觉得英语难学，尤其是英语中的一些习惯用法。 But I always feel English is hard to learn, especially some English idioms are difficult. ④ 自己今后一定要努力学习这门有用的外语 I will work hard at this useful foreign language. ⑤ 争取早日掌握这门语言。 I will try hard to grasp this foreign language. My English Learning ① It is six years since I began to learn English. ② With the help of my teachers and classmates , I have made progress in my English. ③ Now I’m doing well both in writing and reading in English. ④ But I still find it hard to learn English , such as some difficult idioms. ⑤ Difficult as it is , I have made up my mind to master this useful language by my hard work. This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. This village is very small ， which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However , it has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are leading a richer and happier life than before. Now it is taking on a new look. Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school! ① Our school was founded in 1975.It has a long history. ② There are many trees in our school .It looks like a beautiful garden. ③ We have two 5- storied teaching buildings. Nearly two hundred teachers work there and over two thousand students study there . ④ There is an E-reading room. We can go on the internet for information easily. ⑤ The teachers are kind and patient, so we respect them. ⑥This is our school. We like it very much . Thank you. Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school !① Founded in 1995, our school has a short history. ② With many trees surrounding our school , it looks like a beautiful garden. ③ The two five-storied teaching buildings are where nearly two hundred teachers work and over two thousand students study Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school! ① Our school was founded in 1975.It has a long history. ② There are many trees in our school .It looks like a beautiful garden. ③ We have two 5- storied teaching buildings. Nearly two hundred teachers work there and over two thousand students study there . ④ There is an E-reading room. We can go on the Internet for information easily. ⑤ The teachers are kind and patient, so we respect them. ⑥This is our school. We like it very much . Thank you. ④ It is in the E-reading room that we have an easy access to the Internet for information ⑤ What’s more, the teachers are so kind and patient that they deserve our special respect . ⑥Such is our school, which we like very much. Thank you. 要点齐全，表达正确，但语言平淡，表达方式单一，逻辑性差 , 很难在考试的评分中得到较高档次。但使用 恰当的连接词 ， 较高级的词汇 、 较复杂的语法结构 ，会变得更 精彩 。 Practice Makes Perfect May you succeed In writing