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2018届二轮复习短文改错典题10篇训练之一
【1】
Last week, there was a program calling “Learning to Respect Our Parents” in our school. That is known to us that respect for one's parents is one of Chinese traditional moral value. And most students nowadays are “the only child”. We often think of themselves as the centre of their family.
As for the program, eight “dos” have worked out for the students to follow. For an example, we are advised to remember our parents' birthdays. Beside this, it is necessary that we should also tell our parents what we are going to do when we go out. The program has been such successful that it has been high praised by many people.
第一句:calling→called
第二句:第一个That→It; value→values
第三句:And→But
第四句:We→They
第五句:have后加been
第六句:去掉an
第七句:Beside→Besides
第八句:such→so; high→highly
【2】
Have you ever been to Wuzhen? It is so beautiful a village that I had already visited it many times. Locating in Jiaxing, Zhejiang Province, it has a history of about 6,000 years. Like many small towns in the southern area, which has a lot of small bridges going through clean streams.Local people live in old houses, they are very friendly. During the day, you can walk or sit on a boat to enjoying the natural scenery along the stream. The scene at night is attractively as well. There are all kinds of round and square light. Every time I look at the pictures for which I took, I will remember the water, the bridges and the houses. I love an amazing water country!
第二句:had→have
第三句:Locating→Located
第四句:which→it; through→over/across
第五句:they前加and或they→who
第六句:去掉to或enjoying→enjoy
第七句:attractively→attractive
第八句:light→lights
第九句:去掉for
第十句:an→the
【三】
My school holds a sports meeting in every October. We all looked forward to it, for it is a time for us to reduce stress and it always brings us lots of unforgettable memories. It usually last for three days, during which time we have no classes. All the student go to the playground to
watch or joining in games. The part I like most is the relay race. With race going on, our excitement grows. All of them yell out “come on” to the athletes, watching them competing aggressive. The most breathtaking moment is that the athletes are getting to the finishing line. Somebody can tell who is the winner until the last minute.
第一句:去掉in
第二句:looked→look
第三句:last→lasts
第四句:student→students; joining→join
第六句:race前加the
第七句:them→us; aggressive→aggressively
第八句:that→when
第九句:Somebody→Nobody
【四】
It was on Sunday so I didn't have to go to school as usually. My parents went to the countryside to see my grandparents, left me alone. After finishing my homework, I began to play football at home. All of a sudden, I kicked the ball so hardly that it flew right onto a vase and broke it. It was great favorite of my mother's. I decided to tell my parents it was the fault of the cat for fear that she should punish me. Therefore, when they got home, I hesitated for a moment and told them that truly happened. Instead of punishing me, they just hoped that I will never make so a foolish mistake again.
第一句:去掉on; usually→usual
第二句:left→leaving
第四句:hardly→hard
第五句:great前加a
第六句:she→they
第七句:Therefore→However; that→what
第八句:will→would; so→such
【五】
I needed to start work on 11 o'clock that morning. As a usual, I went back to my office at about 10:30. The mall was almost empty at this time. While walked down the aisle, I suddenly heard the sound of a car engine. It was strangely because no vehicles were allowed enter the mall. The car stopped just outside a jewellery shop and out jump a few masked men, all armed with weapons. I did not hesitate and called the police using my mobile phone. Before that, I just stood aside while watching the robbers finish his job. The police came just in time outside the mall. There was a crash when the robber escaped.
Unfortunately, they were all arrested by the police.
第一句:on→at
第二句:去掉a
第四句:walked→walking
第五句:strangely→strange; enter前加to
第六句:jump→jumped
第八句:Before→After; his→their
第十句:robber→robbers
第十一句:Unfortunately→Fortunately
【六】
People used to communicate with each other through letters and public phones. So nowadays they use mobile phones and the Internet instead of. This change in communication have good effects on our works and life. Comparing with letters and public phones, mobile phones and the Internet are fast and much more convenient. If you missed your grandmother, you just take out your phone and say “hello” to him. And she will be happy to hear your voice. If you want to place order with a foreign company, you can email the message. It'll be minutes after you get their reply.
第二句:So→But; 去掉of
第三句:have→has; works→work
第四句:Comparing→Compared; fast→faster
第五句:missed→miss; him→her
第七句:place后加an
第八句:after→before
【七】
Recently I have done a survey on the hobbies of the 1,500 students in our school.
The result showed that over 40% of them are fond of playing musical instruments in their spare time because it can improve their life
quality. About 35% enjoy surf the Internet, which helps them know about world affair. That surprises me most is that the number of the students paid much attention to reading and doing sports is smaller. Each only makes up for 12%, although one is the best way to gain knowledge and other is to keep fit.
However, more students are strongly advised to take on reading as knowledge is power. Plus, they should take an active part in sports and develop other hobbies proper besides entertainment.
第二句:showed→shows
第三句:surf→surfing; affair→affairs
第四句:第一个That→What; paid→paying
第五句:去掉for; other前加the
第六句:However→Therefore; on→up
第七句:proper→properly
【八】
Last weekend, I went to visit my grandparents with Dad.On way back, we met so much red lights that Dad shut down the engine to save gas.Unfortunate, when the lights turn green, Dad couldn't start the car again.Stuck on the traffic, we didn't know what to do.
Just then, a car stopped on the right side, and the driver was offered to help push our car to the roadside.We were so grateful.With his car preventing other car passing, he and I pushed his car aside as Dad controlled the wheel in the car.
Dad thanked the driver but soon Dad's friends came to our rescue, restart our car with new batteries.
第二句:On后加the; much→many
第三句:Unfortunate→Unfortunately; turn→turned
第四句:on→in
第五句:去掉was
第七句:car→cars; 第二个his→our
第八句:but→and; restart→restarting
【九】
I can still remember I was once asked to make speech before the whole class at the age of 9. You can imagine how shy I was when I thought of that with so many eyes fixed to me. I had no more choice but to prepare for it, though. The hardest part was my oral presentation from my memory, for reading from the paper wasn't allowing. The real moment began before I stood on the platform with my legs trembling or my mind blank. But my listeners were waiting patient. Gradually, I found me back, giving my speech at last. After what seemed to be a long time, I heard all the listeners applauding loudly. Ever since then, my fear of speak before the audience had disappeared. Actually, now I've become a great speaker!
第一句:speech前加a
第二句:to→on/upon
第三句:去掉more
第四句:allowing→allowed
第五句:before→when/as/after; or→and
第六句:patient→patiently
第七句:me→myself
第九句:speak→speaking; had→has
【十】
I'd like to introduce Sarah to you. She is a good friend of me. Actually she is an exchange student from Ireland, whom has been studying in my school for two month. Wanting to take an advantage of her short time here, Sarah works hardly. She had not studied Chinese before arriving here, but she has some difficulty communicating with people. She woke up early every morning to study a bit before class. I admire her independence for doing all of this while live so far away from her family. Besides, Sarah is in great help. Busy as she is, she often takes time help classmates with their English homework. A lovely girl, isn't she?
第二句:me→mine
第三句:whom→who; month→months
第四句:去掉an; hardly→hard
第五句:but→so
第六句:woke→wakes
第七句:live→living
第八句:in→of
第九句:help前加to