2018届二轮复习写作专题：现象分析课件（17张） 17页

2018届二轮复习 写作专题：现象分析 文体概述 现象分析的文章属于说明文，一般先指出某地存在某种现象，然后说明这种现象产生的原因，最后提出建议或呼吁杜绝这种现象。通常用一般现在时态。 常用语块 引起某人的注意 ______________________ ________________________________________ 2. 采取措施 ( 做 ……) ______________________ 3. 日益严重的问题 ______________________ 4. 普遍现象 ______________________ 5. 改善这种情况 ______________________ improve the situation draw/arouse one’s attention / be brought to one’s attention take measures (to do…) an increasingly serious problem a common phenomenon 6. 全社会 _______________________ 7. 安全意识 _______________________ 8. 有效的办法 / 途径 _______________________ 9. 越来越多的 …… _______________________ 10. 共同关注 _______________________ a common concern the whole society safety awareness an effective approach an increasing number of… 11. 热点话题 _____________________ 12. 人们普遍认为 _____________________ 13. 社会发展的必然结果 ____________________________ 14. 随着经济的快速发展 ____________________________ 15. 面临新的机遇和挑战 ____________________________ be faced with new opportunities and challenges a hot topic It is commonly believed/recognized that… the inevitable result of social development with the rapid development of economy 套用句式 随着工业的发展，城市的空气质量变得越来越差。 2. 近期校车安全问题成为了一个日益严重的问题。 1. With the rapid development of industry, the air quality in cities is becoming worse and worse. 2. Recently the safety of school buses has become an increasingly serious problem. 3. 如今高中生在网上开通博客成为了一种普遍现象。 4. 结果，这种现象引起了社会的关注。 5. 有三方面的主要因素应该引起我们的关注。 3. It is a common phenomenon that high school students open their blogs on the Internet. 5. There are three main factors that should call our concern. 4. As a result, the phenomenon has aroused social attention. 习作修改 ( 做短文改错，背经典范文 ) Recently the safety of school buses has become a seriously problem, that has attracted more and more public attention. So in our class we have held an heated discussion on the causes and solution. After the discuss, we find that the problem caused by three kinds of reasons which include overloading, speeding as well as weak safety awareness. serious which a solutions discussion ∧ is As by the solutions, first of all, we all think that it necessary to examine the safety of the school buses. Beside, we should stop risky buses from being operated. Only if all people attach importance to safety education to raise safety awareness can traffic accidents decreased. for Besides decrease 1. seriously →serious 修饰名词要用形容词形式。 2. that →which 非限制性定语从句不能用 that 引导。 3. an →a 冠词后面的 heated 并非以元音音素开头。 4. solution →solutions solution 是可数名词，要和 causes 保持一致。 5. discuss →discussion 定冠词 the 后面接名词。 6. 在 problem 后加 is 分析句子成分可知，此处 caused 作谓语，故要考虑时态和语态。时态准确，但语态应该用被动才符合逻辑。 7. by →for 固定搭配 as for 意为“至于 / 关于”。 8. 去掉 think 后的 that 此处并非引导宾语从句，而是 it 作形式宾语，后面的不定式短语才是真正的宾语。 9. Beside →Besides beside 意为“在 …… 旁边”，不符合文意。 besides 意为“此外”，符合文意。 10. decreased →decrease 情态动词后接动词原形。 课堂练习 随着经济的发展，人们的生活水平日益提高，一些中学生的消费问题成了一个热门话题。他们花钱大手大脚，令学校难以管理。请写一篇短文对这种现象进行分析。要点如下： 1. 存在的现象。 2. 引起此现象的原因。 3. 你的呼吁。 注意 ： 1. 词数 100 左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Today, it’s a common phenomenon that some middle school students are extremely lavish in spending money, which has aroused wide concern. Generally, there’re several factors contributing to the phenomenon. First, with the improvement of people’s living standard , middle school students, the treasure of their parents, can get lots of pocket money from their parents. Second, some students spend less on their regular meals and necessities to save their pocket money, with which they buy snacks, cellphones , fashionable clothes, etc. Third, young as they are, they learn to blindly worship those with much pocket money, which causes them to compare with each other on something unrealistic. To help the students, I call on schools and parents to take measures to cultivate the students’ correct value of consuming. 课外作业 每年高考后，高考状元被“热炒”。他们被各种采访和社会活动所包围，甚至可以得到大笔奖金。请写一篇短文对这种现象进行分析。要点如下： 1. 存在的现象。 2. 引起此现象的原因。 3. 你的建议。 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Every year after the College Entrance Exam, the top scorers will attract wide attention from across the country. They accept various interviews, participate in different social activities and even gain lots of prize money. Generally, there’re several reasons why top scorers are worshiped and popular. First, many people are affected by the Chinese traditional thoughts, thinking that top scorers will often have a bright future. Second, average students think that top scorers are good learners, from whom they can absolutely learn a lot . Third, parents want their children to imitate the top scorers. In my opinion , it’s all right to give proper attention to those top scorers. But we shouldn’t pay too much attention to them. After all , exams and marks are not everything.