【英语】2018二轮复习书面表达英语祝贺信写作指导学案（4页） 6页

‎2018二轮复习书面表达英语祝贺信写作指导 学案 ‎ 祝贺信 ‎ 祝贺信是社交中的一种礼仪性信函。通常包括以下几个方面的内容：说明祝贺事由，表达热烈、诚挚的祝贺；围绕祝贺事件表述贺喜内容；表达美好祝福。‎ 写作"三步走"：‎ 说明事由并表达自己衷心的祝贺->展开评论事件、赞扬收信人->再次表达良好祝愿 ‎ 在写作主要内容的时候，可以重点赞扬一下当事人的优秀能力和取得成就的原因、并展望他将来的美好发展前景等。‎ Tips in English Here are some principles that congratulatory letters follow:‎ ‎1. The purpose of writing the letter is to make your reader feel certain that he or she deserves the special message of recognition and praise. 2. The note should be brief, dealing with the primary topic only. These messages are most effective when they conduct no business. 3. The whole message should carry a tone of being positive and conversational(会谈的，谈话的). 4. Be sure to send the letter within a few days of the event. Any delay in delivery of the message would make your effort worse than no effort at all.‎ 开头常用句式 It was exciting news for me to learn of …‎ Please accept my sincere/hearty/warm congratulations on …‎ It was a great pleasure to send you my congratulations on …‎ I was delighted to learn of your success /achievements in …‎ I am really happy to learn that you have been elected…‎ 结尾常用句式 Wish you good luck!‎ We wish to share your honor and joy.‎ I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead.‎ May all go wonderfully in your new post!‎ May every happiness be yours!‎ All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future/successful career!‎ May each succeeding year bring you great happiness and prosperity.‎ Every good wish to you for much health, happiness, and prosperity!‎ 闪光词汇及词组：‎ delighted: adj. 高兴的，欣喜的 achievement: n. 成就，功绩 essential: 本质的，基本的，重要的 play a ... role: 起......的作用 enhance: v. 提高，增强 comprehensive: adj. 全面的 embrace: v. 拥抱 pave the way for: 为...铺平道路 ‎ brilliant: adj. 灿烂的 书面表达祝贺信写作模版祝贺信 模板1：Dear_____________ ，‎ ‎ Congratulations on your _______ . I know how hard you have been working and I am very proud of you for your achievement.‎ ‎ I understand for sure that it is your hard work / your excellent ability that leads you to the current success. This new position, on the other hand, adds a new dimension to your life and is bound to ________ . What’s more, I also believe that . ‎ ‎ May all goes beautifully in your new post!‎ ‎ Yours sincerely,‎ ‎ Li Ming 模板2：Dear_____________ ，‎ ‎ Good news travels fast! It was delightful for me to hear that ______________ . Please accept my sincere congratulations to your ___________.‎ I have been watching your progress with admiration all the years, and I know more than anyone else how much effort you have put in. Now you prove to me a ‎ matured and well-rounded________in every respect. Judging from your current success / achievement, I am confident that in the future ___________ .‎ May all the years ahead fulfill your dreams!‎ ‎ Yours sincerely,‎ ‎ Li Ming 模版3Dear ______ ,‎ ‎①I have learned with delight that you ______（祝贺事由）. ②I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______. ③You must be ______. ④And I feel very happy for you.‎ ‎⑤ ______（所取得的成绩）is quite exciting news! ⑥I know this is surely owing to ______（被祝贺人过去的努力）.⑦It is a reward you richly deserve for your ______（被祝贺人的优点）.‎ ‎⑧Kindly let me know when you ______（咨询对方何时有空）.⑨I hope ______（表达自己的愿望）. ⑩My best wishes for your further success.‎ Yours sincerely,Englishtec Li Ming 写作练习 书面表达 假如你是高三学生李华，得知你的美国笔友Peter被Harvard(哈佛大学)录取，请你给他写一封电子邮件。要点如下：表示祝贺且备受鼓舞；介绍自己目前的学习情况；请教学习方法。注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数； 3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 书面表达参考范文： ‎ Dear Peter,‎ ‎ I have received your e-mail. I am very excited and inspired by the good news that you have been admitted into Harvard. First I’d like to offer my congratulations to you on your great success and I also hope to enter a famous university just like you. ‎ ‎ Now I want to tell you something about myself. As you know, I’m busy preparing for the College Entrance Examination. Day after day I work very hard and have to stay up late doing piles of papers. However, I’m always feeling stressed out because my efforts don’t seem to pay off, which makes me frustrated and exhausted. Will you be kind enough to give me some advice?‎ I would appreciate it if you could write back to me as soon as possible.‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎ 写作练习请按照英文提示写作 Directions:‎ Your friend Jason is elected as the Chairman of the Students' Union of your university. Write a letter to congratulate him, state the reason for his success, and express your best wishes and encouragement.‎ You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET.‎ ‎  Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead.‎ ‎  Do not write the address. ‎ 范文：‎ Dear Jason,‎ ‎    I am much delighted to learn that you have been elected the Chairman of our University Students' Union. This is a special and happy moment for you and I am very proud of your achievement.‎ ‎    The Students' Union plays an essential role in our campus life. Managing and leveraging such an organization not only poses a great challenge to you, but will also fundamentally enhance your ability comprehensively. I believe this position will be a new beginning, and a chance for you to embrace a fuller life and pave the way for a brilliant future career.‎ ‎    Please accept my most sincere congratulations!‎ ‎                                          Best wishes,‎ ‎                                          Li Ming 亲爱的詹生：‎ ‎    听说你被选为学生会主席，我感到非常高兴。对你来说，这是一个特殊的时刻、一个高兴的时刻，我为你的成就而感到骄傲。‎ ‎    学生会在我们的校园生活中起到了重要的作用，要管理和权衡这个组织对于你提出了一个很大的挑战，同时也将综合地提高你的各方面能力。我相信这是一个新的开始，这个机会将使你拥抱一个充实的生活、并为你将来的灿烂未来打下基础。‎ ‎    请接受我最诚挚的祝福！‎ ‎                              衷心的祝愿，‎ ‎                              李明 真题背诵：‎ Dear Henry,‎ ‎ I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your admission into the Biology ‎ Department of Peking University as a graduate. As your close friend, I just want you to know ‎ how lucky I am to be able to share your pride and how pleased I am at your admission.‎ In my view, you work hard and besides that, you are a very intelligent person. This admission ‎ is a reward which you richly deserve. I am sure you will make greater progress in your ‎ study and obtain a bright future in your life.‎ ‎ I wish you greater success in your school career and I am looking forward to good news from you soon. ‎ ‎ Best wishes. Englishtec Yours,‎ Li Hua 作业 ‎ 假定你是李华，得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。你为他感到骄傲，并给他写一封祝贺信，因为他天天练习讲汉语，从不会到流利，终于成功。 继续努力，有机会来中国留学。希望见面和交流。‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛 “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest Dear Peter,‎ ‎ I would like to express my congratulations to you on your receiving the first prize of ‎ “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest. I know that you were not good at Chinese at first. ‎ However, you practiced speaking Chinese every day. As the saying goes, “Everything comes to him who waits”.‎ ‎ Finally, you succeeded! In my mind, this match is very difficult for a foreign student. ‎ So I’m so surprised that you become champion of this competition. If you go on studying Chinese harder, ‎ you will have the opportunity to study in China. At last, I hope to see you and communicate with each other.‎ ‎ Sincere congratulations to you again!‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua