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2018届二轮复习 短文改错考点角度三方面探究
高考短文改错主要从词法、句法、行文逻辑等三个角度设问,考查学生对语言知识的掌握和综合运用语言的能力。
一、从词法设问
检查考生对词汇的理解、记忆和辨别能力。在高考短文改错题中,这类改错题主要考查考生对单词、短语及固定搭配的理解、记忆和辨别能力。
1.多词或少词
(1)介词
[例1]Please help with me and give me some advice. (2015 课标)
解析:因help是及物动词,直接接宾语me,故with多余,应删除。
[例2]My soccer coach retired in last week. (2015 陕西)
解析:因last week前习惯上不用介词,故应删去in。
[例3]...and wait your teacher to lead you outside. (2014 四川)
解析:因wait for sb. to do(等待某人做某事)是固定搭配,故wait后加for。
(2)冠词
[例4]I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. (2015 浙江)
解析:因in a hurry是固定短语,所以在hurry前加a。
[例5]...as a result, nobody knew truth. (2012 浙江)
解析:是特指,应在truth前加the。
[例6]He was right there in the front of me. (2011 陕西)
解析:因in the front of意为“在……(内部)的前面”;in front of 意为“在……(外部)的前面”,“他就在我前面”肯定是我外部的前面,故删除其中的the。
2.错词
(1)介词误用
[例7] Unfortunately,on the development industrialization, the environment has been polluted. (2015 课标)
解析:on应改为with,表示“随着……”。
(2)a, an, the混用
[例8]...Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. (2014 辽宁)
解析:average 前的a应换成 an, 因average以元音音素开头。
(3)名词单复数的误用
[例9]...looking at some of the picture we had taken together. (2014 辽宁)
解析:picture 应改为pictures,因picture为可数名词,此处表示“一些照片”,故用其复数形式。
[例10] The teacher was angry because we had the same answers in the tests. (2013 四川)
解析:tests应改为test,因本句指的是这一次测试,不用复数形式。
[例11] It felt very strange to travel without any luggages. (2011 课标)
解析:luggages应改为luggage,因luggage为不可数名词,无复数。
(4)词性的混用
此类错误主要集中在形容词与副词的混用,形容词与名词的混用和动词与名词的混用等。
[例12] Dad and I were terrible worried. (2015 课标)
解析:修饰形容词worried应用副词, 故改terrible为terribly。
[例13]That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are. (2014 辽宁)
解析:作are的表语要用形容词,故改closely为close。
[例14]...but I know I’ll never fall sleep. (2013 浙江)
解析:作表语要用形容词,故改sleep为asleep,事实上可将fall asleep(入睡)作为固定短语来记。
[例15]Unfortunate,I had an accident and hit another car... (2012 浙江)
解析:放句首作状语,修饰整个句子,要用副词,故改Unfortunate为Unfortunately。
[例16]He has ruined his healthy. (2013 辽宁)
解析:作宾语或者说在形容词性物主代词后要用名词,故把healthy改为health。
二、从句法设问
检查考生对句子结构、复合句的理解、掌握及运用能力。这类错主要表现为:非谓语动词的错误,主谓不一致,连词的误用。
1. 非谓语动词的错误
[例17] I also shared with my friends many photos taking in Beijing. (2013 陕西)
解析:因句中已有谓语动词shared了,take应为非谓语动词;又因take与逻辑主语photo是被动关系,要用过去分词短语作后置定语,故taking应改为taken。
[例18] I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou. (2011 课标)
解析:buy应改为buying, 因为此处buy是主句谓语动词was的伴随状语,与主语I是主动关系,故用buy的现在分词。
[例19]Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. (2013 四川)
解析:因本句无谓语动词,asking应为谓语动词,根据上下文时态可知,要用一般过去时,故改asking为asked。
2. 主谓不一致
[例20]...what you should do when a fire alarm go off. (2014 四川)
解析:在when引导的时间状语从句中,主语为a fire alarm,是第三人称单数形式,故动词go改为goes。
[例21]Hard work have made him very ill. (2013 辽宁)
解析:因主语为hard work是第三人称单数形式,故改have为has。
[例22]...but the only clothes I had was those I had on. (2011 课标)
解析:主语为clothes,是复数,故改was为were。
3. 连词的误用
[例24]But before long they began to see which was happening. (2012 课标)
解析:see后为宾语从句,从句缺少主语,故用连接代词what(=the thing that)。
[例25]…we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear.(2012 辽宁)
解析:从句意来看,应表示“直到”,故把unless改为until/till。
三、从行文逻辑设问
检查考生对文章整体结构的理解和逻辑推理能力。考生经常遇到这种情况:单独看某个句子,很难查出其错误,但上下文联系起来、把前后句结合一起读,才会发现问题。如:时态不一致、代词所指不一致、句子间转折、因果、并列关系错误等。
1. 时态不一致
[例26]Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. (2014 浙江)
解析:改comes为came,因文中叙述过去发生的事。
[例27]… by the time I got back, they have finished the scene… (2011 陕西)
解析:因bythe time引出的从句中的谓语动词是一般过去时,其后主句的谓语动词通常用过去完成时,故把have改为had。
2. 代词所指不一致
[例28] If you are me, would you talk to him? (2015 四川)
解析:据上下文可知,指作者的三个新朋友,应用复数,故改him为them。
[例29] I was eager to see him, but outside her room, I stopped. (2013 辽宁)
解析:根据前文,此处指Mr. Johnson,故改her为his。
[例30] I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. (2015 陕西)
解析:根据上下文逻辑,此处指“想为教练做点什么特别事情”,而不是“任何事情”,故改anything为something。
[例31]But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher’s office. (2013 四川)
解析:根据上下文,此处us指I和Mary两个人,故改all为both。
3. 句间逻辑
指句子之间转折、因果、并列、顺承、前后等逻辑关系错误。
[例32] It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to (删to) anywhere from the hotel by public transport. (2013 陕西)
解析:改but为so/and, 因前后句是因果或顺承关系而非转折关系。
[例33] If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forgot it.(2015 浙江)
解析:改If为Though/Although, 此处意为“虽然我在那个课室学习时还是个孩子,但我永远都忘不了它”,表示转折关系而非条件。
[例34] If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. (2014, 四川)
解析:改and为or, 因此处表示选择关系而非顺承关系。
[例35] His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate (classmates), my school or just everything else I love in the world. (2013, 浙江)
解析:改or为and,因此处表示并列关系而非选择关系。
[例36] My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up. (2014 陕西)
解析:改after为when/while,因前后句非时间先后顺序,而是同时发生。