2019届二轮复习　议论文写作指导课件（11张） 11页

2019 届二轮复习　议论文写作指导 　 技 巧 点 拨 习 作 点 评 露 一 小 手 2 3 1 技 巧 点 拨 Ⅰ . 写作要点 要写好议论文，必须注意以下几点： 1 ．确定论点，通常在文章的第一段提出。 2 ．要有足够的论据，可以列举生活的实例。 3 ．论证要有严密的逻辑性，所有事实、原因、理由应紧密地同结论联系起来。 4 ．层次要清楚。 5 ．态度诚恳、友好，因为议论文重在说理，以理服人。 6 ．论据要充分，欲证明自己的观点必须有充分的证据。作者可以列举事实、展示数据、提供事例、借助常识或利用亲身经历。 Ⅱ . 常用句式 1 ． Opinions vary from individual to individual. 2 ． Others argue/hold the view that... 3 ． What's important is that... 4 ． As far as I'm concerned, I prefer... 5 ． When it comes to failure, different people hold different attitudes towards it. 6 ． There is no denying that students can learn a lot from it. 7 ． It's universally acknowledged that knowledge can change one's fate. 8 ． In conclusion, I think having a very close relationship with a pet is healthy. 9 ． In short, it can be said that health is more important than wealth. 10 ． From what has been said above, we can safely draw a conclusion that attitude determines everything. 习 作 点 评 新学期伊始，关于鲁迅的作品 《 药 》 、 《 阿 Q 正传 》 、 《 纪念刘和珍君 》 等是否被淘汰出语文课本再次引发全民大讨论。教育部近日澄清：新课改教材篇目基本无变化，只有广东教育出版社进行了微调。请你根据下面的信息以 “ What should we do with Lu ？ ” 为题写一篇 120 ～ 150 词的英语短文。 赞成 删除 1. 鲁迅作品的血腥和暴力语句给我们年轻一代带来不好的影响，与现代社会不合拍。 2 ．鲁迅作品风格陈旧，绝大多数在现代社会已无多大意义。 反对 删除 1. 年轻人阅读鲁迅作品可以更多地了解旧社会，从而更加热爱我们的现代生活。 2 ．鲁迅作品对社会分析深刻而尖锐，年轻人很有必要学习他的写作风格和精神实质。 What should we do with Lu? There has been a heated debate about the remo v e of Lu Xun's works from our Chinese textbooks since the beginning of this semester. 【 在介词后应该使用其名词形式 removal 。 】Towards this, we hold varied opinions. Some think that some of Lu Xun's essays are not suit for our harmonious world because the blood and violent feelings between the lines would have a bad effect on the young generation. 【“ 适合于 ……” 的正确表达形式为“ be suitable for” ；表示“血腥的”应该使用“ bloody” 。 】 Lu _ Xun ' s _ w ritings _ are _ some w hat _ old fashioned _ no w, _ most of them are meaningless in modern society and are hard to understand for the young generations. 【 在 Lu Xun's... 句子前应该添加表示递进意义的 What's worse ；此处 most of... 为非限制性定语从句， them 应该为 which 。 】 Therefore, _ others think that new generations are supposed to know about real story of the old society so that they can more love and treasure the happy life today.【 此处应该为语意的转折，所以使用 However 。 】In addition ， Lu Xun's stories are deep and sharp in languages and thoughts, which we youngsters should study and gain from contact with his spirit.