2018届二轮复习书面表达分类指导---物品介绍课件（17张） 17页

2 018 届二轮复习 物品介绍 物品介绍要用简明清晰的语言介绍或描述物品的名称、来源、特征、用途等。 注意事项： 1. 写作内容要条理清楚，层次分明。可用定义法、列举法等方式进行描述。 2. 时态常用一般现在时，当然若是介绍其历史时，要用一般过去时；语态可能用到被动语态。 3. 避免开头指代不明。避免用 it 作主语引导第一句，而应该具体写出描述的对象。 文体概述 常用语块 作为 …… 被人们所熟知 ____________________ 2. 被当作 …… ____________________ 3. 起源于 …… ____________________ 4. 从 …… 发展而来 ____________________ 5. 形成 / 产生 ____________________ be known as… be considered as… originate from… develop from… come into being 6. 对 …… 有益 _____________________ 7. 居住于 / 栖息于 …… _____________________ 8. 起初 _____________________ 9. 被人们所熟知 _____________________ 10. 在 …… 地方制造 _____________________ benefit…a lot/be beneficial to… inhabit… originally be familiar to people be made in… 11. 对 …… 造成伤害 _____________________ 12. 方便某人做某事 _____________________ 13. 体积很大 / 小 _____________________ 14. 由 …… 组成 _____________________ 15. 由 …… 做成的 _____________________ do harm to… be convenient for sb. to do… with a large/small size consist of… be made of/from… 套用句式 至于价钱，是相当的低。 2. 这个包小而轻。 3. 这种钱包质量是出了名的好。 2. The bag is small in size and light in weight. 1. As for the price, it is surprisingly low. 3. The purse enjoys a good fame of high quality. 4. 西红柿对人体健康有益。 5. 这款相机使用非常方便。 4. Tomatoes are beneficial to our health. 5. It is very convenient to use the camera. 习作修改 ( 做短文改错，背经典范文 ) Guided by two computer teachers as well as supporting greatly by our school authorities, we member of the robot interest group created this robot in our spare time. As you can see, this robot, beautiful in appearance, it measures 70 centimeters high and weigh 3 kilograms. Additionally, this robot with its flexible limbs is quite able to dance freely with music. supported members weighs to Beside, it can also have simple daily conversations with people in neither English or Chinese. This product, which full and clearly shows the significant creativity of us students, is of gorgeous outcome of curriculum reform and quality education in your school. Besides either fully ∧ a our 1. supporting →supported 与 guided 并列，都是过去分词短语作状语。 2. member →members 因为是 we 的同位语，故要用复数。 3. 去掉 measures 前的 it 因为前面已有主语 this robot 。 measures 作谓语。 4. weigh →weighs 与前面的 measures 并列。 5. with →to 固定搭配 dance to… 意为“随 …… 起舞”。 6. Beside →Besidesbeside 意为“在 …… 旁边”，而 besides 意为“此外”，符合上下文意。 7. neither →either 固定结构 either…or 意为“或者 …… 或者 ……” 。 8. full →fully 修饰动词要用副词，与 clearly 并列。 9. 在 gorgeous 前加 a 因为 outcome( 成果 ) 是可数名词。 10. your →our 根据文章第一句可知是指“我们的”。 课堂练习 假定你是学生李华，现在有外国学生来你校交流学习。请你用英语写一篇介绍稿向他们介绍国宝 —— 大熊猫。要点如下： 1. 大熊猫的习性。 2. 大熊猫的象征意义。 3. 其他你所了解的关于大熊猫的信息。 注意 ： 1. 词数 100 左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 开头语已为你写好。 参考词汇： 竹笋 bamboo shoots Dear friends, It’s a great honor for me to introduce our national treasure — the panda. The panda is a world-famous wild animal born in China. It only inhabits the forests in the west part of China. It has lived on the earth for over 10,000 years. Although they have fat figures , pandas are better at climbing trees than any other animal. The favorite food they depend on for living is bamboo shoots. Pandas like drinking much water, so when finding water, they’ll drink like crazy . Originally, the name “panda” was given by a Frenchman. As is known , the panda is the symbol of luckiness and friendship , and the messenger of peace . Finally and interestingly , the panda tends to lose its temper easily when disturbed. 课外作业 假定你是李华，你应邀为一家生产自动售货机的厂家编写自动售货机 (vending machine) 的英文介绍。要点如下： 1. 功能。 2. 工作原理。 3. 优缺点。 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 To make people’s life more convenient, vending machines appeared. Vending machines sell many different types of items, such as cold drinks, coffee, candy, tickets, newspaper and other types of small things. When the customer puts a coin into the machine and then pushes a button , he’ll get the goods he wants. Vending machines are convenient and can save time for customers. Moreover , no workers are needed and vending machines can be used at any time . However, the prices of the items sold by vending machines are usually a little higher. Anyway, it’s a good choice for those who are in a hurry , especially when there’re no stores around .