【英语】2018届二轮复习高考书面表达—漫画类作文写作指导学案（6页） 8页

‎2018届二轮复习 高考书面表达—漫画类作文写作指导学案 真题体验（2015年福建卷）请阅读下面图画，按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文。‎ 内容包括：‎ ‎        1. 描述画面；‎ ‎        2. 概述其含义；‎ ‎        3. 谈谈个人感想。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；‎ 参考词汇：凿，钻：bore 范文：‎ In the picture, we can see a boy in worn clothes, sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it. A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.‎ This is a well-known story from ancient Chinese idiom. The boy, being poor, couldn’t afford even a candle, so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbour‘s house to read at night. The moral of the story is to spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.‎ Of course, things are totally different today. It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts. Hard work pays off. We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.‎ 请根据你对以下两幅图的理解，以“actions speak louder than words”为题，用英语写一篇作文。‎ 参考词：‎ banner(横幅)‎ stump (树粧)‎ 你的作文应包括以下内容:‎ ‎1. 简要描述两幅图的内容；‎ ‎2. 概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解；‎ ‎3. 举例说明两幅图对你的启示。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 可参照图片适当发挥；‎ ‎2. 作文词数150左右；‎ ‎3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。‎ actions speak louder than words one possible version actions speak louder than words people celebrate earth day differently. in picture 1， a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps， but in vain， while picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees.‎ the message conveyed here is clear: “actions speak louder than words.” our earth is suffering severe damage. should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it? the ‎ answer is definitely the latter. immediate actions should be taken， like stopping cutting down trees， to better the environment.‎ actions are important in other fields， too. instead of shouting empty slogans， it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need. we should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules， stopping at the red light rather than complaining about traffic jams. only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish.‎ 漫画类题型更能考查学生的分析问题的能力，因此深受命题者的青睐。考生应注意认真审题，一旦审题有所偏颇，不容易得到高分。此类作文首先要描述图画，然后介绍图画背后所反映的问题，最后联系实际发表自己的观点。‎ 漫画作文（议论类） 攻略：读图，解意，谋篇 ‎1. 读图 ‎ 1）. 漫画的题目   眼睛 2）. 漫画的画面   细节 ‎ 3）. 漫画的文字   观点 4）. 漫画的夸张   寓意 ‎2. 解意 ‎ 1）. 辨明褒贬，找准角度 ２）. 联系生活，明晰主旨 ‎ 注意: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)，切记要认真阅读！ ‎ ‎3. 谋篇（3 parts:）‎ ‎ 1) describe the picture 基本步骤：描述图片中的主要细节。‎ ‎ 2) interpret its meaning 基本步骤：引出暗含主题—简单解释—过渡文章 ‎ 3）阐明原因 基本步骤：引出原因—阐明原因—指出影响—过渡文章 ‎4) give your opinions about the phenomenon（观点及对策）‎ 基本步骤：你的观点—提出对策—列举对策—总结全文 Some useful sentence structures:‎ Part 1 Describe the picture（描述图片）‎ ‎ As is vividly depicted/described by the drawing above, …‎ ‎ From the cartoon we can see that_____.‎ Just as what is shown in the picture,‎ As is apparently revealed in the cartoon above,‎ ‎ The picture is talking about/shows…‎ ‎ The picture shows a common phenomenon.‎ ‎ The picture describes an interesting phenomenon.‎ ‎ In the picture, there are…/…is (are) doing…‎ ‎ The picture above is about …‎ There is no doubt that this cartoon vividly depicts/describes a negative but common phenomenon in modern society:‎ Part 2 Interpret the picture（引出暗含主题）‎ ‎ What it illustrates is a common phenomenon in today's society, and it conveys the symbolic meaning of_____.‎ As far as the purpose of the drawer is concerned, I think he intends to remind us of the importance of…‎ ‎ This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life, especially on campus.‎ It seems very ridiculous that…However, this kind of story is performed everywhere.‎ The implication implicit in the drawing can be elaborated as follows.‎ ‎ The picture shows that…It is the exact reflection of…‎ ‎ The picture indicates that we…‎ ‎ Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that…‎ ‎ This is a satirical (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon ‎ among…‎ The implication of the given picture can be elaborated in terms of…‎ Exaggerated as it is, the phenomenon is not uncommon nowadays.‎ Part 3 Give your opinions ‎ ‎ ‎ As far as I’m concerned,‎ ‎ In my opinion,‎ ‎ From my point of view, ‎ ‎ It is better/advisable to…‎ ‎ I consider it necessary…‎ Therefore, it is high time that we took effective measures to improve the current situation.‎ Therefore, effective measures should be taken to solve the problem.‎ We should take immediate measures, for if the present situation continues as before, serious outcome will come up.‎ Only in this way can people realize their value of life better and can unemployment rate be reduced and thus can social harmony be achieved.‎ Even though an increasing number of people have become aware of this emergency, further measures still need to be taken.‎ Part C Polish up your article!‎ ‎1. To use linking words if necessary ‎ 表示平行、对等或选择关系and, as well as, together with, not only…but also...‎ ‎ 表示转折关系but, however, in spite of, although, otherwise, while ‎ 表示对比关系on the contrary, instead of, on one hand…on the other hand...‎ ‎ 表示因果关系so, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, due to, thanks to.‎ ‎ 表示时间顺序关系first, second…,then, next, finally, for one thing ...for another, in the end,‎ ‎ 表示递进、强调关系besides, what’s more, in addition, worse still, above all ‎ 表示解释、说明关系such as, for example, for instance, in other words, and so on ‎ 表示结论in short, in brief, in a word, in general, on the whole, in conclusion ‎2. To use complicated structures if possible ‎ Part D 注意 ‎ 1. 保证三要素－体裁、时态、人称正确 ‎ 体裁：议论文 ‎ 时态：一般现在时 ‎ 人称：第三人称 ‎２. 避免漫画类作文的一些常见失误 ‎ ‎ ‎1)误解图意 大忌！‎ ‎ 2)企图幽默 可笑！‎ ‎ 3)不明寓意 白写！  ‎ ‎ 4)中心不明 混乱！ ‎ ‎３. 控制字数（没话说PK太啰唆）‎ ‎４. 结尾要精辟！！‎ Conclusion: 一篇好的英语漫画作文:  ‎ 仔细审题, 准确立义, 规范行文, 整洁书写 ‎ ‎ 示例作文：‎ 温室花朵经不起风雨 These two pictures are both interesting and instructive. What is vividly described is that a flower, shielded from the thunderstorm, grows pretty well in the green house. But when moved out, the flower can’t withstand the wind and rain, and starts to wither. Evidently, flowers growing up in the green house cannot survive a severe storm.‎ The implication of these pictures for our life is obvious: overprotected children may grow up happily and healthily. However they cannot adjust to the life in the real world. Born and bred in a protective home, they have become so dependent on their parents that they will turn to their parents for help whenever they are confronted with difficulty. The result is that they don’t know how to solve problems by themselves, and worst of all, they do not know how to live a worthy life. Consequently, their life will be a failure.‎ Personally, I believe that parents should pay more attention to the cultivation of such qualities as independence, confidence and courage in their children. Only in this way can the children grow up, fully equipped to meet whatever challenges that life may present.‎ 示例范文：‎ 简要描述图片，并谈谈你对学生在业余时间参加过多的补习和培训的看法。‎ As is vividly described by the drawing above, you will understand better “Too much work makes Jack a dull boy”. He has to attend so many training classes besides his school classes. There is no fun and freedom at all in his life. Consequently, holidays and weekends have become dull work-days. It is obvious that he is too tired to learn these lessons well with no interest. ‎ ‎ In my opinion, spare-time training courses are a waste of time for many students. They might do better when they show interest in what they are learning. It is urgent that parents and teachers shouldn’t force these students to do what they are not willing to, and when learning is fun, surely they will do better than we expect!‎ ‎ ‎