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2019 届二轮复习书面表达全国卷解读 How to write good essays( 论文 ) or articles( 文章 )? A great writing consists of good sentences. To write an good essay, you should write good sentences first ! How to write good sentences ? ---- 提升英语写作的 “ 三板斧 ” 从“素颜”到“惊艳” 我爱你 。 外形俊朗的 我爱你 。 一个风流倜傥、 外形俊朗的 我爱你 。 4. 一个风流倜傥、外形俊朗的 我 深深地 爱你 。 5. 一个风流倜傥、外形俊朗的 我 深深地 爱 那个令李易峰一夜变憔悴的 你 。 6. 一个风流倜傥、外形俊朗的 我 深深地 爱 那个令李易峰一夜变憔悴、 江爷爷眼镜片崩碎的 你。 7. 在一个让人难忘的夜晚，一个风流倜傥、外形俊朗的 我 深深地 爱 那个令李易峰一夜变憔悴、江爷爷眼镜片崩碎的 你 — 罗玉凤 。 国民 ” 女神 ”— 罗玉凤 从“素颜”到“惊艳” 我爱你 。 外形俊朗的 我爱你 。 一个风流倜傥、 外形俊朗的 我爱你 。 4. 一个风流倜傥、外形俊朗的 我 深深地 爱你 。 5. 一个风流倜傥、外形俊朗的 我 深深地 爱 那个令李易峰一夜变憔悴的 你 。 6. 一个风流倜傥、外形俊朗的 我 深深地 爱 那个令李易峰一夜变憔悴、 江爷爷眼镜片崩碎的 你。 7. 在一个让人难忘的夜晚，一个风流倜傥、外形俊朗的 我 深深地 爱 那个令李易峰一夜变憔悴、江爷爷眼镜片崩碎的 你 — 罗玉凤 。 从“素颜”到“惊艳” 在一个让人难忘的夜晚，一个风流倜傥、外形俊朗 我 深深地 爱 那个令李易峰一夜变憔悴、江爷爷眼镜 崩碎的 你 — 罗玉凤。 在一个让人难忘的夜晚 我 （ who 一个风流倜傥、外形俊朗） 爱 （ 深深地 ) 你 （ who 那个令李易峰一夜变憔悴、江爷爷眼镜片崩碎 ) — 罗玉凤 。 提升英语写作的“三板斧” -- 从“素颜”到“惊艳” Strategy 1: Adding words ( 加单词 ) Strategy 2: Adding phrases( 加 短语 ) Strategy 3: Adding clauses( 加 从句 ) 提升英语写作的“三板斧” Strategy 1: Adding words Girls eat apples. 1. School girls eat apples. (noun 名词 ) 2. Beautiful girls eat apples. (adjective 形容词 ) 3.Girls eat apples happily . (adverb 副词 ) 4.Girls eat 10 apples. (number 数词 ) 5. The girls eat apples. (article 冠词 ) 6. Our girls eat apples. (pronoun 代词 ) 7.Girls eat up apples. (preposition 介词) 8. Wow! Girls eat apples. (interjection 感叹词) 9.Girls walk and eat apples. (conjunction 连词) Warning 注意！！ In theory, 10 types of words can be added to expand the sentence, but practically, some types of them make more sense than others. Warning 注意！！ C hoose the most proper words. 提升英语写作的“三板斧” Strategy 1: Adding words 1. (noun 名词 ) 2. (adjective 形容词 ) 3. (adverb 副词 ) 4. (number 数词 ) 5. (article 冠词 ) Boys play basketball. 6. (pronoun 代词 ) 7. (preposition 介词) 8. (interjection 感叹词) 9. (conjunction 连词) 提升英语写作的“三板斧” Strategy 2: Adding phrases Girls eat apples. 1. In the morning, girls eat apples. ( 介词短语 , in/on/at/after 等 ) 2.Girls standing there eat apples. ( 现在分词分词短语 ) 3.Girls eat apples given to them by their teacher . ( 过去分词短语 ) 4.Girls eat apples to keep healthy . ( 不定式短语 ) Warning 注意！！ In theory, 4 types of phrases can be added to expand the sentence, but practically, some types of them make more sense than others. Warning 注意！！ C hoose the most proper phrases. 提升英语写作的“三板斧” Strategy 2: Adding phrases 1. ( 介词短语 , in/on/at/after 等 ) 2. ( 现在分词分词短语 ) 3. ( 过去分词短语 ) 4. ( 不定式短语 ) Boys play basketball. In the evening/on Friday afternoon/ at school/after class , boys play basketball. Boys wearing their favorite shoes , play basketball. Boys play basketball bought from their teacher . Boys play basketball to have fun. 提升英语写作的“三板斧” Strategy 3: Adding clauses Girls eat apples. 1.Girls who are from SSFLS eat apples. 2.Girls eat apples which are big and fresh . (attributive clause 定语从句 ) Boys play basketball . 提升英语写作的“三板斧” Strategy 3: Adding clauses Girls eat apples. 1. When the class is over , girls eat apples.( 时间状语 ) 2.Girls eat apples wherever they go .( 地点状语 ) 3.Girls eat apples because they are good for their health .( 原因状语 ) 4 . In order to keep good health , girls eat apples.( 目的状语 ) 5. If there is nothing left at home, girls eat apples.( 条件状语 ) 提升英语写作的“三板斧” Strategy 3: Adding clauses Girls eat apples. 6. Although the dinner is delicious , girls eat apples.( 让步状语 ) 7.Girls eat apples as if they were out of prison .( 方式状语 ) 8.Girls eat so many apples that they are all stuffed .( 结果状语 ) 9 . Girls eat as many apples as boys do .( 比较状语 ) Warning 注意！！ In theory, 2 types of clauses(adverbial clause has 9 types) can be added to expand the sentence, but practically, some types of them make more sense than others. Warning 注意！！ C hoose the most proper clauses. 提升英语写作的“三板斧” Strategy 3: Adding clauses 1. 时间状语 when/while/after 等 2. 地点状语 wherever 等 3. 原因状语 because/as/since 等 4. 让步状语 although/though/even though 等 5. 条件状语 if 等 6. 目的状语 so, in order to 等 7. 结果状语 so…that/ with the result that 等 8. 比较状语 as…as/ the same as… 等 9. 方式状语 as if 等 Boys play basketball . 提升英语写作的“三板斧” -- 从“素颜”到“惊艳” Strategy 1: Adding words Strategy 2: Adding phrases Strategy 3: Adding clauses Improve the sentence T.F Boys come to SSFLS.(T.F Boys 来二外 ) Improve the sentence Dakang LI drives a car.( 李达康开车 ) Improve the sentence Barry Allen drinks coffee. （ ” 闪电侠 ” 喝咖啡）