2019年高考英语二轮牛津译林版真题技巧点拨课件：专题五书面表达 25页

考试大纲 要求 考纲解读 根据提示进行书面表达。考生应能： (1) 准确使用语法和词汇； (2) 使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的思想。 要求考生根据所给情景，用英语写一篇 150 个单词左右的短文。情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等。 书面表达的评分标准： 1. 信息内容的完整性 (Completeness) ； 2. 信息内容的连贯性 (Coherence) ； 3. 句子结构的正确性 (Correctness) ； 4. 句子结构的多样性 (Variety) 。 江苏高考书面表达近五年考情分布 年份 题材 体裁 类型 2018 如何看待消费排名 议论文 读写 2017 电影票房收入变化的原因及对走向的看法 议论文 读写 2016 阐述你对网络投票的看法 议论文 读写 2015 交通法规的意识与理念 议论文 读写 2014 汉语词典该不该收录英语词汇 议论文 读写 从上表可以看出，近五年来，江苏高考书面表达的题目设置场景越来越具有 真实性 ，越来越与 生活实际紧密联系 ，内容包括日常生活、学校生活、社会文化等方面。 从 2014 年开始，江苏高考书面表达采用了一种新题型 “ 读写任务型作文 ” ，题型有创新，但对写作能力的要求和词数的要求等没有变化。材料既有读写式的文字介绍也有图表， 信息量大 ，这对考生的材料分析、概括提炼能力要求很高，同时，具有一定的 开放性 ，便于考生写出紧扣主题的个性化内容，又能防止考生出现简单翻译写作要求中的句子的做法。 请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。 【写作内容】 1. 用约 30 个词概括上述利用排名 (ratings) 进行消费的现象； 2. 谈谈你如何看待消费排名，然后用 2—3 个理由或论据支撑你的看法。 【写作要求】 【评分标准】 1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句； 2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 不必写标题。 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。 【写作思路】 本篇书面表达要求考生根据两段文字材料写一篇文章，针对 “ 消费排名 ” 现象论述自己的看法和观点，并阐述理由。文章为任务型读写，属于议论文，主要使用第一和第三人称，一般现在时。写作时应注意紧扣两段材料表达的主题，不可偏题，还应注意合理使用高级词汇和较复杂句型。 考生首先应当仔细阅读题干所提供的文字材料。通读两篇文字材料可知，第一段材料为一对母子看了网上的评论后买回旅行箱，结果买回来的旅行箱质量很好；第二段材料为一家人看了网评后去餐馆吃饭，结果饭菜很不好吃，从而凸显出网评的不可靠性。明确以上事实后，再在此基础上明确文章的主题和结构，对 “ 消费排名 ” 现象作相关阐述。本文可分为三段进行写作，第一段用 30 词左右概述材料的主要内容，提出文章主题；第二段论述对 “ 消费排名 ” 现象的观点并说明理由；第三段总结全文，再次点明主题。 在遣词造句上，应当注意合理使用连接成分，以提高文章的逻辑性，如在说明看法时可以用 to begin with ， what’s more ， last but not least 等；此外应尽量使用较复杂句型，如在总结全文大意时可以用定语从句、分词结构；在其他地方可以用主语从句、倒装语序等。 【参考范文 1 】 As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers. I tend to consult consumption ratings whatever I purchase. Firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality of the product, or better service. Based on the ratings, I bought my beloved backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods. Secondly, ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping.For example, there are huge amounts of reference books which I am often confused to choose from. In that case, it is both convenient and economical to buy books according to the ratings. There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings. 【参考范文 2 】 Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain channels.These ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in customers’ purchase decision. However, results are sometimes unsatisfactory. There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers ， but they are often misleading and unreliable. As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others’ judgment on the product or service concerned.Every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychological state. Apparently ， blindly following others’ advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice for some to pay for good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their sales. Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping. 请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入 (box-office income) 的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。 Saturday Afternoon . In a Shopping Centre . Li Jiang ： Hi ， Su Hua.Which movie shall we see? Su Hua ： Whatever.We’ve got so many choices ， Kung Fu Yoga ， Journey to the West ...Each sounds great! Li Jiang ： Yeah ！ And some movie stars are fantastic. Su Hua ： And the high-tech ！ ... Li Jiang ： Perfect ！ Let’s get some food first.We only have 20 minutes left. Su Hua ： No hurry.The cinema is on the same floor. One Day in 2016. At Home . Son ： Mum ， shall we go and see a film tonight? Mother ： Why bother ？ We can stay at home and watch films online.It’s convenient with our new and faster network. Son ： But it feels good in a cinema. Mother ： And the price...We have to pay 50 yuan a ticket. Son ： Only 10 yuan more than last year. Mother ： But still we cannot get the money’s worth.Some films are just boring... 【写作内容】 【写作要求】 【评分标准】 1. 用约 30 个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容； 2. 我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些，简要谈谈你的看法 ( 上述对话仅供参考，原因不少于两点 ) ； 3. 谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。 1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句； 2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 不必写标题。 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。 【参考范文】 The box-office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015.However ， that increase slowed down in 2016. The reasons behind this are various.The fast economic development before 2016 was probably the most powerful engine driving the constant growth in the box-office income.The application of new technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account for the increase.However ， China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year.And the internet increased options for movie lovers.Consequently ， some viewers began to turn away from cinemas ， leading to a slower growth. China’s economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years ， so an increase is possible in the investment in the movie industry and the number of quality movies.Therefore ， its box-office income will probably enjoy a slight increase. 请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。 In recent years ， Internet voting has become increasingly popular in China.People not only cast on-line votes themselves ， but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “Cutest Baby” . Li Jiang ， a high school student ， is invited to vote in the “Best Police Officer” competition ， organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers’ daily work.Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories.He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds.He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future. Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “Future Singer” competition.He has already received three similar invitations this week.His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition ， the family will win an overseas tour for free.Su Hua likes his cousin very much ， but he finds other singers perform even better.To vote ， or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much. 【写作内容】 1. 用约 30 个单词写出上文概要； 2. 用约 120 个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用 2 ～ 3 个理由或论据支撑你的看法。 【写作要求】 1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句； 2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 不必写标题。 【评分标准】 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。 【参考范文 1 】 On-line voting becomes increasingly popular ， and many competitions get people involved in it.It is beneficial to some people ， while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not. In my opinion ， on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed ， since it is no more than a way to participate in public life.It makes no difference from ordinary voting events ， in which candidates go around to seek supports.In addition ， the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient ， regardless of time and space.Furthermore ， voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible. To be honest ， voters sometimes feel annoyed ， not because they hate voting ， but because they are divided between emotion and fairness.Things will turn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey.Therefore ， I hold a positive attitude towards on-line voting. 【参考范文 2 】 Internet voting is quite popular nowadays.Many people are somewhat puzzled at the negative side of the voting ， although some are quite happy with it ， and active in doing it. In my opinion ， Internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society.Firstly ， people may feel forced when asked to do things that they don’t want to.Secondly ， voting of this kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors ， but rather on how many social-networking resources they have.Thirdly ， the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes. In short ， Internet voting ， to some extent ， is unfair ， if not immoral ， and cannot be trusted.Therefore ， rules should be worked out and strictly observed.Everyone in our society should help those in need ， but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.