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‎2003年 假定你是John，将去上海旅游。写一封信给你在上海的朋友张强，告诉他你将乘火车于‎10月21日上午8点到达上海，请他接站，并请他帮你安排21至24日的住宿（旅馆最好靠近市中心，房间可以小一些，但不要太贵）。此外，你还要他帮你订24日返回北京的火车票。 　　注意：词数应为100左右。 参考文本One possible version：‎ Oct. 15‎ Dear Zhang Qiang，‎ ‎　　How are you doing recently？I’m planning to go to Shanghai and look around in the city for a few days. I’ll take the train and arrive at 8 o‘clock a.m. on October 21st. Will you please come and meet me at the station？I’m going to stay in Shanghai till October 24th. Please help me book a hotel room. I hope to stay in a hotel around the downtown area but the price shouldn’t be very high. I don’t mind if the room is small. Another thing, can you book a ticket for me back to Beijing on 24th？‎ All the best，‎ John ‎2004年 假定你是李华，打算出国学习计算机科学。现在给在美国工作的表哥David Zhang 写信，了解以下情况：‎ ‎1. 需参加的英语考试；2. 每学期需修的课程数和费用；3. 食宿费用；4. 合适的学校。‎ 注意：1. 词数应为100左右。 2. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。‎ ‎ June 1st Dear David, ‎ How are you?‎ I meant to write you for some time. _________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ I’m looking forward to your reply. Thank you very much.‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎ 参考文本One possible version：‎ Dear David,‎ How are you?‎ I meant to write you for some time. You know I plan to continue my study in the U.S.‎ I’m interested in computer science. So I’m writing to ask for your help. I want to know how to prepare for that as a foreign student. For example, what kind of English test is required for entrance? How many courses does a student have to take each term? How much do I have to pay for the courses? How much do I need for food and housing? Really a long list of questions.‎ Since I know very little about American Universities, it would be great if you can suggest some universities suitable for me.‎ I’m looking forward to your reply. Thank you very much.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎2005年 假定你是中国文化知识大赛组委会主席，写信祝贺参赛选手John Smith 获本次大赛一等奖，并通知其以下事项：‎ ‎1. 出席‎12月10日晚在北京友谊宾馆举行的庆祝晚会；‎ ‎2. 赢得了免费中国10日游；‎ ‎3. 如果能够参加旅游，应将信中所附表格填好，并准备好护照（passport）组委会将负责其他相关事宜。‎ 参考文本One possible version：‎ Dear Mr. John Smith,‎ It is my great honor to tell you that you have won the first prize in the Chinese Culture Contest. Congratulations! I would like to invite you to attend the celebration party on the evening of December 10 at Friendship Hotel in Beijing. And you are offered a 10-day tour in China, free of charge. If you are able to make the trip, please fill in the form we mail you with the letter. Besides, you will have to get you passport ready. We will do the rest for you. I am looking forward to your early reply.‎ Sincerely yours, ‎ Li Hua Chair Committee of the Chinese Culture Contest ‎2006年 Tim多年前曾在宁波工作，他告诉老朋友大鹏最近要来宁波，希望看看中国的变化。假设你是大鹏，请给Tim回封信，告诉他：‎ ‎1. 欢迎他来宁波； 2. 为他预定宾馆；‎ ‎3. 建议去义乌：新的国际化大市场，很多外国商人在那里采购；离宁波不远，来回最多只需两天。‎ 注意：1. 开头和结尾已经为你写好； 2. 词数应为100 左右。‎ Dear Tim, ‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What do you think about it?‎ I’m looking forward to your coming.‎ Best, ‎ Da Peng 参考文本One possible version：‎ Dear Tim, ‎ I’m very glad to know that you’ll be back to Ningbo for a visit. As soon as you can fix the date I’ll book a hotel room for you.‎ I know that you hope to see how China has changed in these years. Why don’t you go to Yiwu? A visit to that city is worth your time. Yiwu has become a new international market, and a lot of businessmen from abroad live here, buying goods and sending them to their home countries. As the city is close to Ningbo, the trip will take no more than two days. What do you think about it?‎ I’m looking forward to your coming.‎ Best, ‎ Da peng ‎2007年成人高考 假设你是李华，写信给在中国的英国朋友John,讲述你在英国的生活：‎ 1. 住在英国人家里，与房东家同龄男孩成了朋友；‎ 2. 你们谈论学校生活和课外活动情况，你的口语有了很大进步；‎ 3. 夏令营生活丰富多彩，参观博物馆，与当地学生进行球赛，举行晚会等。‎ 注意：1. 开头和结束语已为你写好；2. 100词左右； 3. 生词：活动 activity.‎ Dear John,‎ ‎ I’ve been in England for two weeks now. You must be eager to know what’s going on with me in your home country and how I feel about my stay here. ________________________________________________________‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ I miss you very much and will write you more about my life here.‎ Best wishes,‎ Li Hua ‎ 参考文本One possible version：‎ Dear John,‎ I’ve been in England for two weeks now. you must be eager to know what’s going on with me in your home country and how I feel about my stay here.‎ I’m staying with an English family and spend a lot of time with them. They have a son of my age and very soon we become good friends. We talk about our school lives, and after-class activities too. By talking wit h him, I’ve improved my English greatly. I’m sure you’ll find it when I’m back and see you again.‎ The summer camp’s life is rich and colorful. We have a lot of activities, for example, visiting museums, paying football with the students here and having evening parties. I’ve learned a lot from these activities.‎ I miss you very much and will write you more about my life here.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎2008年 假设你是李华，你的朋友Peter将来中国旅行。请写信邀请他来你家乡游玩，应包含以下内容：‎ ‎1. 交通：飞机或火车，机场有45路公交车，在最后一站下车，如坐火车你将去车站接；‎ ‎2. 活动内容：到附近的岛上玩，游泳、跑步、爬山、吃海鲜。‎ 注意：1. 开头和结尾已为你写好； 2. 词数应为100左右。‎ Dear Peter,‎ I’m really excited to know that you’ll come to China for summer holidays. I hope you’ll come to visit my hometown. ‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Let me know your travel plan when you have one. I’m looking forward to seeing you again, in my hometown.‎ ‎ Cheers,‎ ‎ Li Hua 参考文本One possible version：‎ Dear Peter,‎ I’m really excited to know that you’ll come to China for summer holidays. I hope you’ll come to visit my hometown. ‎ You can either fly or take a train to come here when you’re in the country. Both the airport and train station are nor far from my home. From the airport you can take Bus No. 45. Please get off at the last stop. If you come by train, I’ll meet you at the train station. ‎ During your stay, we can visit the islands nearby. They are very beautiful in summer. We can go swimming in the sea, running along the seaside and climbing the hills there. The seafood is wonderful on the islands. I’m sure you’ll like it.‎ Let me know your travel plan when you have one. I’m looking forward to seeing you again, in my hometown.‎ ‎ Cheers,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎2009年成人高考作文 假设你是李明，在本市主要商业区的一家银行找到工作后，给Jack发电子邮件，告诉他：‎ ‎ 1．下周搬到牛津大道(Oxford Street)14号城市花园3-12室居住，该地靠近银行：‎ ‎ 2．虽然离Jack家远了，但仍会像过去一样常去拜访他们；‎ ‎ 3。欢迎Jack前往新家作客，电话为7635089。‎ 参考文本One possible version：‎ Hi, Jack,‎ I've got a new job at a bank in the main business area of the city. I'm moving to 3-12 City‎ ‎Garden, ‎14 Oxford Street next week. It's quite close to the bank. I've almost finished packing and hopefully the move will go smoothly.‎ Though my new home is about an hour's drive from your place, I'm sure I'll have time to visit you and your family often, as I did in the past years. You are welcome to visit my new home anytime at weekends. Call me at 7635089 and let me know how you’re doing.‎ Sincerely yours,‎ Li Ming ‎2010年 假设你是李华，Tim是你的笔友，一直希望来中国教英语。得知前进中学需要一位英语老师后，你写信告诉他相关情况，主要为：‎ 工作：1)时间为一学期；2)教两个班的英语口语，每周10节课；3)负责学校的英语课外活动，每周一次 待遇：每月4000元，另提供往返机票，免费住宿。‎ 生词：activity 活动 参考文本One possible version：‎ Dear Tim, ‎ ‎ I’ve got good news for you. Qian‎ Jin ‎High School in my city wants an English teacher for the coming term. He’ll teach spoken English for 2 classes; 10 hours each week. He’ll also be in charge of after-class activities, once a week, for those who are interested in discussions in English. He’ll get 4000yuan each month. The school will offer a free flat and pay for the plan tickets from his home country to Beijing and back. ‎ ‎ I know you wish to teach English in China. I’m looking forward to your reply.‎ All the best,‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎2011年 假设你是李华。写信邀请你的美国朋友John 参加玉龙山露营活动，信中主要包括以下内容 出行人数 ‎6 ‎ 集合时间、地点 星期六早上8:30，火车站广场 火车开车和到达时间 ‎9:30, 11:30‎ 返程时间 星期日下午 露营用品 帐篷、睡袋、外衣、水、食物等 注意：1、开头已为你写好 2、词数应为100左右 Dear John, ‎ We are going camping on Yulong Mountain this weekend. ‎ ‎ ‎ Best wishes, ‎ Li Hua 参考范文：‎ Dear John, ‎ We are going camping on Yulong Mountain this weekend. Would you like to join us? There'll be 6 of us in the group, if you come. We'll go there by train. The train will leave at 9:30 am, and get there in two hours. We are to meet at the Railway Station Square at 8:30 Saturday morning. Since we'll spend the night at the foot of the mountain, please take your camping equipment, such as a tent and a sleeping bag. Don't forget to take your overcoat and get enough water and food. We'll come back Sunday afternoon. If you can join us, please give me a reply soon. ‎ Best wishes, ‎ Li Hua ‎2012年 假设你是李华，是世界经济论坛（The World Economic Forum）的组织者之一。写信邀请Dr.Huffman参加本次论坛，请他做一小时的演讲并回答问题，希望其尽快回复。‎ 会议地点：北京国家科技园（the National Science Park，Beijing）‎ 会议时间：2013年4月10日至12日 论坛网址：www.worldeconomicforum.com Dear Dr Huffman,‎ I feel it a great honor to invite you as one of the speakers at the World Economic Forum. It will be held at the National Science Park, Beijing, from April 10th to 12th, 2013. You are supposed to speak for an hour and answer questions for twenty minutes. I am sure your speech will be very important to the success of the Forum next year. If you want to know more about the Forum you may visit www.worldeconomicforum.com. Please let me know as soon as possible whether you can join us in Beijing.‎ Sincerely ours, ‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎2013年 ‎ 假设你是李华，学校组织夏令营，欢迎外国学生参加。请用英语写一封信邀请你的美国朋友Tim参加并告诉他夏令营的具体安排；‎ 时间 ‎7月15日至8月12日 内容 上午：汉语、英语、国画课程 下午：中国文化与习俗讲座 周末：城市观光和旅游 注意：1. 开头已为你写好 2. 词数应为100左右 生词：文化（culture）‎ Dear Tim, ‎ How are you doing recently? ‎ Yours, ‎ Li Hua ‎ 参考范文： ‎ Dear Tim, ‎ How are you doing recently?‎ I’m writing to invite you to join us in a summer camp. Our school plans to have a four-week summer camp, from July 15 to August 12. There’ll be both Chinese and international students. In the mornings we’ll have classes including Chinese, English, and Chinese painting. In the afternoons there’ll be lectures on Chinese culture and customs. On weekends we’ll tour around the city and visit some places of interest, such as the Great Wall and Summer Palace. We are sure to have a lot of fun together. So what do you think of it?‎ I’m looking forward to your early reply. ‎ Yours, ‎ Li Hua ‎2014年 ‎ 假设你是李华，请用英语写一封信邀请Mike参加你和朋友在颐和园的周末野餐，并告诉他你将负责面包、水果和饮料。具体安排如下：‎ ‎ 自带物品 ‎ 自己最喜欢的一道菜 ‎ 集合地点 ‎ 学校北门公交车站 ‎ 出发时间 ‎ 星期日早上8点 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 注意：词数应为100左右。 ‎ Dear Mike， Yours， Li Hua ‎ 参考范文：‎ Dear Mike, ‎ How are you doing recently? My friends and I plan to have a picnic together in the Summer Palace this coming weekend. We’d like to invite you to come and join us. Each of us is expected to prepare a favorite dish for the picnic. And I will get enough bread, fruit and drinks and drinks ready for all of us. We have decided to meet at the bus stop near the north gate of our school at 8 o’clock this Sunday morning. Please let me know if you can come. ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua 作文重点参考2011-2014年的范文，都是写信邀请他人参加活动或会议的，着重记住这些句型： 1、开头：I feel it a great honor to invite you as...很荣幸要求您担任...。I’m writing to invite you to join us in a summer camp.我现写信给你邀请你参加我们的夏令营。 2、活动的时间和地点：It will be held at the National Science Park, Beijing, from April 10th to 12th, 2013. 3、结尾句（请对方尽快回复能否来参加活动）：Please let me know as soon as possible whether you can join us in Beijing.请尽快告知我们您是否你来参加。I’m looking forward to your early reply. 盼早复。‎ 另外，格式不用记，格式已经给出的。 除了2009年写搬家的不具有代表性外，其他作文类型也重要，要熟悉一下。‎ 此外，书写要工整。批改作文的老师不会每句话都仔细看的，一般给个总体分，所以书写工整很重要。基础不好的同学也不要让作文完全空白，尽量写一点，把所给的英文提示写进去。‎ 如果单词都不懂的话，技巧就很难起作用。如果是完全不懂英语的同学，除了阅读理解，其他题目都无法猜测答案。所以把时间都放在阅读理解上就行，去找和题目相同或者类似的句子来猜测答案。‎