安徽省初中英语七年级上册Unit4Wheresmyschoolbag单元写作专项课件 人教新目标版 14页

单 元 写 作 专 项 Unit 4　Where's my schoolbag? 本单元的话题主要是谈论物品的位置。要 求同学们能简单介绍自己的房间、卧室等场所, 内容包括物品的特点及位置。 【词汇】 1.白色的飞机模型 _____________________ 2.在桌子下面 _________________ 3.在沙发上 _____________ 4.在你的(外)祖父母的房间里 ______________________________ on the sofa under the table white model plane in your grandparents' room 5.一本英语词典 _______________________ 6.在书柜里 __________________ 7.my parents think ______________ 8.tidy room ____________ 9.don't know ________ 我的父母认为　　 in the bookcase an English dictionary 干净的房间 不知道 【开头句】 1.Hello, everyone.This is my room… 2.Hi! My name is…Look at my classroom… 【中间句】 1.It's a very tidy room.My computer is on the desk… 2.On the table are some… 3.Where is my baseball? It is under the chair. 4.I'm tidy, but Gina is not.Her books are everywhere. 【结尾句】 1.My parents think my room is tidy. 2.I love/like my room very much. 【名言警句】 1.Where there is life, there is hope.留得青山在, 不怕没柴烧。 2.Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者, 事竟成。 【写作任务】 假设你是Tom, 请根据下面的 图片提示简单介绍一下你的房间。 要求: 语句通顺, 内容完整, 50词左右。 __________________________________ __________________________________ 【写作点拨】 审题: (1)确定体裁: 说明文; (2)确定时态: 介绍房间里物品的位置用一般现在时; (3)确定 人称: 第一人称和第三人称(介绍房间里的物品)。 【写作提纲】 【范文点评】 　　①Hello, everyone. My name's Tom. This is my room. ②My quilt and my hat are on the bed. A book and a clock are on the table. Some books and a pencil box are on the desk. I have a soccer ball. It's under the chair. ③Where is my schoolbag? It is on the floor. ④My parents think my room is tidy. I love my room very much. ①开篇点题。 ②使用连词and, 使内容衔接紧密; 正确使用方位介 词描述物品的位 置。 ③插入一个问句, 使行文更加活泼。 ④结尾总结全文 并再次点题。 假设你是Dale, 请根据下面的图片提示简单介绍一 下你的房间。 提示词: wall墙 要求: 语句通顺, 内容完整, 50词左右。 ___________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ______ This is my room. It's tidy. My jacket is on the bed. My quilt is on the bed, too. That is my picture. It's on the wall. My clock is on the chair. On the desk are some CDs and my computer. Where are my books? Oh, they are in the bookcase. Is my room nice?