呼和浩特专版2020中考英语复习方案第一篇教材考点梳理话题写作06安全问题课件 24页

话题写作（六） 安全问题 [ 话题来源 : 八上 M12, 九上 M4] 第一篇　教材考点梳理 【 话题点睛 】 该话题主要涉及如何保护人身安全、校园安全、交通安全等 , 此类试题常以要点提示的方式来考查。 【 典型例题 】 [2019 · 衡阳 ] 　　根据一项新的调查 , 学生安全已经成为一个大的问题。假设你是一名老师 , 对学生进行以“自我保护”为主题的消防安全教育 , 请以“ How to Protect Yourself in a Fire ”为题 , 提出你的建议。 [ 要求 ] 1. 短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名 ; 2. 书写工整 , 语句通顺 , 连贯 ; 3. 词数不少于 80( 开头已给出 , 不计入总词数 ) 。 典例分析 [ 参考词汇 ] cover v. 遮盖　 take the lift 乘坐电梯　 exit n. 出口　 towel n. 毛巾　 shut off 切断 How to Protect Yourself in a Fire 　　According to a new survey, student safety has become a big problem. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【 思路点拨 】 1. 要点提炼 : 本文以学生的安全教育为切入点 , 对学生如何在火灾中进行自我保护提出几点建议。可以提炼出三个要点 : (1) 自我防护 ; (2) 切断电源 ; (3) 找到安全出口并迅速撤离。 2. 时态 : 一般现在时。 3. 人称 : 第一人称。 【 写作架构 】 【 基础写作 】 根据所给提示写句子。 1. 基础句 我们应该教会学生如何在火灾中保护自己。 (should) __________________________________________________________________________. → 升格句 __________________________________________________________________ .  (It is+adj.+to do sth.) We should teach students how to protect themselves in a fire It is necessary to teach students how to protect themselves in a fire 2. 基础句 我们应该保持冷静 , 立刻用湿毛巾捂住鼻子 , 因为燃烧的物品会释放有毒烟雾。 (keep calm; cover … with … ) __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________. → 升格句 _________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________.  ( 用含定语从句的结构表达 ) We should keep calm and cover our nose with a wet towel immediately, because the burning things will release poisonous smoke We should keep calm and cover our nose with a wet towel immediately, which will be helpful to protect us against the poisonous smoke released by the burning things 3. 基础句 我们应该切断房间里的电源 , 否则我们会受到伤害。 (cut off) __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________. → 升格句 _________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ .  (in case) We should cut off the electricity in the house, or we could get hurt by it We should cut off the electricity in the house in case we could get hurt by it 【 连句成文 】 How to Protect Yourself in a Fire According to a new survey, student safety has become a big problem. So it is necessary to teach students how to protect themselves in a fire. And here come the methods. First, we should keep calm and cover our nose with a wet towel immediately, which will be helpful to protect us against the poisonous smoke released by the burning things. Second, we should cut off the electricity in the house in case we could get hurt by it. Next, we should find the exit and try our best to get out of the house quickly. We’d better walk the stairs instead of taking the lift. Last, no matter when we are in danger, don’t forget to call the police. 　　 I think the methods above are very useful for the self-protection in a fire. 【 导入主题句 】 1. If we are in danger, we must call the police or ask teachers for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. 2. Nothing is more important than obeying the safety regulations. 3. We are supposed to stop any school bully when we are in the trouble of it. 拓展积累 4. We may get hurt or lose our lives if we don’t obey the traffic rules on the road. 5. When facing an accident, the first and most important rule is to stay calm. 【 文章的发展句 】 1. We should always be friendly and helpful when making friends with others. 2. We shouldn’t crowd or push each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school. 3. To be safer, we should keep away from the net bar, and go to school and go back home on time. 4. We mustn’t go swimming without our parents’ or teachers’ permission. 5. When someone threatens us, we should call the police for help. 【 文章的结尾句 】 1. All in all, we need to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger. 2. In short, safety must come first! 3. In a word, we are supposed to try our best to behave well. 4. In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily. 5. If we are in danger in case, we should keep calm first. Then call the police at 110 or ask the teachers or parents for help. A 　 [2019 · 乐山 ] 　　为了让学生吃到更加营养、安全的食品 , 政府出台了陪餐制 , 要求从 4 月 1 日起 , 学校领导陪同学生用餐。请你根据以下要点 , 给校报英语专栏写一篇短文 , 谈谈自己的看法。 [ 提示 ] 1. 学生吃得健康、安全 ; 2. 及时发现就餐问题 ; 3. 食堂提供食品多样 ; 4. 父母更加放心。 实战演练 [ 注意 ] 1. 词数 :80 左右 ; 开头已给出 , 不计入总词数 ; 2. 可适当增加细节 , 以使行文连贯 ; 3. 参考词汇 : 规定 regulation ( n. ); 食堂 cafeteria ( n. ); 营养的 nutritious ( adj. ) 　　 A new food safety regulation was put into use on April 1 to improve nutrition and food safety in schools. It asks the school leaders to eat with students in their cafeterias. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ One possible version : A new food safety regulation was put into use on April 1 to improve nutrition and food safety in schools. It asks the school leaders to eat with students in their cafeterias. Thanks to the regulation, something great has taken place in our school. First, we eat more healthily and safely than before. Second, if there is any problem about food safety or others, our school leaders are able to know and solve it quickly. Also, the cafeteria workers are trying to provide different kinds of food for us. In other words, our parents needn’t worry about our diet any more. We teenagers are still young and need to grow healthily, so I think the new regulation is really good and necessary. I hope it will be carried on forever. B 　 [2019 · 娄底 ] 　　“读万卷书 , 行万里路” , 研学旅行现在受到教育主管部门和学校的高度重视 , 也深受学生和家长的欢迎。假如你们学校的英文网站就研学旅行中需要注意的事项发帖 , 征集建议。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文 , 进行跟帖回复。 [ 要点 ] [ 要求 ] 1. 文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名等 ; 2. 语言要通顺 , 表达要正确 ; 3. 要求包含所有要点提示 , 为了行文需要 , 可适当拓展和增加要点 ; 4. 词数 : 不少于 60 个英语单词 , 开头已给出 , 不计入总词数。 [ 参考词汇 ] 在危险中 in danger 　报警 call the police Now study trips are becoming more and more popular with parents and students. What should we pay attention to when we’re having a study trip? Here’s my advice. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ One possible version : Now study trips are becoming more and more popular with parents and students. What should we pay attention to when we’re having a study trip ? Here’s my advice. During the time, we should have more vegetables, fruit and water to keep healthy. However, it may cause some safety problems. We should always be together with others. We have to stay away from dangerous places. If someone is in danger, call the police at once. In a word, the study trip is one of the best ways for learning. It has great meanings. Also, it can open our eyes as well as help us develop our independence. I think it’s an opportunity for us to have wonderful experiences. We can also create great memories for our lifetime.