中考英语备考作文专项练习解析版 13页

‎2019年中考英语备考作文专项练习（解析版）‎ 一、书面表达 1. 假如你是Dave，最近Nancy写信询问你一天的生活、学习情况，以及你的学校规章制度等情况，请你给她写一封回信，信的内容必须包括以下要点，可以 适当的发挥，不少于80个单词．信的开头已给出，不计入总词数． 要点提示： 1早晨六点起床，七点搭公共汽车到达学校．中午在学校吃饭，下午放学后弹一个小时的钢琴． 2校规：按时到校，不打架，上课不能听音乐，不能留长发．见到老师要问好．（可用haveto/must，can，can't等词） 3对校规的感受． Dear Nancy， Thanks for your last letter．You want to know                                                                   Yours， Dave．‎ ‎【答案】DearNancy， Thanks for your last letter．You want to know my life，now let me tell you something about it． I usually get up at six in the morning，and I take the bus to school at seven，I have lunch at school，after a short rest，we have three classes in the afternoon，and I play the piano for an hour after school in the afternoon．【要点一，早晨六点起床，七点搭公共汽车到达学校．中午在学校吃饭，下午放学后弹一个小时的钢琴】There are some rules in my school，we have to get to school on time，we can't fight and we can't listen to music in class，we should keep our hair short and we should say hello when we meet the teachers【高分句型一，注意时间状语从句的使用】【要点二，校规】，I think it's best to follow the rules【高分句型二，注意宾语从句的使用】．【要点三，对校规的感受】‎ ‎【解析】高分句型一    we should keep our hair short and we should say hello when we meet the teachers．我们不能留长发．见到老师要问好． 这是when引导的时间状语从句，当…时候． 高分句型二   I think it's best to follow the rules．我认为最好遵守规则．it's best to do sth．最好做某事，是固定句型． 动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题．注意不要遗漏要点，句子要通顺连贯，没有语法错误． ‎ 2. 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack来信，说他暑假期间要来中国交流学习，他学了两年中文，但是仍然担心用中文交流时会遇到困难．请你用英语给Jack写封回信，提几点建议，要点如下： 1．大胆自信； 2．放慢语速； 3．借助图画或肢体语言等表达方式． 注意： 1．词数80～100； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息； 4‎ ‎．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数． 参考词汇：自信的 confident 肢体语言 body language Dear Jack， How is everything going？I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer．                   Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua．‎ ‎【答案】Dear Jack， How is everything going？I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer．Now let me tell you something about how to learn Chinese well．Learning Chinese just like learning any other foreign language，you should not be shy and use speak Chinese whenever you can【要点一，大胆自信，不要害羞】．This is very important．The more you use Chinese，the better you will learn it【高分句型一，the more，the more句型的使用】．And you'd better speak slowly and listen to the tape and repeat after it．【要点二，放慢语速】If others can't understand you，you can use  pictures or body language to help you【高分句型二，注意if引导的条件状语从句的使用】【要点三，借助图画或肢体语言等表达方式】．I hope these advice can help you． Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua．‎ ‎【解析】高分句型一 The more you use Chinese，the better you will learn it你用汉语越多，你就会学得越好．the more，the more是固定句型，越…越…． 高分句型二 If others can't understand you，you can use  pictures or body language to help you如果别人不能理解你，你可以用图片或肢体语言来帮助你．这是if引导的条件状语从句，use  pictures or body language to help you用图片或肢体语言来帮助你． 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑 关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等． ‎ 1. 假如你是Maria，请根据表格中提示的内容，写一篇题为“My Healthy Life”的短文，介绍你的日常活动安排。60词左右。 ‎ ‎6:00 a.m. ‎ get up ‎ ‎6:20 a.m. ‎ exercise ‎ ‎6:50 a.m. ‎ take a shower ‎ ‎9:30 p.m. ‎ go to bed ‎ Favorite food ‎ vegetables, fruit and milk ‎ After school ‎ tennis ‎ My Healthy Life ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】My Healthy Life My name is Maria. My life is healthy. In the morning, I usually get up at 6:00. At 6:20, I ‎ exercise. Then I take a shower half an hour later. For breakfast, I like eating vegetables and fruit best. I like drinking milk, too. I think they are good for me. At night, I usually go to bed early at 9:30. As for sports, I usually play tennis with my friends on weekends or after school because it’s my favorite sport. As you can see, I have a healthy life and I can look after myself well.‎ ‎【解析】【思路点拨】这是一篇介绍自己日常生活的作文，可知用一般现在时，按照表格中的内容用一般现在时去称述就可以了。 【亮点句式】 1.get up起床 2.take a shower洗澡 【高分句型】  1.For breakfast, I like eating vegetables and fruit best. 早餐，我喜欢吃蔬菜和水果。 2.I usually play tennis with my friends on weekends or after school.我通常周末或者放学和朋友打网球。 ‎ 1. 人人都希望过有意义的周末．假如你是Sally，请给你的好友Alice写一封信，告诉她你是如何度过周日的． 提示：1．短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明； 2．短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3．词数不少于60，开头已经给出，不计入总词数． ‎ ‎【答案】Dear Alice， How's it going？ Let me tell you something about last Sunday．（开篇点题）I had a busy Sunday． In the morning， I did my homework at home． After that， I began to clean my room（高分句型一）． My parents were not at home． So I went to visit my grandmother in the afternoon． I helped her wash the clothes（高分句型二）． Then I cooked tomato noodles and had noodles with my grandmother． In the evening， I watched TV with her．（从事的活动）I was a little tired but really happy．（作者的感受） How about your weekend？ Was it busy？ Please write to me soon! Yours， Sally．‎ ‎【解析】高分句型一： After that， I began to clean my room．之后，我开始打扫房间．考查短语begin to do sth． 高分句型二： I helped her wash the clothes．我帮她洗衣服．考查短语help sb． do sth． ‎ 在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题． ‎ 1. 假如你是班里英语学得最棒的学生，应老师和同学之邀作一次题为“怎样学好英语”的报告，请根据下面的提示写一篇短文。80词左右（给出部分不计入总词数）。 ‎ 提示内容：‎ ‎（1）经常听英文广播和看英文电影；‎ ‎（2）多学唱英文歌曲；‎ ‎（3）英语课上要多说英语，尽量多和外国人谈话；‎ ‎（4）多读英文报纸和自己喜欢的英语杂志；‎ ‎（5）最好交一个英国或美国笔友并经常发英文电子邮件。‎ Dear classmates，‎ ‎______________________________________________________Wish all of us can improve our English.‎ ‎    That’s all. Thank you for listening to me.‎ ‎【答案】Dear classmates, I'm very glad to share my ideas on how to learn English well with you. I think we should often listen to the radio in English and watch English films. When we are free, why not learn to sing more English songs? It's god for our listening and speaking. When we are having English class, we should always speak English, and after class, try to speak to foreigners. It's also a good idea to read newspapers and magazines in English. We can make a pen friend from England or America and write emails to each other. Wish all of us can improve our English. That's all. Thank you for listening to me.‎ ‎【解析】这是一篇提纲作文。你是班里英语学得最棒的学生，应老师和同学之邀作一次题为“怎样学好英语”的报告，请根据所给的提示写一篇短文。结合所给提示内容，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意要完整地表达出提纲所给内容，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式。 ‎ 温馨提示：词数80左右（给出部分不计入总词数）。‎ ‎ ‎ 2. 在成长过程中，我们经常会碰到一些烦恼．假设你是Lin Tao，请根据下表提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法．‎ 你的烦恼 你的做法 朋友少 友善待人 父母不理解 学会交流 学习压力大，课外活动少 ‎…（自主发挥，至少两点）‎ 要求：1．词数100 词左右，开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数． 2．所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息，可适当的发挥． ‎ Hello everyone， I am Lin Tao．I'd like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them． ______ That's all．Thank you!‎ ‎【答案】I have few friends．I encourage myself to be kind to others．I smile at everyone．My parents don't understand me．I think we should talk with them．Good communication can make a better understanding of each other．I often feel stressed because of my study and I don't have many chances to take part in after-class activities．First，listening to the teachers carefully in class is one of the best secrets of improving my study．Second，Take part in as many activities as possible because it's good for the mind and the body．The healthier we are，the better we will be at our schoolwork ‎【解析】Hello everyone， I am Lin Tao．I'd like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them（高分句型）．（引出话题） I have few friends．I encourage myself to be kind to others（高分句型）．I smile at everyone．My parents don't understand me．I think we should talk with them．Good communication can make a better understanding of each other．I often feel stressed because of my study and I don't have many chances to take part in after-class activities．（我的烦恼）First，listening to the teachers carefully in class is one of the best secrets of improving my study．Second，Take part in as many activities as possible because it's good for the mind and the body．The healthier we are，the better we will be at our schoolwork．（我的做法） That's all．Thank you! 本题是一篇给材料作文，要求用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法．要包含表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥．短文用第一人称形式，一般现在时态． I'd like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them我想谈谈我的问题以及如何处理这些问题．这里would like to do sth表示想做某事． I encourage myself to be kind to others．我鼓励自己善待他人．这里encourage sb to do sth表示鼓励某人做某事． 图表类作文写作之前考生首先要认真审题，确定文章的中心．表格内容要全部包括在作文中，词数要符合要求．句式表达要正确，注意句子的主谓宾、主系表等结构．文章结构要清晰．考生在平时的英语学习中需牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理，也可为文章增色不少． ‎ 1. 你的美国朋友John计划暑假来中国旅游．请你根据以下图示，用英语在QQ中给他留言，介绍并推荐你的家乡福建，词数80左右． 要求：‎ ‎ 1．必须包含所有提示信息，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2．意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3．请勿在文中使用真实的姓校名及提示信息以外的地名． Hi，John，I'm glad to hear that you're planning to travel around China during the summer vacation．I'd like to invite you to my hometown Fujian for a visit． Fujian lies                                             I'm looking forward to meeting you!‎ ‎【答案】Hi，John，I'm glad to hear that you're planning to travel around China during the summer vacation．I'd like to invite you to my hometown Fujian for a visit．（开篇点题） Fujian lies in the southeast of China with Fuzhou as its capital city．It has a population of over 38 million．Because of the nice environment，it's known as Refreshing Fujian．【高分句型一】It attracts millions of tourists from home and abroad．If you come，you can enjoy fresh air，blue sky as well as beautiful mountains and clear rivers．【高分句型二】Many famous places of interest like Mount Wuyi and Gulang Island are well worth visiting．Besides，you can taste various kinds of delicious food．（介绍福建） I'm looking forward to meeting you!（提出邀请）‎ ‎【解析】高分句型一： Because of the nice environment，it's known as Refreshing Fujian． 句中使用短语有："because of  因为"、"be known as  作为…而著名"．这句话意为：因为优美的环境，它以"清新福建"而著名． 高分句型二： If you come，you can enjoy fresh air，blue sky as well as beautiful mountains and clear rivers． 句中"If you come"为条件状语从句，"as well as  除了…也"．这句话意为：如果你来，你可以呼吸清新的空气、欣赏蓝色的天空，还有美丽的大山、清澈的河流． 考生需根据所提供的信息提炼文章的写作主题，需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识 ‎ 1. ‎—I believe ________________________________(我们遇到的所有问题都能够很容易被解决) as long as we dare to face them. ‎ ‎—OK, I'll try my best.‎ ‎【答案】all the problems we meet can be solved easily ‎【解析】句意：——我相信只要我们敢于面对它们，我们遇到的所有问题都能够很容易被解决。——好的，我会尽最大努力。由句意可知，此处应是一个定语从句和情态动词can的被动语态，all the problems we meet表示我们遇到的所有问题；can be solved表示能够被解决；修饰动词解决需用副词easily。故填all the problems we meet can be solved easily。 ‎ 2. 在学习有关环境保护的话题后，英语老师让大家展开课堂讨论．请你以"What Can We Do for the Environment"为题，写一篇保护环境的英语讨论稿，为参加讨论活动做准备． ‎ 行 为 目  的 在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋 保护环境 再利用使用过的课本 节约纸张 离开教室应关灯 节约能源 走路或骑自行车上学 减少污染 内容包括： 注意： l．词数：80词左右．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2．可根据要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3．参考词汇：布袋子cloth bag 能源energy  课本textbook What Can We Do for the Environment Hello，everyone．It's nice to speak about what we can do for the environment．And I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem．                                                Thank you for your listening!‎ ‎【答案】What Can We Do for the Environment Hello，everyone．It's nice to speak about what we can do for the environment．And I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem． First，we can use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping．【高分句型一】It helps to protect the environment．（在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋，保护环境）Next，we need to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can so that more paper can be saved．【高分句型二】（再利用使用过的课本，节约纸张）Also，we should never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy（离开教室应关灯，节约能源）．What's more，it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school．We must try our best to reduce pollution．（走路或骑自行车上学，减少污染） In fact，even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment．I believe we can make the world a better place to live in． Thank you for your listening!‎ ‎【解析】【高分句型一】 First，we can use cloth bags①instead of plastic bags②when we go shopping首先我们在购物的时候用布袋而不是塑料袋． ①instead of而不是…，后加名词代词或动名词． ②when引导的时间状语从句． 【高分句型二】 Next，we need to reuse the old textbooks ①as possible as we can ②so that more paper ③can be saved．其次，我们需要尽可能的再利用使用过的课本，那样就能节约纸张． ①as possible as sb can尽可能的 ②so that引导的目的状语从句． ③more paper是动词save的承受者，构成被动关系，结合情态动词can用情态动词的被动语态---情态动词+be+过去分词． 草拟提纲，分清各要点之间的内在联系，寻求逻辑次序，分出层次，确定如何下手，使表达内容条理清楚． ‎ 1. 本周的主题班会是谈谈如何成为一个好孩子How to be a good child，请根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文．． 要点： 1．作为一个好孩子，应该学会帮助别人． 2． 在家里，我们应该主动帮助父母干家务，如扫地，倒垃圾等． 3．在学校，我们应该努力学习，尊敬老师．与同学友好想处，多参加体育活动． 4‎ ‎．有很多需要的人，如去敬老院帮助老人，去医院看望生病的孩子等． 5． 实际上，帮助别人就是帮助自己． 要求：1．词数80词左右.2．适当发挥，行文连贯．， 参考词汇：尊敬   respect   与谁友好相处   get on well with 陷入麻烦中get in trouble  同学  classmates                        ．‎ ‎【答案】If you ask me how to be a good child，I'll make a quick answer【高分句型一，注意if引导的条件状语从句的使用】，"There are many ways to be a good child．【开篇点明主题】"First，as a good child，you should learn to help others【高分句型二，注意instead of的使用】．Second，we should help parents do housework at home，such as sweeping，taking out the trash and so on．Third，we should study hard at school and respect  teachers，we should also get on well with classmates and take more exercise．Fourth，we should help people who need help【高分句型二，注意定语从句的使用】，we can go to the nursing home to help the old or visit the sick children in the hospital，in fact，to help others is to help themselves【正文部分详细介绍如何成为一个好孩子】．Do you want to be a good child？Let's get moving!【结尾紧扣主题】‎ ‎【解析】高分句型一   If you ask me how to be a good child，I'll make a quick answer．  如果你问我如何做一个好孩子，我会很快回答你．这是if引导的条件状语从句，主句是一般将来时，从句用的是一般现在时． 高分句型二 we should help people who need help．我们应该帮助需要帮助的人．who need help是一个定语从句，修饰先行people． 动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词．写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等． ‎ 1. 假如你是韩梅，在网上认识了一位美国笔友Tom．Tom写信给你介绍了他的个人情况，请你根据下面的信息给他写一封回信． 注意：1．词数60左右； 2．回信中要介绍你的家庭、饮食情况、学校生活等信息； 3．文中不能出现与本人相关的信息； 4．信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数． Dear Tom， How are you？I'm writing to tell you something about myself． ______ I hope you can come to Anqing soon．Then we can play together． Yours， Han Mei．‎ ‎【答案】I have a happy family．My father is 38 years old．He's a teacher．My mother is 36．She's a doctor．They love me very much．I study in a middle school in Anqing．I have seven classes every school day．At school，we have Chinese，English，math，music and so on．English is my favorite subject．I think it's interesting．After school，I often play basketball with my friends．As for food，I like noodles，rice，fish and vegetables．They are good for my health．‎ ‎【解析】Dear Tom，      How are you？I'm writing to tell you something about myself．      I have a happy family．My father is 38 years old．He's a teacher．My mother is 36．She's a doctor．They love me very much．I study in a middle school in Anqing．I have seven classes ‎ every school day．At school，we have Chinese，English，math，music and so on．English is my favorite subject．I think it's interesting．（高分句型一）After school，I often play basketball with my friends．（家庭、学校生活）As for food，I like noodles，rice，fish and vegetables．They are good for my health．（饮食情况）（高分句型二）      I hope you can come to Anqing soon．Then we can play together．                                                                   Yours，                                                                   Han Mei 高分句型一： I think it's interesting我认为很有趣． think后省略了that的宾语从句． 高分句型二： They are good for my health．他们对我的健康有好处． be good for 对……有好处 在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题． ‎ 1. 假如你叫CaoYang，请根据所给提示，写一封电子邮件，向你的网友Ben介绍自己的情况．‎ 姓名 Cao Yang 年龄：13‎ 学校：阳光中学 班级：七年级6班 国籍：中国 外貌 高个、短发、…‎ 特长 爱好 ‎①功课都好，最喜欢… ②看书（了解世界、…） ③游泳（课后谈论、…）‎ 偶像 ‎…‎ 原因 ‎…‎ 梦想 长大后…‎ 要求： 1．词数100左右；开头与结尾已给出，不计入总字数；不得出现真实的人名、班级名； 2．短文应包括表格内所有内容要点，不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺．           Dear Ben，                                                                           All the best， Cao Yang．‎ ‎【答案】DearBen， Hello，Ben．Nice to meet you．I'd like to introduce myself to you．My name is Cao Yang．I come from China．I'm thirteen years old．I study in Sunshine Middle School．I am in Class 6 Grade 7．（基本介绍）I am tall and have short hair．I have two big eyes and a big mouth．I wear glasses．（外貌）My grades are all good and my favorite subject is English．I like reading because I can learn a lot about the world．【高分句型一】I also like swimming．（特长爱好）My idol is Ning Zetao because he is good at swimming and win many medals．（偶像）I want to be become a swimmer like him when I grow up．【高分句型二】（梦想） ‎ All the best， Cao Yang ‎【解析】高分句型一： I like reading because I can learn a lot about the world． 句中"because I can learn a lot about the world"为原因状语从句．句中短语有"like doing sth 喜欢做某事"．这句话意为：我喜欢读书，因为我可以了解世界． 高分句型二： I want to be become a swimmer like him when I grow up． 句中"when I grow up"为时间状语从句，使用短语有"want to do sth 想做某事"、"grow up 长大"．这句话意为：当我长大，我想成为一个像他一样的游泳运动员． 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅． ‎ 1. 请根据以下表格所提供的内容，以“My good friend”为题，用英语写一篇60个词左右的短文，可适当增添内容。 ‎ Name Lily Age ‎13‎ Look a round face, big eyes, a small mouth Country Fuzhou，China Favorite food vegetables, fish Likes reading English Dislikes(不喜欢）‎ Chinese Get up ‎6:15a.m.‎ Go home ‎4:40p.m.‎ 要求：‎ ‎1.句子通顺，语法正确，书写规范，卷面整洁。‎ ‎2. 必须包含所有提示信息,不少于8句话。‎ ‎3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。‎ My good friend I have a good friend.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ She is a nice girl.‎ ‎【答案】                                                                                          My good friend ‎    I have a good friend. Her name is Lily. She is my good friend. She is 13 years old. She has a round face and a small mouth. Her eyes are big. Lily comes from Fuzhou, China. Her favorite food is vegetables and fish. She likes reading English but she doesn't like Chinese at all. Every day, she often gets up at 6:15 in the morning and goes home at 4:40 in the afternoon. She is a nice girl.‎ ‎【解析】请根据以下表格所提供的内容，以“My good friend”为题，用英语写一篇60个词左右的短文，可适当增添内容。所以句子的主语应该用第三人称单数形式，因为是介绍好朋友的平时的情况，所以句子的时态用一般现在时，要注意不要遗漏要点，要注意上下文的衔接。 ‎ 1. 假如你是Vince，你的笔友Anna想了解你的上学方式和学校生活，请根据以下信息，写封e-mail给她。 ‎ ‎1．家离学校3千米；‎ ‎2．每天6点起床，早饭后坐地铁；‎ ‎3．到校花15分钟；‎ ‎4．上午4节课，下午3节课；‎ ‎5．晚饭后做作业，9:30睡觉。‎ 注意：60词左右，可适当发挥。‎ Dear Anna,‎ How are you? You said you wanted to know how I get to school, and how my school life is going. Let me tell you. ‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Vince ‎【答案】Dear Anna,   How are you? You said you wanted to know how I get to school, and how my school life is going. Let me tell you. I usually get up at 6:00 every day. After breakfast, I leave home for the subway station. My home is 3 kilometers from my school, and it usually takes me 15 minutes to get there by subway. The subway ride is never boring because I always listen to music. And I have four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon. When I get home, I usually have dinner. After dinner, I do my homework for 2 hours. Before I go to bed, I read some books. At 9:30, I go to bed. ‎ ‎  What about you? How do you go to school?                                  Yours,                                   Vince ‎【解析】【思路点拨】写作时需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达，并且注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，使文章显得更有档次，特别在选择句式上要赋予变化。 【亮点词汇】 1.leave home for the subway station离开家去地铁站 2.by subway乘地铁 3.is never boring从不讨厌 4.listen to music听音乐 【高分句型】 1.You said you wanted to know how I get to school（宾语从句how I get to school） 2.it usually takes me 15 minutes to get there by subway（使用了句型it takes sb.some time to do sth.) ‎ 1. ‎"民以食为天"，饮食的安全和健康受到越来越多的关注和重视．请你以"Say NO to Junk Food"为题，根据以下要点写一篇英语短文． 写作要点： 1、垃圾食品尽管美味，但对健康无益，而且其过多的包装会产生更多的垃圾； 2、远离垃圾食品，还应该选择正确的生活方式，如：①三餐要有规律，少吃零食、快餐；②多吃蔬菜、水果等健康食物，以提供身体必需营养；③多参加户外活动… 写作要求： 1、词数：80左右，开头与结尾已写出，不计入总词数； 2、内容必须包括上述所有要点，可适当发挥； 3、参考词汇：过多包装 over packaging； 有规律的 regularly； 营养 nutrition Say NO to Junk FoodNowadays，more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health．As far as I am concerned，we should say no to junk food．                                                   In a word，a healthy diet with less junk food can help you make us stronger and stronger．‎ ‎【答案】Say NO to Junk Food Nowadays，more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health．As far as I am concerned，we should say no to junk food．（开篇点题） There is no doubt that junk food is made delicious and attractive，but it surely does harm to our body．Meanwhile，the over packaging necessarily leads to much more rubbish．（远离垃圾食品的原因） To get away from the junk food，we should focus on how to keep a healthy lifestyle．There are many tips to follow．First，eat regularly，three meals a day on time．Try as few snacks or fast food as possible．Second，take more fruit and vegetables which can provide the nutrition we need．【高分句型一】What's more，do more outdoor activities．If you are busy with something interesting，you will get away from junk food．【高分句型二】（正确的生活方式） ‎ In a word，a healthy diet with less junk food can help you make us stronger and stronger．（总结全文）‎ ‎【解析】高分句型一： Second，take more fruit and vegetables which can provide the nutrition we need． 句中"which can provide the nutrition we need"为定语从句，修饰先行词"fruit and vegetables"．这句话意为：第二，多吃一些可以给我们提供营养的水果和蔬菜． 高分句型二： If you are busy with something interesting，you will get away from junk food． 句中"If you are busy with something interesting"为if引导的条件状语从句，遵循"主将从现"原则．句中短语有：be busy with sth  忙于做某事；get away from…远离…这句话意为：如果你在忙一些有趣的事情，你将会远离垃圾食品． 动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题．注意不要遗漏要点，句子要通顺连贯，没有语法错误． ‎ 1. 书面表达 以“Life in the Future”为题写一篇作文，70词左右，按下列提示完成。‎ ‎1、想象一下未来生活是什么样子的。‎ ‎2、  很多事情都由机器人完成，例如：做家务，购物，和我们聊天等等。‎ ‎3、  为了未来美好的生活我们应该努力学习。‎ ‎4、结合自身情况，可适当发挥 ‎【答案】略。‎ ‎【解析】这是一篇命题作文。本文只给出了话题和要点，我们要做的就是发挥想象用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。根据话题内容可知本文主要是一般将来时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。  ‎