广州中考专题考点透视作文范文完整版 8页

广州12年中考考点透视（作文专题）‎ ‎【2016年广州中考原题】 2017年6月11日星期日 更新版 第三节 书面表达（共1小题，满分15分）‎ 五四青年节那天，你参加了学校组织的志愿者活动。你的英语老师要求你写一则英文日志，包括以下要点：‎ 1. 时间：2016年5月4日 地点：广东博物馆 2. 内容： 七年级学生：当导游，带参观者到不同展馆 八年级学生：表演短剧，介绍广州历史 九年级学生：制作海报，帮助人们了解岭南文化 3. 意义（活动对你个人和社会的意义）‎ 注意：1. 参考词汇：展馆（display room）、海报（poster）；‎ ‎ 2. 词数：80词左右（日记的开头已给出，不计入词数）；‎ ‎ 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。‎ Wednesday, May 4th, 2016‎ Dear Diary, ‎ I went to the Guangdong Museum with my schoolmates to do some voluntary work today. ____________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________‎ 作文简析 1. 2016广州中考英语沿用往年风格，仍旧是文化类的提纲作文，主题是志愿者活动。这个话题学生比较熟悉，在八年级下册Unit1已经出现。 2. 全文的要点包括活动内容和活动意义。其中，活动内容已经给出详细的文字提示，学生需要做好内容翻译。相较之下，活动意义没有直接提示，学生需要对志愿者活动有一定的认识，且需要自行组织语言，难度较大。 3. 此外，全文需要用到两种时态，活动内容采用一般过去时，而活动意义则采用一般现在时。     Wednesday, May 4th, 2016Ø   参考作文 Dear diary,     I went to the Guangdong Museum with my schoolmates to do some voluntary work today.Students from three grades took part in it and worked as different roles. Students of Grade Sevenworked as guides who took visitors to different rooms. And those of Grade Eight played a shortopera, introducing Guangzhou history to tourists. As for students of Grade Nine, they madebeautiful posters which helped people know Lingnan Culture better.‎ Wednesday, May 4th, 2016 参考作文  Dear diary, I went to the Guangdong Museum with my schoolmates to do some voluntary work today. Students from three grades took part in it and worked as different roles. Students of Grade Seven worked as guides who took visitors to different rooms. And those of Grade Eight played a short opera, introducing Guangzhou history to tourists. As for students of Grade Nine, they made beautiful posters which helped people know Lingnan Culture better. In my opinion, it is a great help to hold such activities. On one hand, it is a good chance for us students to develop a sense of responsibility as well as our work ability. On the other hand, the history and culture can be passed on from one generation to another.‎ ‎【2015年广州中考原题】‎ 书面表达（共1题，满分15分） 你校将开设一些特色课程，学生可根据兴趣进行选择。请根据以下内容提示为学校英文网页写一篇短文，介绍这些课程、提出你建议增设的课程并说明理由。‎ Students in our school are free to choose some special courses according to their interest. … ‎ 注意：1. 参考词汇：模型制作 model making 2. 词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）； ‎ ‎3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。‎ 第三节 作文 ‎ 范文1： ‎ Students in our school are free to choose some special courses according to their interest. These courses will help students relax themselves after school. There are many courses for them to choose, such as English drama, football, or model making. Here is more information. ‎ If you want to improve your oral English, English drama may be the first choice. It is a good chance to practice not only oral English, but also performing skills. If you are interested in football, take the football course. It is good for your physical health. Besides, you can learn more about teamwork. What about model making? You will be amazed by the science world and become interested in it. ‎ For my part, a painting course can be added, because students like drawing so much. I hope these courses would be helpful and each student would enjoy a bright and colorful school life here! ‎ 范文2： ‎ Students in our school are free to choose some special courses according to their interests. It is such cheerful news because it can enrich students’ after-school lives. ‎ Here is some information about each course. If you are keen on sports, soccer course will be a great choice. Not only can it make you strong and healthy, but also offers you a good chance to make friends and encourage teamwork. For those who are interested in science, model making is definitely their favorite. Students can get to know more about science, which will greatly arouse their interest. If you want to practice your oral English, you can take a course on English drama. When you are challenging different characters, you also learn how to perform them. ‎ In my opinion, I suggest adding a music course. Lots of students are suffering from the stress of study. It is relaxing for them to play musical instruments. Hope everyone can enjoy the courses mentioned above.‎ ‎【2014年广州中考原题】‎ 为弘扬广府文化，你校在上周六举行了一次 “Guangzhou Culture Festival”的活动。请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，介绍活动的情况并提出你对下一年文化节的建议。‎ 注意：1. 词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）；‎ ‎ 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 ‎ ‎ In order to increase students’ knowledge about the traditional culture of Guangzhou, our school held a “Guangzhou Culture Festival” last Saturday. ...‎ In order to increase students’ knowledge about the traditional culture of Guangzhou, our school held a “Guangzhou Culture Festival” last Saturday. There were many meaningful activities, such as, Cantonese Opera Competition, picture show and food show. The students were greatly interested in them and they also took an active part. The music there sounded beautiful, and the clothes were beautiful as well. The pictures show not only showed us the changes of Guangzhou, but also let us learn more about the history as well as the culture of Guangzhou. What attracted us most is the food show. Much delicious food was showed, and we learned more about the use of the dishes. As I’m not a native person, I hope that I can learn more about Guangzhou in the next culture festival, especially something about the dialect Cantonese.‎ Another possible version ‎ In order to increase students’ knowledge about the traditional culture of Guangzhou, our school held a “Guangzhou Culture ” last Saturday. ‎ The Cantonese Opera competition was held in order to attract the students’ attention. We were so interested that all of us took an active part in it. In the competition, we had fun not only listening to the beautiful music but also enjoying the pretty traditional clothes. ‎ Besides, there was also a Picture Show in the festival. It showed how Guangzhou changed. From the show, we can learn a lot about the history and culture of Guangzhou.‎ At last, we held the Food Show so that we could have a better understanding of the local food in Guangzhou. In the show, many kinds of food were showed, such as dim-sum, seafood and so on. The more I knew about the food culture of Guangzhou, the prouder I felt about being part of Guangzhou. ‎ The next festival will be coming next year. I hope more than one language will be used which will catch more people’s eye. On the other hand, it will be more exciting if some videos about Guangzhou’s history are played during the festival. In a word, I am really looking forward to the next festival.‎ ‎【2013年广州中考原题】‎ 新学期开始，你就读的国际学校的学生社团又开始招募了。假设你是社团负责人，请根据以下内容和提示要求写一篇英语短文，为新同学介绍下列社团的情况（包括名称、活动内容及其目的）。‎ Clubs are calling ‎ The new term is coming. For all our new students, I would like to introduce some of our clubs …‎ 注意：1.词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）；2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。‎ 范文一：‎ Clubs are calling ‎ The new term is coming. For all our new students, I would like to introduce some of our clubs.‎ ‎ Cool Players is a good choice for sports lovers. Here you can do sports one hour a day to build up your body. You can also watch sports matches here. If you are interested in books, go and join Smart Readers. Reading good books and writing a reader’s report are helpful to open your mind. Do you want to live a healthy life? In Excellent Cooks, you will learn how to design menus in healthy styles. If you want to design your own clothes, come to Fashion Designers. You can learn a lot from professional teachers.‎ ‎ You are sure to learn a lot here and why not join us at once?‎ 范文二 Clubs are calling ‎ The new term is coming. For all our new students, I would like to introduce some of our clubs.‎ ‎ If you want to strengthen your body, join Cool Players so that you can do exercise one hour a day and watch matches. Reading-lovers can go and join Smart Readers. You will read good books and broaden your horizons. A smart reader won’t forget to write a reader’s report. Anyone who loves cooking should consider Excellent Cooks. You can learn how to design menus in healthy styles as well as how to cook so that you can live healthily. Hope Finders may be the most meaningful club. It collects second-hand books for the students in poor areas.‎ ‎ I hope you can choose the one you like best and enjoy your school life.‎ ‎【2012年广州中考原题】‎ 你是学校英文报的小记者李华。请给你校初三学生写一封公开傍，就如何保持考前健康提出建议。主要内容如下：(1)早睡早起，保持充足睡眠； (2)饮食均衡，少吃垃圾食品；‎ ‎(3)多做体育运动； (4)你的其它建议。‎ Dear students，‎ ‎ As we all know,good health is important for success in the exams，so I’m writing to…‎ Best wishes and stay healthy．‎ ‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua 注意：1．词数80左右(信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数)；‎ ‎ 2．不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。‎ Dear students, ‎ As we all know, good health is important for success in the exams, so I’m writing to tell you how to keep healthy. First，we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once. ‎ Best wishes and stay healthy. ‎ Yours, Li Hua ‎【2011年广州中考原题】‎ 最近，你班就“你的理想职业”展开了一次调查。 下表是你们小组的情况请根据表格内容写一篇英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。‎ 组员 理想职业 原因 Mary 时装设计师(fashion designer)‎ 喜欢漂亮衣服，擅长绘画 Kate 园艺工(gardener)‎ 喜爱植物，想让城市更美 Mike 作家 愿意与别人分享精彩故事 Tom 厨师 为别人煮健康美味的食物 你 ‎？‎ ‎？‎ 注意：1.词数80左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；‎ ‎2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。‎ Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. Here’s a report about my group members’ ideas.‎ ‎……‎ Hopefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future.‎ One possible version：‎ Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. Here’s a report about my group members’ ideas.‎ ‎ Mary wants to be a fashion designer because she likes beautiful clothes and is good at drawing. Kate wants to be a gardener, she lives plants, she wants to make the cities better. Mike would like to be a writer. He’d like to share his wonderful stories with others. Tom would like to be a cook. He’d like to cook delicious food for others. I would like to be a policeman. I want to protect the people safe.‎ Hopefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future.‎ ‎【2010年广州中考原题】‎ 你校准备举行“节约用水，从现在做起”的英语征文比赛，你打算投稿。请根据以下表格内容写一篇英语短文。‎ 注意：词数80左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）‎ ‎ 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。‎ Act now to save water Water is very important to us…‎ ‎ Act Now to Save Water      Water is very important to us. Without water, neither plants nor animals can live. People can't live  either.      Nowadays, water shortages take a large percentage of world population. I'm very sorry to see there  are many people wasting water. And it's time for us to do something to save water.       Then what should we do?      We should always remember to turn off the tap after using it. We should learn to recycle the waste  water. For example, vegetables and fruit should be washed in a bowl rather than under a running tap,  and the water Can be reused for watering plants.      By thinking carefully about your water use at home and changing some water-wasting habits, to  protect water is to protect our life.‎ China is a big country of economic resources, the population of our country is very much, but our country's fresh water is rarely. Our country population is much, average per capita has the land, but the fresh water is less and less, so people had to waste water, do not save water, not to turn off the tap water after using a long time, take a shower, wash not to turn off the tap, no drinking water and put the bottle water away. Water is very important to us, if there is no water, we will not be able to survive, so I suggest everybody started to save water, protect our homes, to protect water!‎ ‎【2009年广州中考原题】‎ 看图写话(共6空格，第38、39、40、41格，每格1分；第37和第42格，每格3分）‎ 请根据图示的内容，把故事情节补充完整，要求语句通顺、全文意思连贯。‎ 注意：1．第37格要求至少写出两个完整的句子；‎ ‎ 2．第38、39、40、41格要求将句子补充完整，单词数不限；‎ ‎3．第42格要求将 You’d better…补充完整后，再至少写出一个完整的句子。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ It was Christmas Day. My friends came to my house. 37 How time flied! It was time for us to exchange(交换) our Christmas presents. I went to my bedroom to get the presents. When I went into the room, to my surprise, I found my friend Ben 38 my diary. It was impolite to do that! But Ben was laughing! I was 39 that I was about to cry. Ben felt a bit sorry when he found me standing 40 him. I hated him and shouted at him. He went out of my room at once and went home without saying goodbye to any of us. One of my best friends Amy asked me why Ben 41 so early. I told her what had just happened. She seemed to know what I should do. She said to me, " Don't shout at him. You'd better 42 . "‎ ‎【2008年广州中考原题】‎ 书面表达(满分l5分) ‎ 假设今年暑假一批英国中学生要来你校访问，你准备参与接待工作。为了提前做好各项准备，学校要求参与接待的学生用英语拟订一个接待计划。请根据下面酌构思图来拟订你的计划。内容包括： ‎ ‎ 1：你计划要做的事情(图中1～3项内容)及其原因或目的；‎ ‎ 2．你准备为来宾安排的l～2项活动。 ‎ 注意：1．词数80左右(计划的开头已给出，不计入总词数)； ．‎ ‎ 2．不能透露个人的任何信息(例如：学校和姓名等)，否则不予评分。‎ Some UK high school students will come to our school during the summer holidays. To help them, I. ..‎ ‎[写作指导]‎ ‎ 1．审清题意，明确写作意图和写作要求。‎ ‎ 2：宏观布局。根据写作要求确定文章整体结构，如 总——分、分——总或总——分——总。文章应分几个板块， 各自的核心内容是什么。这如同是人体的骨骼结构。 3．内部结构。根据布局设计，确定各板块的写作内容，并 根据其相互关系确定如何展开。这如同是人体的肌肉。 4．语言组织。如何开篇，什么样的语句能更好地植人主 题；为了更好地呈现内容，应采用何种句式，且能避重复；选取 总结性的词句，有力收尾，升华主题。这如同人的皮肤。‎ One possible version ‎ Some UK high school students will come to our school during the summer holidays. To help them, I think I need to practise my English more so .I can successfully pass on my meaning to our foreign friends. In order to understand the UK students better, I will try to learn about their interests and hobbies. Also, I should learn more about the history, culture and places of interest of Guangzhou so that I can show. them around the city. As Guangzhou is famous for its food, I will take.them to taste the delicious local foods when they come and I will also take them shopping.‎ ‎【2006年广州中考原题】‎ 书面表达（15分）‎ 你叫林海（英文名叫Joe），上面是你的朋友John发给你的电子邮件，他在邮件中提到了关于学校准备开办英语学习班的消息，你对此事很感兴趣，请给John回一封邮件，询问有关英语学习班的详情。‎ 邮件的要点如下：3．问英语学习班的上课时间、地点、内容以及费用。‎ ‎1．对英语学习班很感兴趣。 2．希望可以练习英语，结识朋友。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．邮件要通顺、连贯。 2．词数80左右，邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计人总词数。‎ ‎3．不能在答卷上透露个人的任何信息（例如具体的学校和姓名等），否则答案作废。‎ One of the possible versions:‎ Dear John,‎ Thanks very much for the information about the English evening class. It sounds very interesting to me. You know I want to practise my English and make some new friends. I think this English evening class will be helpful to me. Could you please tell me a little more about the class? When does it begin and hoe much does it cost? Where will the class be held? Also, do you have any more information about what we will do in class?‎ I’m looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.‎ Yours Joe