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2018年中考 作文专题复习
解题步骤:“三步走”
一.审题 审______, 审_____, 审_____
二.确定要点,找关键词 列_______,写_______分_____段
三.连词成句 过渡句,连接词,句型、单词、短语的挑选。
(尽量用自己知道的常用句型和基本句型,从而避免中国式英语)
四.整理成篇
1. 选用恰当的关联词
①开头:I’m sorry / happy to hear that…
As you know, / As you can see,…
Nowadays,…
Thank you for your last letter.
I am writing to tell you that…
② 正文:
On one hand, … On the other hand,…
…What’s more,… / Besides,…/ Furthermore,…
Last but not least,…最后但并非不重要…
=At last / In the end / Finally,…
The most important thing is that…
③总结:
引用名言 As a saying goes,“ ..........”
In a word, / In short, / All in all, / After all, / In general,…
Good luck / Best wishes!
适当评论,发表己见
How friendly you are!
As for this problem, I think ….
In my opinion / view / eyes,…
For me , … / As far as I am concerned , …
In fact / As a matter of fact, I don’t think you need to be sad.
It goes without saying that…毋庸置疑,毫无疑问…
Take care of yourself, will you?
五. 检查,修改,定稿,顺便检查字数,若不够,则设法在开头,中间,结尾适当增加一些信息的描述
1. 格式,拼写,标点 2.人称的搭配
2. 动词的时态,语态 4.主谓一致 5.名词的单复数
六 .一篇高分作文的标准
颜值高,结构严谨,要点齐全, 字数达到要求,语言准确、生动,结尾首尾呼应
作文类型一:具体的一段经历--感受--号召
范例话题:微笑的力量(power of smile)
微笑是人类最美的语言。某英文报以“Learn to smile”为题,举办学生征文活动。请你根据下面的信息,写一篇英语短文。内容包括:
1、微笑的力量(power of smile)
2、你的微笑故事以及故事给予你的启示。
3、号召大家笑对生活,感受美好。
A smile is the most beautiful language of human beings. A smile shows you are kind and friendly. It helps you get on well with others. It also brings good luck and makes others feel warm.
Take me as an example. One day,I argued with my best friend . After that, I found I made a mistake. I thought it over and made up my mind to say sorry to him. When I did it, he said nothing but smiled to me. I knew we would become best friends again. So it tells me that smiling can bridge the generation gap and stick to the friendship.
Generally speaking, it’s worth wearing the sweetest smile on our faces. A smile can make our world be full of warmth. Let’s smile to life, and it will smile back to us.
巧用信息归纳的已知信息: (切记:不能全照抄!!)
A smile is like the sunshine in winter. / It warms our hearts and gives us confidence.
A smile brings us warmth and courage.
Smiling makes us attractive. / Smiling helps to change our mood
Smiling relieves / reduces our stress.
时态:__________ 人称:___________
要点:(1)_______________(2)_______________(3)_______________
过渡句:___________________
讲事情经过的连词(或时间词)______________________________________
提建议的连接词:________________________
总结:__________________________________
作文类型二:A&B观点 赞同还是反对--表达看法
范例话题: 阅读
阅读是一个很好的习惯,而且随着科技的发展,以电子阅读为代表的网络在线阅读、手机阅读等形式让阅读变得更加便捷。请你写一篇有关阅读的作文。 内容包括:
1. 你阅读的习惯(喜欢的书籍类型、阅读时间和地点,购书方式等)。
2. 电子阅读和传统的纸质阅读,你更喜欢哪一种;谈谈此阅读方式的优点(至少2点)。
3. 号召大家都享受阅读的乐趣。
With the development of technology, it’s much more convenient for us to read, such as paper reading and electronic reading. I read books from time to time. As for me, I like reading novels written by Mo Yan best. And I enjoy reading books in my free time anywhere quiet. However, I prefer to read books on the paper rather than use e-books.
First of all, paper reading can make me feel more comfortable when I read books. Besides, I can also take notes on the paper books. Last but not least, I could give away some good books that I needn’t use any longer to spread more knowledge.
No one can deny that reading books is good for us. Let’s enjoy reading together anytime and anywhere.
作文类型三:针对生活现象--提出措施
范例话题: How to create a civilized city
很多城市正在创建文明城市。文明城市的创建需要靠每个人的努力。你在公共场合有没有看见一些不文明的行为呢?请你写一封倡议书,内容包括:
1.列举你在公共场所经常见到的两个不文明行为。
2.就文明准则提出你的看法。至少两条。
3.号召大家做一个文明的人。
Dear Citizens,
As we know, our city is aiming at being a civilized one. Everybody should make an effort.
However, some people around us still behave badly in public. For example, I often see people cut in line while getting on buses. Some people smoke in non-smoking areas. What’s worse, they even throw rubbish here and there. What bad habits they have! (要点1)
In my opinion, there is no doubt that we should try our best to make our city a civilized one. On the one hand, shouldn’t we always obey the rules in public? On the other hand, if I were you, I would try to stop people from being rude? In addition, the government is supposed to make some laws to punish the bad behavior in public. (要点2)
In a word, even the simplest everyday activities can make a great difference to our city. So let’s make every effort to be a polite person!(要点3)
谚语赏析
1. Every coin has two sides, it has both advantages and disadvantages.凡事都有两面性。
2. Actions speak louder than voice. 行动胜过语言。
3. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。
4. Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
5. Every dog has it’ s day. 每个人都有得意之日.
6. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。
7. Do as Romans do in Rome. 入乡随俗。
8. Experience is the mother of wisdom. 实践出真知。
9. Take things as they come. 既来之,则安之。
10. It's never too old to learn. 活到老,学到老。
11. Look before you leap. 三思而后行。
12. Rome was not built in a day. 冰冻三尺,非一日之寒。
13. Well begun, half done. 好的开始等于成功的一半。
14. East or west, home is the best. 金窝银窝不如自家草窝
15. There are two sides to every question.问题皆有两面。
16. Time and tide wait for no man. 时不我待。
17. Unity is strength. 团结就是力量。
18. As an old saying goes, “Without books, life is like a cup of bitter wine.”
19. No pains, no gains. 一份耕耘,一份收获.
20. No sweet without sweat. 先苦后甜
佳句赏析
1. Learning to write is learning to think. You don’t know things clearly unless you write them down.
2. Feeling good about life is the key to happiness.
3. The secret to happiness is to help others.
4. It’s polite to take a smile when you visit somebody for the first time.
5. Everyone is born with the ability to learn.
6. Children shouldn’t always depend on their parents.
7. Knowledge changes our life.
8. Whether you fail or fly, at least you tried.
9. Everyone should take part in saving the earth.
10. In a word, if everyone can do our best, we can make a difference to the world.
11. From my point of view, our life will be better if we learn how to reduce stress.
12. Parents play an important role in teaching their kids.
13.Although they don’t allow me to make my own decision and give me too much pressure, I know that it’s because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
14. I lost myself in the beauty of nature.
15. Playing computer games can get in the way of your study.
2018潮阳区一模考试 How to protect our personal information
1. 你对保护个人信息的看法
2. 列举属于个人信息的内容
3. 作为青少年,我们该如何保护个人信息
4. 号召大家保护并尊重个人信息
Nowadays, Internet technology is widely used in our life. So l think it's important for us to protect our personal information such as our ID card, telephone number and some private messages that include our personal information.
In order to protect our information well, we should take actions. On the one hand, when we go online, we must keep away from bad information. Take our safety seriously .On the other hand, we are supposed to improve our senses of safety and risks. Remember to prevent network fraud(网络诈骗).
All in all, everyone is expected to realize the importance of protecting our personal information. Wherever we are, take care of our personal information.
2018校性模拟测试一
假设你是来自中国的中学生李华,打算参加当地组织的国外冬令营,看完了这个网页后,你打算给Liz Payne留言,表达你在冬令营期间想去London Canal Museum参观的愿望。
内容包括:
1.简单介绍自己;
2.留言目的(包含冬令营的时间,听Liz Payne的讲座);
3.预期收获。
Dear Liz Payne,
I’m Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit London Canal Museum. From www.canalmuseum.org.uk, I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals”February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp. And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal. What’s more, I hope to learn more about London Canal Museum and even more about the UK.
I’m looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
2018校性模拟测试二
现在,越来越多关于中国传统文学的活动和节目兴起,逐步唤起人们对中国传统文学的关注,请你就此写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。 内容包括:
1.你喜欢中国传统文学吗?
2.你认为中国传统文学有哪些值得欣赏的地方?
3.请你给想学习中国传统文学的同学提出建议。﹙至少两点﹚
Recently, more and more activities and programs about Chinese traditional literature have attracted people’s attention.
As for me, I think it’s important to know and learn about them. I prefer reading Chinese traditional literature to playing mobile phone. They make us understand the beauty of Chinese traditional literature and get tons of knowledge from them, aren’t they?
If you want to learn about them, I have some advice for you. On the one hand, you should connect what the book talks about with your own experiences. And you will have a better understanding of them.On the other hand, why not discuss the meaning of a book or a poem with your teachers? I think it’s helpful for you to learn about them.
All in all, Chinese traditional literature is an important part of Chinese traditional culture. As a teenager, we must pay more attention to learning them. Just do it!
2018校性模拟测试三 To Be a Good Thinker
著名教育家孔子曾经说过:“学而不思则罔”。古往今来,凡是有大成就的人都是善于思考的人。假设你是Tina,你将要参加市里的英文报社举办的征文比赛,请你根据下面提供的信息,以“To Be a Good Thinker”为题写一篇英语短文。内容包括:
1.你的一次因为思考而受益的经历;
2.怎样养成善于思考的习惯(不少于3条);
3.呼吁身边的人都养成善于思考的习惯。
Just as the famous educator Confucius said, “It’s no use learning without thinking.” we should know thinking has great power. Once when I was reading an article, I met with a sentence and I couldn’t understand. Instead of asking for help, I read it over and over again and thought hard. Finally, I knew the meaning completely by myself.
How to develop the habit of thinking? Here is my advice. First, we should learn to be independent in daily life. What’s more, raise our questions, when we find something is not right. Last but not least, think twice before asking for help, when we come across a problem.
In short, try to think more and you will learn how to think creatively.
2018校性模拟测试四
很多人喜欢在网上分享自己的生活,请你写一篇短文来谈谈你的看法。内容包括:
1. 通常人们在网上分享的内容有哪些?
2. 在网上分享自己生活的利与弊(各两点)。
With the development of the technology, Internet has become an important part of our life. More and more people use the Internet every day, especially sharing their life with others They always share the tasty food they eat. Besides, they put the photos of their daily life on the Internet, too.
Every coin has two sides. Sharing our life moments online has its advantages and disadvantages. As for the advantages, sharing lives on the Internet can show what you like or care to everyone. However, while surfing the Internet, your private information may be stolen by bad guys.
In conclusion, we should make good use of the Internet and make sure we are safe while showing our lives.
2018校性模拟测试五
“研学旅行”(study trip)是以组织中小学生集体旅行的方式走出校园,通过看工厂、访农村、赏山水、进教育基地等形式亲近社会与自然而开展的研究性学习与旅行体验相结合的校外教育活动。对此,有些学生表示欢迎,也有些表示反对。对此活动你持什么观点,请根据写作要点提示写一篇英语短文谈谈你的看法。
写作要点提示:
1、表明你对研学旅行活动的观点——赞同还是不赞同(只选一种观点);
2、陈述3条理由或观点;
3、简要谈谈你的期望或建议。
Nowadays, study trip has become more and more popular among students. I think it’s meaningful for students.
Here are my opinions, first of all, study trip is a good way for students to relax .What’s more , when students have a study trip, they can get so closed to the society that they can learn something more useful . Finally, if they travel to other countries, they can be served with different foods and know more things about different customs, they will have a chance to realize the beauty of society.
In short, I hope more school can organize the activity like this, and then, students will relax themselves and study more happily
2017年 广东省中考 英语作文真题
常言道:“良言一句暖三冬,恶语伤人六月寒”。假设你是李雷,你将要参加学校的英语演讲比赛,主题是“语言的力量”,请你写一篇英文演讲稿,内容包括:
1.你的一次受老师或同学语言激励的经历(事情的经过以及对你的影响);
2.呼吁同学们要注意自身语言对他人的影响。
Ladies and gentlemen,
How will words influence others? Let me tell you one of my experiences.Last week, I failed my English exam. I felt upset because I always did a good job in English. So I looked at my test paper with tears. Luckily, my English teacher came and cheered me up, “ Believe yourself. You can do it.”I felt happy by her words. Her words not only touched my heart but also gave me lots of confidence to face any difficulties. As a result, I overcame my failure and kept working hard.
How powerful the words are! Let’s pay attention to our words. The more carefully we say, the more positive influence we will have.
2017年3月12日下午, 教育部部长陈宝生在十二届全国人大五次会议的记者会上谈到,要防止校园欺凌事件的发生。陈宝生认为,校园欺凌通常发生在青少年之间,手段有的很残忍且不计后果,这是孩子不成熟的一种行为方式。对于校园欺凌事件,教育部和最高法、最高检、公安部等单位都进行了综合治理,这两年情况大有好转,但还没有根本消除。校园欺凌事件必须要高度重视。请你联系实际生活,以Stop School Bullying为题写一篇短文。
要点提示:
1. 你曾经经历过的校园欺凌。(你作为加害者,受害者,旁观者或阻止者)
2. 你认为阻止校园欺凌现象的方法。(至少两种)
3. 呼吁同学们行动起来,阻止校园欺凌,
创造和谐友好的校园环境。
As we all know, school bullying takes place in school now and then. One day, when I walked past the washroom, I saw some bigger students playing jokes on a Grade One boy. The little boy was angry and frightened, but he dared not fight against them, because they were stronger and nobody could help the poor little boy. So I told my teacher about it at once and the teacher stopped them from doing so.
I think school bullying is really bad. I have some advice on how to deal with school bullying. First, you can fight back at the first time somebody bullies you, or they may hurt you again and again. Second, you can ask your teachers or parents for help. They may give you some suggestions or fight together with you. Last but not the least, laws should be set up to punish those who bully others.
I hope everybody can say no to school bullying and try our best to stop the bullying in school so that we can have a peaceful and friendly school.