中考英语专题13书面表达含解析 22页

专题13 书面表达 ‎1.【2018年江西中考】 假如国外中学生来你校进行为期一周的交流学习,期间计划参加一项中国传统文化的主题活动,为此向你们征求活动方案(plan)请你根据下面表格中的信息提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍你提供的活动方案,内容包括:茶或者民乐介绍,活动安排以及与之相关的理由。‎ 要求:1.从表格中任选一个主题,合理安排活动;‎ ‎2.短文条理清楚,行文连贯,内容可适当发挥;‎ ‎3.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;‎ ‎4.词数不少于80,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。‎ Chinese Culture Introduction Schedule Reasons Tea Past and present Time:______‎ Places: tea farm, tea house Activities:‎ ‎1. tea processing ‎2. a tea art performance ‎…‎ Folk Music Music pieces and traditional instruments Time:_______‎ Places: music room, school hall Activities:‎ ‎1. take musical instrument classes ‎2. attend a folk music concert ‎…‎ Hello, friends. I've got a plan for you which may help you learn about Chinese culture. First of all, I'd like to introduce _________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________‎ Hope you will have a good time.‎ ‎【答案】Hello, friends. I've got a plan for you which may help you learn about Chinese culture. First of all, I'd like to introduce tea. It has a long history. It is said that Shen Nong ‎ discovered it as a drink. Tea is one of the most popular drinks in China. So we will have some interesting activities about it for you.‎ On Saturday morning, you are going to visit a big farm where you can learn about tea processing. On Saturday afternoon, you are going to a tea house after dinner where you can watch a tea art performance.‎ Why do we plan a visit to a tea house for you? Because you can lean a lot more about tea culture there. You will see a young lady in a Chinese traditional dress who shows you how a cup of tea is made with tea sets, You can enjoy it and relax yourselves while listening to pieces of traditional folk music.‎ Hope you will have a good time.‎ 点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。‎ ‎2.【2018年内蒙古包头市中考】假设你是李华,请给你们的美籍教师Bob写一封电子邮件,向他简要介绍你校即将举办的英语文化节( English Culture Festival),邀请他参加本次活动,并请他在节目最后做一个关于如何学好英语的讲座。‎ 邮件还应包括以下内容:‎ ‎1.活动时间:本周五下午14:30-17:30;‎ ‎2.活动地点:报告厅( Lecture Hall);‎ ‎3活动内容:学生演唱英文歌曲…‎ 注意:1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;‎ ‎3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。‎ Dear Bob,‎ How is it going?‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】Dear Bob,‎ How is it going?‎ An English Culture Festival will be held in our school. All of us students do hope that you could come and join us.‎ The activity will begin in the Lecture Hall at 14: 30 this Friday ant last about 3 hours. We've prepared many programs for it, for example, English songs. What's more, some students will perform plays in English.‎ As you know, many students in our school have difficulty in learning English well. So when the performance finishes, it would be very nice if you could give a talk and provide us with some practical advice.‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li hua 点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可运用适当的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。 ‎ ‎3.【2018年山东德州市中考】‎ 树立自我保护意识，健康快乐地成长是每个青少年的必修课。下面是某地关心下一代工作委员会为青少年编写的《青少年自我保护健康成长所手册》的部分内容。作为一名中学生，写一篇文章，内容包括：①陈树你是怎样践行手册中提及的三条事项的；②补充至少一条你认为重要的其他事项。‎ 要求：1.语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；‎ ‎2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎3.80~100词，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how do I protect myself and grow up healthily? Now let me share my experiences and ideas with you.‎ First, I always obey the traffic rules ‎ ‎ ‎ In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily.‎ ‎【答案】Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how do I protect myself and grow up healthily? Now let me share my experiences and ideas with you.‎ First, I always obey the traffic rules and I never run the red light. When the traffic light is red, I won’t go until it turns green. I always cross the zebra walk because it’s safe. Second, I often eat healthily and safely. It’s important to eat more fruit and vegetables. Eating too much fast food will do harm to my body. Third, I never meet strangers alone, especially friends who I make on the Internet. At the same time if we are true friends, we should help each other.‎ What’s more, I’d like to give you some advice. Now summer is coming, it’s dangerous for us to swim alone, especially in deep lakes or river. So don’t do that.‎ In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily.‎ 亮点说明：‎ ‎1. 本文书写的内容完整、条理清楚。‎ ‎2. 在文中使用了First，Second，Third等词汇，使文章层次分明。易于理解。‎ ‎3. 作者所加的一条很好，防溺水，是当今安全隐患最大的。同时还运用了句型It’s dangerous for us to do sth. 使文章增色不少。因此本文为上等之作。‎ ‎4.【2018年山东济宁地区中考】某英文网站的“ Student Life”栏目正在向中学生征文，标题为“ A time when I made someone happy”，请你写一篇英文稿件，内容需包括以下要点:‎ ‎1. Who was the person you made happy?‎ ‎2. When was it?‎ ‎3. What did you say or do?‎ ‎4. Why did it make him/her happy?‎ ‎5. How did you feel at that moment?‎ 注意：1．词数：100左右（题目不计入总词数）。‎ ‎2.文中不得出现可能透考生真实身份的任何信息。‎ ‎【答案】Last summer,though it was hot,I volunteered to teach children English in rural area.When I arrived there,I couldn't adjust to the weather and life style.However,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great progress.In order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as well.As a result,my English improved a lot.Also,I made friends with some of my students.We are still keeping in touch by letter now.‎ In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that summer.If I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.‎ ‎【解析】写作分析：这是一篇给定标题的材料作文，需要逐条完成要点问题的回答，描述一次自己让别人开心快乐的经历，是一篇记叙文，首先要读懂5个问题，其次要用恰当的语言和衔接手段把这五个问题的回答联系在一起，变成一篇短文，同时也要注意在描述过去的故事的时候要正确运用过去时态。‎ ‎5.【2018年山东聊城地区中考】假如你要竞选你班的体育委员，请你用英语进行竞选演讲。演讲的主要内容包括：‎ ‎1．自己喜欢体育，身体健康；‎ ‎2．擅长球类运动，尤其是足球和篮球；‎ ‎3．可以传授运动技艺，助大家比赛取得最佳成绩。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数：80左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3．演讲内容中不得出现真实的学校和个人名字；‎ ‎4．演讲的开头已给出，不计入总词数。‎ I want to be the PE monitor. _________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】I want to be the PE monitor. I enjoy sport, and I can run very fast. I’m really fit and healthy. Just watch me in the playground between lessons! I play most ball games well. But I’m really good at football, and I play basketball in the school team. Because I have a lot of good playing skills. I usually get the best score in every match. I can teach you some if you like. Choose me for the PE monitor and you can get the best score too!‎ ‎6.【2018年山东省青岛】现在，中学生在校内能保证一定时间的运动量，但在校外普遍缺少运动甚至不运动。请就 此现象写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。内容包括：‎ ‎1. 缺少运动甚至不运动的原因；‎ ‎2. 缺少运动甚至不运动对学生的影响；‎ ‎3. 针对这种现象提出合理的改善建议。‎ 要求：1. 词数：80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；‎ ‎2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。 参考词汇：be short of 缺少 Many students are short of exercise in their spare time now ‎ ‎【答案】Many students are short of exercise in their spare time now.They think doing exercise can affect their studies.Therefore they have less time to study.Doing sports is good for their health. A person who takes exercises regularly will keep fit. In the school, students are forced to take exercise in the PE class, they need to join certain activities.In this way, students live in a healthy lifestyle, they won’t get sick easily.But after they leaving school, no one forces them to do so, so they are lazy to take exercise so that their bodies get weaker.‎ I think students should take exercise every day outside the school.In a word, exercise is helpful, important and absolutely necessary.‎ ‎7.【2018年山东省威海市】 “照镜子”是生活中的平常事，以生活为镜，可以照出现实中真实的自己。请以“Me in the mirror”为题，写一篇80词以上的英语短文。围绕自己最突出的一至两个优点和缺点，‎ 重点谈谈在未来的生活和学习中如何扬长避短、完善自我，成长为更好的自己。‎ 要求：1.题目已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎2.观点正确、条理清晰、表达流畅；‎ ‎3.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称。‎ ‎【答案】Me in the mirror Looking at myself in the mirror, I know I am an outgoing girl. I like to make friends and I'm always ready to help them. So I'm very popular in my school. But I have a big problem, I'm less interested in my lessons and I can t concentrate in class. In my spare time I spend too much time on computer games, so I don' t get good grades which make my parents disappointed.‎ When I go to senior high school I hope to get along well with my classmates and try to make more friends. I hope we can help each other and learn from each other. I will make a good study resolution and try my best to go for it. I decide to have a healthier lifestyle. I'll spend more time on my schoolwork and develop good learning habits. I will concentrate more in class and finish my study tasks carefully. What's more, I will read more books and master good leaning methods. I hope to make great progress and make my parents proud of me.‎ ‎【高分句型一】‎ I'm less interested in my lessons and I can’ t concentrate in class. 我对功课不太感兴趣，上课也不能集中精力。be interested in短语的使用，使文章增色不少。‎ ‎【高分句型二】‎ In my spare time I spend too much time on computer games, so I don' t get good grades which make my parents disappointed. 业余时间，我花太多的时间在电脑游戏上，所以我没有取得好成绩，这使我的父母很失望。which make my parents disappointed. 是由which引导的定语从句。‎ ‎【高分句型三】‎ I will concentrate more in class and finish my study tasks carefully. 我将集中精力在课堂上，认真完成我的学习任务。说明作者在后来认识到了错误，而努力学习。‎ ‎8.【2018年陕西省中考】假如你是李华,上周日你独自在家照看你五岁的妹妹Nana,请根据表格内容,写一篇短文。‎ 活动 上午 讲故事，唱歌，……‎ 中午 煮面（cook noodles），休息（have a rest），……‎ 下午 玩游戏，看动画片（watch cartoons）……‎ 感受 ‎……‎ 要求:1.参考表格内容,可适当发挥;‎ ‎2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;‎ ‎3.文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);‎ ‎4.词数:不少于70词。(开头已给出但不计入总词数。)‎ Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.‎ In the morning, I told her many funny stories first. Then we sang and danced happily together. I also taught her to speak a few simple English words and she learned well. At noon, I cooked noodles with tomatoes and eggs. She said they were delicious. I was very glad that she enjoyed the lunch. Then we had a rest. In the afternoon, we played games together. After that, we watched cartoons until my parents came back. I felt tired but happy.‎ 写作亮点：善于分段，可以用首段进行概括性描述，阐明背景（my parents were not at home）。第二段可以进一步开始细节描述。涉及到的短语有told her many funny stories，sang and danced happily，taught her to speak a few simple English words，cooked noodles，had a rest等等，使用短语的时候也有亮点，能够通过副词happily或者介词短语with tomatoes and eggs让动词短语的含义更加丰富。文章最后收尾简洁，用一句话点出了自己的感受，使得文章结构完整。 ‎ ‎9.【2018年四川成都市】 假如你是图中女孩，你与家人于4月29日共度周日。请根据图中所示写一篇英文日记，讲述你当天所见和所做之事。‎ 注意：1.日记应包含图中所有信息 ‎2.日记中须写出当天的一些感受 ‎3.日记应格式正确,语句通顺,句式多样 ‎4词数:100左右。‎ 参考词汇:城堡 castle螃蟹crab ‎【答案】Sunny Sunday,‎ April 29(th)‎ Today I had a good time with my parents on the beach It was so fine that I could see the rising sun and flying sea birds. a boat sailed itself in the distance. What a beautiful scene! Dressed in swimming suit, I swam in the blue and clear sea. Then, I played volleyball with my parents. Finally, I managed to make a sand castle with tools. It looked so true to life that a crab even wanted to live in it.‎ What a pleasant day! I not only got close to nature but also shared happiness with my family.‎ ‎10.【2018年四川广安市中考】假设下周你所在的班将开展为期一周的研学活动。请根据下面的提示用英语写一则通知告知全班同学。‎ 阳光农场之旅 活动时间 一周 活动地点 阳光农场 活动内容 ‎1.帮助清理农场垃圾,搞好农场卫生;‎ ‎2.学习种菜、植树;‎ ‎3.野餐,采摘水果(苹果,梨……)‎ 安全 tips 不要到河里游泳,不要单独行动。‎ 要求:1.字迹工整,书写规范,包含全部要点,适当发挥;‎ ‎2.文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称;‎ ‎3.80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;‎ ‎4.请将书面表达内容写在答题卡上相应的位置。‎ 参考词汇: rubbish(垃圾) clear away(清理) Sunshine Farm(阳光农场)‎ Hello, everyone,‎ May I have your attention, please?‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ That's all Thank you!‎ ‎【答案】Hello, everyone,‎ May I have your attention, please?‎ Next week our class are going to have a journey to Sunshine Farm. The journey will last for one week. On the farm we're going to do some cleaning and help clear away rubbish at first. Then, we'll learn how to plant trees and grow vegetables. During the week, we will have a picnic and help the farmers ‎ pick fruits such as apples and pears. For our safety, we mustn't go swimming in the river and we should keep together. Nobody is allowed to leave the class group and go alone.‎ Wish you a happy journey!‎ That’s all. Thank you!‎ 写作亮点：首先要点明主题“下周要去做什么”，用到了“have a journey to…”（去…旅行）这个短语。其次就针对这次旅行做出较为细致的描述，描述时间，描述即将进行的事件，提到了“do some cleaning”（帮助清扫），“help clear away rubbish”（帮助清除垃圾），plant trees（种树）、“grow vegetables”（种植蔬菜），“have a picnic”（去野餐），“help the farmers pick fruits”（帮助农民采摘水果），“be allowed to do…”（被允许去做…），其中情态动词must的用法准确，we mustn't go swimming in the river 意为“我们禁止去河里游泳”，mustn’t表示“禁止”。结尾处有祝福语“Wish you a happy journey!”，总体来说短语使用准确，时态正确，结构完整，有相关细节的补充，行文连贯，完成了既定的写作任务。‎ ‎11.【2018年四川省乐山市】现在，戴眼镜的学生越来越多；为此，国家把每年 6 月 6 日定为爱眼日。请你结合自己的体会，就如何爱护眼睛，给校报英语栏目写一篇短文。内容包括：‎ ‎1. 吃有益于眼睛的食物，如：胡萝卜、鸡蛋等；‎ ‎2. 多做眼保健操，长时间用眼后可看看远方；‎ ‎3. 养成良好的用眼习惯，如：不躺着玩手机或看书等。‎ 注意：1.词数 80 词左右；‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Nowadays, more and more students are getting near-sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6 every year. _____________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Nowadays, more and more students are getting near-sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6 every year. As we all know, eyes are the windows to the soul. We should try our best to protect them. Here are some suggestions for good eye health.‎ First, eat some foods that are good for eyes, such as carrots and eggs. Second, do more eye exercises to make them relax. Also, it’s helpful to look far away from time to time after studying long. Finally, make sure to have a good eye habit. Don’t read books or use a cell phone in bed.‎ In a word, eyes are so important that all of us should do what we can to keep them healthy.‎ 点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。‎ ‎12.【2018年天津市】请你根据以下内容提示，以“The Story of Li Hua”为题，为学校广播站英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍发生在你班同学李华身上的一件事。‎ ‎（1）上周五放学后李华乘公交车回家，看到有人在吃橘子，并把橘皮扔在车上。‎ ‎（2）李华把橘皮捡起，放进垃圾桶。‎ ‎（3）乘客用手机拍了照片，发布到网上。‎ ‎（4）老师知道后表扬了李华，李华说这是他应该做的。‎ ‎（5）你觉得 参考词汇：果皮peel 垃圾桶dustbin 发布post 表扬praise 要求：‎ ‎（1）词数：80-100个。‎ ‎（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。‎ ‎（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。‎ The Story of Li Hua Last Friday, when my classmate Li Hua took a bus back home from school. ______________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】The Story of Li Hua Last Friday, when my classmate Li Hua took a bus back home from school. After school last Friday, Li Hua took a bus home and saw someone eating oranges and throwing orange peel on the bus.So he picked it up and put it into the dustbin. The passenger on the bus took photos of Li Hua with their mobile phones and and posted them online. After knowing it, the teacher praised Li Hua and encouraged others ‎ to learn from him.I think Li Hua did a good deed. It is impolite to throw litter in public places.‎ 点睛：这篇短文使用了大量的固定短语，为文章增色不少，如take a bus；put··· into ；take photos of； encourage to do sth;；learn from等； and ;so 和固定句型It is +形容词+to do sth等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。‎ ‎13.【2018年江苏省徐州市】你校英文报组织了题为“我喜欢的英语谚语，，征文活动，你有意参加。请从下面两句英语谚语中任选一句，写一篇90词左右的短文，参加征文活动。 ‎ Many hands make light work. ‎ Meaning: If lots of people share the work, it will make a job easier to complete.‎ Practice makes perfect. ‎ Meaning: If you keep practising，you will be better at it. ‎ 短文内容须包括： (1）你喜欢的谚语及其含义 (2）体现该谚语含义的个人经历 注意：1．短文中已给出的部分（见答题卡）不计入总词数。 2．短文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。‎ ‎【答案】My favourtite English saying My English saying is many hands make light work. It means if lots of people share the work, It will make a job easier to complete.‎ Last term, our class decided to give a charity show to help children in poor areas. It was difficult to get everything ready in a short time. Luckily, all my classmates worked together and shared the work. Some students handed out leaflets, others prepared the costumes, and others helped download the music. I’m good at singing, so I sang a song while my best friend played the guitar.‎ The charity show turned out to be a great success. We all realized that the success belonged to every one of us. Teamwork really works!‎ 点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息。短文分为两段，第一段作者用了两句话，介绍了自己喜欢的谚语以及这个谚语的含义；第二段作者讲述了自己的一个经历，这个经历与自己喜欢的谚语是有关的，能较好的体现该谚语的含义。两段的格式使短文结构清晰，叙述有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的人称和时态，文章以第一人称为主，第一段使用了一般现在时态；第二段使用了一般过去时态，谓语动词形式准确，尤其注意了不规则动词的过去式形式。第三，短文句式表达符合英语的习惯，语言准确、地道。句子以简单句为主，也用到了很多的复合句，如并列句、宾语从句等，语句之间也用到了一些连接成分。较好的短语和句式有： It was difficult to get everything ready in a short time. 、Luckily, all my classmates worked together and shared the work. 、Some students handed out leaflets, others prepared the costumes, and others helped download the music.、 I’m good at singing, so I sang a song while my best friend played the guitar.、The charity show turned out to be a great success.、 We all realized that the success belonged to every one of us.等。‎ ‎14.【2018年云南省】提示:每个人都向往美好的生活,美好的生活需要我们真诚的付出和给予。请以“Doing Something Nice to...”为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你曾经或将要为他人、社会等做的一件美好的事情。‎ 要求：1.请先将题目补全后再做答；‎ ‎2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个；‎ ‎3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计；‎ ‎4.请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。‎ ‎【答案】Doing something nice to my friend A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart!‎ Jerry is my good friend. He's very thin. Last winter, he got ill. He had to go to hospital once a week. He took lots of medicine. I hoped he would be as strong as me. So every weekend, I asked him to practice playing basketball with me. I taught him how to play it. Now he is much stronger and healthier.‎ I feel very happy to have done something nice to my friend.‎ 点睛：这篇短文使用了大量的固定短语，为文章增色不少，如go to hospital； once a week ；lots of； as as 等；So ；Now ；I feel very happy to 等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。‎ ‎15.【2018年浙江宁波市中考】今年5月11日，你校组织了一次社会实践活动，部分学生选择去了红星农场（见导图一），其余学生选择去了科技博物馆（见导图二）。请根据你所选择的实践活动写一篇英语日记，记录当天的经历和感受。‎ 注意：(1)日记必须包括你所选择导图的所有要点，并适当发挥；‎ ‎(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；‎ ‎(3)词数：80 -100。日记格式及首句己给出，不计入总词数。‎ Friday, May 11th Today I had a school trip.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【答案】Possible version 1:‎ Friday. May 11th Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to Hongxing Farm by bus early in the morning.‎ The minute we arrived, we took a walk around the farm. Then we fed the chickens. When I threw some food to them, they ran over to me with excitement and some of them even walked into their friends.‎ ‎ The most exciting thing was that we picked strawberries after lunch. While we were picking, we ate a lot. How sweet they were!‎ I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again in the near future!‎ ‎(98 words)‎ Possible version 2:‎ Friday, May 11th Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to the Science Museum by subway at 7 :00.‎ As soon as we reached the museum, we were amazed to see lots of pictures about science. Then we watched a video about different inventions and their inventors. It's unbelievable that technology has progressed in such a rapid way. In the afternoon, we played chess with some special robots. It was surprising to find that nobody could beat them. Before leaving, we bought some gifts for our friends.‎ I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again!‎ ‎（99 words）‎ 体即可。 ‎ ‎16.【2018年浙江省湖州市】假定你是李蕾，请你对美国朋友Amy的邮件进行回复。你可以根据邮件内容作适当发挥；邮件中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；词数：80-100；短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。‎ From: amycali5000@aeim.cup Subject: school project Hi there!‎ ‎ How is it going? Haven’t heard from you for a long time.‎ ‎ We are dong a project at school about how different teenagers in the world have fun. I’d really like you to help me if you can! So, can you tell me:‎ ‎ ·what things you do to have a good time?‎ ‎ ·why you think having fun is important?‎ ‎ If you can think of anything else to write, please do! In return, I’ll send you some great pictures of me and my friends in California.‎ ‎ Thanks very much, and write soon!‎ Amy From: amycali5000@aeim.cup Subject: school project Hi, Amy!‎ ‎ Thanks for your email. Sorry I haven’t written sooner. Anyway, you want to know how we have fun here.‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Li Lei ‎【答案】Hi, Amy!‎ Thanks for your email. Sorry I haven't written sooner. You want to know how we have fun here in China, anyway, we teenagers have different ways to enjoy ourselves, like playing sports, playing video games, and watching movies or TV, etc.‎ As a basketball fan since childhood, the most interesting thing for me is playing basketball with my friends after a day's study in the classroom. We almost play every day, competing, talking and laughing, making it the most enjoyable and relaxing moment. Besides, I often watch basketball games on TV. A close game between two teams always make me excited and sometimes wild with joy. I think it's helpful for both the body and mind.‎ Expecting your great pictures!‎ 点睛：这封邮件使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be heard from；have fun enjoy ourselves；between ··· and；make me excited 和 both ··· and等；almost；Besides等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。‎ ‎17.【2018年浙江省衢州市】假设你是Li Hua，以下是你的美国笔友Alex发给你的一封电子邮件，谢你根据该邮件内容给Alex回一封邮件。‎ 要求：①考生需按电子邮件格式完成整封邮件；②邮件中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息；③字数90—110。‎ ‎【答案】‎ From Li Hua To Alex Subject Can’t wait to meet you!‎ Hi Alex Thanks for your last letter, and I can’t tell you how excited I am now!‎ I plan to fly to America on July 10 and stay there for about three weeks.‎ I will take an English course to improve my spoken English. If possible, I hope to visit some American families to experience their life and learn more about American culture. Also I’d like to take trips to Hollywood and Disneyland. That must be really interesting. Of course I need to buy some presents for my family and friends. Do you have any suggestions?‎ Can’t wait to meet you!‎ Yours, ‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】写作分析：这篇写作的体裁是信件，需要写一封回信。写作之前需要正确阅读原来信件中的内容，才能明白需要完成什么样的写作任务。通过读信，发现Alex得知Li Hua要早七月来洛杉矶，他想知道Li Hua到达的时间、停留的时间以及想在美国做的事情。写作难度不大，但需要注意书信的格式以及使得文章结构完整。‎ 写作亮点：‎ 回信一开始需要表达对收到信件的感谢（Thanks for your last letter），表达自己对于旅途的期待，然后需要按照顺序描述自己的计划。增添的细节是“I will take an English course to improve my spoken English.”（我将要上一次英语课程来提高自己的口语。），在这个前提下，表达了自己希望在美国做的事情。对于自己想要去的地方也进行了陈述，但表述也不止于此，还提到了去玩之后还想买一些礼物，这样的做法使得全文连贯得体。最后再次表达了自己的迫切之情（Can’t wait to meet you!），总体来说文章语言连贯、结构完整。‎ ‎18.【2018年浙江省温州市】.如今,国内外很多孩子在父母的安排下没有了自己的周末,如下图中的Jack。请分析图中的这种现象并谈谈你的看法,以 Weekend or Not?为题写一篇约110词的英语短文向 Parents杂志投稿,让父母们通过阅读你的文章能有所启发。‎ 注意:文中若出现“Jack"以外的人名或任何学校名称,该作文得分不超过12分。‎ Weekend or Not?‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Weekend or Not?‎ Jack has to attend lots of classes at weekends. He has little time for his favorite sport-soccer. Still, his parents are pushing him to do more math exercises, which worries him a lot.‎ Nowadays, many students are under much pressure like Jack. Their parents believe it necessary for them to make full use of the weekends and learn as much as possible. As a result, some students are stressed out and therefore lose interest in learning anything. What is worse, they may not be able ‎ to learn to manage their own life.‎ I do hope all the children can have the freedom to choose what they like to do and enjoy their weekends.‎ 写作亮点：首段用几句话简单描述了漫画，用到了一些较好的短语（attend lots of classes，has little time for…，pushing him to do，worries him a lot），这些短语运用准确，能使文章首段非常有吸引力。第二段描述了自己的观点，使用了一些议论文常用的句式（…believe it necessary for … to…，As a result, What is worse,），文章末尾有自己的希望，清晰简练地表达了自己的观点。总体来说这篇文章分段清晰，每段功能准确，表意明确，有一定的说理性，完成了既定的写作任务。‎ ‎19.【2018年浙江省义乌市】你校英语社团正在开展主题为“ How do students find study partners？”的讨论，为此你采访了一些学生，请你根据下表内容用英语写一篇短文进行交流，并说明你自己的方式及理由。‎ 方式 理由 部分学生 使用网络 方便找到学伴 及时得到帮助 部分学生 参加社团 面对面分享经验 共同解决问题 你 ‎······‎ ‎······‎ 注意：（1）短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；‎ ‎（2）你的理由至少两条；‎ ‎（3）词数：80-100；‎ ‎（4）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：学伴 study partner 方便的convenient 短文首句：I have recently done a survey about how students find study partners.‎ ‎【答案】I have recently done a survey about how students find study partners.‎ Some students find study partners through the Internet. They believe it’s convenient to find partners to study with online. Besides, they can get help from study partners whenever necessary. Some students prefer to join clubs to find study partners so that they can share experience face to face. What’s ‎ more, they think working out problems together helps learn more easily.‎ As for me, I’d like to get study partners by going to summer camp because I can learn something new while having fun. Also, it’s a good way to learn how to get on well with others.‎ ‎ （98 words）‎ 亮点分析：本文写作合理、语句通顺。在文中使用了Besides，What’s more，As for me等短语，使文章衔接自然。句子They believe it’s convenient to find……的使用，增加了文章的亮点。还有so that的使用，使文章如行云流水。本文为上等作文。 ‎ ‎20.【2018年浙江省舟山市】假设你是李华。上周六，你陪同来自美国结对学校的中学生Peter体验中国文化。请根据以下信息，用英语写一篇短文向校刊English Journey投稿，介绍本次活动内容并分享感受。‎ Activities Feelings ‎◆make zongzi ‎…‎ ‎◆visit a tea museum ‎◆learn Chinese characters 注意：（1）短文必须包括表格中的所有内容，并表达感受。‎ ‎（2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。‎ ‎（3）词数：80-100。短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。‎ 短文首句：Last Saturday, I took Peter, a student from America, to experience some Chinese cultures.‎ ‎【答案】Last Saturday, I took Peter, a student from America, to experience some Chine cultures. Everything he experienced that day is a great attraction to him.‎ In the morning, Peter and I went to visit a tea museum, where he learnt a lot about Chinese tea. After that, I took him home and taught him to make zongzi. Although it was a bit difficult, he still enjoyed it. In the afternoon, we had a Chinese class, learning the history of Chinese characters. He also tried to write some characters with a Chinese brush, and even lost himself in it.‎ Peter kept saying “Amazing!” all the way, which makes me really proud of our rich cultures.‎