备战2013高考英语5年真题精选与模拟专题17短文改错 33页

【2012 高考真题精选】 （2012·课标全国卷） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言 错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, “That's it. No more toys to you.” My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on. 【解析】 I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and littl eless aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my to ytoys. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things di dwent /∧/go wrong, I got angry and broke i tthem. For a while ∧my parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see whic hwhat was happening. When I tea rtore apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, “That's it. No more toys tofor you.” My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I mus tcould/might make my toys to'last. My attitude changed from then on. 1. little→less 考查副词的用法。根据句意：我不得不多一些耐心而少一些挑衅性。此处 less 修饰形容 词。 2. toy→toys 考查名词的单复数形式。根据 each of 可知，应该是“我”的玩具中的每一个，故用复数 形式 toys。 3. did→went 或者 did 后加 go 考查固定短语的表达法。解题关键：掌握短语 go wrong 意为：出错。 9. must→could/might 考查情态动词。根据句意：拥有更多的耐心，“我”就可能使玩具使用得更久。 10. 去掉 last 前的 to 考查不定式作宾语补足语。解题关键：make sb/sth do，此处 make 作“使”解，其 后接不带 to 的不定式作宾补。 （2012·浙江卷） 下面短文中有 10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do. 【答案】 Two years befor eago ，I traveled to Brazil and I rented for'a car. Unfortunat eUnfortunately ，I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two wee kweeks. I called my parents, s obut I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they wil lwould be worried about mysel fme because I was so farthe rfar away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them intereste dinteresting stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew ∧the truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do. （2011·陕西卷）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中 共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线(__)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport. We lived in a comfortably doubleroom with a big bath. What I liked best were the free highspeed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish. It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing. It is such ∧a great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of m emine who is going to Beijing. 8．dish→di shes 由 several 修饰，名词应用复数。 9．such 后加 a such 修饰的 hotel 是可数名词单数，需加不定冠词 a。 10．me→mine 双重所有格的构成是“of ＋名词性物主代词或名词所有格”。 （2012·辽宁卷） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文 中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 Dear Diana， Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home. 【解析】 Dear Diana， Thank you for the lovely day we hav ehad with you. It was so kind fo rof you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunat eUnfortunately ， the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, fo ras a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mil emiles. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unles suntil/till the road was clear. In the car park her ethere Gina nearly got knocked over as ∧a car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. The yWe finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to' home. 【2012·四川卷】 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一 个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正： 此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意：原行没有错的不要改。 Dear Mom， Mother’s Day is coming.I’m sorry that I am abroad 66．________ and can’t send your flowers，so I’m writing to you. 67．________ Mom，I know I have never expressed my thank to you 68．________ before.But on today，at this special time，I just want to tell 69．________ you loudly：I love you ，Mom! Thank you so much by not 70．________ only giving me life, but also teach me how to be a good 71．________ person.Thank you for all you had done for me. Mom，though 72．________ I may often say it, I do love you. Nobody can take your 73．________ part in my heart.Whenever I am，I will always love you. 74．________ Hope you good health and much happiness every day! 75．________ Your little girl， Jennifer 73. may 后加 not。考查句意衔接。句意为：妈妈，虽然我可能没有经常说，但我确实很爱你。 74. Whenever 改为 Wherever。考查连词。根据句意：无论我在哪里，我总是爱你的。 75. Hope 改为 Wish。考查动词辨析。动词 hope 后不能接双宾语，而 wish 可以，wish 符合语境和语法 规则。 （2012·全国卷Ⅱ） 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一 个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正： 此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意：原行没有错的不要改。 Dear Editor， I'm writing to tell you opinion about water saving.76.________________ Water is important. We, as well as animal, cannot live77.________________ without water and neither agriculture or industry can go78.________________ without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less.79.________________ Many countries in the world find we don't have enough water.80.________________ To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all81.________________ out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no82.________________ drinking water should be left running. Third, we should find83.________________ ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath 84.________________ water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water.85.________________ Sincerely， Li Hua 【解析】 Dear Editor， I'm writing to tell you∧opinion about water saving.76.__my__ Water is important. We, as well as animal,_cannot live77.__animals__ without water and neither agriculture or industry can go78.__nor__ without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less.79.__seems__ Many countries in the world find we don't have enough water.80.__they__ To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all81.__the/this/that__ out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no82.__because/since/as__ drinking water should be left running. Third, we should find83.__√__ ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath 84.__used__ water for[KG3mm] which is quite a lot, and that will save much water.85.__for__ Sincerely， Li Hua 84. using→used 根据后面的 in washing 可知是洗衣服用过的水，所以用 used。 85. 去掉 for which 指代 water，作主语，不需要 for。 【2011 高考真题精选】 （2011·全国卷Ⅱ）第二节 短文改错(共 10 小题；每小题 1.5 分，满分 15 分) 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一 个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正： 此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意：原行没有错的不要改。 Dear George， It’s been a week after we left your family and we are now 76.________ back home. Thank you very much for showing them around 77.________ your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After 78. ________ we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D．C., 79.________ where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond 80.________ of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying 81. ________ another couple of day. However, my father had to return to 82. ________ work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It 83. ________ was really a nice experience. If you’d like to make trip to 84. ________ our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide. 85. ________ Yours， Mike 79. 正确 80. 去掉 much “so＋adj…”为结果状语从句，much 多余。 81. staying 改为 stay beg sb to do sth 央求某人做某事。 82. day 改为 days couple 是复数，所以 day 加 s。 83. fly 改为 flew 时态错误，前面使用的过去时，时态应该保持一致。 84. 加 a make a trip to 去旅行。 85. better 改为 more more than 非常。 （2011·全国Ⅰ卷）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该 行下边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正： 此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行下边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行下边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行下边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意：原行没有错的不要改。 One of my unforgettable memory of my school in 76．____________ Xinjiang is that of lunches we brought from our homes. 77.____________ I hold my lunchbox in my hand when I was going to 78．____________ school.The smell from it was very good.Since the lunch 79.____________ bell finally rang，my friends and I met under a tall tree 80．____________ and had our lunches.My best friend Aigulie was used 81．____________ to share her NangNang82.____________ cake in Xinjiang.I like them very much.Now Aigulie and 83．____________ I study at different colleges or we can only see each other 84．____________ during the summer vacation.I think over her a lot and I miss 85．____________ the food and the good time we had together. 【解析】 76. memory →memories one of…后面的名词要用复数形式。 77. lunches 前加 the lunches 后面有定语从句修饰，因此为特指。 78. hold → held 本文讲述的是过去的事情。 79. Since → When 80. √ 81. 去掉 used 前的 was be used to 意思是“习惯于”，后面跟 v.Nang （2011·四川卷）第一节 短文改错(共 10 小题；每小题 1.5 分，满分 15 分) 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行下边横线上画一 个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正： 此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行下边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行下边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行下边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意：原行没有错的不要改。 Tom was having much troubles getting up in the 66.__________ morning and was always late with work.His boss wanted to 67.__________ fire him if he didn’t start coming on time，but he went to 68.__________ the doctor for a help. The doctor gave him some 69.__________ medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed. 70.__________ The man did as told and slept really well，wake up before 71.__________ the alarm had even gone off.He had time for a properly 72.__________ breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.“Boss，”he 73.__________ said，“that medicine really works！”“I’m pleasing to hear 74.__________ it，”said his boss，“but where were you yesterday？” 75.__________ 【答案】 Tom was having much troubles getting up in the trouble 66．____________ morning and was always late with work.His boss wanted to for 67．____________ fire him if he didn’t start coming on time，but he went to so 68．____________ the doctor for a'help. The doctor gave him some a[KH－1] 69．____________ medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed. it 70．____________ The man did as told and slept really well，wake up before waking 71．____________ the alarm had even gone off.He had time for a properly proper 72．____________ breakfast and was still the first ∧ reach the factory.“Boss，”he to 73．____________ said，“that medicine really works！”“I’m pleasing to hear pleased 74．____________ it，”said his boss，“but where were you yesterday？” √ 75．____________ （2011·辽宁卷） 第一节 短文改错(共 10 小题；每小题 l 分，满分 10 分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 l0 处语言错 误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改 l0 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 In early January this year，the rate of UFO reports were steady，around three per weeks.When，however， on Monday，January 16，a science fiction film about visitors to outer space was shown on television，there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States.The commanding officer, Wayne Tyler，who directly responsible for the study of all such reports，decided to making his findings known.They wrote an article， which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements.Follow this explanation，there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings，because the rate remained above the previous level. all UFO reports could be explained for'quite naturally by aircraft movements.Follow this explanation，there was a Following rapid drop in the number of reported sightings，because the although/though/but/yet rate remained above the previous level. 1. were → was 主语为 the rate，因此谓语动词用单数。 2. weeks → week “每周”的表达为 per week，此处用单数形式。 3. to → from 表“来自”要用 from。 4. the → an 这里泛指量的增长，需使用不定冠词。immediate 读音为元音音素开头，故应用不定冠词 an。 5. who 后增加 was/ is 构成结构 be responsible for 为……负责。 6. making → make 动词 decide 后常跟不定式作宾语，因此用 to make 结构。 7. They → He 此处指代的是 Wayne Tyler 这个人，因此用 He。 8. 去掉 for explain 为及物动词，其后可直接跟宾语(即该被动句的主语 all UFO reports)，故去掉 for。 9. follow → following 此处是现在分词短语作伴随状语。 10. because → although/ though/ but/ yet 根据前后两个句子间的逻辑关系可知。 （2011·全国卷） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文 中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2．只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily，I had all my money on my pocket，but the only clothes I had was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last. 【答案】 My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket buying to Hangzhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that there I would go to Xiamen for∧long holiday. I bought my ticket a but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then and I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket，but the only clothes I had was those I in were had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages. luggage When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to[KG*2] me lots of friend’s clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last. felt （2011·陕西卷）第二节 短文改错(共 10 小题；每小题 1.5 分，满分 15 分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言 错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线(____)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor. I didn’t have my camera with me at that time，but I rushed back home to get.Unfortunately，by the time I got back，they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere.I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building.He was right there in the front of me！I couldn’t believe my luck—not only did I had my photo taken with him，but he signed his name on my shirt! him，but he signed his name on my shirt! make→making 作后置定语，用非谓语动词，与所修饰词是主动关系，故用 v （2011·重庆卷）以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正： 此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行下边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行下边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行下边横线上写出改正后的词。 Today is Sunday. I’ve been in Canada for two months. This is the first time that I’ve been away my family for such a 76. ____________ long time. With the help of Katia, a roommate of me, I’ve 77. ____________ soon got used to live without my parents around. Katia, like 78. ____________ many other Russian girls, are nice and lively. We became 79. ____________ friends shortly after we meet each other. Although her English 80. ____________ is a little hardly to understand, we enjoy chatting and we 81.____________ usually talk a lot about our own family. We’re both surprised 82.____________ that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different. Now, 83. ____________ we’re planning a small party for the next Sunday. There, Katia 84. ____________ will introduce me to some of her friends, one of who has been 85. ____________ to China several times. I just can’t wait. 【解析】这是一篇记叙文，介绍了作者在加拿大两个月以来的生活适应及人际交往情况。 76. away 后加 from be away“远离”，其后不能接宾语；be away from“远离……”可接宾语。 77. me→mine 表示“我的一位舍友”用 a roommate of mine 或 one of my roommates。 【2010 高考真题精选】 （10 四川） An English lady was finally decided that she really should 66_______ learn to drive, And after many attempts, she past her 67_______ driving test and told her husband that，to release， he 68_______ was going to drive him over to France for a holiday， But 69_______ then a week after the trip, she suddenly announced that 70_______ they wouldn’t take the holiday. “How did you change your 71_______ mind?” he asked her by surprise. “Well，it is all because 72_______ of the business of driving on right.” She said, “I have 73______ been practicing for three weeks now， but I still couldn’t 74______ get used to itin fact, I’ve nearly killed three peoples。” 75______ 66. 答案：去掉 finally 前的 was 解析：lady 与 decide 之间为主动关系 67. 答案：past→passed 解析：此处意为“通过”，应使用 pass 的过去式 （10 全国Ⅰ） It was a chance of a lifetime to win the first 76_______ ____ prize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to do 77_______ ____ was to write a story or present it. My teachers 78_______ ____ have been telling me how great my writing was. 79___ ____ So if they had said was true, I would have a chance 80____ ___ of winning the prize . What were better , I had useful 81. help . There was Uncle Chen , gentleman living 82. near my house , who was a very much famous writer 83 He agreed to reading my story and give me some 84 advices on how to write like a real writer 85 解析： （10 全国Ⅱ） Christie was one of my best friend at high school 76 At that time, we often spend time together. 77 Thank to her help, I made great progress in my 78 study. Last year, she decided to study abroad. In 79 other words, we would be separated for long time. 80 Before her leaving off, I prepared a gift to show 81 my best whishes to him. She said it was the best 82 gift she has ever had. From then on, we’ve 83 kept touch with another through emails. I 84 look forward to see her again in the near future. 85 答案： 76. friend → friends. one of 后接名词复数 77. spend →spent. At that time 表示过去发生的事情 78. Thank →Thanks. Thanks to 是固定短语，“多亏了，因为” （10 辽宁） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 初 语言错误，每句中最多有两处。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√） 如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正： 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符合(^)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 修改：在错的词下划—横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.至允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 Christine was just a girl in one of my class. I never knew much about her except for that she was strange. she didn’t talk many .her hair was black and purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater ,although in the summer .she was ,in fact, rather attractively, and she never seemed ^care what the rest if us thought about her like the rest of my classmate ,I didn’t really together that I begin to understand why Christine dressed the way she did . Christine was just a girl in one of my class. I never knew much about her except for that she was strange. she didn’t talk many .her hair was black 去掉 for 解析：except that 中不能再用 for。 many→much 解析：修饰动词 talk 应该用 much，此处是副词，many 没有此用法。 and purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater ,although in the worn→wore 解析：谓语动词用过去式，不能用过去分词 although→even 解析：although 是连词，不能修饰介词短语，even 可以 summer .she was ,in fact, rather attractively, and she never seemed ^care what attractively→attractive 解析：做表语，用形容词 seemed →seemed to 解析：seem 后用带 to 的不定式 the rest if us thought about her like the rest of my classmate ,I didn’t really classmate→classmates 解析：名词需用复数 want to get closest to her . it was only when we did their chemistry project closest→close 解析 get 是连系动词，后跟形容词 their→our 解析：人称和前面一致 together that I begin to understand why Christine dressed the way she did . begin→begin 解析：时态前后不一致 （10 重庆） Here is my idea about how a friend is like. Firstly, 76. a friend is someone you can share your secrets. If you 77. tell him a secret, never will he talks about it with anybody 78. else. Besides, a friend is always good listener when you 79. need one. After hear your sad stories, he will say some 80. words that is nice and warm. Still, your happiness makes 81. him happily too. What’s more, a good friend is willing to 82. offer the help to which you need, or can at least give you 83. some advices. In a word, friends are those you like and84. trust, and you will enjoy every minute that you spent with 85. them. 解析： 76. how what,由 what 引导宾语从句，从句中 like 缺宾语。 （10 浙江） After shopping, Mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch. I notice Mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple. They are silently, and it was clearlythat things were not going well. As we left, Mother stopped on their table. “Excuse me,” she said, put her arm around the unhappy old woman. “You remind me so many of my mother. May I hug ”(拥抱) you?” The woman smiled happily as she accepted to it. After we left, I said, “That wasvery nice of you, Mother. So I didn’t think she looked like Grandma.” “Neither did me.” said Mother cheerfully. 1. notice 改为 noticed 考点： 解析：本文的时间都是一般过去时态。 2. occupy 改为 occupied 考点： 解析：此处是分词短语作后置定语，occupy 与 table 是被动关系，故应用过去分词。 3. young 之前加上 a。考点： 解析：从下文可知是一对夫妇，所以需加冠词。 4.clearly 改为 clear。考点： 解析：此处是作表语，用形容词形式。 5. on 改为 by 或 at。考点： （10 福建） Dear editor, I am Evan from Canada. Being the eldest child in the family has its 76.________ disadvantages. First of all, I have to share all my ______（玩具）with my 77________ younger sisters . Of course, they don’t n ____ to return the favor because 78________高 I’m totally uninterested in their things ._______（除……之外）that, 79________高 they are always hanging around me . I just can’t get a moment’s p_____ 80________ At meals, I have to eat whatever is _____the plate regardless of 81________ the taste .My sisters only try one bite if it’s not ______favorite food. 82________ In addition ,w____ it comes to practicing our musical instruments,. I have to 83________ practice ______than double the time. Worst of all, I get a larger quantity 84________ of homework,_____(对比)to them.中学 I’m feeling rather annoyed. Can you please g_____ me some advice? 85________ Yours truly Evan Smith 解析：Dear editor, I am Evan from Canada. Being the eldest child in the family has its 76. toys disadvantages. First of all, I have to share all my ______(玩具)with my 77 need younger sisters . Of course, they don’t n ____ to return the favor because 78_Besides_ I’m totally uninterested in their things ._______（除……之外）that, 79_peace___ they are always hanging around me . I just can’t get a moment’s p_____ 80_on_____ At meals, I have to eat whatever is _____the plate regardless of 81_their__ the taste .My sisters only try one bite if it’s not ______favorite food. 82_when___ In addition ,w____ it comes to practicing our musical instruments,. I have to 83_more _ practice ______than double the time. Worst of all, I get a larger quantity 84 compared of homework,_____(对比)to them.中学 I’m feeling rather annoyed. Can you please g_____ me some advice? 85 give____ Yours truly Evan Smith 【最新模拟】 短文改错 (一) 文中有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 Last week our class voted on what do for our class outing：visiting Tang Paradise or go on a trip to the Night Zoo.We girl wanted to go to Tang Paradise, but since we were in the minority, we lost for the boys, who all wanted to the Night Zoo.We get a student discount, what was great because we still had enough money to buy a handbook about the park as well as some things at the gift shop.The Night Zoo was scary but a great fun.As we took the ride through the park's dark jungle, boys could see the eyes of many creatures looking us.Most of animals there sleep when there is sunlight and wake up at night. (二) 文中有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 A lot of people thought that teachers need to love our students and that they need to have an expert knowledge of their subjects.These ideas are, of course, true to a certain degree and they are perhaps a little of too simple.It is impossible for anyone love everyone they know, and teachers deal with the large number of students over the years.On the other hand, teachers could certainly be able to make their students feel that they are concerning.A good knowledge of the subject is extremely important, but equal important is the ability to pass that knowledge on to the students effectively—a teacher need to be trained in the skills of teaching. (三) 文中有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 Dear Editor， I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident.Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market.After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Lucky, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital.After several hours' treatment they finally escaped of death. As some illegal businessmen are only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care about the necessary safety measures or which happens to consumers.They must be have charged by law.Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety. (四) 文中有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 Have you ever heard from the saying：All work and no play make Jack a dull boy？What this means is that if you study all the times you will become a boring person.You must go out and have a fun with your friends, otherwise you will lose him.No one wants to be friends with someone only talk about work and study.Perhaps you have a confidence problem.Please try remember what the work you do is for yourself but no one else.You do not have to compete with your classmates.No one could be happier in studying seven days and seven nights in a week. (五) 文中有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 Dear Mr.Black， We're very gladly to have received your money and some reading materials.Thank you very much. We had been studying hard since we came back to school.Under the help of our teachers and classmates, we have made great progress on our studies.So we often praised and encouraged by our teachers and parents.We have made our minds to study hard than before to learn every subject well in order to be admitted to key university in the future. We're looking forward to see you, but we have no chance to go to the Nanjing ourselves.So we hope you can post us a photo of yours soon. Best wishes! Yous， Li Hua (六) 文中有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 I still remember how nervously I was on my first day in the new school three years ago, when I found difficult to follow my teacher in the first English class.The teachers spoke English throughout the class, that was totally different from lessons I had taken before. In the morning class the next day, the English teacher came to me while I am reading the text aloud as other students.After listen to me for a while, she gave me a big smile and said he liked my voice very much.The smile shone on the whole day and the following days.A week later, I was volunteered to take charge of Engish study in my class, Thank to the comforting smile in my first morning class, I began to confident. 答案： (三) Dear Eiditor， I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident.Several days ago, my neighbor neighbors ate a bag of food buying bought from the market.After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn turned pale.Luck yLuckily， one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital.After several hours' treatment they finally escaped of from death. As some illegal businessmen are only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we they seldom care about the necessary safety measures or which what happens to consumers.They must be have[KG1] charged by law.Meanwhile, I do hope ∧ the whole society can realize the important importance of food safety. (四) Have you ever heard from of the saying：All work and no play make makes Jack a dull boy？What this means is that if you study all the times time you will become a boring person.You must go out and have a'fun with you friends, otherwise you will lose him them .No one wants to be friends with someone only talk talking about work and study.Perhaps you have a confidence problem.Please try ∧ to remember what that the work you do is for yourself but no one else.You do not have to compete with your classmates.No one could can be happier happy in studying seven days and seven nights in a week. (六) I stilll remember how nervously nervous I was on my first day in the new school three years ago, when I found ∧ it difficult to follow my teacher in the first English class.The teacher spoke English throughout the class, that which was totally different from ∧ the lessons I had taken before. In the morning class the next day, the English teacher came to me while I am was reading the text aloud as other students.After listen listening to me for a while, she gave me a big smile and said he she liked my voice very much.The smile shone on the whole day and the following days.A week later, I was ' volunteered to take charge of English study in my class. Thank Thanks to the comforting smile in my first morning class.I began to ∧ be/get/become confident. 七、 Time and tide wait no man. My mother is becoming a middleage woman quietly. She had been busy running after us all the years. My father is very busy every day outside. But the heavy burden falls on my mother's shoulder. Because my school is far from my home, I have to go to school by the train and my mother sees me off at the station every time. I often choose a seat where is close to the window, so I can see her. However, I always can't help run tears from my eyes. All the buildings and people outside the window disappear. I wave gentle to my mother and I look at her till the view of her back disappears . Up to now, even if he is busy, she still does it as usual. The view of my mother's back will never change in my heart. 八、 Last year, I was addicted with playing computer games. I found it hard to breaking away from the bad habit. My teacher talked to my parents about this, and they made me to promise not to play those games again. I tried hard, but I found it uselessly. The moment my fingers left the keyboard, I would feel very uncomfortable. Because I was determined to forget the games, I still could not concentrate on the lessons giving in classes. Fortunately, psychological advisor in our school came to know this. He talks with me about his problem. At last, he offered his advices on how to get rid of the addiction. Now I can manage to control myself. 九、 Dear Mary， I've received your email. Don't worried about me. I'm getting on well with my research work in the lab. But in my surprise, you say you will give up learn English. The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you have lose interest. I'm afraid I can't agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English, and it is widely used in the world today and it will be important tool in the future. Beside, it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. I am sure that if you study hardly, you will succeed. I'm looking forward to hearing a good news from you ! Yours， Li Hua 【解析】 Dear Mary， I've received your email. Don't ∧be 或worried worry about me. I'm getting on well with my research work in the lab. But into my surprise, you say you will give up lear nlearning English. The reason is becaus ethat you have not done well in it recently and you have los elost interest. I'm afraid I can't agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English, an dbut it is widely used in the world today and it will be ∧an important tool in the future. Besid eBesides ， it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. I am sure that if you study hardl yhard ， you will succeed.I'm looking forward to hearing a good news from you ! Yours， Li Hua 十、 Dear Wei Fang， It's a long time since I heard from you in last time. Now I'd like to tell you a impressive story that happened on the first day of my teaching career. A boy, Li Ming, whom father died a month ago, was late for school. He stood outside the classroom silent. I smiled to him and let him come. After a while, he began to cry. Seeing this, I walked to him and asked what has happened. He told me his mother was ill but he had to get some medicine for her. At the same time, he apologized to me for his lateness. Moved by his word, I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song was named “Mother” for the students. From then on, I began to realize we should respect our parents and did our best to help them. Do you think so? I'm looking forward to your reply. 十一、 We senior school students do have some growing pains. Take some of my classmate for example，they often feel upset because the expectations from parents，endless homework and the pressure of exams. These serious affect their physical and mental wellbeing. Therefore，I think about it quite necessary to take measures to relieve the pains. First，that is a good idea to have hearttoheart talks with our parents，tell them we won't disappoint them. Meanwhile，it's advisable to spare some time to take some exercise beside our devotion to the studies so that we will always feel relaxing and energetic. As long as we were fully prepared，we are sure to achieve great success in my academic performance.