高考英语一轮写作综合训练8 5页

‎2019届高考英语一轮写作综合训练8‎ 第一节 完成句子 ‎ 阅读下列各小题，根据括号内的汉语提示，用句末括号内的英语单词完成句子。‎ ‎1. Water, which seems so simple and common, is_______________________（使生命成为可能的东西）．(make)‎ ‎2. The Summer Palace _______________________（被参观）by so many tourists that some of the relics are not well protected.（visit)‎ ‎3. _______________________（多么激动人心的消息啊）it is that China successfully launched Chang' e I，the lunar orbiter！（news)‎ ‎4. _______________________（考虑到各种情况）,the plan John put forward seems to be more practical.（take)‎ ‎5. The baby was given up for adoption_______________________（刚出生）．(immediately)‎ ‎6. It is_______________________（丢失他的新MP4) makes him look so upset. (lose)‎ ‎7. You don't have to feel thankful to me, for all I did was_______________________（说了我该说的）．（say)‎ ‎8. A healthy diet should include a variety of food, _______________________（大部分富含）nutrients.（rich)‎ ‎ 9. Up into the sky _______________________（淡蓝色的烟升起）just now. (go)‎ ‎10. Xu Sanduo’s wonderful performance has inspired many people to believe that success and happiness in life_______________________（人人伸手可及）．(reach)‎ ‎2019高考英语考前冲刺：书面表达高级句型锁定（1）‎ ‎1.我想我尽量少浪费你的时间。‎ 误：I think I’m going to waste your time as less as possible. 正：I think I’m going to take up your time as less as possible.  分析： “浪费你的时间”实际上是“占用你的时间”的委婉说法，并不是真的去“浪费”。waste是指实实在在的浪费，并且有故意浪费的意思。 ‎2. 有困难请找警察。‎ 误：Please look for the police if you have problems. 正：Please contact the police if you have problems. 分析： “找警察”不是“寻找警察”，而是“与警察取得联系”，故look for与find都不妥。‎ ‎3. 旅行能开阔我们的视野。‎ 误：Travel can open our horizon. 正：Travel can broaden our horizon. 分析： “开阔视野”在英语里应该是widen/broaden/expand sb.’s horizon,动词不能用open。‎ ‎4. 在没来这儿之前我已经学了三年英语了。‎ 误：I had learned English for three years before I didn’t come here.‎ 正：I had learned English for three years before I came here.‎ 分析：很明显，错句受了汉语思维的影响。“在没来这儿之前”和“在来这儿之前”在汉语里都是对的，而英语里用before I came。He had left before I came.我还没到他就走了。或：他在我来之前就已离开了。Take the book before I change my mind.在我没改变主意之前，把书拿走吧。‎ ‎5. 他的足球玩得非常好，没有人能够赢他。‎ 误：He plays football very good, no one can win him. 正：He plays football so well that no one can beat him. 分析：汉语中的因果关系非常明确，用英语表达时，要用so...that来表达此逻辑关系。win是指在比赛或战斗中“赢得或获得胜利”，其宾语多为表示比赛、战斗、奖品等的名词；beat一般用于比赛中打败或战胜对手，其宾语一般是人。‎ ‎6.——你弄到足球比赛的票没有？ ‎——没有，票价太贵了。‎ 误：—Have you got a ticket for the football match? ‎—No, the price is too expensive.‎ 正：—Have you got a ticket for the football match? ‎—No, the price is too high.‎ 分析：在英语表达中，修饰the price用high或low。‎ ‎7. 他生病了，这使他这几天的精神状态非常糟糕。 ‎ 误：His being ill makes his spirit state very poor these days. 正：His being ill makes his state of mind very poor these days.‎ 分析：英语中表示“精神状态”用state of mind,而不是spirit state。‎ ‎8. 他们出发晚了，到达机场时只剩下几分钟的时间。 ‎ 误：They started off late and got to the airport with minutes to leave.  正：They started off late and got to the airport with minutes to spare.‎ 分析：money/time to spare是习惯用法。‎ ‎9. 最近我的胃经常出问题。‎ 误：Recently I often had problems with my stomach. 正：Recently I often had trouble with my stomach.‎ 分析：表示人的身体等部位出现了问题/不舒服时不用problem而用trouble。‎ ‎10. 警察正在那座房子里搜查罪犯。‎ 误：The police were searching the criminal in that house. 正：The police were searching the house for the criminal. 分析： “在房子里搜查罪犯”指的是“搜查房子找罪犯”，地道的表达应该是“search the house for the criminal”。‎ ‎11.我想电脑已经关了，但我最好还是去看一下。‎ 误：I think the computer has been turned off, but I’d better go and see.‎ 正：I think the computer has been turned off, but I’d better go and make sure.‎ 分析： “go and see”是典型的中式翻译，make sure则是“弄清楚，弄明白”的意思。‎ ‎12. 门口有个告示牌，上面写着“禁止吸烟”。‎ 误：There is a sign at the gate, writing “No smoking”. 正：There is a sign at the gate, reading “No smoking”. 分析：门口的告示牌应该是我们看到的内容，所以要用reading或saying。 ‎13. 他不能接受这份工作的原因是他要照顾他的母亲。 ‎ 误：The reason why he couldn’t accept the job was because he had to take care of his mother.‎ 正：The reason why he couldn’t accept the job was that he had to take care of his mother. ‎ 分析： “the reason why...is that...”意思是“……的原因是……”。why引导定语从句，that引导表语从句。多数人容易受汉语思维影响选用because。‎ ‎14. 我会使用电脑，但若一谈到修理它们，我就一窃不通了。 误：I can use the computer, but when I talk about repairing them, I know nothing. ‎ 正：I can use the computer, but when it comes to repairing them, I know nothing.‎ 分析： “when it comes to...”为习惯用语，意为 “一谈到，涉及到……”。‎ ‎15. 他是我最不想见的一个人。‎ 误：He is the person I don’t want to see very much. 正：He is the last person that I want to see.‎ 分析：the last person/thing最不想见的人/物。‎ ‎16．This is the last thing I would never want to do. 这是我最不愿做的一件事情。‎ 辨析：“the last + n +to do; the last + n.+定语从句”中的 last的意思为“least willing/likely”，译为“最不愿意，最不可能”。‎ ‎ He’s the last man I want to see. 他是我最不想见的人。 ‎ He is the last person to tell a lie.他是最不可能撒谎的人。 ‎ She’s the last woman I want to sit next to at dinner.‎ 她是我在宴会上最不愿与之挨着坐的女人。‎ ‎***************************************结束 第二节：写作 假如你是李华，准备邀请你的美国朋友Peter来中国观看2019年北京奥运会。请根据提 示写一封邀请信。‎ ‎ 1．北京奥运举世瞩目；2．欢迎来观看；‎ ‎ 3．北京新貌；4．感受“新北京，新奥运。”‎ 注意：1．词数： 100左右；‎ ‎ 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎ 3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计人总词数。‎ Dear Peter，‎ ‎ Yours sincerely，‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎1．what makes life possible/ something that makes life possible ‎2. has been visited ‎3．What exciting news ‎4. Everything taken into consideration/ Taking everything into consideration ‎5. immediately after birth/ immediately it was born ‎6．losing his new MP4 that ‎7.（to) ,say what I should／ought to ‎8．most of which is rich in ‎9．went some light blue smoke ‎10. are within everyone’s reach或are within the reach of everyone writing ‎ The 2019 Olympic Games，which draw the worlds attention，are coming on. The event is so splendid that I sincerely invite you to visit Beijing at this special moment.‎ ‎ Great changes have taken place in Beijing. The people here are ready to welcome friends．‎ from all over the world. The beautiful scenery，wide roads，many newly built buildings and stadiums will make a deep impression on you. When you come here，I'll show you around Beijing‎ as a guide and well watch the wonderful Olympic events. From these，you will truly understand the slogan”New Beijing，Great Olympics”．‎ ‎ I think this will be an experience you'll value forever.‎ ‎ I'm looking forward to your coming.‎ ‎**********************************************************结束