2019高考英语改错2带答案 8页

I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term. The exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I was responsible for interview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it was not so hard as I think. One lady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the experience was in great value and nothing was more excited than communicating with people.‎ From this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs improving.‎ ‎【答案】‎ I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term. ‎ ‎ confidence a The exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I ‎ ‎ annually was responsible for interview parents who bought the learning tools. 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Your efforts bring you a sense of achievement, which will in turn ensure your happiness.‎ In a brief, it pays to focus our attention on our mental health. The more, the best!‎ ‎【答案】‎ How to keep mental health As we know, mental health links to our happiness index. However, it’s vital to keep our mental health. ‎ ‎ Therefore/Thus Here are some advice on how to do it.‎ ‎ is Firstly, accept yourself true. Knowing your own potentials and making practical goal instead of ‎ ‎ truly goals setting high expectations can keep yourself away from heavy burden, thus enjoy good mental health. ‎ ‎ enjoying Secondly, be friendly and sociable. Life with friends is miserable. So make friends. It’s their comfort and ‎ ‎ without support which help you go through hardship in life. Lastly, commit yourself to your career. Your efforts ‎ ‎ that bring you a sense of achievement, which will in turn ensure your happiness.‎ will In a brief, it pays to focus our attention on our mental health. The more, the best!‎ ‎ better Dear Mr. Li,‎ I’m Wang Tao. I’m written to tell you my opinion about employing a foreign language teacher.‎ They are two factors to take into consider. For a thing, the sense of humor is necessary for a teacher, who makes his class interesting and lively. For another, ensure efficiency in teaching and learning, the foreigner’s ability to speak Chinese matters much, so only with the help of Chinese can they communicate with each other smoothly.‎ Various of activities out of class, such as English Evening and English Corner, should be organized by the foreign language teacher, which brings the students more chances to communicate with the teacher and improve his oral English.‎ ‎【答案】‎ Dear Mr. Li,‎ I’m Wang Tao. I’m written to tell you my opinion about employing a foreign language teacher.‎ ‎ writing opinions They are two factors to take into consider. For a thing, the sense of humor is necessary for a teacher, ‎ ‎ There consideration one who makes his class interesting and lively. For another, ensure efficiency in teaching and learning, the ‎ which to foreigner’s ability to speak Chinese matters much, so only with the help of Chinese can they communicate ‎ ‎ because/as with each other smoothly.‎ Various of activities out of class, such as English Evening and English Corner, should be organized by ‎ ‎ 或Various改为Varieties the foreign language teacher, which brings the students more chances to communicate with the teacher and ‎ improve his oral English.‎ ‎ their Dear Ms Jenkins,‎ I'm Li Hua. I plan to take part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday. I had already filled in the application form and have my resume ready for it. But I am not sure about the words and format. However, I am writing to ask for your help and professional advices. Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attaching? Would you mind find out the mistakes in terms for words and format? Besides, I'd like you to correct the mistakes what are found in the materials and format.‎ I would appreciate it that if you could do me a favor. I am looking forward to you reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua Dear Ms Jenkins,‎ I'm Li Hua. I plan to take ∧part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday. I had ‎ ‎ a have already filled in the application form and have my resume ready for it. But I am not sure about the words and format. However, I am writing to ask for your help and professional advices. Would you please spare some ‎ ‎ Therefore advice time to read through the materials attaching? Would you mind find out the mistakes in terms for words and ‎ ‎ attached finding of format? Besides, I'd like you to correct the mistakes what are found in the materials and format.‎ ‎ that或which I would appreciate it that if you could do me a favor. I am looking forward to you reply.‎ ‎ your Yours,‎ Li Hua The sun was just slowly come up over the mountains today as I took my dogs for its morning walk. I smiled as I watched the clouds gradually turn to white and gold. The air was cool and I wore a big smile in my face. Even though there weren’t leaf on the trees, but I could still hear birds singing songs of spring. Even my dogs seemed to notice the different in the air. They were playing instead of just do their morning business in the grass. The particular golden sun seemed to make it a beautiful day. As I headed back, I realize something. The beauty of day didn’t come from the warmth of the sun. It came from the warmth within my own heart and soul.‎ ‎71. come改为coming ‎ ‎72. its改为their ‎ ‎73. in改为on ‎ ‎74. leaf改为leaves ‎ ‎75.去掉but 或but改为yet ‎ ‎76. different改为difference(s) ‎ ‎77. do改为doing ‎ ‎78. particular改为particularly ‎ ‎79. realize改为realized ‎ ‎80. 在day前加the For 65 years, Mr Li has been walk around our neighborhood twice the day. It’s a part of his daily exercise routine. He is a retiring biology teacher. As Mr Li gets older and older, he has to rest several time along his route. Therefore, he still gets up early and sticks his routine. The neighbors have noticed his stops. We place different chairs along our route and invite him to sit and took a rest. Now, the mile-long route is spotted with chairs. When we see Mr Li to go by, we realize we should also get out but have a walk.‎ For 65 years, Mr Li has been around our neighborhood twice day. It