2014高考英语短文改错抓分练习12 9页

‎2014高考英语短文改错抓分练习（12）及答案 第一节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)‎ 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ No body language can be much attractive than smiling.Not only can beautiful smile make ourselves happily, but also it makes others feel delighted.Sometimes a smile can be very powerful that it gives people great courage to face and defeat disasters.A little boy naming Lang Zheng, for example, impressed and encouraged a great many of people when the terrible earthquake happened in Wenchuan.Right after he is rescued by the soldiers from the ruins, he saluted and smiled to them.His smile was like sunshine which warmed people who were sad.It is safe to say that without smile our life would be colourless and difficulty.It is suggested that we smiled as much as possible.Try it but everything will be different!‎ ‎【参考答案】‎ No body language can be attractive than smiling.Not only can beautiful smile make ourselves ,but also it makes others feel delighted.Sometimes a smile can be powerful that it gives people great courage to face and defeat disasters.A little boy Lang Zheng, for example, impressed and encouraged a great many of people when the terrible earthquake happened in Wenchuan.Right after he rescued by the soldiers from the ruins, he saluted and smiled to them.His smile was like sunshine which warmed people who were sad.It is safe to say that without smile our life would be colourless and .It is suggested that we as much as possible.Try it everything will be different!‎ 短文改错 He is already a singer and a director, so what is the Taiwanese superstar Jay Chou up to now? He’s a talk show host. His program Mr.J was first broadcast on October 31. But unlike her music, the show hasn’t lived down to public expectations and has suffering a storm of criticism(批评).‎ ‎ Chou was reported be nervous about the first shows. At that time in fact, it is only thanks to another celebrity(名人)guest that the program wasn’t a failure. In a late show, Chou was criticized for gossiping about Lam Chiling(林志玲), a model from Taiwan, in an attempt to decrease audience rating(收视率).‎ 参考答案：‎ He is already a singer and a director, so what is the Taiwanese superstar Jay Chou up ‎ ‎ but to now? He’s a talk show host. His program Mr.J was first broadcast on October 31. But unlike her ‎ ‎ his music, the show hasn’t lived down to public expectations and has suffering a ‎ ‎ up suffered storm of criticism(批评).‎ ‎ Chou was reported ∧be nervous about the first shows. At that time in fact, it is only ‎ ‎ to show was thanks to another celebrity(名人)guest that the program wasn’t a failure. In a late show, ‎ ‎ later Chou was criticized for gossiping about Lam Chiling(林志玲), a model from Taiwan, in an attempt to decrease audience rating(收视率).‎ ‎ Increase ‎ ‎ Dear Mr. Li,‎ I’m very sorry to have missed the first two lesson this morning. I got up early as usually in the morning, but when I was ready to leave I find my bicycle’s front tyre（轮胎）flat. I wanted to take bus or taxi to school, and I didn’t have any money with me. I had to look for a place along the street to get my bicycle repairing.‎ ‎ Unluckily, there were not any bicycle repair shops were open in the early morning. So I had to walk to school, carrying my bicycle all the way. That’s how I was late for school.‎ Please don’t worry with my lessons, Mr. Li. I will make up for it and turn to teachers for help if necessary.‎ Yours,‎ Wang Hui ‎ 参考答案：‎ Dear Mr. Li,‎ I’m very sorry to have missed the first two lesson this morning. I got up early as usually in ‎ ‎ lessons usual the morning, but when I was ready to leave I find my bicycle’s front tyre (轮胎) flat. I wanted to ‎ found take ∧ bus or taxi to school, and I didn’t have any money with me. I had to look for a place ‎ ‎ a but ‎ along the street to get my bicycle repairing. Unluckily, there were not any bicycle repair shops ∧ ‎ ‎ repaired that / which ‎ were open in the early morning. So I had to walk to school, carrying my bicycle all the way. ‎ That’s how I was late for school.‎ ‎ why Please don’t worry with my lessons, Mr. Li. I will make up for it and turn to teachers for help about / over them if necessary. ‎ Yours,‎ Wang Hui 短文改错 Traffic jam is very serious problem in big city especially during rush hours. It can cause lots of trouble. First, people must have to spend longer time getting to our destinations. It was said that much of the lateness for work is caused by traffic jam. Second, wait in the car for a long time can easy put drivers in a bad mood which may lead to more accidents. Also, traffic jam cause serious air pollution. But it is necessary to deal with this problem.‎ In my opinion, the government should develop public transport. It should be ‎ cheaper and more convenient and comfortable. Besides, we should use public transport as much as possibly. It’s better to share cars during rush hours. In a word, we should take any possible measures to reduce the use of cars.‎ 参考答案：‎ So causes easily waiting is their cities a Traffic jam is ∧ very serious problem in big city especially during rush hours. It can cause lots of trouble. First, people must have to spend longer time getting to our destinations. It was said that much of the lateness for work is caused by traffic jam. Second, wait in the car for a long time can easy put drivers in a bad mood which may lead to more accidents. Also, traffic jam cause serious air pollution. But it is necessary to deal with this problem.‎ 第一节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)‎ 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank.An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank.Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down.To make things bad，his money was lying in all directions.In no time the people around rush to pick the money up while the old man stood there，not know what to do.Surprisingly，everyone gave back the money they had just picked.The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed.To my great joy，there are now a lot of nice people in your life.It's true what honesty is more important than money.‎ 参考答案 ‎ This morning on my way to school I was moved by what I saw outside a bank.An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank.Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down.To make things ，his money was lying in direction.In no time the people around to pick the money up while the old man stood there，not what to do.Surprisingly，everyone gave back the money they had just picked.The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was .To my great joy，there are now a lot of nice people in life.It's true honesty is more important than money.‎ 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）‎ ‎　此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：‎ ‎　　此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。‎ ‎　　此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。‎ ‎　　此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。‎ 注意：原行没有错的不要改。‎ Attention, please, everyone. We’ve accepted the 　　　　　76. ______ weather forecast on the radio this morning that　　　　　　77. ______ there will have a heavy rain tonight. Be sure 　　　　　 78. ______ to shut the windows and doors until you leave 　　　　 79. ______ your classrooms. The sports meet when we planned to 　 80. ______ hold it tomorrow will be put off. After it becomes 　　　　 81. ______ fine, we’ll make other announcement. We will 　　 　　 82. ______ have classes on Wednesday as usually. Since it is 　　　　 83. ______ colder tomorrow, please dress on more clothes in time. 　　 84.‎ ‎ ______ Those come to school by bike, don’t keep your 　　　　　 85.______ umbrellas open while riding. ‎ 短文改错 ‎ Mr. Turner turned over in bed from time to time in last night, for he was very excited that he could not fall asleep. Yesterday morning, he went to ‎ a big gardening company, knowing as Green Fingers, for the interview. ‎ Mr. Turner, that liked to help his grandfather grow flowers in the garden, ‎ looking forward to the job offered by the company. When he got to the ‎ company, he found there were many people waiting there and he had ‎ no ideas whether he could get the job. While waited, he helped the ‎ workers there to remove the fallen trees and clear the road. Unluckily, he ‎ was the only one who finally got the job, so the manager decided to give ‎ the job to whoever he believed was helpful.‎ 参考答案：‎ Mr. Turner turned over in bed from time to time in last night, for he was ‎ ‎ ‎ very excited that he could not fall asleep. Yesterday morning, he went to ‎ so a big gardening company, knowing as Green Fingers, for the interview. ‎ ‎ known an Mr. Turner, that liked to help his grandfather grow flowers in the garden, ‎ ‎ who ‎∧looking forward to the job offered by the company. When he got to the ‎ was company, he found there were many people waiting there and he had ‎ no ideas whether he could get the job. While waited, he helped the ‎ ‎ idea waiting workers there to remove the fallen trees and clear the road. Unluckily, he ‎ ‎ Luckily was the only one who finally got the job, so the manager decided to give ‎ ‎ because the job to whoever he believed was helpful.‎ 短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)‎ 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右 边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：‎ 此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。‎ 此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。‎ 此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。‎ 注意：原行没有错的不要改。‎ ‎ Although all the students seem very happily at our school, as 66_________‎ far as we concerned, the buildings would be more beautiful 67_________‎ if the school could be decorated. We students thought the school 68_________‎ looks like a desert and the concrete walls like the grey sky in 69_________‎ a rainy day. We would be much happier and are able to study 70_________‎ better if the walls of the school could be decorated with posters, 71_________‎ photos and paintings, that could certainly broaden our horizons 72_________‎ and enrich our lives. Original art work are too expensive, but 73_________‎ unless we buy art posters, the cost will be low. Using only a 74_________‎ little money, it can make our school a nicer place. 75_________‎ 参考答案、、短文改错 ‎66. happily→happy 67. we后加are 68. thought→think ‎69. in→on 70 去are或are→be 71.正确 72.that→which ‎73.work→works 74. unless→if 75. it→we 短文改错 ‎ (2010·河南五校联考)‎ After I finished the school this year, I began to1.________‎ look for work. Now several month later, I still hadn't 2.________‎ found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning，3.________‎ I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith.4.________‎ He said to me on the phone, “I hear you do very well in your5.________‎ studies. I may provide a job for you.” I entered 6.________‎ his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I 7.________‎ will go through the jobhunting talk today and he would8.________‎ take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9.________‎ what he said disappointing. He only needed a model.10.________‎ 答案与解析：‎ ‎1．去掉the　finish school是固定搭配，表示“毕业”。‎ ‎2．month→months　month是可数名词，several暗示应用复数形式。‎ ‎3．interested后加in　be interested in是固定搭配，表示“对……感兴趣”。‎ ‎4．him→himself　calling himself Mr. Smith短语作定语，修饰a man表示“自称Mr. Smith”的男子。‎ ‎5．do→did　根据逻辑可知这里表示毕业前的情况，故用一般过去时。do well in“干得好”。‎ ‎6．√‎ ‎7．beaten→beating　a beating heart“忐忑不安的心”。‎ ‎8．will→would　这里应考虑主从句时态的呼应，故用过去将来时。‎ ‎9．surprised→surprise　to one's surprise是固定搭配，表示“令某人惊讶的是”。‎ ‎10．said后加was　what he said是主语从句，“他的话是令人失望的”。句子缺少系动词。‎