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高考英语作文专题求助信

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高考作文满分练—求助信 u 题型解读:‎ 在求助信中应开门见山,直截了当地把你遇到的难题或者困惑告诉对方,并向对方求助。应注意:(1)向别人征求意见,态度一定要诚恳,语气委婉;(2)把握时态:应用一般现在时表明目前自己存在的困难,用一般将来时描述自己得到帮助后的进步。‎ 写作思路 满分词汇 满分短语 满分句型 Para.1: 点名身份+直接说明写信的求助目的 bother trouble v.‎ do sb. a favor take the trouble to do...‎ have trouble/difficulty in doing…‎ have no choice but to do…‎ turn to sb. for help ‎1.I am a middle school student and I'm writing to tell you my problem which has troubled me.‎ ‎2. I'm writing to you to ask whether you could do me a favor.‎ ‎3. I'm wondering if you could take the trouble to help me with…‎ ‎4. I'm sorry to bother you, but I have some difficulties here and I need your help.‎ ‎5. I have some difficulty in doing…, which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.‎ Para.2:‎ 说明自己存在的困难、困惑并请求对方的帮助。言辞一定要礼貌得体 confused confusing upset worried ‎ anxious anxiety fit in with with others= ge on well with others be accustomed to long to ‎ lose heart ‎1. I seem not to be able to fit in well with others here.‎ ‎2. I don't feel quite accustomed to the life here.‎ ‎3. I long to learn English well but I don't know how, which makes me upset.‎ ‎4. I can't concentrate on my lessons these days and I failed in the last exam which worries me a lot.‎ ‎5. I often feel left out in this school, and I don't know how it has come about.‎ ‎6. Faced with/Facing so many difficulties, I have to turn to you for help Para. 3 (客套话)‎ 情真意切表达期盼之情。‎ timely eager grateful appreciate request account sb. would appreciate it if…‎ take … into consideration/account.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎1. I'm eager to get your timely help. /I'm eager for your timely help.‎ ‎2. I will be very grateful if you could help me ...‎ ‎3. I'd appreciate if you could take my request into consideration/ account.‎ ‎4. I would be grateful if you could really give/lend me a hand.‎ u 注意:作文的主体时态:一般现在时为主,一般将来时偶尔穿插。‎ u 满分模板:‎ u Dear __________(写信对象),‎ My name is __________; I’m writing to ask whether you could do me a favour.‎ I have had much difficulty/trouble in ___________(交代自己面临的困难). Besides, I’m very upset that ___________(提出令自己苦恼的问题). What’s more, I don’t know ___________(进一步说明自己的困境) I’m wondering if you could be so kind as to _________ so that ____________(再次请求对方的帮助).‎ I’d appreciate it if you could lend me a hand. I’m looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua u 优秀作文欣赏:‎ 题目1:(2016全国卷1)假如你是李华,暑假想去一家外资公司兼职,已写好申请和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins写信,请她帮你修改所附的文字和格式(format)。‎ 注意:1. 词数100左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯 Sample:‎ Dear Ms Jenkins,‎ I'm writing to ask whether you could do me a favor.‎ In order to gain some social experience and improve my work ability. I'm going to take a part- time job during the summer vacation. So interested in the position in a foreign-captured company am I that I’ve already written an application letter and my resume all in English. However, I’m afraid that there might be some grammar mistakes or inappropriate format in the materials that I prepared.‎ Would you be so kind as to correct the mistakes and improve the format of the application and resume for me. I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to help me. I’m looking forward to your early reply. ‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua 题目2. 假如你是李华,你家乡的梨花节(Ewha Festival)负有盛名,你写了一篇英文宣传稿,想请外籍教师Bob帮忙润色。请根据提示用英语给Bob写一封电子邮件,内容包括:‎ ‎1.求助事由;2.求助内容;3.表达感激 注意:1. 词数100左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。‎ Sample:‎ Deer bob, ‎ I’m writing to you in the hope that you will be so kind as to do me a favor. When it comes to the Ewha Festival. There's no denying that it enjoys a great reputation in my hometown. I, for a long time, have been desiring to write an appealing article to make it better known. However, only when I put the idea into practice did I find my English far from satisfying.‎ ‎ As far as I know, you have such a good command of written English as impresses me a lot. Therefore, I’m wondering whether you could take the trouble to have my draft polished at your convenience. ‎ I would be grateful if you could take my request into consideration.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua